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Posted: 19 years ago
Short part for now.

Recap:

Angad: Ur cheeks? What about my neck?
Kripa: I'm telling on u
Angad: To who?
Kripa: Ummm.....ummm.....

Angad started laughing. Kripa got very mad.


At the scene:

Later that night, after Angad left, Krpia thought abt their childhood again.

Kripa(thinking): Angad must've been rly naughty 😳

She smiled to herself as she thought other things about him.

At Angad's place Angad was also thinking abt Kripa.

Angad(thinking): I wonder if she always acted that weird. 😕 😆

Then we're back at Kripa's place.

Aliyah: Kripa?

You see Kripa look up from where she was sitting in the dark, beside the windowsill, the window open and the wind blowing the curtains.

Aliyah: You're still not asleep?
Kripa: No
Aliyah: Thinking about someone? 😉
Kripa: Ha
Aliyah: I know who it is 😉
Kripa: It's obvious
Aliyah: So, is this friendship going to move forward?
Kripa: Don't know, but i wouldn't hope for it
Aliyah: Why?
Kripa: I have my reasons
Aliyah: Ok, now go to sleep
Kripa: K, good-night
Aliyah: Good night

Aliyah went to sleep while Kripa still kept thinking about Angad.

Next day Angad and Kripa are standing behind a tree eating ice-cream.

Angad: So, how did u do?
Kripa: Pretty well i think
Angad: Was she hard on u?
Kripa: Um.....no
Angad: Ur lucky, she was really hard on us
Kripa: Bad luck
Prithvi: Hey guys!

Prithvi and Aliyah joined them

Aliyah: Let's go to the beach this weekend
Kripa: Sure why not
Angad: Fine with me
Prithvi: Great!

They talked on.

In the evening Aliyah is reading a book and Kripa is watching tv. She's surfing through the channels till she finds something she likes-Tom and Jerry! Just then the phone rings. Kripa piccks it up.

Kripa: Hello?
Person:------
Kripa: Hello?
Person:-------

Kripa gets nervous.

Kripa(nervous): Who's speaking?

No one answers again, and Kripa puts the phone down.

Aliyah: Kaun tha?
Kripa: Pata nehi
Aliyah: Hang up next time
Kripa: K

Just then the phone rang again. This time it was Angad.

That's all for now

Sir-Please thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing parts marz
i'll continue the next part but on one condition i need more comment and if u have any question feel free to ask.
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Posted: 19 years ago

so gud! i lubed it!cntinue soon!
LUB,
Prakriti 😊
prakriti thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

sooooooooo gud! i lubed it! cntinue soon!
LUB,
Prakriti 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
interesting part!!!!!!!!! but i have a question, in the part, angad and kripa while eating ice cream talk about some1? who is that some1? and plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nabz8888

interesting part!!!!!!!!! but i have a question, in the part, angad and kripa while eating ice cream talk about some1? who is that some1? and plz continue soon!!!

it's the teacher😆

Sir-Please thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
marz can u cont plz and was that phone from u knw who
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

marz can u cont plz and was that phone from u knw who

no, it's from ur u-know- who

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Posted: 19 years ago
just read it all rite now - its great. continue soon n hus u no hu? lol... n wot hppnd btween their rents?
Sir-Please thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: karismic_angel

just read it all rite now - its great. continue soon n hus u no hu? lol... n wot hppnd btween their rents?

we cant tell u who u knw who is but u'll get to knw who he is in the fan fic in the future

i'll give u a clue: he is a man

if u guys are bored and want to do something then y dont u gues who this man is

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