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Riddhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy freds,

AS u all known me Riddhi(riddss)

i think so u remeber me.

any was

wan't to share one more FF with u all.

HUM SAATH SAATH HAIN

written by Mithila(mithila2)

so plzz Read & comment.

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Posted: 15 years ago

here's go part -1

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PART-1

(This is the time when armaan and riddhima got engaged and they are soon to get married shashank is not so happy but he agreed as because everybody else is happy and riddhima also they both know and trying there best to convince that riddhima key liye armaan se accha koi nahi ho sakta...

Anjali has started liking atul, and rahul is now very confused as to see AR Jodi some how he feels that Jodi ho to AR jaisi and he has decided to leave sanjeevani after AR marriage. But anyone not knows it and muskaan has now started loving rahul and she is disturbed as to why he is going away.)

In sanjeevani

nurse station

Dr Kirti assigned duty to everybody as she very well know that AR if given duty together they will not do so.

Rahul and riddhima: in general ward

Armaan and muskaan: have to treat an emergency case which has come in ICU.

Atul: in kids ward

Anjie: assisting dr shashank in surgery all disperse.

IN ICU

Armaan: kya yaar is dr kirti ka bhi screw dhila hai jab dekho tab humhe alag kar deti hai.

Muskaan: are haan yaar sach main rahul

Armaan: main kuch samjha nahi

Muskaan: trying to round of are yaar tumhe aur riddhima Ko sath dena chahiye tha aur mujhe aur rahul

Armaan: haan haan aaj kal rahul pe bada pyar aa raha hai.

Muskaan: isski to baat hi maat kar ek who hai pata nahi kyun mujhse khicha khicha rehta hai.

In general ward

Rahul: kya hua riddhima khush nahi ho tum dono ko saath main duty nahi di.

Riddhima: khush to nahi hoon par sahi kya agar armaan samne hota hai to kaam kam kuch aur zada hota hai.

rahul: ha ha who mujhe batane ki baat hai kya waise abhi bhi who kaun sa tumhe kaam karne dega.

riddhima: matlab

rahul: who dekho kaise waha khara tumhe nihar raha hai.

riddhima: looking at armaan and giving her stern look tum yaha kya kar rahe ho kaam nahi karma

armaan: are yaar yeh muskaan mujse samalti nahi hai khoon dekh te hi uska dimag kharab hi jata hai jaise taise usehe bana kar aaya hoon aur maine patient ko injection de diya hai who aaram kar raha hai.

rahul: getting worried who thik to hai na

armaan: tujhe uski itni phikar hai to jake dekh le na. keeping his hands on ridhi arms.

(meanwhile nurse come armaan ji aap jayye dr kirti aa rahi hai he just give kiss to riddhima on her cheek and ran. he has told nurse to inform him abt kirti.. riddhima is shocked and shying by sudden act of armaan.)

atul is meanwhile playing with children and for a change anjali is seeing him from glass and is haapy by seeing him to take such good care of kids.

(Riddhima was passing through fire escape suddenly someone pulled her inside)

riddhima: kya kar rahe ho armaan

armaan: wohi jo mera kaam hai aura b to yeh bhi nahi keh sakti ki koi dekh lega ab to sabko pata hai.(holding her tight form her waist.)

armaan: caressing her hair and kiss her cheek was about to kiss her lips and and and as usuall pager rings

recap:- (ar marriagr date is going to be fixed.)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey there..
sorry to interrupt but the thread for THIS story has already been created by the writer here..

heres the link to it..
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1101815

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Riddhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy Rucha
i known that dear.

but there is very less comment

plus

less part

& this FF is also mind blowing

so just wan'ted to share with u all

there is only 6part

but i will post more then that

& that part is written by Mithila(mithila2)

love

Riddss

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice one riddss...

already read it...

but will read it again...

cotninue soon...

luv

deepu :)

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komal793

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyyy

lovely part.

loved it

pls continue soon.

pls pm me if possible.

and thanks for the pm.

luv.

komal.

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Riddhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy freds,

i known same of u has already read this FF.

so for today i will continue part 2-6

from tomorow will post next parts.

here i go

read & comment

ur comment is important for us.

