FF:PYAAR KI MANZIL..(updated:part14/pg no.30) - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
this part is so cute. Thanks for updating it. do continue it soon.
Posted: 15 years ago
#22

hmmm...here'a d nxt part 4 u alll.. so n'joy it...

PYAAR KI MANZIL(sweet si love story..)

Part 3:

Everyone njoy's the party..

Ravi:aacha beta aab hum chaltey hai(to n&g)

Nupur:theek hai uncle..

Ravi uncles family leaves..

Srikanth:tum dono kitni badi ho gayi ho...surprise party de rahi hoo...mujhey apni betiyon pe garv hai..(haha..some emotional dialogues..:))

All the three smile's n hugs...

Gunji&nup in their room....
 
Gunji: di kal college hai bhool mat jana..jaldi uthna kal humara pehla din hai college main..

Nup:haan gunjan main bhi who hi sooch hahi hoonn..(standing in front of mirror)

Gunjan:aacha  dii goodnight..

Nupur: GOOD NIGHT.....(goes to her bed)

Both switches of the lights...Nupur sleeps..

Gunjan writing her diary..after some time she too sleeps..

Next morning

G&N  at break fast table..

Finishes their breakfast..

While going to coll they both takes blessing of their father..

AT EXCEL COLLEGE:

Gunji&nups coming....

Nupur:gunjan...

Gunjan:haan dii....

Nupur:mujhe na thodi si ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

Gunjan:nahi dii..aap aisa math soncho..aap toh humare skool ke first day bhi ghabrati thi par aap school main acche  rehne lagi naa...

Nup:haan..woh toh hai...main toh miss excel hoon...shayad agli miss universe toh mujhe ghabrana nahi chahiye..(smiles..)hai na..

Gunji:haann..

Some guy crashes with them..

Nupur:by god yahan koi dekhar nahi chal sakta kya???

Guy:hello aap beech main khadi ho ....main wrong nahi aap wrong ho..

Nupur:tumhe toh...

Gunjan:dii jaane do..

Nupur:nahi gunjan galti iski hai aur mujhe keh raha hai?bahut dekhe hai maine aise ladke..

Guy:maine bhio aap jaise bhaut dekhi hai..

Nupur:tum mujhe keh rahey ho..

Guy:jii haan aap hi ko ..aap paristaan ki pari thodi ho jo main aapko nahi keh sakta..

Nupur:tumhe dekh loongi..

Just then the bell rings..

Guy:haan dekhte rehna par mere paas aapke liye time nahi..mujhe class ka time ho raha hai..

The guy leaves..

Nupur:issey toh main dekh loongi..

Gunjan:haan dii par baad  mein aaj pehla din hai toh late nahi hona chahiye..

Nupur:haan chal claas ke baad baat karenge..

Gunjan:bye dii

Nups:bye gunjan..apna khayal rakhna..darna nahi..

Gunjan:haan di..

They both goes their classes..

Nupur:oh no..shayad class sjhuru ho gayii hogi..

She gets into the class..

Sees the same guy who fought with her in the corridor..

Nupur:yeh yahan bhi ..main issey nahi chodungi?

Nupur sees a place to sit but there is no vacant place

There is only one vacant place beside the same guy..

Nupur:by god..!!! nupur tera din hi kharab hai...

Goes nd sits beside that guy..

Next scene at gunjan's class..

Gunjan is seated in her desk..

Some guy comes and sits beside her..

Guy:hey..remember me..me Samrat..

Gunjan:aap..

Samrat:haa main..aapki frnd sath main nahi hai..

Gunja:ohh....woh meri frnd nahi meri dii thi..

Samrat:ohh tabhi...

The lecturer enters..

They all greet her..

The lecturer is miss aha..

Miss aha:so everyone howz ur first day....

Everyone:good..

Miss aha:my self aha chand..  now its ur turn guys for the introduction..

