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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya hiiiiiiiπŸ˜ƒ 

How r u??
 
Chalo finally tumne yeh fiction bhi update kar di...😊 haan...😊
Update was just amazingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ thanqqqqqqπŸ˜ƒ
Raj is so very sweet..he is the best hubby..πŸ˜ƒ Naina is really lucky to have him in her life..He is her friend n love too.😊 raj k sweetness par tumhe shaq hai kya...??? mere sare fics me main yehi toh karti rahti hun...πŸ˜‰
Raj was busy romancing Naina jab Palak ki neend khul gayi..How can Naina jump on bed???
Raj was so embarrassed in front of his daughter!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ab embarrassed toh hoga hi na...apne khayalon me jo itne BG the ki...aas-paas...sab kuch bhul gaye...πŸ˜†
That song is really gud...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ thanxxπŸ˜ƒ
Palak apne Dada ko bahut pyaar karti hai tabhi to Raj ne usko school jaane ke liye mana liya..πŸ˜› palak ka frnd bhi toh hai na...raj...πŸ˜›
Amitji ka drama abhi bhi chalu hai..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ I hope Raj n Naina ko kabhi yeh baat na pata chale..😊 dekhte hain...πŸ˜›
Justice Kapoor ka case to kaafi interesting hota ja raha hai..Actually mujhe suspense bahut accha lagta hai..😊 mujeh bhi...😊
Raj is so busy in this case that he has no time for Naina n Palak.. Naina is such an understanding wife.She knows that Raj will not sit till he has solved this case...πŸ˜› mere fic ki herione hai...dimag toh hoga hi...πŸ˜ƒ
Raj was busy with his wife when Alekh interrupted demπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† voh hamesha rang me bhang dalne tapak pad hi jata hai...πŸ˜†
Alekh started teasing them but Raj ko koi faraq nahin pad raha thaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ he he he...πŸ˜†
Raj has got some clue but I am sure there is some secret gate in that house n no1 knows abt it except Mr.Kapoor. arre vaah...tum bilkul sahi ja rahi ho...πŸ˜›
Neelu n Alekh ki story aakhir hai kya??? They both r suffering a lot n Raj has noticed this..I hope he can do something abt it.. hmmm...dekhte hain...πŸ˜ƒ
 
Pls continue soon
Bye

Thanxxxxxxx Suhana...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanxxxxxxxxx Afreen...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Very nice update !!!!!

Thanxxxxxx Namita...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

too good updt....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

loved d part...njoyed d way it began with rn convo and cute and sweet romance and in betwn wake up of palak and den both of them trying to be normal....
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also loved d trio part of him making palak ready and d bathroom part was very nice and
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den d hospital part were alekh and his fathers dialogue is der dat was too good....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

den d last part were raj and naina engage in some romance wihle alekh comes and still raj is busy too good and
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d investigation part was also good were in raj finds something is der with alekh and neelu.....
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lets see wats next!!!!

Thanxxxxxxxx Lipi...πŸ˜ƒ 
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good update dear. thanqqqqqπŸ˜ƒ
Raj really loves Naina a lot and their morning scene was cute n with naughtiness. Naina asked about Raj n his past but how cleverly Raj changed the topic. he he he...aise hi ACP bana hai kya...πŸ˜›
In fact he can see very well that Naina has changed a lot. May be the circumstances changed her so much. He wants to bring back that beautiful Naina back n i am sure he can do that. yupe...use us ki purani naina toh chahiye hi na...πŸ˜›
The way he handled the situation in front of Palak was really cute. Naina too understood the situation.Palak loves her dada so much n when she was not ready to go the school and Naina also didn't get ready the way Raj convenienced her was really cute. voh palak ko baht chahta bhi toh hai...aur use pata hai ki kaise use manaya ja sakta hai...πŸ˜‰
Vo apne dadu se milna chahti thi aur bus isiliye school jaane me nakhre kar rahi thi but Raj ne mana liya aur kya kahani sunai us ne.  
ye neelu waala case to day by day kaafi serious hota jaa raha hai n still no clue about the matter. Jaroor neelu k dad abhi zinda hain what i feel is that. pata nahi...dekhte hain...!!! kyoun ki mujhe khud nahi pata hai ki main aage kya karnewali hun...
Raj ko khud accha nahi lag raha tha ki vo Naina n Pal ko time nahi de paa raha hai but naina is really sweet that vo Raj ki problem samajh rahi hai. Sahi kaha Amit jee ne ki Alekh ko thoda break dena chahiye Raj ko us ki as usual duty se. ab alekh ki baat kahan sunta hai raj...!!! voh toh vohi karta hai...jo use thik lagta hai...
Koi aur time nahi mila tha kya Raj ko romance ka? jab Alekh jaane k liye us ka wait kar raha hai to vo Naina k saath laga hua hai n aur to aur Alekh ko dekh k bhi us ko jara sharm nahi aayi. he he he...πŸ˜†
Mujhe lagta hai kuch na kuch ab jaa k Raj k haath laga hai us photo se. Baar baar logon ka kisi ko vahan dekhna iteffaaq nahi hai. is k peeche jaroor koi Raj chipa hua hai.
Hope that u will update soon.