PART-2

Ridhima: jana hoga pager emergency hai.

armaan: is pager ki to main

Gupta house

(everybody are there as there is date finalized for ar marriage and pundit is seeing the kundalis and every body is happy about it except armaan he is very nervous as he want marriage dt should be as soon as possible par panditji says before 1 monts there is no shubh muharat armaan shouted wtttttttttttttttttttttt everybody looked at armaan.)

armaan: ek mahine pandit jiiiiiiiiii pls toda jaldi nahi ho sakta.

rahul giggling in his ears : haan haan tumara bas chale to aaj hi kar lo.

armaan: giving him stern look.

pandit: soory beta iske pehle koi mu harat nahi hai

everybody else ok par dt kya hai ha its 2 oct.

armaan very disturbed bt ridhima was happy as she can get some time with her parents.

everbody has gone after dinner its 1 o clock in night and ridhima gets a call from armaan

armaan: kya kar rahi hoooooon

ridhima: itni raat ko koi kya kar sakta hai.

armaan: haan haan tum aur tumare papa meri neend udhake khud so rahe hai.

ridhima: ab kya hua

armaan: kya hua ? us pandit ko kisne bulaya tha

ridhima: papa ne

armaan: ab samjha woh is ek mahene main tumara brain wash karenge mere khilaf

ridima; armaan tum

armaan: cutting in between ok sorry sorry main mazak raha tha acha suno I love u and give her a kiss on phone

ridhima: blushing

armaan: knows it oye hoye tum sharmate hue bai pyari lag rahi ho

ridhima: tumhe kaise pata just standing and checking kahi who balcony mein to nahi hai.

armaan: baith jao zada takleef karne ki zarrorat nahi hai mujhe pata hai tum kya kya kis waqt karti hoo ab tumhe itna to janta hi hoon na.

ridhima: ohhhhhhhhhh mujhe nahi pata tha

anjali in between are yaar tum logon ko to neend nahi aati kam se kam mujhe to sone do yaar pls

ridima: acha main phone rakhti hoooooooon di jag jayegi k bye

armaan: ridhima suno bt ridhima has kept the phone he in his minds.
shit yaar tum kab aaogi mere ghar ko Sambhalne aur mujhe.

in the morning ridhima gets bunch of red roses she always get from armaan after angagement

in sanjeevani

rahul is sitting and deep in thinking ek maheena aura b aur nahi hota mujhe kuch bhi karke muskaan se door jana hi hoga uske saath rekar to yeh nahi hoga.

meanwhile muskaan comes ad is happy seeing him alone she just sit besides him and admiring him in his red tshirt.
suddenly rahul sees it

rahul: are tu yaha kab aaye maine dekha nahi

muskaan: dekhek ha kaise kisi soch mai jo tha
rahul" aisi koi baat nahi hai chal mujhe ek case ke bare main dr kirti se discuss karma hai phir milte hai.

muskaan: dr kirti se baad main baat kar lena yaar abhi brefing ke liye time hai

rahul: nahi yaar bahut important hai

muskaan: tu mujhe batayega problem kya jab dekhomujhse door bhagta hai aakhir baat kya hai

rahul: aisa kuch nahi hai

muskaan: main sab samjhti hoo tumare paas aaj kal mere liye baat karne ka time nahi hai

meanwhile they are fighing ar just enterning and looking into one another eyes they don't know there is rm already there
as ridhima is walking without seeing rahul and bumb into it and both fall and eyes contact

armaan: just puuling ridhima kya yaar rahul dekh nahi sakta bechari ko kahi lag jati to

muskaan: sach kehte hai log pyar main andhe ho jate hai galti ridhima kit hi aur tu rahul pe bhdak raha hai.

armaan: kya baat hai muskaan aaj kal rahul ki badi phikar karne llagi hai.

muskaan shy slghtlly

rahul: seeing that are aisa kuch nahi hai tumhe kya lagta hai tum dono pyar karte ho iska matlab sab karte hai kya ok yaar mujhe jana hai.

armaan: isse kya hua bahut dino se badla badla lag raha hai.

mu: ha mujhe bhi oye hero tu baat kar ke dekh na

armaan: thik hain dekh to hoon

atul & anjali

anaji is giving lift to atul now a days to hospital as ridhima is busy with armaan.

atul: thanks anjali lekin tum hamesha kyun aati hoon mera ghar to tumare raaste ke beech bhi nahi padta.

anjali: its ok waise bhi mujhe akele drive karma acha nahi lagta aur ridhima ko to armaan lene 7 baje hi tapak jata hai. yaar in dono ko dekh ke lagta hai koi kitna pyar kar sakta hai raat raat bhar bat karte hai aur phir subah phirse itni kya bateen hoti hai

atul:haan yaar yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata in minds baat to hoti hai karne aur sune wala chaiye mera dost mera bhai kitna lucy hai.

recap: (armaan talks to rahul)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey amazing part yaar..

i dun mind reading this again.....

plzz cont. soon....

nd plzz do pm me if possible!!!!!

