Frenz here's Part 31.I know u hav been waiting 4 long and may u r mad at me.....but i'm really vary sorry.thnx a lot 4 all the love and appreciation u hav given me before.hope u'l like this one also.waiting 4 ur comments! ENJOY!!!
******************PART 31*******************
Recap : Payal and Pundir searching for prithvi and sanyogita,bonding between prithvi and sanyogita forming....
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Hmmm....sssSanyogita...itne saal tum mujse dur...mera matlab hai tumhari koi khabar bhi nahi thi...",he spoke slowly overcoming his hesitation, "Tum kaisi thi...tum thik toh thi naa? kabhi koi pareshaani to nahi..."She could feel the concern in his voice.She was feeling better with his kind attention.How she longed to experience it all these years.
Prithvi looked at silent sanyogita and felt guilty.
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Mujhe tumse yeh nahi poochna chahiye tha....mujhe maaf kardo sanyogita..."When she realised that he has mistaken her silence for her annoyance,She poured her heart out,
"
Pareshaani...humari zindagi hi jaise pareshaani ban gayi thi..."Prithvi stopped abruptly...watching sanyogita in shock...soon shock turned into utter sadness.....
Sanyogita turned to him....looking into his eyes...she could see nothing but pain and longing....
pain.....was it for what she suffered? or....was it what he had undergone all these years.....or....was it reflection of the pain in her eyes? denoting that both had undergone the same....she was busy searching her answer into those deep brown pools...but her search halted as soon his eyes were welled of tears.....
He...trying hard to control them from falling...NO!...he can't show it to her...he can't let her know the pain he went through all these years...
He very well knew that she'll start crying once she knew of his pain as he knew that however she denied,she can't see him in pain....
He can't be the reason for fresh tears in her eyes,thought he...
He couldn't give her happiness...so..not atleast tears either....
Sanyogita slowly held his hand seeing tears welling up his eyes.
Prithvi was broken from his trance by the touch...touch for which he longed all those years...
She gently squeezed his hand,comforting him...Tears trickled down his eyes...
"
Sanyogita...woh main...tum...",he choked.He couldn't speak further.He was cursing himself....feeling guilty....
Guilty for those tears in her eyes....
Guilty for not being there in times of her difficulty....
Guilty for all the hardships she faced with him being ALIVE....
But then....was he really ALIVE???? without her....
He was not more than a soul less machine....
He was MAHARAJ PRITHVIRAJ CHAUHAN....
BUT......PRITHVI....Prithvi had died long back...under the burden of HER hatred....
He took one sad glance of her; he was stunned to see expressions in her eyes.....
was it comfort?...was it understanding??? was it trust???...
Yes, it was something which was relieving prithvi of the guilt he was feeling....telling him that he was not responsible for all...
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Prithvi....woh sab humare naseeb ka likha tha...Usse toh hamein akele hi bhugatna tha...", she said softly,a small smile appearing on her face."Theek hain...agar tum aise muh banake baithoge toh hum aage kuch nahi batayenge...
",she said complaining.Prithvi forced an artificial smile being desperate to know what happened to her.
"
Ek shart par....aaj tum apni koi bhi pareshaan karnewali yaad nahi chupaogi mujhse....sabkuch keh do....apne aapko unn buri yaado se mukt kardo....waada karo sanyogita tum sabkuch bataogi....ateeth ke bure saaye se apna peecha chudana hai tumhe....ek nayee khushhaal zindagi jeeni hai... ...waada karo sanyogita..tum sab batagi mujhe...tumhe khush rehna hoga....mere liye.."She at once looked up...
"
Tumhe khush rehna hoga sanyogita.....phir chahe uske liye mujhe tumhari zindagi se humesha humesha ke liye kyon na jaana pade.....",sadness creeping his voice.She shuddered at his last sentence....her eyes widened in shock.....Prithvi dint gave her much time to react...
"
Sanyogita....waada karo mujs....",she didn't wait for him to complete.She shunned his hands angrily while he was trying to stop her and stormed from there.Prithvi at once understood.A small smile appeared on his lips.But he decided to play along.
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Sanyogita....sanyogita ruko toh...sanyogita suno toh...",He reached out to her and hold her wrist.
"
Baat kya hai?Ab kyu gussa hogayi mujhse?ab maine aisa kya kar diya?","
Hume tumse koi baat nahi karni priithvi,samajh gaye tum?""
Offo,bilkul jungli billi ho tum!""
Kya kaha?kya kaha tumne?""
Kuch nahi...mujhe maaf kardo....",Prithvi said holding his ears,"Maana meri koi galati nahi hai....parr phir bhi mujhe maaf kardo...",said he mischeivously."
Prithvi tum...",and she at once laughed."
Tum mujhe sabkuch bataogi naa?agar kabhi ek pal ke liye bhi tumne mujhe dost samjha ho...mujhse py...",he stopped abruptly,fidgeting nervously."
Waada...",said she and he smiled.She started narrating while he listened...both strolling their path.....
