Meet || Layi Vi Na Gayi (a oneshot) - Page 2

Originally posted by: shabo24

*sob* 😲 You wanted to cry? You?

This shot made me wanna cry. It was so GOOD! Just the simple way that Preet said "Don't go." Oh di, it just tore are your heart. You are so evil...but why didn't Preet go with them! MEHER! Girl doesn't know what she's letting go. :) Great shot di, loved it! I still cannot believe that you wanted to cry! I'm going to take that as a compliment. A huge one. Thank you Shabo!

--shabz

Originally posted by: sourpuss

I hit the 'like' button 'cause I didn't feel like commenting.

And yet I did. No comment. 😆

Meh, you know what I thought of it. Thanks B!

Love, love you too.

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

You shoudda used "Tusi Jaa Rahe Ho? Tussi Na Jaao" 😆 I was thinking about it. I may use it in another context, for another shot. 😉

But I LOVED it. The title SUITS the shot AWSOMELY! Honestly...It was sad...*cry* Aw, thanks Shifu! *hug*

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Ahhh Radz! 😳Meera! *hug*

that was so sad and touching and I wanted to cry! 😔 The way he said, "don't go," Literally ached at my heart! 😳Aw! I'm glad. I think. 😆

I'm somehow proud of Meher for being with her sister, I'll just make it a happy ending in my mind! 😃😳You can do that. Till I write the sequel. 😆😉

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

Dammit. Why can't I hit the 'Like' button more than once?!?!?! 😳 How sweet.

Once is not enough 👍🏼 Thank you!

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

its was very touching......i cud actually feel wat dey were goin thro n was on d verge of tears.....very well done.. 👏 👏 👏Thank you! *hug*

Originally posted by: LilyGurl

thnx radz di u described their feelings so beautifully preet is soo sweet Thank you Lily!

love lily

Originally posted by: natashaa46

WOW!!! wht a shot yaar................it actually made me cry 😭 😭 Thank you. And I'm sorry about making you cry!

i was feeling sooooooo bad for Preet n Meher..........

nd the details with which you wrote it really awesome.........i could feel myself there with the two seeing them apart 😭 😭 Aw, thanks. And I'm sorry!

hats off to you 👏 👏 Thank you!
👏 👏

Originally posted by: only.asking

That was beautiful.... There was So Much promise In it For their Future, no? 👏

Originally posted by: missindia26

Wonderful one-shot! Thank you!

I love that song, the lyrics are so heartfelt and touching and poignant! Yup, I love the song too!

Preet's words to her, so sweet! Thanks!

No update? I may write a sequel. 😉

Love TJ