Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152

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Posted: 15 years ago

                             Tere Naina......       

                
 
                              BACKGROUND:-
 
(Tere Naina...Hass Diye...Bas Gaye Mere Dil Mein Tere Naina):-2
 
(Mere Dil Mein Jo Armaan Hai Paas Aa Kar Zara Dekho Na...
 Dil K Taar Mein Hai Sargam Chede Hai Ab Koi Anjaana):-2
 
Yeh Pyar Ki Hai Batain, Kuch Ankahi Mulaqatain
Oho...Aise Hi Milte Hain...Mil K Machal te Hain Do Dil Jawaan
 
Tere Naina...Tere Naina...Hass Diye
Bas Gaye Dil Mein Tere...Mere Naina...
 
(Ab Dekho Mil Gaye Ho To Phir Se Na Kahin Kho Jana
Ankhon Mein Hi Rahna...Bahon Mein Tum Mere So Jana):-2
Oho Mere Paas Tu Jo Aaye... To Khuda Mujhe Mil Jaye
Ho Ho...Honthon Ko Honthon Se Milne De Silne De Dur Na Ja...
 
Haan...Haan...Haan...Haan
Tere Liye Charon Ore Dhundha Meine
Mil Gayi Jo Tu Mujhe To Mil Gaya Sara Jahan Sara Yahaan
Ab Chahun Mai Kya...
Mere Liye Sapna Tha Yeh Pyar Tera
Kholi Ankhen Samne Tha Mere Liye Yaar Mera Pyar Mera
Ab Chahun Aur Kya...
O Aise Na Mujh Ko Saza De...Paas Aa Na Ab Tu Saza De
Oho Sab Se Chura lun... Jag Se Chupa Lun...Itne Paas Aa
 
Mere Dil Mein Jo Armaan Hai Paas Aa K Zara Dekho Na
Dil K Taar Mein Hai Sargam Chede Koi...Hai Ab Koi Anjaana
 
Varnna Na Na Na...Paas Aa K Zara Dekho Na
Dil K Taar Mein Hai Sargam Chede Koi...Hai Ab Koi Anjaana
 
Yeh Pyar Ki Hai Batain...Kuch Ankahi Mulaqatain
Oho Aise Hi Milte Hain...Mil K Machal Te Hain...Do Dil Jawan
 
Tere Naina...Tere Naina...Tere Naina...Tere Naina
 http://www.in.com/music/track-tere-naina-184485.html  (dis is d link of d song)
 
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                                                :-CAST:-
 
Gayatri Devi/Choti Maa:- Aishwarya Narkar
Rajveer:- Rajeev
Naina:- Priyanka
Vishal:- Vikash Mankatla
Aditi:- Suhashi Garodia
Vikram;- Raam Kapur
Gaurav:- Puneet Vashisht
 
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On the screen:->>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
 
One full moon night...9:30 p.m......
 
Naina bhag rahi thi...jungle k ander...bahat zor se bhag rahi thi vo...!!! Us k body per shadi ka joda tha aur bahat sare gahne bhi the...!!!
 
Vo bas bhag rahi thi...use sunayi de rahe the...us k piche aate hue kuch logon k kadamon ki aahat...!!! Pahle se hi us k sara saman un logon k paas tha...aur unhone us ka paasport bhi jala diya tha...taki vo India chod kar na ja paye...!!!
 
Use nahin pata k vo kahan ja rahi thi...!!!! Use nahin pata vo kahan jayegi...ya kya karegi...??? Us k paas yeh sab soch ne ka waqt nahin tha...!!!
 
Kisi bhi tarah vo jungle se bahar aayi...!!! Sadak par khadi ho kar us ne dono taraf dekha k sayad koi gadi nazar aa jaye to vo lift le legi...lekin use koi nazar nahin aaya...!!!
 
Pairon mein aur body k alag alag jagah par us ko kante lage hue the...!!! Kai sare jagah par kharonch k nishan the... sayad jab vo jungle mein daud rahi thi tabhi yeh sab hua hoga...!!! Lekin us waqt use is baat ka hosh hi nahin tha...use to bas bhag na tha...un logon se dur...taki vo un k hathon mein  na aa sake...!!!
 
Lekin ab use dard ho raha tha...us ne apne pairon mein se ek kanta nikala...bahat dard hua..lekin vo nahin chillai...agar chillayegi to sayad un logon ko pata chal jayega ki vo kahan hai...!!! Use bahat rona aa raha tha...lekin us k paas us k liye bhi waqt nahin tha...!!!
 
Aasmaan mein baadal the...sayad barshat hone wali thi..!!! Chand ki kiran thik se nahin aa rahi thi...!!! Badlon k bich mein se hi kabhi kabhi chand ki roshni zameen par pad rahi thi...!!!
 
Vo bhagte bhagte thak chuki thi...!!! Thakaan aur chot k dard se us k pair kaampne lage the...ankhen band ho rahi thi...!!!
 