"
Jab tum hamein sone ki khaan se bacha kar daulatpur chod aaye the,tab humne bahot socha...hamare baarein mein...tumhare baarein mein...hum dono ke pyaar ke baarein mein...hamein laga shaayad humari kahi galati ho rahi hai.Hum tumse milkar ek baar baat karna chahte the...humare beech ki galat fehmi door karna chahte the....main aur vaishali tumse milne aa rahe the...
"Prithvi shot up his eyebrows on hearing this.But he didnt interfere and let her continue.
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Parr tum hamare mehel mein aakar pitaji se battameezi sein baat kar rahe the....Delhi ka maharaj hone ka ghamand tumhari baaton mein mehsus ho raha tha.Phir humne tay kar liya ki hum tumse kabhi baat nahi karenge aur naahi koi rishta rakhenge..."Prithvi immediately recalled it.It was when Jaichand had given patronship to Allah and Udal....the two great warriors who were Prithvi's culprit.He wanted to punish them for killing his senapati and sainiks.But Jaichand,as usual,not missing the chance to express his hatred,animosity towards prithvi gave protection to the warrior duo.
That time Prithvi was frustrated.He was fed up of Jaichand.Almost all the roads to his success in any path of life were blocked by him.
Be it his father,who could have been alive if only Jaichand had help Ajmer against gujrat,Let it be Delhi's Throne,Let it be his love,life,his everything,His Sanyogita.......
All this bottled up anger and the royal rajput blood in his veins made him yell at this maharaj of kannauj.....
Prithvi never repented for his behaviour that day....Not then and.....NOT NOW...
He decided he have to explain his stand to sanyogita...this is the time when he clears up all the mess...
"
Sanyogita....",he spoke softly," Uss waqt ke haalat hi kuch aise the.....Hamare liye humari prajya apni jaan se zyaada pyaari hai.Sainiko ki suraksha meri zimmedari hai..Sanyogita....Har RAJPUT apni jaan ladte ladte dena chahata hai.Apne desh par,matrubhoomi parr nyochavar hone woh sena mein hota hai...Main apne kisi bhi sipahi ki maut bina wajeh seh nahi sakta.Aallaah aur Udal apradhi the.Unhe apne rajya se madad nahi mili toh woh tumhare pitaji se madad maaangne aye.Mujhe jo sahi laga maine kiya.""
Haan...tumne ek Raja hone ka hi kartavya nibhaya hai..."He stared at her in amazement.
***************END OF PART 31*****************
Pals,hope u all like it.....
Wow dear,It's wonderful update.U made me speechless.U described very well the relationship between prithvi and sanyo.Post next part soon dear.
Originally posted by: manatated
Frenz here's Part 31.I know u hav been waiting 4 long and may u r mad at me.....but i'm really vary sorry.thnx a lot 4 all the love and appreciation u hav given me before.hope u'l like this one also.waiting 4 ur comments! ENJOY!!!
******************PART 31*******************
Recap : Payal and Pundir searching for prithvi and sanyogita,bonding between prithvi and sanyogita forming....
"Hmmm....sssSanyogita...itne saal tum mujse dur...mera matlab hai tumhari koi khabar bhi nahi thi...",he spoke slowly overcoming his hesitation, "Tum kaisi thi...tum thik toh thi naa? kabhi koi pareshaani to nahi..."
She could feel the concern in his voice.She was feeling better with his kind attention.How she longed to experience it all these years.
Prithvi looked at silent sanyogita and felt guilty.
"Mujhe tumse yeh nahi poochna chahiye tha....mujhe maaf kardo sanyogita..."
When she realised that he has mistaken her silence for her annoyance,She poured her heart out,
"Pareshaani...humari zindagi hi jaise pareshaani ban gayi thi..."
Prithvi stopped abruptly...watching sanyogita in shock...soon shock turned into utter sadness.....
Sanyogita turned to him....looking into his eyes...she could see nothing but pain and longing....
pain.....was it for what she suffered? or....was it what he had undergone all these years.....or....was it reflection of the pain in her eyes? denoting that both had undergone the same....she was busy searching her answer into those deep brown pools...but her search halted as soon his eyes were welled of tears.....
He...trying hard to control them from falling...NO!...he can't show it to her...he can't let her know the pain he went through all these years...
He very well knew that she'll start crying once she knew of his pain as he knew that however she denied,she can't see him in pain....
He can't be the reason for fresh tears in her eyes,thought he...
He couldn't give her happiness...so..not atleast tears either....
Sanyogita slowly held his hand seeing tears welling up his eyes.
Prithvi was broken from his trance by the touch...touch for which he longed all those years...
She gently squeezed his hand,comforting him...Tears trickled down his eyes...
"Sanyogita...woh main...tum...",he choked.He couldn't speak further.
He was cursing himself....feeling guilty....
Guilty for those tears in her eyes....
Guilty for not being there in times of her difficulty....
Guilty for all the hardships she faced with him being ALIVE....
But then....was he really ALIVE???? without her....
He was not more than a soul less machine....
He was MAHARAJ PRITHVIRAJ CHAUHAN....
BUT......PRITHVI....Prithvi had died long back...under the burden of HER hatred....
He took one sad glance of her; he was stunned to see expressions in her eyes.....
was it comfort?...was it understanding??? was it trust???...