Thanxxxxxx Vertika...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka28

maine ise shayd akfi dino se nahi read kiya infact mujhe abhi doubt hai ki mujhe paat bhi hai ki kya tha ise fic per priya maain jaldi hi read kerungi

ye post silye ki mujhe yada aa sakeπŸ˜†πŸ˜† jab main read kerun ise fic ko ki maine ise read kerna hai shuru se

thik hai...tu yaad...kar...aur yaad...karte karte so mat jana...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

hey,

i read your ff its just amazing...... thanqqqqπŸ˜ƒ

i loved it very much.....i want to read more.....plzzzz can u update daily if possible plzzzzzzzz...... sorry...its not possible...dear...!!! kyoun ki is fic ko chod kar bhi mere kuch aur RN fics hain...mujhe unhe bhi ud karna padta hai...sorryyyyyπŸ˜ƒ

plzzzzzzz update soon cant wait for long...

--------------vinitha

Thanxxxxxxxx Vinitha...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
N:- Nav
A:- Aarti
V:- Vandana
R:- Roshni
A:-  Aaradhana
T:-Tez
R:- Rakhnewali
A:- Ambe Maa
 
  "Aap Ki Sabhi Manokamna Puri Kare"
 
 
  HAPPY NAVRATRI
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Raj balcony me gaya toh dekha ki Naina vohin baithe baithe hi so gayi thi...us k chehre par ek smile aayi...par us ne Naina ko uthaya nahi...!!! Raj ander aaya...fresh hone k liye washroom ki taraf ja raha tha...us ki nazar bed par padi...jahan Palak soyi hui thi...
 
Raj us k kareeb aaya...!!! us k forehead ko kiss kiya...!!! aur washroom me chala gaya...
 
kuch der baad voh wapas aaya...!!! bed se ek pillow liya...aur ek bedsheet liya...balcony me gaya...!!! bahar sach me baht garmi thi...
 
sayad isiliye Naina balcony me aa gayi thi...!!! vahan achhi hawa aa rahi thi...!!! aur baithe baithe hi zameen par so gayi thi...!!!
 
Raj ne halke se us k sar k niche pillow rakha...!!! phir khud us k kareeb soya...aur dono par sheet dali...
 
Naina kafi gehri neend me thi...us ki neend tuti nahi thi...
 
Raj ne dhire se khud ko kaha:- "yeh lo...yeh meri biwi hai...ek policewale ki biwi...!!! aur itni gehri neend me hai ki main yahan par aa kar so bhi gaya...lekin madam ki neend nahi khuli abhi tak...!!!"
 
Naina ne neend me hi turn kiya...us k hath aa kar Raj k seene par pade...!!! sayad use laga ki voh ek pillow hai...us ne kafi tightly hug karte hue apni taraf  khincha...aur sone lagi...
 
Raj mushkuraya...!!! Naina ka hath Raj k seene par tha...!!! sayad Raj k dil ki dhadkan ko mehshush kiya us ne ...aur use laga ki yeh pillow nahi hai...!!! voh ek jhatke k sath uth kar baithi...
 
us ki ankhon me neend abhi tak tha...
 
Raj ne hasste hue kaha:- "kya hua...??? uth kyoun gayi...???"
 
Naina:- "tum kab aaye...???"
 
Raj ne us ka hath thaama...dhire se apne kareeb khinchate hue kaha:- "jab tum neend me thi...!!! kafi gehri neend me...sayad kisi ko sapne me dekh rahi thi...!!! vaise puch sakta hun ki sapna kis ka dekh rahi thi...???"
 
Naina mushkurayi...apna sar Rajveer k seene par rakha aur kaha:- "kisi ka bhi sapna nahi dekh rahi thi...!!! bass so rahi thi...!!!"
 
Raj:- "kya yaar...jhuth hi bol deti ki sapne me mujhe dekh rahi thi...mujhe kitna achha lagta...???"
 
Naina:- "jhuth sunn na tumhe achha lagta hai...???"
 
