Zindagi..Teri Meri Kahani(RN)urgnt nt pg116(29/10) - Page 86

Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

Hi Priya

How r u???

Happy Navratri to u too..😊

Edited by suhana_dixit - 13 years ago

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-serenity-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

Hii Priya...

Happy Navarathri to you too

Fabulous part Asusual 👏👏👏👏👏

Iss update ki shuruwat to tune bahut acche se ki lekin mujhe ending bilkul bhi acchi nahin laga ..tum ye mat sochna ki i dont like your writting style...wo jaha par tune end kiya na i dont like that ...ab ye kaunsi nayi baat hain?????? ..u always do like that ...aur main bhi har baar complaint karthi hun ye jaanthe hue bhi ki teri is bhimari ka koi ilaaz nahin hain

Chalo bahut hogaya meri bak bak ab commnet par aate hain ...tu ye mysteries kab solve karegi pehle wo mujhe bata ..baadh main teri update ki tarrif karthi hun ..yaar tu is fic ko start kiye kitne din hue ?? i think do saal se upar hogaya hoga..fir bhi tu ek bhi clue tikh se nahin dethi ...waise bhi meri dimag itni tez nahin chalthi ..ab mujhse ye suspense bardasth nahin hota ..jaldi kuch karo ,pehle naina ki pic mila us ghar pe ab Aasha jee ki painting waha pe kya kar rahi hain ,kya Aasha jee knows about jusrice kapoor???? ,,aur ye Aasha jee ka kuch ata pata nahin ,kab se wo gayab hain ,aur Amar ka death bhi kaise hua kyun hua tune tikh se nahin kaha. ..ha ur ek baat yaad aaya tune kya kaha fic ki starting main suspense sirf 15% aur romance 60% something like that na..mujhe to lagtha hain romance 15% aur suspense 60% hain is fic main...... meri baat maanja aur jaldi se sab kuch clear kardo ...tikh hain.

Naina n raj scene is so sweet tha yaar ..Aww naina jaanthi hain ki raj usse kabhi jhooth nahin boltha...ye donon aaram se balcony main sogaye the aur cute si pallo darr gayi thi ye sochke wo donon kaha chale gaye usse chodhke....lekin raj ne baat ko sambhal liya ...that really a lovely scene...palak ki sawal mama ko godh main utakhe apne story sunayi ..so hillarious 😆😆😆😆😆

the childhood scene is so nice ....pehle tune is ke bare main jhikar kiya tha na ab hamhe poori scene padhne ko mila.thank u for that ...Amar is so nice when he was small ,Raj kitna gussa horaha tha when alekh said naina is his girlfriend 😆😆😆😆

Raj neetu ki baal kaat diya aur usse kiss bhi kiya ..naughty raj ..sweetu raj cant see tears in nainas eyes ...isiliye usne neetu ki baal kat diya..aise kya hua tha ki nainas dad raj ki dad se bhi bina kuch kahe waha se chale gaye???

Laghta hain Alekh aur neelu ke bich main bhi sab kuch tikh hogaya

Loved the whole update n enjoyed a lot while reading it

chalo ab next part jaldi se update kardo ...me waiting

Edited by princessyogitha - 13 years ago

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385641

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

lovely update

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon

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343007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Superb Update.......Continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

On seeing that naina is sleeping in the veranda even Raj goes to sleep with her. Akhir naina ke bina use neend thodi hi aati. Naina is surprised to see him there. Both of them sleep peacefully together.

Palak is angry with them for leaving her alone in the room. Dono Raj aur niana usse bade pyaar se manate hai.

The flashback was very nice. Raj had always been very possessive of naina. When alekh said that she was his girlfriend Raj got so angry.

Raj cannot see naina crying and so with the help of other boys he cut off Neetu's hair. His dad gets very angry on him and his friends for doing such a thing, but his father had to give in as naina went on a hunger strike to save Raj and his friends.

What has happened between Alekh and neelu?

The picture is indeed mysterious. Raj is surprised to know that Naina actually knows who has painted that pic. He is impressed by the analysis which naina draws from the picture.

Waiting to know what has made Raj this happy

Please continue soon

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272248

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Posted: 13 years ago

#857

awesome updt indeed...loved rn vute talk

and d flashback part was too good....

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#858

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#859

Good update dear.
Naina can sleep any where i think but i can never. Ab jab Naina yahan hai to Raj ko to vaise bhi andar neend nahi aane waali hai na to yahin aa k leta aur Naina ki neend bhi gum ho gayi ab.
Raj n Naina's childhood was really sweet. Sab se jyada mast tha vo scene GF waala. Jab Raj us bacchi ko apni GF kehta tha to Naina k liye us ne kaise baal kaat diye?
Bus isliye ki vo Naina ko pareshaan karti thi bol bol kar aur sach me Raj to Naina ki aakhon me kabhi ansoon dekh hi nahi sakta tha na. Saara plan us ne hi banaya aur theeno ne saath mil kar sab kiya par us ladki ko bhi tabhi jaagna tha aur jaag kar Raj ko hi dekhna tha.
Poor Raj sab se jyada vahi fasa na aur baaki k logon ne us ko hi sab se jyada punish kiya. Vahan bhi us ko Neetu itne cute lag rahi thi ki us ne kiss kar liya us ko.
But bachpan se hi ek baat to clear thi na ki Raj Naina ko bahut like karta tha. Un dono ka pyaar dekh k hi to Amit jee Naina se door nahi le jaa paaye Naina ko.
Dono k dil ne bhi kaha tha dono se jab vo itne saalon baad mile the ki jaante hain vo dono ek doosre ko. Pyaar to hai bus kaha nahi abhi tak Naina ne Raj se.
Palak bechari kitna dar gayi thi jab koi us k pass nahi tha to. But Raj loves her really so much.
ALekh n Neelu k beech ki bhi dooriyan khatam ho gayi hain. Raj abhi bhi painting se kuch dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hai n Naina ki bhi help li.
Pehle to Naina ne bhi kuch khass nahi bataya but ab ye letter jo us me se mila hai n next thing Naina ne bhi bata diya ki Asha ne banaya tha us ko to may be kuch mil jaayega.
Hope u will continue soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago

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maanmishti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#860

why r u not updating this ff.............plzzzzzzzzz continue soon cant wait to read more plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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