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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!!!di wen did u update i didnt even knw
lazy me
i was so impatient for the nxt part n didnt even know
cumin to the ff
bohat maza aya parh kar-u r jus gr8 at such parts
i can imagne robbie lookin so hawt
my god!!!
do....plz write on RoKa stranded in cottage..i wud love to read it.plz plz plz plz plz.........u will write it superbly..i can guarantee....plz

Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Sorry carrying on with ma comment lolz
im glued to your FF right now hehe .heeee

PART 3:

omg wowwwwwww
kasturi so what if you never had work experience you could have got that job may not be
now you just left robbie more angry and confused why you said no to the job well taking the interview.he might have troubled her more by asking yeasing questions
aww teejay and kasturi are real close yep
bless
thats so sweet teejay going to stay how ever long kasturi is going to cuz she dont want to say with her step mother
awww πŸ€—
πŸ€— Im loving the character of teejay most of the readers liked her
okay kasturi and teejay are always either eating or drinking.in the hostel other than that what they can do
offer us as well you know lolz
i feel sorry for teejay with her step mother awww me too
lol teejay how can you forget your dad bday intentionally lolz heeeee
ah kasturi invited to the party to cool (another party where she might robbie lol) u r smart in gussing
wow kasturi actually wheres jeans??????? some times
omg she must be looking really preety yep
yh teejay good one (or shall i say shumi good one) yh kasturi keep your hair down
omg teejay u mad??
wow u started cuttin kasturi hair lozl no need 4 a hair dresser then hey in hostel some time they do that
lolz tahts so true teejay
kasturis born beauty yep
she must be looking awesome tonight then yep
go teejay
next week parlour (remember that shumi lolz) i will for sure

kasturi slightly applied pink base on her face,thin mascara made her eyes more attractive,light chocolate brown lipstick with dark lip liner made her lips more sexy.

wow omg what you done teejay people wont be able to take their eyes of kasturi lolz.even robbie too

no bangles lolz

yhp keep right hand plain (why?) hehe.some time extra accessory gives us bad look

mai marjawan shumi have you called the ambulance yet?? already done it is on the way in time 4 the party lolz as so mny ppz are going to faint after seeign kasturi πŸ˜†πŸ˜† robbie too

one in asian and one in western πŸ‘ gr8 job lol yep

late for the cake omg i wanted some you better have saved me some shumi (i dont know am i meant 2 be calling you di? πŸ˜•)πŸ˜†i alreay told u you can very well call me dii.it is my pleasure

okay ive re read this bit again and again .so sweet of u

omg im in love with your FF thanks

this bit was awesome thanks again

wow robbie you got totaly off guard by kasturis new look.yep

wow you got mesmerized by her beauty hey.ofcourse

kasturi loosing her balance falling on to robbie like that 😳😳 cuz of her heels

wow bad idea robbies coat

haha expensive coat on the floor awwwwww heee

woww robbie was wearing what????? 😲😲 no comment

omg he must be looking soooooooooo hot very hot

wow golden design on his chest

omg i think im going to faint 😳 take care dear

i was going to say thank god kasturi you never burnt his coat.otherwise robbie might have killed her.

half naked dont imagine too much dear

omg i wish i was dre

where was my invite shumi lolz next time for sure(loved this part totaly was the best) thanks

wow omg

kasturi with out dupatta

robbie with out coat

omg what a scene

i totaly love it thanks for liking the scene

can i ask you something?? yep.go ahead

are you trying 2 kill me and all the kasturians who have read this????????????? omg.best compliment ever had dear

thats how awesome your FF is thanks

love how you write your parts with so much detail not too much but its like your actually their

i actually imagined all this hapening thanks

ill be lucky enough 2 survive reading the rest of the parts lolz πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

πŸ‘

thanksssssssssssss for u r lots og clap.it is from meπŸ€—
Part 4:
wow now their going shopping.yep
omg im shocked roka could sleep through after what happend last night lmao she did not(lol its next dai now right?yep )πŸ˜†
a new phone
init teejay you have 2 be updated with latest tech lolz heee that too with in two months
wow where kasturi tahts whee robbie is and where robbie is thats where kasturi is lolz which way is it? πŸ˜†.yep opposit poles attract
omg how many times are you going to give me a heart atack? lolz with robbie looking sooo hot light blue jeans and choc brown T wow.heeee ttake care again
robbie you and your club lolz
wow first time wel second with kasturi rejecting your offer lolz hehe.poor attitude man
omg kasturi was wiating for her
how sweet shes a true sis.yes
wow robbie nto drunk for once
Ouch robbie!!! how many more times are you going to get rejected.eeeh
awww teejay crying
🀣tu robbie sey shaadi kar ley .heeee
omg kasturi tum pagal ho??????????
wow an office
taking over leme guess by who??? robbie lolz my wild guesses .true
omg reena wow devil
lolz devil appears
devika, nikhil (robbies older bro yep ), and robbie wow can iamgine that 😲
sabharwals making an entry
family parade thats more like it hehe heeeee
lolz hehe miscehiovous smile he want to tease her
no kasturi robbies here as well
hot news for you lolz
your hi hello freind
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†kasturi you make me laugh
lolz teejay you joining too hehe
yay kasturi your going to stay in the job yep
nah she aynt resigning yet robbie lolz no
your always impressed robbie yepπŸ˜†