Raj:- "hmmm...vaise dekha jaye toh pyar me thoda baht jhuth toh chalta hi hai...!!! maine tum se kaha ki main tum se pyar karta hun...!!! tum ne jhat se yakeen kar liya...!!! jan ne ki koshish bhi nahi ki...k main sach bol raha hun ya phir jhuth...!!!"
 
Naina:- "jan ne ki jarurat hi nahi hai...!!! mujhe pata tha ki tum sach hi bol rahe the us waqt...!!!"
 
Raj:- "kaise jana tum ne...???"
 
Naina:- "yaad hai tumhe bachpan me tum sab ne ek ladki k baal kaat diye the...???"
 
Raj hassa aur kaha:- "haan...yaad hai...!!! mujhe Naveen, Alekh aur Amar ne baht help ki thi us k baal katne me...??? aur phir voh tumhe baht chidhati rahti thi na...???"
 
Naina:- "haan...!!! par tum charon saaf mukar gaye the is baat se ki tum ne neetu k baal kate the...!!! chachu se ...baba se...yahan tak ki aasha maa se bhi...!!! par jab maine tumhe pucha tha...toh tum ne bata diya ki yeh sab tum logon ki shararat thi...!!!"
 
Raj:- "haan...aur is wajah se mujhe mere room me bandh kar diya gaya tha...!!! aur un teeno ko bhi punish kiya gaya tha...!!! aur voh teeno mujh par gussa hue the ki maine tumhe kyoun bataya...???"
 
Naina:- "tabhi se janti hun ki tum...khaash kar k mujh se kabhi jhuth nahi bolte...???"
 
flashback...
 
ek choti si bachhi roti hui aa rahi thi...
 
thodi hi dur par 4 ladke cricket khel rahe the...!!!
 
ek ladka bhagta hua aaya...us bachhi k paas...:- "Naina kya hua...kyoun ro rahi hai...???"
 
voh bachhi boli:- "bhaiya...Neetu...
 
naveen:- "kya kiya neetu ne...???"
 
Naina:- "voh mere chote chote balon ko le kar chidha rahi hai...!!! us k lambe baal hai na...isiliye...??? mujhe roz chidhati hai...
 
tabhi ek aur ladka aaya:- "tere baal hain hi chote toh voh toh tujhe chidhayegi hi na...??? tu apne baal lambe kyoun nahi kar deti...
 
Maina:- "tu mujh se baat mat kar Raj...!!! teri GF hai na voh... isiliye tu toh us ka support karega hi...!!!  teri GF hai...tabhi toh tu use chochlates deta hai...tere cycle par ghumane le jata hai...???"
 
ek aur ladka aaya:- "tu fiqar mat kar Naina...!!! main hun na... dekh main kya karta hun us Neetu ki bachhi ka...???"
 
Raj:- "dekh Alekh...tu Neetu k sath kuch nahi karega...???"
 
Alekh:- "kyoun kuch nahi karunga...??? kyoun ki voh teri GF hai...!!!"
 
Raj:- "haan...voh meri GF hai...!!!"
 
Alekh ne Naina ka hath khinch kar khud k kareeb laya aur kaha:- "toh phir Naina meri GF hai....aur agar us se kisi ne satane ki koshish ki toh main use nahi chodunga... samjha...!!! aur agar tu bhi bich me aaya toh tujhe bhi nahi chodunga...!!!"
 
Raj gusse se aage aaya...Alekh k paas aur kaha:- "Naina teri GF nahi hai...samjah...???"
 
Alekh:- "tujhe kyoun mirchi lag rahi hai...!!! tu ja na...apne GF k paas...!!! Naina se dur rahna...aur samajh le achhi tarah se ki Naina meri GF hai...!!!"
 
Raj gusse se chillaya:- "nahi...Naina teri GF nahi hai...
 
achanak Naina bol padi:- "haan...main hun Alekh ki GF... tumhe kya...??? tum jayo na...apne Neetu k paas...!!!"
 
tabhi fourth ladka aaya...hath me bat pakde:- "ek min...pahle match khatam kar le...phir Raj tu Neetu k paas chale jana...Alekh tu Naina ko le kar chale jana...aur main Naveen ko le kar chala jayunga...!!!"
 
Naveen gusse se bola:- "kya bak raha hai Amar...main kyoun tere sath jayunga...???"
 
Amar:- "mujhe report card dikhani hai maa ko...!!! aur 6 se 7 baje k bich powercut hoga...!!! tabhi maa se sign le lunga us par...!!! andhera hoga toh voh tujh se puchengi ki mera result kaisa hua hai...phir tu bata dena ki sab thik hai...!!! bass ... maa sign kar degi aur mera kaam ho jayega...!!!"
 
