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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fire_woman

Khakshan - such a loving and touching update. 😊 Hey GG!!

Kash! If only those buddhu's would have taken an eighth of the care you have in developing B❤️A's love story on BMTD. 😳 Ahhhh!!! kash this is the only word we r left with.kash, they would have done this done that, but those bhuddhu's din't & can't do anything that we BA fans want 😳 😕 they r of no use...😡
You have really brought alive and brought back the MS/B❤️A jodi with your FF for all of us. I m glad i m able to get glimpse of our BA/MS for u guys 😊
Maya was so right. I was imaging MS the entire time I was reading how Aditi cared for Bharat - getting him to eat and during his illness. And Bharat watching Aditi, falling in love with her; and she him. <<sigh>> I was imagining while writing 😛 each & every scene was roaming around my eyes...😍 Bharat has just one work to do watch aditi
😍 (in serial he use to watch her, even in ur FF & SS he does the same 😛😆)
I just loved the sindoor scene - jes gives ya goose bumps. 😳😳😳 Ahhh goose bumps..... keep some for next update...😃
Can't wait for the next update ... and the next ... and the next ....... 😊 tomorrow the next update will be posted. so get ready......
Thanks for liking & appreciating... 😊

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wow wht a work just fab Thanks saher 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey girls here's the new update. really sorry for late update... ok.. it's a very short one... and not much. it's the continuation of the last one. but hope u will like it... plz forgive my english especially when it comes to express the facial expressions i m very bad at it... not yet completed will post the rest one by sunday with vm... till then enjoy this one 😊


PART 3


Aniket, Chandra, Mauhua & Divya are seated in the hall. Aniket still seems worried for Bharat. 'Jeeja ji bharat ab bilkul theek hai pp fikar kyun kerte hain' Mauhua said in a consoling manner. 'Haan jeeja ji woh theek hai aur jo thori bohat qasar reh gayi hai tau hamari Aditi hai na woh usey bilkul theek ker degi' Chandra joins Mauhua. Aniket nods his head but still not satisfied. Bare Papa ager apko yakeen nahi horaha tau apni baho se pooch lijye (Bare papa if you can't believe than ask your daughter-in-law) Divya says pointing towards aditi, who was standing near the stairs and listening to them. kyun aditi theek keh rahe hain na (aditi r we right) divya asks her with mischeif smile. Aditi awkwardly nods her head with a very small smile and leaves from there. Bas jeejo ab tau tasali hoi (fine jeejo are you convinced now) chandra asks aniket & everyone starts laughing.

It's afternoon everyone is sitting at dinning table for lunch. Divya is serving everyone. Amar comesback from the office. 'Arey wah khana tayar hai mujhe tau bohat bhook lagi hai' (wow food is ready i m very hungry) Amar says while coming inside he is about to sit when divya stops him and says 'pehle fresh tau ho jayein' (first get fresh) she makes him leave from there. Amar leaves from there disappointing. Aditi enters the room with a dish in her hand. She keeps the dish on the table and turns to leave when aniket asks her 'where ahe is going'. 'papa mei bharat ko khana de aon' (papa i will give food to bharat and come) aditi says in a low voice and half turned, she looks at divya who is silently smiling on her concern for bharat. aditi lowers her eyes down worriedly rolls her eyeballs here & there and hurriedly leaves. Divya gets back to serve others.

Amar's room:

Amar comes out of his room, moves towards the stairs when he sees Bharat's room door is opened he goes near. The door is half opened. He peeps inside Bharat is resting his head on the back of the bed with his eyes close so he doesn't feel like disturbing him and leaves.

In the Hall:
'Divya Bharat ne khana khaya ya nahi' (Divya did Bharat had lunch or not yet) Amar asks while coming down the stairs. Abhi nahi..... (not yet) kya abhi tak nahi khaya....kisi ne usey khana kyun nahi diya ' (what he hasn't eaten yet, y din't anyone give him the food) he says it angrily cutting Divya in between... 'woh aditi ne uske liye alag se khana banaya hai woh usey dene hi lagi hai, app aye baithye' (Aditi has made (seperate/special) lunch for him and she is going to give him, you come and sit) divya says... Amar sees aditi coming with a tray he goes near the dinning table picks up his plate and goes to aditi. 'Aditi yeh tray mujhe do mei apne bhai k sath khana kahunga' (Aditi give me this tray i will eat with him) He says and takes the tray from her hand and leaves before anyone could say him something... Aditi & Divya keep looking...

