FF-Ishq Huwa-NEVER END-RoKa to TiKu...pg-247 - Page 15

wooooooo Shumi what an intense part.....😳..........u've described all the feelings kasturi was going thru so well..........you really have a wonderful knack of writing.......well done.......👏

Anita ka plan flop ho gaya......🤣.........wanting to know what robbie will do when he comes to his senses.......😉

Hey Shumi right? (can i call u that lolz)
Right i thought id read your FF as i havent read it b4
and i seriously regret not reading it earlier
so here goes ive tried 2 read all 6 parts together lolz
so sorry 4 my long comments like 😆😆

Part 1:
omg woww what a way 2 start your FF exam hall gr8
omg is that how hard it was that they couldnt even wipe their swet off
Id h8 that
3 hours exam 😲😲
right kasturi deffinately had 2 pass right lolz
okay so teejay and kasturi best friends
right teejay a brat child of kabir awwww
wow teejay taking kasturi to disco bad or good idea lolz hehe (will she bump in to robbie lolz)
aww kasturi in a salwar and her description yh bet she dont look 22 awwww
awww robbie u arrogant drunk hot person
by the looks of it youve got on the wrong side of kasturi already
awww kasturi dont cry
right that part was totaly awesome loved how it is your first part and how you described it 👏👏👏

Part 2:
woww teejay you drunk tut tut lolz
omg their room it seems awesome like everythings already in there
oh so kasturi did not see robbies face wow
raath gayee tho baat gayee how sweet kasturi awesome line shumi 👏😆
lolz richest fittest bachelor in delhi nah man in the world i say lolz
wow you dont know a girl who went to his bedroom so he does know his limitations
and one of the top ten business man in delhi 👏👏no shock their 😆
wow a job interveiw (kasturi are you going to be working 4 robbie? lol wild guess hehe)
wow she is going to apply a job their
what a coincidence
now theirs going to be a lot of fun
wow robbie recognises her!! wel thinks his seen her yay lol
yh that description of him is awesome and one of the hottest people around 😆😆
omg robbie i can imagine him saying that 😆😆😆
😆dancing couples that was her m8 robbie lmao
whys kasturi blank? not syaing anything yet ......... 😕😆 stop looking at robbie lmao
wow kasturi
your saying no to MR robbie Sabharwal omg
yh robbie dammit
a girl with no work experience just turned you down wel job offer omg
shumi  i loved that part
i sitl cnt beleive i never read this FF earlier this is gna b one of my fav FFZ on here
Ishq huwa totaly rocks its awesome 👏
Okay i cn imagine robbie being taht angry
what a way 2 end that part
⭐️
⭐️👏2 parts totaly awesome

Very very nice loved how kasturi helped him in this condition so sweet of her i love how you describe everything di It was very good cant wait till robbie gets up and finds out kasturi helped him cant wait plzzzz update soon

Sorry carrying on with ma comment lolz
im glued to your FF right now hehe

PART 3:
omg wowwwwwww
kasturi so what if you never had work experience you could have got that job
now you just left robbie more angry and confused why you said no to the job well taking the interview
aww teejay and kasturi are real close
bless
thats so sweet teejay going to stay how ever long kasturi is going to
awww 🤗🤗 Im loving the character of teejay
okay kasturi and teejay are always either eating or drinking
offer us as well you know lolz
i feel sorry for teejay with her step mother awww
lol teejay how can you forget your dad bday intentionally lolz
ah kasturi invited to the party to cool (another party where she might robbie lol)
wow kasturi actually wheres jeans???????
omg she must be looking really preety
yh teejay good one (or shall i say shumi good one) yh kasturi keep your hair down
omg teejay u mad??
wow u started cuttin kasturi hair lozl no need 4 a hair dresser then hey
lolz tahts so true teejay
kasturis born beauty
she must be looking awesome tonight then
go teejay
next week parlour (remember that shumi lolz)

kasturi slightly applied pink base on her face,thin mascara made her eyes more attractive,light chocolate brown lipstick with dark lip liner made her lips more sexy.