Yes, it was something which was relieving prithvi of the guilt he was feeling....telling him that he was not responsible for all...
"Prithvi....woh sab humare naseeb ka likha tha...Usse toh hamein akele hi bhugatna tha...", she said softly,a small smile appearing on her face.
"Theek hain...agar tum aise muh banake baithoge toh hum aage kuch nahi batayenge...",she said complaining.
Prithvi forced an artificial smile being desperate to know what happened to her.
"Ek shart par....aaj tum apni koi bhi pareshaan karnewali yaad nahi chupaogi mujhse....sabkuch keh do....apne aapko unn buri yaado se mukt kardo....waada karo sanyogita tum sabkuch bataogi....ateeth ke bure saaye se apna peecha chudana hai tumhe....ek nayee khushhaal zindagi jeeni hai... ...waada karo sanyogita..tum sab batagi mujhe...tumhe khush rehna hoga....mere liye.."
She at once looked up...
"Tumhe khush rehna hoga sanyogita.....phir chahe uske liye mujhe tumhari zindagi se humesha humesha ke liye kyon na jaana pade.....",sadness creeping his voice.
She shuddered at his last sentence....her eyes widened in shock.....Prithvi dint gave her much time to react...
"Sanyogita....waada karo mujs....",
she didn't wait for him to complete.She shunned his hands angrily while he was trying to stop her and stormed from there.Prithvi at once understood.A small smile appeared on his lips.But he decided to play along.
"Sanyogita....sanyogita ruko toh...sanyogita suno toh...",
He reached out to her and hold her wrist.
"Baat kya hai?Ab kyu gussa hogayi mujhse?ab maine aisa kya kar diya?",
"Hume tumse koi baat nahi karni priithvi,samajh gaye tum?"
"Offo,bilkul jungli billi ho tum!"
"Kya kaha?kya kaha tumne?"
"Kuch nahi...mujhe maaf kardo....",Prithvi said holding his ears,"Maana meri koi galati nahi hai....parr phir bhi mujhe maaf kardo...",said he mischeivously.
"Prithvi tum...",and she at once laughed.
"Tum mujhe sabkuch bataogi naa?agar kabhi ek pal ke liye bhi tumne mujhe dost samjha ho...mujhse py...",he stopped abruptly,fidgeting nervously.
"Waada...",said she and he smiled.
She started narrating while he listened...both strolling their path.....
"Jab tum hamein sone ki khaan se bacha kar daulatpur chod aaye the,tab humne bahot socha...hamare baarein mein...tumhare baarein mein...hum dono ke pyaar ke baarein mein...hamein laga shaayad humari kahi galati ho rahi hai.
Hum tumse milkar ek baar baat karna chahte the...humare beech ki galat fehmi door karna chahte the....main aur vaishali tumse milne aa rahe the..."
Prithvi shot up his eyebrows on hearing this.But he didnt interfere and let her continue.
"Parr tum hamare mehel mein aakar pitaji se battameezi sein baat kar rahe the....Delhi ka maharaj hone ka ghamand tumhari baaton mein mehsus ho raha tha.Phir humne tay kar liya ki hum tumse kabhi baat nahi karenge aur naahi koi rishta rakhenge..."
Prithvi immediately recalled it.It was when Jaichand had given patronship to Allah and Udal....the two great warriors who were Prithvi's culprit.He wanted to punish them for killing his senapati and sainiks.But Jaichand,as usual,not missing the chance to express his hatred,animosity towards prithvi gave protection to the warrior duo.
That time Prithvi was frustrated.He was fed up of Jaichand.Almost all the roads to his success in any path of life were blocked by him.
Be it his father,who could have been alive if only Jaichand had help Ajmer against gujrat,Let it be Delhi's Throne,Let it be his love,life,his everything,His Sanyogita.......All this bottled up anger and the royal rajput blood in his veins made him yell at this maharaj of kannauj.....
Prithvi never repented for his behaviour that day....Not then and.....NOT NOW...
He decided he have to explain his stand to sanyogita...this is the time when he clears up all the mess...
"Sanyogita....",he spoke softly," Uss waqt ke haalat hi kuch aise the.....Hamare liye humari prajya apni jaan se zyaada pyaari hai.Sainiko ki suraksha meri zimmedari hai..Sanyogita....Har RAJPUT apni jaan ladte ladte dena chahata hai.Apne desh par,matrubhoomi parr nyochavar hone woh sena mein hota hai...Main apne kisi bhi sipahi ki maut bina wajeh seh nahi sakta.Aallaah aur Udal apradhi the.Unhe apne rajya se madad nahi mili toh woh tumhare pitaji se madad maaangne aye.Mujhe jo sahi laga maine kiya."
"Haan...tumne ek Raja hone ka hi kartavya nibhaya hai..."
He stared at her in amazement.
***************END OF PART 31*****************
Pals,hope u all like it.....
Originally posted by: veersherafan1
Wow dear,It's wonderful update.U made me speechless.U described very well the relationship between prithvi and sanyo.Post next part soon dear.
wow yaa..vryy sweet ud.....
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