Achanak use thodi hi duri par do jeeps khade hue nazar aaye...!!! Us k paas kareeb 10-12 log khade the...!!! Sayad vo gadi kharab ho gayi thi...aur vo sab use thik kar rahe the...!!!
 
Naina ko sab kuch dhundhla hua nazar aa raha tha...!!! Use nahin pata tha k vo log dost the ya dushman...!!! Us k kapde phat chuke the...sayad jab vo jhadiyon k bich mein se gujri thi tab aisa hua hoga...!!!
 
Naina badi mushkil se apne pairon ko ghasit te hue un jeeps k paas ja rahi thi..!!! Lekin acahnak un gadiyon k start hone ki awaz aayi...!!! Sayad un ki gadi thik ho gayi thi...aur vo sab jane wale the...!!!
 
Naina ne awaz de kar unhe rok na chaha...!!! Lekin us k muh se awaz hi nahin nikal rahi thi...!!! Us ka gala sukha hua tha...vo bahat dari hui thi...aur ghabrai hui bhi thi...!!! Sayad isi wajah se us k muh se awaz hi nahin nikal rahe the...!!!
 
Sare log jeeps mein baith chuke the...bas ek insaan khada tha aur apne cell phone se kisi se baat kar raha tha...!!! Sayad us insaan k baithne k baad vo sab wahan se chale jayenge...!!!
 
Vo insaan bas jeep mein baithne hi wala tha...k Naina ne badi mushkil se apne hath uthaya...!!! Us ka hath us insaan k kandhe par pade...!!!
 
Vo insaan piche mud kar dekha Naina ko...andhera tha... Naina ki ankhen band ho rahi thi...us insaan ka chehra Naina ko dhundhla hua nazar aa raha tha...!!! Naina ko bas dikhi to us insaan ki ankhen...jo bharosha karne k layak thiin...!!! Naina ko laga vo in ankhon par bharosha kar sakti hai...!!!
 
Aur kuch sochne se pahle hi Naina ki ankhen band ho gayi...!!! Vo wahin par behosh ho gayi...use sirf itna hi yaad tha...k jab vo behosh ho kar zameen per girne wali thi...tab us insaan ne use apni bahon mein pakad liya tha...!!!
 
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Ok friends...ab aap sab k comments hi mujhe batayenge k mai is fic ko cont karun ya nahin....!!!
 
SO...PLZ DO COMMENT...!!!
 
                                                                                   Thanx
                                                                                             Priya😊
 
Episode:-1......pg 6
Episode:-2......pg 12
Episode:-3......pg 19
Episode:-4......pg 25
Episode:-5......pg 32
Episode:-6......pg 38
Episode:-7......pg 45
Episode:-8......pg 49
Episode:-9......pg 61
Episode:-10......pg 70
Episode:-11......pg 77
Episode:-12......pg84
Episode:-13......pg89
Episode:14......pg97
Episode:15......pg111
Episode:16......pg117
Episode:17......pg123 
Episode:18......pg129
Episode:19......pg135
Episode:20......pg143
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Dear
Nice start....Everything was gud abt d update
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one
fic seems to be very interesting
update soon.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow...FANTASTIC START!!!!!
 
naina as a runaway bride...and that too in deep trouble. i bet the guy was raj....i mean, come on...who else would be naina's knight in shining armor. but like i said i really liked the storyline and the way you described things was mind-blowing...i could visualise it unfolding before my eyes
 
do continue soon and if possible plz pm me....if it's too much trouble then plz don't bothe cause anyway i've bookmarked the site and will be checking it regularly
 
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Posted: 15 years ago

thats adifferent one.

liked each bit of it.

i m sure that guy was raj.

waiting 4 next one..............

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Posted: 15 years ago
very interesting,very beautifulπŸ‘
 but cont soon. i wonder inti sari fic kaise likhogi par sabhi mere fav  hain.
vo insaan rajveer tha na. i guess
par naina kin logose vag rahi hain?lagta hain bohot musibat main thi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
and thanks for d pmEdited by booringelement - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very intresting concept
jaldi continue karo
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

The song is very nice!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Interesting concept!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina is the runaway bride in trouble!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Magar uski shaadi ho chuki thi yaa honewali thi??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Magar yeh log kaun hai jo uske picche hai aur jihone uska passport bhi jala dala!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Bechari Naina!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­Usse kitni chotein aayi hai aur kitna dard ho raha hai usse!!!!    

Naina ne uski ankhen dekhi and she felt she could trust those eyes!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Naina fainted but before she could fall to the ground he caught her in his arms!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Haaiii!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

I am sure ke woh Raj hi hoga!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠNaina's knight in shinning armour aur koi ho sakta hai kya??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

 
 
 

 
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Priya...

          new fic Cool.....interesting concept !!! continue soon...........