wow omg what you done teejay people wont be able to take their eyes of kasturi lolz

no bangles lolz

yhp keep right hand plain (why?) hehe

mai marjawan shumi have you called the ambulance yet?? in time 4 the party lolz as so mny ppz are going to faint after seeign kasturi 😆😆

one in asian and one in western 👏 gr8 job lol

late for the cake omg i wanted some you better have saved me some shumi (i dont know am i meant 2 be calling you di? 😕)😆

okay ive re read this bit again and again

omg im in love with your FF

this bit was awesome

wow robbie you got totaly off guard by kasturis new look

wow you got mesmerized by her beauty hey

kasturi loosing her balance falling on to robbie like that 😳😳

wow bad idea robbies coat

haha expensive coat on the floor awwwwww

woww robbie was wearing what????? 😲😲

omg he must be looking soooooooooo hot

wow golden design on his chest

omg i think im going to faint  😳

i was going to say thank god kasturi you never burnt his coat

half naked

omg i wish i was dre

where was my invite shumi lolz (loved this part totaly was the best)

wow omg

kasturi with out dupatta

robbie with out coat

omg what a scene

i totaly love it

can i ask you something??

are you trying 2 kill me and all the kasturians who have read this?????????????

thats how awesome your FF is

love how you write your parts with so much detail not too much but its like your actually their

i actually imagined all this hapening

ill be lucky enough 2 survive reading the rest of the parts lolz 😆😆

👏

Part 4:
wow now their going shopping
omg im shocked roka could sleep through after what happend last night lmao (lol its next dai now right?)😆
a new phone
init teejay you have 2 be updated with latest tech lolz
wow where kasturi tahts whee robbie is and where robbie is thats where kasturi is lolz which way is it? 😆
omg how many times are you going to give me a heart atack? lolz with robbie looking sooo hot light blue jeans and choc brown T wow
robbie you and your club lolz
wow first time wel second with kasturi rejecting your offer lolz hehe
omg kasturi was wiating for her
how sweet shes a true sis
wow robbie nto drunk for once
Ouch robbie!!! how many more times are you going to get rejected
awww teejay crying
🤣tu robbie sey shaadi kar ley
omg kasturi tum pagal ho??????????
wow an office
taking over leme guess by who??? robbie lolz my wild guesses
omg reena wow devil
lolz devil appears
devika, nikhil (robbies older bro), and robbie wow can iamgine that 😲
sabharwals making an entry
family parade thats more like it hehe
lolz hehe miscehiovous smile
no kasturi robbies here as well
hot news for you lolz
your hi hello freind
😆😆kasturi you make me laugh
lolz teejay you joining too hehe
yay kasturi your going to stay in the job
nah she aynt resigning yet robbie lolz
your always impressed robbie 😆

Part 5:
robbie we know you've got a rolex lolz hehe
45 minz hey kasturis fast at working
wow wel done kasturi 👏👏
and robbie you standing behind kasturi
omg love your FF already so many cute roka scenes lolz
wow robbie your soooo close to her
omg that eye locking session so true her beauty is in her
personality,innocentness,frankness,brilliancy and her boldness'
yh robbie
5 lakh in 45 minz
lolz hehe kasturi
u knw his hot and his smile omg awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
lolz you think she has pleausre working with you hehe
woww teejay omg thats sooo good news
CONGRATZ
wheres the party??????🥳 🥳🥳😆
wow teejay wearing saree, that to a yellow one
is she going to have an admirer as well in teaching hehe
😆 0mg kasturi your speaking in robbies tone lmao
totaly loving your parts
part 1-5 incredible
i am impressed lolz
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luv hummy
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keep up the gr8 parts
il post comment after reading part 6


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wow dii it was such a nicely written part. kasturi and robbie sooooooo close. hope that robbie remebers that kasturi helped him when he comes back to his senses.anita's plan was a total flop 🤣 but it was not a total waste it became a treat 4 kasturi 😉. cant wait 2 read whats next

Originally posted by: swan20

wooooooo Shumi what an intense part.....😳........thanks ..u've described all the feelings kasturi was going thru so well..........you really have a wonderful knack of writing.......well done.......👏 thank u so much dear,some time i use to doubt that whether the reader can understand my writing.that is y i always write with the position left side and right side etc.