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Riddhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART-3

Recap: AR dt finalized muskaan is not happy seeing rahul behaviour

fire escape

rahul is sitting there and armaan just paas bye and see him and go inside

armaan: teri itni himaat tune meri jagah par baitne ki himmat kaise ki

rahul: tu to aise baat kara raha hai ki yaha terenamm ka stamp laga hua ho

armaan: han han stamp nahi hai par yeh meri jagah hai

rahul irritated: thik hai thik hai tu hi bait mainja raha hoon

armaan: are yaar main to mazak kar raha tha itni seriously kyun le raha hai ab bol kya problem hai
rahul: problem koi problem nahi hai yaar its just ki main thoda thak gaya hoon

armaan: ab mujhse to jhooth mat bol main tumhe bachpan se janta hoon tu muskaan ke saath

rahul: sensing it wt he is saying he says oh main bhul gaya mujhe dr kirti ne bulaya hai.

armaan: oh really dekh in sab bahanp se kuch nahi hoga tumhe batana hi hoga ki kya hua hai jab tak nahi batayega main nahi jane doonga.

rahul: tu to aise bol raha hai jab ridhima ke saath tera jhagda hua tha to tune meri madat lit hi?

armaan: lit hi rahul tumhe yaad nahi tumne kaha tha upperwale par chod do aur maine uske saath naye seere se sab shuru kiya ab sab thik hai.

rahul: tu lucky hai armaan par main nahi

armaan: ab mujhe bataega ki problem kya hai nahi to main muski ko bata do kit u usse kitna pyaar karta hai aur jo uske liye natak tha who tere liye sachahi.

rahul: not telling anything

armaan: thi hai fine main use batane jar aha hoon

rahul: nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii pls rukja

armaan: to bata kya baat hai.

rahul: main sanjeevni chod ke jar aha hoon

armaan: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa par kyun

rahul: main muskaan ke layek nahi hoon teri aur ridhima ki jodi kitni achi lagti hai main muskaan ke saath aisa lagta hoon jaise hoor ki gale main Bandar ko bandh diya ho.

armaan: wt yeh kya bakwas baat kar raha hai tere dimag main aisi bateein kaha se aayi.

rahul: aisa hi hai armaan isseliye to dekh who bhi to tujhse hi pyar karti thi par tu uske naseeb main nahi tha shayad koi aur aajaye jo tumari tarah hoo to uski zindagi sawar jayegi main jar aha hoon matlab jaa raha hoon mujhe iske barre main aur discussion nahi karni.

armaan; meri baat to suo rahul.

there was someone else also listning this after rahul went she comes its ridhima

ridhima: yeh isse kya ho gaya kaise kaise batein kar raha hai tumhe kuch karna hoga.

armaan: baat kuch aur hi hai main use janta hoon who is reason ke liye muskaan se door nahi ja sakta baat kuch aur hi hai.

anjali atul

anjali: sitting in locker room and wating for atul with money plant in her hand.

atul coming sees it and says: yeh money plant yeh tumare haath main kya kar raha hai.

anjali: main yeh tumare liye layi hoon tum udaas the na tumara money lant tooth gaya issiliye

atul: oh thankyou tumhe yaad tha u are so sweet.

anjali: iski koi zaroorat nahi hai ab hum bahut ache dost hai aur ek doosre ko janne bhi lage hai so no need to say thankyou right.

meanwhile dr shubankar is just moving around the passage in the hospital very nervously

dr armaan: kya hua sir aap bahut tention main ha kya baat hai.

dr subankar: aapki to life set hai shadi kid t bhi fix ho gayi par mera kya maine socha hai aaj dr kitiko shadi ke liye propose karroga par kaise kuch samjh nahi aa raha. aap to is khel main mahir hai aap meri madat karege

armaan: sure sir

dr shubankar: very happy thanku armaan

armaan: in mind huuuuuuuuuu kitno ki madat karo ek rahul hai aur ek aap aurek mere sasurjee jo maan kar bhi nahi manne.

meanwhile rahul is seeing some case file and is very seriously reading it bt just then rahul got hurt from pillar and his file was fallen down its written rahul garewal on the top of the file armaan sees it and trying to pick it up rahul rushed and pick it not allowing armaan to see buts late armaan has already sees its name.

recap: (wt happen to rahul is it something serious.)

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PART-4

Pre recap: (file fall from rahul hand and armaan see it rahul garewal written on it.)

armaan: yeh kaunsi file hai aur isme tumara naam kyun likha hai.

rahul: mera naam are nahi yaar mera naam kaha hai yeh to mera ek patient jiska naam rahul

(in between pager of armaan rings and it is sign of relief for rahul.)

armaan: emergency hai jana hoga ha chalo bye baad main milte hai.

rahul: sounding bit relieved haan haan milte hai bye.

canteen everybody is sitting except rahul

muskaan: was looking very sad and not speaking to anbody.

ridhima: muskaan kya hua itni udhas kyun klag rahihai.

anjali: haan yaar sahi kaha yeh aur rahul pata nahi aaj kal khoye khoye se rehte hai koi problem hai kya.

muskan: rahul hi to problem hai

atul: standing kyun kya hua use

muskan: oye phite mu bath na tu itna chila kyun raha hai.

armaan: relax champ haan muskan tu kuch bol rahi thi.

muskan: haan yaar pehle to kaise mere aage peche khuma karta tha aaj kal to mujhse baat bhi nahi karta pata nahi kyun itna khicha khicha sa rehta hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aah raha.

armaan; tu tention matle yaar sab thik ho jayega ( bt somewhere inside he was really tensed with that file issue and ridhima sensed it.)

