FF:PYAAR KI MANZIL..(updated:part14/pg no.30)

Posted: 15 years ago
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PYAAR KI MANZIL(sweet si love story) :):-*

 
Introduction: 

Samrat-a cool handsome boy..studying in EXCEL COLLEGE,ARTS subject...basket ball champion.living with  grand mother nd brother..in Mumbai.

DIA: studying in the same college.. ARTS subject.living with family.

Nupur: a stylish girl but loves her parents n sister a lot...studying ARTS subject..lives with family (sister n father..)..

GUNJAN: she is younger sister of nupur...sincere girl  who loves her books a lot...who loves her sister n father a lot....studying ARTS subject..1st ranker in the class..lives with father and sister...

Mayank: a cool...involved in studies..wanted to achieve his goals in life....

UDAY:  elder brother of Samrat.. loves his brother a lot..Studying  ARTS...lives with grand mother nd brother...

Srikanth :father of gunjan nd Nupur..loves his daughters a lot.

RAVI: father of dia..loves daughter a lot..nd best frnd of srikanth...

This is the introduction of some main characters in the show..others u'll b knowing in middle..... 

Do comment....

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INDEX:
part 1: pg no.:02
part 2:pg no.:03
part 3:pg no.:04
part 4:pg no.:06
part 5:pg no.:08
part 6:pg no.:09
part 7:pg no.:11
part 8:pg no.:13
part 9:pg no.:14
part 10:pg no.:16
part 11:pg no.:17
part 12:pg no.:20
part 13:pg no.:24
part 14: pg no.:30
part 15:pg no.:
part 16:pg no.:
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice yaarr....😊😊 Nice name too..Pyaar Ki Manzil😊

Plzz continue.......Uday, brother of Samrat ...cooollll!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Do continue.. liked the intro!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sounds great

plz continue
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wowow cooll plzz contuied soon i love it
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looks good, uday ,samrats brother, ha ha ha😆
continue pls, soon.
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PYAAR KI MANZIL(sweet si love story)..

*****PART 1****
 
 
Its Sunday morning:

Gunjan has a habit of writing her secrets  in her diary...that she never shows to anyone....

Gunjan in her room:

Gunjan:diiii..utho dus(10) baj chukey hai ...

Nupur:aarey gunjan sone  de na .aaj toh Sunday hai..kam se kam aaj ke din toh soney dena..

Gunjan: toh kya di aapne kal jo kaha who bhool gayi.yaad hai aaj date kya hai??26th november...aaj papa ka birthday hai aur humey tayari bhi toh karni hai na.

Nupur get's up shockingly..

Nupur: by god main toh bhool hi gayi....thanks gunjan uthaney  ke liye.

Gunjan: aacha aacha bahut hogaya aab yeh thanks wanks..aap aab jaldi se fresh ho jao..pointing towards the bathroom

Nupur :haan haan...(goes to her cupboard..)

Nd gunjan goes to her writing table..

Nupur: waisey gunjan main kya pehanu..

Gunjan:dii salwar kameez..

Nupur:haan mujhey bhi pata hai ..main who hi pehan rahi hoon par kuch khaass kyun ki papa ki birthday hai na..

Gunjan:haan par who shaaam main saari tayari hone ke baad..aur di papa ko zara sa bhi shaq  nahi hona chahiye..

Nupur comes  nd hugs gunjan from back

Nupur:haan meri maa....main nahi hone dungi papa ko zara sa bhi shaq..

They both smiles..

Gunjan:aab jao bhi diii...jaldi se fresh ho jao...

Nupur goes to washroom.

Gunjan is standing there and smiling ..and then goes near mirror..then to her study table..keeps her personal diary in the desk and locks it...
 
 
After some time

Nupur comes back......stands in front of mirror..

Nupur: aur gunjan kya papa uth gaye...

Gunjan:haannnnn......papa toh subah aath(8)baje se hi uth gaye...
 
Nupur:phir hum papa ko kya kehkar bahar jayenge...
 
 
Gunjan:haan di main bhi who hi sooch rahi hoonn..

Nupur:tu rehne de tu kabhi bhi papa se jhut(lies)nahi keh sakti ...main hi kuch ssochti hoon..

 
Both come to break fast table..

Nupur: morning papa..

Gunjan: morning papa..

Papa(srikanth):morning beta..

Three of them stars break fast..

Nupur:.hmm..papa aaj humey meri friend ke ghar jana hai..toh usney hum dono ko invite kiya hai..

Papa:haan beta jao par thoda jaldi aana.

Nupur:haan papa jaldi ayenge.thank u papa..

They finishes their break fast..

Nupur and gunjan takes aashirvaad (blessings)of ther father......nd leaves..
 
They are in the mall..decoretion section..
 

They select some things and completes the billing also..

While coming out of that section they meet ravi (srikanth's best friend)

Gunjan:namastey uncle..

Nupur:namastey uncle..

Ravi:namasety beta ..tum dono yahan?

Nupur:haan uncle aaj papa ki birth day hai na isis liye kuuch saaaman kharidna tha..aap bhi zaroor aana uncle..

Ravi:haan beta main zaroor aaunga..smiles..

Nupur:par uncle papa ke liyah yeh surprise party hai aap unhey nahi batana..

Ravi:theek hai nahi baatunga..

Nupur: aa..uncle ek aur baat..aap papa ko 2 ghantey ke liya  kahin bahar lejayange kya?kyun ki humey decoratin karni hai ghar main..agar aap bura na maney toh..

Ravi: ismein bura maney wali kya baat hai beta??

Gunjan:thank u uncle...

Ravi:aur beta kaisi ho?..colleges kal se start hone wali hai na?

Gunjan:hum toh bilkul theek hai uncle..aap kaise ho?aur haan kal se hi colleges suru hone wali hai......

Ravi:main bhi theek hoon...
Nupur:uncle aap puri family ke saath ana ..
 
Ravi:haan beta ....aacha  aab main chalta hoon..tum logon ko bhi shopping karni hogi na...
 
Nupur&gunjan:aacha unlce namastey..

Ravi:namastey beta..

Nup's & gunji goes to gents wear section
Nupur:gunjan.....

Gunjan:haan dii...
Nupur:kya hum papa ke liye office suit lengey  ya phir sherwani...

Gunjan:di joh kuch bhi aacha lagega who kharidlenge..

Nupur(points her finger towards a suit on maniqueen):dekh dekh gunjan woh wala suit kitna aacha lagegi na papa pe..

Gunjan see's there..

Gunjan:diii yeh bahut costly hoga na..

Nupur:kuch costly wostly nahi hoga... they ask the sales person to show the suit

sales person(s.p):yes mam
they select that suit and completes the billing..

Nupur:aab chal hum ladies wear main chaltey hai..

Gunjan:haan haan di thoda sa wait karo..

while coming out gunjan crashes with a guy..

Nupur:oyeeee........bye god ...yeh gu.....

The guy holds gunjan ...

gunjan fall's in sammy's arms...
They both just see's in each other's eyes.... 

*********END**OF THIS EPISODE**********

Hope u guys liked this update..

Do comments..

 

Edited by maniasings - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely update.. liked Nupur's dialogues.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 start.................
by god the story is too good
do cont soooooooooooon
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
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coollllllll partt plzzzzzz contuied soon