Bharat's room:
Amar enters the room Bharat is still resting with eyes closed. He keeps the trya on the bed and caals out for him. 'Bharat.....Bharat..'
Bharat opens his eyes and sits straight. Bhaiya app' chalo khana kahlo' Amar says and gives him the tray bharat takes the tray and looks towards the door. Amar notices this and teasingly says 'woh neeche sab ko khana de rahi hai isliye mein tumhare liye khana le aya' (she is serving others downstairs, so i bought lunch for u) Bharat with a snap looks at him.. Amar continues 'kyun miyan, ab tum apne Mr Ocean se khana bhi nahi le sakte pehle tau har cheez Mr Ocean hi kare, hmmmm' (why Mr, now you can't even take food from your Mr Ocean, first everything should be done by Mr Ocean, hmmm) 'Arey nahi bhaiya, kaisi baat ker rahe hain app, app tau mere bhai mere dost mere Mr Ocean sab kuch hain.mei tau bas waise hi wahan' (No bhaiya, what r u saying, you are my brother, my friend, my Mr Ocean, my everything, I was just there) Bharat stops saying & all the while holding his hand. Amar laughs sarcastically. Bharat understood he was teasing him 'kya bhaiya app bhi'. (what bhaiya you also)... They both laugh and then starts eating..

After a while aditi comes to the room bharat sees her and keeps looking at her.. Hmmhmmmm amar clears his throat. bharat snaps out. Both of them smiles.. 'Aao aditi abhi mei tumhe hi bulane laga tha' (come aditi i was just going to call you) Amar says to aditi looking at bharat with mischeif smile.. ji bhaiya' (yes bhaiya) Aditi says as she comes and stand near the bed. first he looks at bharat, bharat also looks at him, then amar turns towards aditi and says 'tum bharat ko dawai do mei chalta hun' (u give him medicine i will leave) he gets up and picks the tray first pats bharats head & then while leaving he keeps his hand on aditi's shoulder smiles and leaves. Aditi watches him leaving, and bharat is watching aditi. Aditi turns back to bharat and he looks down. Aditi sits besides him takes his medicine and gives him (w/o saying a word) and then gives him the glass of water which he takes (& all this while he is continuosly glancing at her) she takes the glass from him and asks him 'appko kuch aur chaiye' (do u need anything else) he says 'no'.. aditi gets up to go he calls her from back 'Aditi...' she stops and turns... 'Ji' 'yes' Aditi asks her. Bharat looks at her they both have an eyelock Aditi breaks the eyelock by lowering her eyes. Bharat also looks away, he again looks at her and say 'kuch nahi' (nothing) Aditi is surprised by bharat's behaviour looks at him surprisingly and then leaves. bharat watches her leave.

Bharat's room:

Amar is with bharat discussing some office work. divya enters the room followed by aditi holding a tray of tea. 'Yeh kya??? usey pehle theek tau hone ddijye office ka kaam baad mei bhi ho sakta hia.' (What's this???? let him get well first, work can be done later also) Divya says in an annoying manner. She sits on the bed snatches the file from bharat's hand. arey Bhabi' Bharat screams. 'Divya kya ker rahi ho, file phat jayegi bohat important hai' (Divya what r u doing? file will tear it's very important) amar also screams worriedly and takes the file from her. 'acha file ziyada important hai bhai nahi' (oh ok file is more important than your brother) Divya says in a taunting manner. 'Arey divya' amar says but aditi interupts 'Bhaiya chai' (all this while aditi was making tea for everyone & as usual our hero was staring her 😆) Amar stops and looks at her & takes the cup from her. Then she gives the cup to divya 'Aditi tumne bhi bharat ko mana nahi kiya' (Aditi you also din't stop bharat from working) divya questions her. Aditi looks at bharat 'Bhabhi mujhe nahi pata tha k yeh sab ker rahe hain aur mein tau appke sath thi' (Bhabhi i din't knew that he is doing all this, and i was with you) aditi replies awkwardly, and then gets a cup of tea for bharat. she gives him the cup but does not look at him, bharat is staring her but doesn't take the cup. aditi looks at him with mixed expression, she is a bit shocked, a bit surprised the way bharat was looking at her, she lowers her eyes and he notices her awkwardness and takes the cup and thanks her. then she gets her cup of tea & sits on the bed near divya. they all have their cup of tea and chat. All this while bharat is glancing at aditi.