Part 5:
robbie we know you've got a rolex lolz hehe.very expensive one
45 minz hey kasturis fast at working brilliant too
wow wel done kasturi πŸ‘πŸ‘
and robbie you standing behind kasturi to look in to the file
omg love your FF already so many cute roka scenes lolz thanks
wow robbie your soooo close to her
omg that eye locking session so true her beauty is in her yep
personality,innocentness,frankness,brilliancy and her boldness'
yh robbie
5 lakh in 45 minz gud saving
lolz hehe kasturi
u knw his hot and his smile omg awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ufffff
lolz you think she has pleausre working with you hehe he is teasing her
woww teejay omg thats sooo good news
CONGRATZ
wheres the party??????πŸ₯³
πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ˜† later
wow teejay wearing saree, that to a yellow one
is she going to have an admirer as well in teaching hehe may be
πŸ˜† 0mg kasturi your speaking in robbies tone lmao she became used to
totaly loving your parts
part 1-5 incredible
i am impressed lolz heeeeeee
πŸ‘
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luv hummy thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssss dear
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keep up the gr8 parts
il post comment after reading part 6 u r welcome


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Edited by robbii - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: saumya{roka}

wow dii it was such a nicely written part. thanks kasturi and robbie sooooooo close. hope that robbie remebers that kasturi helped him when he comes back to his senses hope so .anita's plan was a total flop 🀣 but it was not a total waste it became a treat 4 kasturi πŸ˜‰. exactly cant wait 2 read whats next

update soon .will try waiting impatiently be patient.till then

Edited by robbii - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
okay di..ill surely pm u...
ohh sho shweet of u............thanku di..u rock...luv ya.
yea u can take ur time...wenever u wnat to write it

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!best part till date!πŸ‘

lol...i can imagine how heavy robbie must be!πŸ˜†

shumi di! aap ka kya kehna....ure writing skills r amazing! they keep me hooked to ure FFs!πŸ‘ plz gimme some tips😳 keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ

and update jaldi ok?😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
oooooohhhhhh dii.....wat an awesome part.....fantastic part......wow the sensation in kasturi woooo....i acnt express my feeling right now....goose bumps for kasuri i just hope dat robbie cums to noe dat kasturi helped him n start to feel 4 her.......yes!!!i'm glad dat he hate anita but if it was not anita den we wudnt hev been able to see these awesome parts.......so thank u so much ANITA....LOL.....dii continue fast dii...
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Posted: 17 years ago
waHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
MY GAAWWWWDDDDD
handdss down standing ovation!!!!!!!
the kind of urs reminds me of the writing of stephenie meyer!!!..sorryyy gurl but thats the truth!!!
its awwwessummm!!!
and to be true i am getting addicted to ur FF!!!
big tyme yaaarrrrr
pehlay when robbie was motionless i was sooo damn scared
but what happened in the end was sooooooooo kooolL!!!
and hawwwwwttttt
actuallyyy major hawttt
and i even felt a lot of sensation unknown!!!
hahahahahahahaha!!!
keep it going
and thanxxx for wishing me best of luck for my xamss!!!!!
i just wanted to inform u soo that u dont get disappointed in any way if i am unable to comment regularly!!...sorryy!!
but i promise after xams i will write itna ziyada ke u would be tired to reply to them di!!
hahaahahah!! joking yaaarrrr
LOVED IT!!...sach main!!!...
chaa gaye aap!!
love
sara
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shanu333

P6-

wow!best part till date!πŸ‘ thanks

lol...i can imagine how heavy robbie must be!πŸ˜† ufff

shumi di! aap ka kya kehna....ure writing skills r amazing! they keep me hooked to ure FFs!πŸ‘ plz gimme some tips😳 ok .but what will be my fee?keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ will try

and update jaldi ok?😊 ok






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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 6:
Finally got round to reading itπŸ˜†
OMG Anitha Anitha 😑😑
how low of you to mix something in his drink
Plan flop ho gyaa 🀣 lmao
omg wel obviously the plan is going to be a flop because its made by anitha πŸ˜†
not reach home will c about that anita 😑
wow
omg robbie u okay?
wel thank god you reached the office safely
kasturi you getting file signed by him
(bad idea right now)
wow u got so much courage well done kasturi πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜†
wow kasturi your going 😲
oh i thought so
gr8 how you writ how she was going to go but her legs refused her to go
just shows she would never be able to go like that πŸ‘
wow kasturi
jus by touching him like that your getting sparks awwwwww 😳
wise idea to take his visiting card
wow kasturi your going to be able to pick robbie up youself πŸ˜²πŸ‘
wow robbie you managed to say kas...tu
wel done kasturi you got to make him stand up
yhp obviously his going to be ehavy for you
but i just loved it how she never lost hope

it is the first time in her life she was so close to a man.his left arm around her shoulder and her right arm around his hip.his shirt's top three button was undone.his white shirt was wide open showing his strong broad chest which was sliding very very close to her chest.she felt the electric spark rushing over in her body.blood gushing to her head.his perfume made her breath caught in her throat.she was filled with sensations.she tried to control her roller coaster emotions and go ahead.


This bit omg i loved it.
how you described it it was terrific. his shirts top 3 buttons were undone omg i can imagine her situation carrying him and being so close to him. how did she keep her attention towards taking him home (thats where shes taking him init)
yh she tried to control her roller coaster emotions and go ahead.
loved that bit the most πŸ‘
so cute how kasturis praying to the gods for help
😲
😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
what happend?
omg robbies cheek touching kasturis wow 😲
wow yh bet it was more then a pyscial battle 4 robbie
wel done kasturi πŸ‘
wow totaly awesome
omg mazaa agaya
this part was one of the best!!!!!!!
wel all your parts are jus fabulous
loved all of them
this one you know in what ever situation you want to write in, any charcter you wnat to put in a situation you will be able to write it teh best
thats how you are a real talented writer πŸ‘
Thnx 4 writing such a gr8 FF
i love it - it is one of my fav FFZ ever that ive read lolz
You have to update the nxt part asap
i cnt w8 no more 2 read part 7
i wana knw what hapens nxt

luv
Hummy
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Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Poor anita, she always gets the negative role....update soon.

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