( announcement everybody report in nurse station.)

fire escape

armaan sitting was really tensed about rahul and ridhima comes from behind but armaan not realized. ridhima just hold his hand.

armaan: tum kab aaye mujhe to pata hi nahi chala

ridhima: haan haan ab tumhe kyun pata chalega ab to humari sagayi ho gayi hai aur tum to abhi se hi mujhe ignore kar rahe ho pata nahi shadi ke baadkya hoga.

armaan: nahi yaar aisi baat nahi hai.

ridhima: acha agar aise baat nahi hai to mujhe yeh kyun nahi bata raheke tum itne pareshan kyun ho rahul se koi baat hui kya.

armaan: not told anything just looking ib her eyes and thinking. I am so lucky mere bina bole hi mera dil ka haal samajh leti hai.

ridhima: ab maan hi maan meri tareef karna band karo aur batao kya baat hai.

armaan: ok yaar aaj main acahnak rahul se takraya tha and just explaning the whole incident.

ridhima: itne pareshan mat ho I am sure sab thik hoga aur agar nahi hua to tum ho hi thik karne ke liye right.

armaan: oye hoe itna bharosa not bad.

ridhima: kyun na ho mujhe apne aapbhar barsa hai aur tum par bhi tum sab thik kar doge ab chalo.

armaan: abhi nahi pehle just keeping his finger on his lips.

rihima: armaaaaaaaaaaaaan chalo.

armaan: pls pls

ridhima just trying to go bt armaan pulls her back and they were really close about to kiss bt as usual pager rings.

in evening in locker room

(muskaan, rahul)

muskaan: rahul mujhe ghar chod dega meri scooty kharab ho gay hai

rahul: are mujhe zarrori kaam se bahar jana hai main nahi chod sakta tu kisi aur se lift lele

muskaan: nahi nahi mujhe tere saath hi jana hai kaam khatam karke mujhe chod dena.

rahul: nahi mere liye raasta ult padh jayega.

muskaan: are samjha kar na kisi aur ke saath kaise jaaoun anjali atul saath saath jaate hai aur armaan aur ridhima ka to tujhe pata hai hi holding his hands.

rahul: just snaching his hand and bit angry maine kaha na main nahi le ja sakta koi aurko dund mera raasta chod and just goes away from there

ar entered and sees muskaan crying

armaan: are kya hua itna ro kyun rahi hai

muskaan: snob snob who rahul again snob who hai na again snob

armaan: irritated and shouted agar itne rote hue baat karogi to humhe samajh main kaise aaega

muskaan: now controlling haan haan ek to who hai hi mujh par chila kar chala gaya par ab tum bhi

ridhima controlling armaan with her eyes and said: acha ab rona band karo aur batao kya baat hai

mu: explanning the whole incident and again started crying loudly.

ridhima: are itni si baat hai yaar tumhe armaan chod dega ek din ki hi to baat hai main di ke saath chali jaungi.

armaan bit angry and sad with wt ridhima said and his expression shows it purely as he get this time and morning time with her which he don't want to loose and ridhima sees it and sensed it.

ridhima: by explaining him from her eyes : kyun armaan thik hai na

armaan: ha I mean haan thik hai.

(in minds kya thik hai yaar shayad mera bad luck hi garab hai.
just then rahul enter in hurry he forgets to take his file.)

armaan: trying to speak to him yeh kya kiya yaar rahul dek kitna ro rahi hai

rahul not seems to hear and just take the file and go. armaan was getting some felling again kahi na kahi kuch gadbad hai he just signed ridhima to come to changing room.

changing room

ridhima: armaan yeh kya mu itni serious hai aur tumhe romance sujh raha hai.

armaan: are nahi yaar main to yeh keh raha tha ki muhe rahul ka peecha karma chahiye shayad kuch pata chale and he kissed on her cheeks and run.

armaan was following rahul car and was shocked to see rahul geeting down to another hospital. rahul get inside the doc cabin.

rahul: come in sir

doc: yes come in sit pls

doc:dekheye rahul aap jitni late karage aapka tumor utna bada hota jayega iss liye pls aap illaj karan shuru kar dijye.

armaan lisning this was really shocked and worried.

recap: armaan trying to convince rahul to stay at Mumbai and get the treatment here will he be successful.

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