Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~

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Hey dear this is my first Fanfic here...Just trying my hands ...I am posting the intro here do look at it...This is sklightly different here from the show....Just the characters are same...May include some different character too...Plsss have a look at it...and do comment did you liked it or Not....Its PREM/HEER FF

INTRO



Marriage'It is the Bonding of two hearts'. It is the dream of every person'a even sole life every one has some dream regarding there life when they will be married..whom they would marry???..and live forever...if it is for ever'., but if it's a contract....then what..?? 'if it's just a mere business then what..??  'if its just a game '.a ruthless game..'. Then..???  A game played by some people for there own benefits or due to some conditions involving themselves in this game...the game which may spoil there life...but littile did they knew that the game  they were playing will spoil there life will snatch from them the reason for there living ,there life ...there love...,there soulmate...,there partner in these game... what will be it's result'of these Game...The game of Contract Marraige.

          


      LOVE'.The beautiful Emotion 'the feeling of ecstasy, but for her it became curse, as it is giving nothing but every day remorse for her''.She Sighed laughing sarcastically'.Every day she stands at this same sight, watching the Dark sky', those roaring, blasting Clouds, these chilling air 'the loneliness in her life was engulfing her Day by Day'. 'Minute by minute' Second by Second'she doesn't knows what to do as these darkness in her life is sucking her life away from her slowly'. A sole reason for it was that she fell in LOVE'Yes Love with her Husband'Yes her Husband'She was married to him' 'which had to be a mere game just.. 'A game''. which was hurting her day-by- day every moment 'slowly' steadily'. once in her life this same feeling'. A aesthetic feeling of Love had given her every thing she desired may it be just for a moment but now when she recalls those days of her life she feels nothing but emptiness, those where just a Bliss a dream which where never meant to be her' she always curses those unfaithful night when she had abolished every barriers that she had around her guarded heart which resulted in this emotional turmoil she is in at this movement'. It has been four months from that blissful night which turned out to be living in Hell 'but still somewhere in her heart she cherishes those days as it had meant Life to her but Did it meant anything for him'??? or was it just a pure Lust'?? This question troubles her every day does he ever felt what she felt for him'may it be just a flicker of emotion .she had a strong feeling at that time that maybe he had a little feelings for her but as the days passed by those flicker of hopes which where in her heart go buried deep inside the enveloped Heart..the wounded heart 'the restless heart'.

        Those where some best days of her life may it be few and now she is here all alone away from every one who meant world to her just because of that person the love of her life 'whom she doesn't desires to see in her life anymore'she says that but deep down she has a flicker of hope to meet him' 'some time she fells in deep thought 'why Life has played a cruel ''game'' with her ??? 'but then whom is she blaming the destiny ' the love'''the man whom she loved from her heart' while somewhere she herself is responsible for these condition in which she is today 'If these ''Game'' wouldn't had been started then she wouldn't be here alone fighting the battle in which she is loser in any cost 'Every day she battles against her life as she touches her hand where 'the only flicker of hope in her life lies..... that little angel ...the only reason for her living...which she is carrying the 'Symbol' of her love 'only her... as she remembers those days'. Where it all started' 'This Game of the cruel Marriage'. When she became Heer Prem Khanna'



MANY PEOPLE SAY THEY WILL BE WITH ME ALWAYS

BUT, WHEN I BADLY NEED THEM, THEY ARE AT BAY;

WHEN I EXPECT SOMETHING, I'M ANSWERED NAY'

NONE OF THEM THERE' TO BLOW AWAY MY DARKNESS, WASTE EVEN A DAY!

THEY KEEP CHANGING NOW AND THEN'

AND I END UP WRITING IT ALL IN PEN;

MISINTERPRETING, MISUNDERSTANDING, EGOISTIC ARE MEN'

PEOPLE ARE ALL AS DIFFERENT AS MY FINGERS TEN!

STILL' I DON'T FIND MYSELF SINK'

I DON'T WET MY INK'

I DON'T RUN AROUND SEARCHING ANY LINK'

I DON'T LET MY FACE TURN PINK.

FOR' I ALWAYS KNOW' THERES YOU'

MY BROKEN HEART TO SEW'

TO LET ME SHINE LIKE A DEW'

AND, MY EVERY MOMENT FRESH AND NEW!