Naina:- "tum sab selfish ho...!!! sab ko apni padi hai...meri koi care nahi karta...mujh se koi pyar nahi karta...!!!"
 
Naina rote hue chali gayi...
 
10:15p.m
 
Alekh ne dhire se kaha:- "kya karnewala hai tu...Raj...???"
  
Raj:- "chup...mere sath chalo...!!!"
 
Alekh, Naveen aur Amar us k piche the...!!! teeno badi hi mushkil se ghar k bahar nikle...
 
Alekh:- "pahle tu bata ki tu karne kya wala hai...???"
 
Raj:- "abhi nahi bata sakta...!!! pahle mujhe tum sab batayo ki... agar main aisa kuch karun...jis ki wajah se Neetu aage chal kar Naina ko chidhaye nahi...toh kya tum sab meri help karoge...???"
 
Amar:- "is me puchnewali kya baat hai...hum sab tera sath denge...!!!"
 
Raj:- "phir thik hai...Naveen...maine jo kaha tha voh laya hai kya...???"
 
Naveen ne ek kainchi Raj k hath me dete hue kaha:- "yeh le...par tu karega kya...???"
 
Alekh:- "no ways...tu Neetu k baal katega...ryt...???"
 
Raj:- "nahi...yaar...main kaise kaat sakta hun...voh bhi apne hi GF ki...!!!"
 
Naveen:- "toh phir tu karega kya...???"
 
Raj:- "tu...aur Amar...tum dono bahar rahoge...agar koi aaye...toh siti baja dena...hum chup kar bahar aa jayenge...???"
 
Alekh:- "hum...se tera kya matlab...??? main tere sath us k ghar k ander nahi jayunga...???"
 
Raj:- "kyoun nahi jayega...??? bada...bol raha tha ki Naina teri GF hai...aur jab Naina k liye main apne GF ka baal kaat sakta hun...toh tu Naina k liye mera sath nahi de sakta...???"
 
Alekh:- "Raj...pakde jayenge toh baht peetai hogi...???"
 
Raj:- "pakde jayenge tab na...??? chal mere sath...
 
Naveen aur Amar...bahar watch karne lage ki kahin koi aa toh nahi raha...!!! Raj aur Alekh khidki se ander ghushe... Neetu k ghar...!!!
 
ek choti si bachhi so rahi thi...ek khubshurat se room me...!!! Raj ne Alekh ko room k bahar khada kiya...aur kaha:- "tu yehin khada rah...aur dekh...kahin se koi aa toh nahi raha...!!! main jaldi se apna kaam niklwa kar aata hun...!!!"
 
Raj...dhire se gaya...Neetu k paas...aur jahan se us ne rubber-band lagaya tha...vohin se us k bal kat diye...!!! phir us ki nazar padi...Neetu par...!!! voh use kafi cute lagi...!!! us ne jaldi se us k cheek ko kiss kiya...!!!
 
par tabhi Neetu ki neend khul gayi...!!! Raj aur Alekh bhaag gaye...!!! bahr se Naveen aur Amar bhi...!!!
 
subah ek baht bada hungama hua tha un k ghar...!!! Neetu k parents ne aa kar baht bada hungama creat kiya tha...aur un k chale jane k baad...
 
Amit jee:- "kya yeh sach hai...???"
 
Raj:- "nahi dad...hum sab toh apne apne room me so rahe the...??? hum yeh sab kyoun karenge...???"
 
Amit jee kafi gusse me lag rahe the....
 
Amit jee:- "Alekh aur Raj...tum dono k dono...abhi apna apna saman pack karoge...aur hum abhi apne ghar wapas jayenge...!!! aur vahan par mujhe sochna hai ki tum dono ka kya karna hai...???"
 
Alekh:- "par dad...hum ne sach me kuch nahi kiya hai...
 
Amit jee:- "bass...baht ho gaya...!!! har saal tum logon ki chuttiyon me main tumhe apne dost k ghar ghumane le aata hun...!!! sochta hun ...ki sayad yahan par tumhe pure parivaar ki khushi mil jaye...!!! par tum dono apne shararat bandh nahi karoge...isiliye behtara hai ki hum yahan se chale jayen...!!! aur hum aaj k baad yahan kabhi nahi aayenge...!!!"
 
Naina k dad:- "arre yaar...bachhe hain...kar di hai shararat... ab unhe maaf bhi kar de...!!! ab is umr me voh sharat nahi karenge toh kya tu aur main karnge...!!!"
 