Bharat's room:
Aditi brings dinner for bharat. 'khana kah lijya' Aditi says to bharat as she sits on the bed and forwards the tray towards him. He takes the tray looks at the food 'phir se khicdri (it's a special kind of food made from rice & dal(pulse) for patients) (again khichdri) he says in a very childish way.. Aditi mujhe yeh nahi khana' (Aditi i don't want to eat this) Aditi looks puzzled at him 'Bharat, app ki tabiyet abhi poori tarah theek nahi hoi isliye app kuch aur nahi kah sakte' (Bharat you are not completely well, that's y you can't eat anything else) she said concerned 'app yehi khaiye ek do din ki baat hai jab bilkul theek ho jayeinge tau jo marzi khana' (you have to eat this only, it's the matter of one two days when you will get completely well eat what ever you want to) liken ab yehi khaye (but now you have to eat this) Aditi says in a orderly manner.. 'ek do din, mein abhi nahi kah pa raha aur tum mujhe ek do din aur khilao gi' (one two days, i m not able to eat it now and you are making me eat one two days more) he says it in a sarcastic way. 'Bharat.......' Aditi is about to say something when bharat cuts her. 'Aditi, please ager mei yeh khana kahounga na tau sach mei aisa bemar peronga k kabhi theek nahi honga' (Aditi, please if i will eat this food then seriously i will get ill and will never get well) 'SHHHHHH, chup kijye, kitna fazool bolte han, ainda aisa kabhi mat kahna' (shhhhhh, be quite, you talk so rubbish (hope this is the right word) don't say it again) Aditi almost shouts at him and looks at him upset. Bharat is amazed at her behaviour he is staring at her puzzeled and amazed. she looks at him very upset and walks away from there without saying any other word.....

Edited by khakshan-aa - 16 years ago
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Edited by fire_woman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Khakshan - a wonderful, fabulous, poignant update! 😊
You expressed B❤️A's feelings so well. So sweet and touching. Ah, B❤️A are just falling, falling, falling for each other. They can't stop looking at each other. And that Bharat - he can't take his eyes from lovely Aditi every time she is near him. And if she isn't, he is looking for her anyway. And Aditi, so shy and sweet and caring towards Bharat. <<sigh>>
Love the way A❤️D & B❤️A are so close and care about each other. 😊 Too bad those writer buddhus couldn't see that is what we fans so wanted ... and missed in BMTD! 🤢
So enjoyed the update Khakshan - thank you! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Khakshan I loved part 3 👏 - Amar teasing Bharat; Bharat stealing glances at Aditi; Aditi confused by Bharat's reactions - omg I can't wait for the rest of it......and for the VM...... great job dear 👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fire_woman

Khakshan - a wonderful, fabulous, poignant update! 😊 GG!! u r making me on seven sky... Thank u dear for liking it so much..

You expressed B❤️A's feelings so well. 😊 So sweet and touching.😛 Ah, B❤️A are just falling, falling, falling for each other. They can't stop looking at each other. Both are playing hide & seek 😆
And that Bharat - he can't take his eyes from lovely Aditi every time she is near him. Bharat in my FF is also naughty just like ur GC & M,
And if she isn't, he is looking for her anyway. Tumko nikahein dhonti hain (my eyes keep looking for u) this song goes so well for him in this situation 😆
And Aditi, so shy and sweet and caring towards Bharat. <<sigh>>just like me 😳
i wish i was aditi 😍
Love the way A❤️D & B❤️A are so close and care about each other. 😊
Too bad those writer buddhus couldn't see that is what we fans so wanted ... and missed in BMTD! 🤢 😡They just love their villans not us true royal fans. they don't even care to find out what fans want
So enjoyed the update Khakshan - thank you! 😊 my pleasure 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shalines

Khakshan I loved part 3 👏 - Amar teasing Bharat; Bharat stealing glances at Aditi; Aditi confused by Bharat's reactions - omg I can't wait for the rest of it......and for the VM...... great job dear 👍🏼 Thank u sweety.. the rest of the part is ready but can't decide about the song for VM anyways still have a day to work on it... on monday when u will be back u will find it posted 😊

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