I KNOW' ANYTIME I NEED A SHOULDER TO LEAN UPON, I CAN FIND YOU'

EVERYTIME I NEED TO HOLD A HAND, MY HANDS GROPE FOR YOU'

EVERYTIME I NEED TO KNOW ME, I LOOK AT YOU!

FOR' WHO SHALL KNOW ME BETTER THAN YOU?

BUT WHENEVER I NEEDED YOU' I DID NOT FOUND YOU'I NEVER FOUND YOU

 


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In a huge mansion.... 'Inside a dark room there was a man who was laying on a rolling chair....folding his hands around its armrest...resting against them...His eyes Moist...Deep Hazel Eyes...Having arched brows and smuged look on his face...He had a little stuble on his chin...which was grown due to him not shaving....Having a 'Grim Look'......His eyes were staring at the Image....Yes...IT was indeed a Image... 'The Image which was embedded in his heart...For ever...'His Love'....'Heer'.....''His Wife''......'Heer''...Yes it was she....He was lying as if life has drowned from his body...'He Laughs sarcastically looking at the Photos on the walls...and gets up from the Rolling chair and moves towards the window....Looking at that Moon....'They were Her Photos....'Her''....He doesn't has desire to live as the only desire he had was long gone'....Gone away from him!!!!.... 'For ever''...'Ever!!!! '. He was been searching for her for the past three month..day-by- day....But there was no sign of her.... 'often he ask's the question ...where is she????' Why doesn't she comes back'??...Why..???.. Why doesn't she wait for him'???... Why did she leave'???....Looking for some answer... But only answer he gets is this ever ending loneliness, which is sucking the flicker of life remaining in him...Every day he stares at those same pair of eyes which ones upon a time used to be drowning himself in..which he used to be adore 'to be fantasize'.'to love..those eyes full of love 'but now when he gazes at them they haunts him...with those numerous question the life had played ....He fells into thoughts of those days'A smile Appears on His Face'.

 

 

If love is blind then I am blind indeed
Because it's imperfections I can't see
If love is hope then I hope always
To be that memory that never fades
If love is heartbreak then I'm willing
                For you I could make the world stop spinning .............

If love gives pain 'it also gives happiness

so I will never stop waiting for u

becoz I LOVE U

 

 

often he fells in deep thought....doesn't she loved him'??? As much as he loved her, loves her, 'if yes? Then Why did she leave him???...Why...???  If she had waited for him then it would have been all proper...But the little ''Game" He played on her drowned him leaving just the darkness of the life which is engulfing him into its blissful embrace where he might get some peace...Every day he wishes if he opens his eyes 'might be' Just might be he will see her in these same bed beside him....'Only these abyss feeling for her is making him leave that may be one day he will find her the love of her life'.now awaitning the darkness to engulf him he recall those days when these all had started ' When Prem Khanna Met Heer Kapoor....

 

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Here was the Intro...Do read it...and Plsssss....Leave Comment Dear Readers..It helps to Improve...All Silent readers Plsss....Atleast Press Thankyou Tab..Plsss.....The Fanfick will deal with Flashback Detailed one....The the present...Do read and comment should i continue it or not....πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it great intro cant wait for da next part do continue as more ppl will read it they ll like it so keep ur hopes up n this ff will rule
gud luk and do update
thnx
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Originally posted by: zaibun

loved it great intro cant wait for da next part do continue as more ppl will read it they ll like it so keep ur hopes up n this ff will rule

gud luk and do update
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Hey Zaibun..

Thanks a Ton For the comment....
Glad you liked the concept....

Rohit
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INDEX

Part1   Pg3
Part2  Pg5
Part3  Pg8
Part4  pg12
part5  pg16
Part6  pg19
part7  pg24
part8  pg28
part9  pg30
promo pg34
part10 pg36
part11 pg38
promo  pg40
part12 pg49


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Hi
 
   it was awesomeeeee..... i really liked it...... hope u continue soon!........
 
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loved the intro please continue.Its seems that it has lots of sadness involved.
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Originally posted by: Intellienough

loved the intro please continue.Its seems that it has lots of sadness involved.



HEy

Glad you liked it...
Will update
Not too sadness dear...There will be fun moment how they fell in love ...It would be Flashback first...

Rohit

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Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

Hi

 
   it was awesomeeeee..... i really liked it...... hope u continue soon!........
 
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Thanks a ton for the comment...😳
Will update soon....
Love
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hey
that was an amazing intro...continue soon. 😊
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hiya that was awesome
loved this part
plz do cont