FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09)

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harpreet sekhon

@nslove

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#311

it was beautiful

update soon

thx😊

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#312

*squees* OMG! I shall come back to edit this.

*edited*

MEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Yes, I am excited. Shush. No judgemenets! 😆)

OMG *dies* He told her he loved her! I always wanted one of those airport scenes. *sigh* Never happening for me, but I love to read about them! 😉😆

Sorry for the short comment, but I have so many places to unreserve! Now to find them all. 😆

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#313

hey

again a gr888 update, very beautifully written👏👏

but sry as i m nt preet-meher fan .....................i luv ash with preet...............

waiting fr ur next update n i do hope it will be on prem-heer

Edited by eternal.beauty - 16 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#314

😲

Firstly do notice this comment is being posted the MINUTE I read this update! 😃

That had to be the most beautifully written chapter I've EVER read Z! 😳 The emotions were sooo perfectly portrayed and the way thy both had that aching feeling, and seriously...DAMN!!! When Preet's romantic....he's romantic! I totally loved that entire bit! 😃

And then....I'll admit when he was arguing with himself to say those three little words and then when he said what he said, I literally wanted to go and hit him, that hasn't happened in a long time! 😆

BUT THEN! He made EVERYTHING so much better! 😳😃 I was blushing like mad, as if he was saying it to me...or well not him, but you already know who I'm talking about! 😉 But still that part was beautiful; reading the way you wrote it, made me not miss Premeer AT ALL! (that's saying a whole lot!! 😆)

Love you loads,

Meera😳😃

P.S. Continue soon! 😃

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#315

awesome update,just loved the way both of them trying to hold on to the final moments together.
tc.

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KdMhMd_LoVeR

@KdMhMd_LoVeR

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#316

OMG I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ITS SO AWSOME PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART I REALLY LOVE THIS FF ITS GREAT 😊

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#317

OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH ZAHRA! 🤗 Meet rock even better when you write them! =]

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sonia

@cute_bear

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#318

hi...i have been a silent reader...and i just have to say taht ur ff is fantastic...i loved meet in this update...and i was wondering could u pm me when u next update please...and please update soon...

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Nikita

@HCDeewani

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#319

hey...

sry i think i missed like the last few updates i dnt have time to get on to the computer...but thank you for the PM's...🤗

ahhhhhhhhh im loving the Premeer parts!!! My gosh!!!! just love the intesnity between both of them..

and Prem..*tauba tauba* asi asi baatein kar raha hai Heer se??...lol

i cant wait to read more Prem and Heer scenes.. they are definately a temptation..lol

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meet!!!!!!!!!!! they are super sweet!!!!

u noe as i was reading their part, and when meher turned around to leave without hearing Preet say those 3 words...i was just like they have to wait another year...then BAM!!!!!! he sealed it with a kiss! amazing !!!!

keep up the great work..and update soon.. will definateyl be waiting for the 'temptations'..lol🤗

take care, and keep smiling...🤗

~nikki🤗