ArTi scene [written by me]*updated*

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part 1
nupur's b'day scene being shot in the sets on mjht

arjun and rati practicing their respective dialogues

they both r taken into a dark room for the respective scene

AB- kaisa laga mere surprise nupur
RP-surprise??? mayank tum mughe yahan surprise karne ke leye laye ho
is drak room me 😕
AB- ha vo kya hai na aaj tumhara b'day hai toh maine sonca ke mai tumhe ek chota sa surprise du isseley tumhe yahan laya tha, ek min nupur mai light on karke aata hu

then suddensly the lights come brightly upon

there flowere all around the room
flowers of different colors red😉,pink,white,yellow, etc
RP- maynk ye sab???? [she is spell bounded to see all this ]
AB- ha nupur ye sab kuch bas tumhare liya. your gifts waiting on that table [showing his hand towards one]
rati walks towards it and picks the card up

RP- mayank ye tumne kisleye?? I mean kyu?? i mean kab??
AB- nupur tum kuch mat bolo ab mughe bas tumhara gavab ganna hai ha/na[yes/no]
RP- lekin achanak tumhe ye
AB- nupur mughe tumhare gavab caheye
ye feeling jo mughme itne dino se hai
kya tum bhi mere leye aisa kuch mehsoos karte ho ???

arjun looking deep into rati's showing luv and concern for her
rati just stands there not able to speak anything

the director giving directions to say the dialog to rati

AB- toh kya kehte ho nupur
RP- mai............... mai kya kahun
AB- wohe jo tumhare andar hai
tumhare feelings ko chopavo mat ,bas dare karke bata do

juat then CUT CUT CUT
the director shouting excellet job both of
real good 👏

part2
ok guys so me continuing for all of u 🤗

continuation of the scene where mayank asks nupur to come up with her real feelings for him
rati gazing her look over arjun
thinking did "he really mean it or what"

both of them back to the shot
AB- pata hai mai tumse bohot pehle se pyar karta tha
bas apne feelings ko kaise handle karun ye nahin janta tha
par ab mai janta hu ke demag tab he theek se chalega jab dil control me ho {😉 mayu's mom put some sense into him}
RP- tumne ye sab kahan se jana 😕
AB- [ with a shyful look of his face AB continued 😛] vo maa ne bataya tha
pata hai maa kehte hai jab hum apne feeligs ke sath bahar aa gate hai toh he hum apna concentration barkaraar rakh sakte hai
RP-accha aisa kaha aunty ne . waise sach he kaho hoga
shayad iselye mai bhi...................................
AB- mai bhi kya nupur ???
RP- shayd isseley leye mai bhi apne pranks par concentrate nahin kar pate hu [😆]

then she just walks away smiling and blushing into her self ☺️

director gets up and *claps* for them

so how was it guys!!!!!
😆😆 me too becoming like the creatives dragging the confession scene 😆😆



part 3
so guys me continuing

MJHT sets part3 😆-

arjun troubling rati by pulling her hair
rubbing his hand on her nose and sometimes pulling it too for fun [😳😆]

director tells them to come back for the shot [bechara arjun must have had more plans in his mind to trouble rati 😆]
the

mayank wating for nupur in the coll

part 4-

mayank waiting for nupur in coll
then he nupur walking in from the gate wearing a beautiful dress [not the common one she does]

some thing like this


arjun is continuously staring her
rati walks towards him with all the elegance needed for the dress

AB- aaj...... tum vo... ye kya.....
RP-kya bol rahe ho maynk theek se bolo na [ with a teasing smile ]
AB-vo aaj tum bohot............
RP-mai aaj bohot kya mayank
*trrrrriinnggggggggggg*
the bell rings
RP- chole mayank nahin toh class miss ho gayega
AB- ha vo mai aata hu tum javo nupur [blushing into himself 😳]
nupur leave lauching into herself 😆
she says to herself "itni aasne se nahin hone dunge abhi intahaan bake hai"

maynk in his thoughts "mayank tu usse itna bhi nahin bol paya ke vo khoob surat dikh rahe hai[hits himelf on his head] chal ab class attend karna hai"

class going on
nupur listning concentratly
but mayank looks khoya khoya due to nupur sitting beside him
he was looking at her every second to know wheather she is looking at him [😆]

"MAYNK SHARMA "[the lecturer] "KYA AAP MUGHE BATA SAKTE HAI KE ABHI KONSA LESSON CHLA RAHA THA"
AB- mai ......... vo.... vo mai
"YE MAI MAI KYA KAR RAHE HAI THEEK SE BATAYEYA KONSA LESSON CHAL RAHA THA, YA SHAYD AAP CLASS KE BAHAR JANA CAHTE HAI"

mayank looks towards nupur with a innocent face
just nupur sides the book towards showing the lesson

AB- history sir

"MAYNK AAJ TUM BACH GAYE LEKIN AGLE BAAR SE DHYAN RAKHNA "
just then the bell rings and the lecturer leaves

RP- maynk tum kya kar rahe the, aaj maine bacha liya nahin toh kya hota😡
AB- vo mai tumpe concentrate kar raha tha issleye..............[he stoped realizing what he was saying]
RP- KYA!!!!! tum mughpe........... mayank tum bhi na bil kul sweetu types ho 😛
AB-☺️ accha . toh hum coffee pine chalen [😉]
RP- ha chalo canteen ko
they both go towards canteen

suddenly someone by mistakely pushes nupur ,she is almost gonna fall wen maynk catches her [ the man who pushed nupur almost runs on see ing who he has pushed 😆]
then *eye lock session
[☺️]

mayank searching in nupur's eye all the answers that he nedded
they both started to speak through their eyes

"BRILLAINT SHOT" the director says appreciating them

ok guys i have written the nest part
do let me know how it was
thanks a lot my sweets





i will continue soon
.............


hope u guys like it
ps- sorry for the spelling mistakes 🤢

Edited by shilpa mehta... - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
*blushin*
muahxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
shilpa...fab yaa too gud..
LUV
NIHU
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

*blushin*
muahxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
shilpa...fab yaa too gud..
LUV
NIHU

🤗🤗 thanks a lot hun
really glad u liked

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanku shanku mat bol janu....
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Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

thanku shanku mat bol janu....

JKJ'sssssssssssss [jadu ke jhappi] mere jaan
chal theek hai
waise do u want me too continue 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@anny
yar real glad u liked
me gonna continue it soon
hope u like hun
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpa mehta...

JKJ'sssssssssssss [jadu ke jhappi] mere jaan
chal theek hai
waise do u want me too continue 😛

Ofcourse... nahi tho maar kaayaegi...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ anny
accha yar theek 😆
maar nahin khane ke leye toh mai zaroor continue karunge 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpa mehta...

@ anny
accha yar theek 😆
maar nahin khane ke leye toh mai zaroor continue karunge 😆

ha ha... waitnig dear...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpa mehta...

JKJ'sssssssssssss [jadu ke jhappi] mere jaan
chal theek hai
waise do u want me too continue 😛

puchne ki baat hai yeh.............😡
itna cha scene.likhti hai..itna bad gunha..aur puchti hai?????😆😆
sure baby and pm me too wen u do so..
LUv
NIHU

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