Dia:hii myself dia ahuja

Annie:anita mansukhani

Some random guys..

Samrat:Samrat..samrat sehgal..

Gunjan:gunjan bhushan..

And rest of the class..(srry guys no time ryte about everyone)

Nxt scene to  nupur's class..

Nupur to herself:by god!!! yeh sir toh sar paka rahe hai aur toh aur main kis ke paas baithi hui hoonn .. woh bhi ek sar pakau hai...hey bhagwaannnn...

The guy: tumney kuch kaha...
 
Nupur:hmm..nahi maine toh kuch bhi nahi kaha..shayad tumhare kaan baj rahe hai....aur agar kuch kaha bhi toh bhagwaan ka naam liya usmey tumhey koi problem..??
 
the guy: newayz my self MAYANK ...aur haan agar aap aab kahogi ki 'kya main aap ka parichai maanga' toh aisa mat kehna...kuch baatein bina boley bhi kahoge toh kuch bura nahi hai...
 
Nupur:  (smiles)..myself NUPUR BHUSHAN..

After some time the bell rings..

While going Nupur's leg slips..she fells in  mayank's arms...

They both seeing into each other's eyes..

Mayank: aapko baat ke saath saath theek se chalne bhi nahi aata....?

Nupur:tum?tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhey pakadne ki...

She stands..

Mayank: who kehtey hai na..pehle chori upar se seena zori..isi ko kehtey hai..

Nupur:hello...

Mayank leaves...
 
Nupur:huh!!samajhta kya hai yeh apne aapko..?(she to leaves to cafe)

At cafe..

Samrat..dia..annie..jacko..benji and some other r seated at a table..

Dia: sammy..tumhari aaj ki partner kaun thi..?

Sammy:GUNJAN..

Dia: woh toh  behanjii type hai....upar se chashmish...

Every one there laughs..

Dia : actually Sammy maine  tumhe  kal kaha than a main kisi party main jaa rahi hoon..

Sammy:haann candy.

Dia: who party isi ke ghar thi..

Sammy:toh tumne njoy kiya..

Dia:tum shayad samajh saktey ho..yeh kaisi hai..aur iske ghar pe party..aur kaise reh sakti?

Sammy:ohhhh...puri gharelu typ..

Dia :hannn..

Nd other side..

Nupur:gunjan teri class kaisi hai...

Gunjan:aachi thi di.. aur aapki..

Nupur:meri..meri toh pooch hi math..

Gunjan:kyun..? Aachi nahi lagi?

Nupur:kya khak aachi hai..sarr ka dard.

Gunjan: (smiles)..aur di aapko pata hai ..

Nupur:kya..

Gunjan: kal who joh ladka humey mila than a?mall main..

Nupur:haan usney kuch naam bataya tha ..hmm..

Gunjan:Samrat..

Nupur:haan haan Samrat ..toh...aaja bhi aay kya woh..?...

Gunjan:who meri hi class main hai..upar se mere ki side main baitha tha aaj....

Nupur:aacha..yah sab chod..(they talk some thing we can't here..)

Both giggles?suddenly some one  comes in front.. nupur crashes with him..

Nupur:by godddddd....aaa..

Nups in the guy's arms....

Hope u guys liked this update......

Do comment..

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
njoyed the whole epi...esplly mayur part...plz upadte next epi soon:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Nice part dear :)

love
piya.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
That was so sweet.. loved Mayur's interaction. Cant wait to read more! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hi, nice ff..... one thing is good about ur ff, that is ur parts are not small in size, i just loved it... continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

i lve it

it was sweet!

Love Mayur's dialogues
 
continue soon when u have time!

see yaa

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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey intersting parts dear..njoying aloott specially mayur's dialogues.........
 em waiting for nxt part sooo plzzz continue soooooooooooooooooonnnn................
Edited by angel.ridz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
it is fantastic sweetie continue please.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30

v.nice ff

plz continue