Anita ka plan flop ho gaya......🤣......yep...wanting to know what robbie will do when he comes to his senses.......😉 wait for next part till then

Edited by robbii - 15 years ago

one thing i have to say bechari kasturi ko kabhi teejay toh kabhi robbie ko nashe le jana padta hai but kasturi is very nice ki she helped you decribrd very well that how it must be difficult for her to drag him till the auto

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Hey Shumi right? (can i call u that lolz).ofcourse.with pleasure.
Right i thought id read your FF as i havent read it b4
and i seriously regret not reading it earlier thanks
so here goes ive tried 2 read all 6 parts together lolz
so sorry 4 my long comments like 😆😆.dont say sorry dear.u r long comments are my credit

Part 1:
omg woww what a way 2 start your FF exam hall gr8
omg is that how hard it was that they couldnt even wipe their swet off
Id h8 that .cuz it is math exam
3 hours exam 😲😲.yep we use to write the exams for three hours
right kasturi deffinately had 2 pass right lolz.with flying colours
okay so teejay and kasturi best friends.yep
right teejay a brat child of kabir awwww yep
wow teejay taking kasturi to disco bad or good idea lolz hehe (will she bump in to robbie lolz)gud idea so that she can bump in to robbie heeee
aww kasturi in a salwar and her description yh bet she dont look 22 awwww simple too
awww robbie u arrogant drunk hot person always hot
by the looks of it youve got on the wrong side of kasturi already
awww kasturi dont cry
right that part was totaly awesome loved how it is your first part and how you described it 👏👏👏 thanks

Part 2:
woww teejay you drunk tut tut lolz hee she is brat
omg their room it seems awesome like everythings already in there.except kitchen
oh so kasturi did not see robbies face wow
raath gayee tho baat gayee how sweet kasturi awesome line shumi 👏😆.thanks dear
lolz richest fittest bachelor in delhi nah man in the world i say lolz.yep no doubt
wow you dont know a girl who went to his bedroom so he does know his limitations always
and one of the top ten business man in delhi 👏👏no shock their 😆
wow a job interveiw (kasturi are you going to be working 4 robbie? lol wild guess hehe)not now
wow she is going to apply a job their
what a coincidence
now theirs going to be a lot of fun.yep
wow robbie recognises her!! wel thinks his seen her yay lol yep
yh that description of him is awesome and one of the hottest people around 😆😆 uff...hot
omg robbie i can imagine him saying that 😆😆😆
😆dancing couples that was her m8 robbie lmao heeee
whys kasturi blank? not syaing anything yet ......... 😕😆 stop looking at robbie lmaoheee
wow kasturi
your saying no to MR robbie Sabharwal omg
yh robbie dammit.yes
a girl with no work experience just turned you down wel job offer omg
shumi  i loved that part.thanks
i sitl cnt beleive i never read this FF earlier this is gna b one of my fav FFZ on here
Ishq huwa totaly rocks its awesome 👏 thankssssssss
Okay i cn imagine robbie being taht angry
what a way 2 end that part
⭐️
⭐️👏2 parts totaly awesome thanks again dear for liking my ff.this is

Edited by robbii - 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hiya

Superb! 😊 thanks

Mindblowing!😛 thanks

Great!😉 thanks

waiting 4 the nxt prt.😃 done

Plz update soon.😃 up dated

Keep it Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏   i will inshallah till then

😳

Edited by robbii - 15 years ago

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

Very very nice loved how kasturi helped him in this condition so sweet of her i love how you describe everything di thanks for liking it It was very good cant wait till robbie gets up and finds out kasturi helped him  all are waiting for that only cant wait plzzzz update soon will soon till then

Edited by robbii - 15 years ago