Amit jee:- "baat shararat ki nahi hai...!!! par is tarh se kisi k bal kat dena...aur phir mere samne jhuth bolna...
 
Naina k dad:- "jane de...tu chal mere sath...
 
Amit jee:- "nahi...baht ho gaya...inhe abhi mere sath ghar  wapas chalna padega...
 
Alekh aur Raj apne room me wapas aa gaye...
 
Raj apna sara saman pack karr raha tha...!!! Alekh thodi der k liye Naveen k room me gaya...apna kuch aur saman lane k liye...
 
Naina aayi...
 
Naina chup chap khadi thi...Raj ne us se kuch nahi kaha...
 
Naina:- "mat jayo na...
 
Raj:- "dad...baht gusse me hain...!!! hum nahi ruk payenge...
 
Naina k ankhon me anshun the:- "tune yeh sab mere liye kiya...???"
 
Raj ne Naina ki taraf dekha...aur kaha:- "main kyoun tere liye karunga...tu koun si meri GF hai...??? Neetu meri GF hai...aur meri us se thoda jhagda ho gaya tha...isiliye maine yeh kiya...!!!"
 
Naina:- "tu jhuth bol raha hai...tune yeh sab mere liye kiya hai na...??? sach bol...Raj...
 
Raj ne Naina ko dekha:- "voh tujhe roz...apne lambe bal aur tere chote bal ko le kar chidhati thi na...??? jis ki wajh se tujhe bura lagta tha...aur tu hamare paas aa kar roti thi...!!! aur tere anshun mujh se bardast nahi hote...
 
Naina us k kareeb aayi...!!! Raj ne use dekha...aur kuch nahi kaha...
 
Naina thoda aage aayi...aur Raj ko hug kar k rone lagi:- "meri wajah se tujhe galiyan sunn ne ko mila...chachu ne kaha ki ab voh tum dono ko kabhi yahan le kar nahi aayenge...
 
Raj ne use hug kiya aur kaha:- "main na chup k tere paas aa jayunga...tujh se milne...!!! thik hai...ab tu ro mat...varna main ja nahi payunga...!!! Naina k naino me anshun achhe nahi lagte...
 
Naina ne use thoda aur tightly hug kiya...anshun dono k ankhon me the...
 
darwaze par khade the...Amit jee aur Naina k dad...un k chehre par smile aayi...
 
Naina k dad:- "ab toh maaf kar de...!!! bachhe hain...yaar...!!! aur phir Raj ne jo kiya...Naina k liye kiya...!!! dekha jaye toh agar Naina ne Neetu ki compln nahi ki hoti toh in logon ne yeh sab nahi kiya hota...!!! isiliye Naina bhi zimmedar hai...!!! saza Naina ko bhi mila chahiye...hai na...???"
 
Amit jee:- "khabardaar jo Naina ko saza dene ki baat kahi toh...!!! hum nahi ja rahe hain...par Raj ne jo kiya us ki saza toh use milegi hi...aur bakiyon ko bhi...!!!"
 
Raj ko apne kamre me bandh kar k rakha gaya tha...n bakiyon ko bhi punish kiya gaya tha...
 
par Naina ne bhuk hartal ched di thi...jis ki wajah se sab ko punishment se nikala gaya tha...
 
flashback over...
 
Naina hassi aur kaha:- "tum ne bal katne k baad Neetu ko kiss kiya tha...???"
 
Raj:- "tumhe kis ne kaha...Alekh ne...???"
 
Naina:- "haan...
 
Raj:- "sach kahun...jab maine us k baal kat diye na...toh mujhe bada dukh hua...isiliye ...
 
Naina:- "use comfort karne k liye kiss kar diya...
 
Naina ne Raj ki baat complite karte hue kah kar hassne lagi...
 
Raj:- "haan...par phir bhi us ne apne ghar me sab kuch kah diya tha...!!!"
 
Naina:- "nahi kahti kya...??? tum n use kiss kiya...isiliye voh bhul jati...hai na...???"
 
Raj:- "ab mera kiss toh bekar me gaya na..!!! achha ek baat batyo...tumhe jab Alekh ne bataya ki maine Neetu ko kiss kiya tha...tumhe jealous feel hua...???"
 
Naina:- "nahi...
 
Raj:- "jhuth...
 
Naina:- "arre main kyoun jhuth bolungi...!!! achhe se janti hun main tumhe...!!! "
 
Raj:- "kya janti ho...???"
 
Naina:- "bachpan se hi tum baht hi bade flirter the...!!! khud k umar se 7-8 saal badi ladkiyon ko line mara karte the...!!! aur isi wajah se chachu ne kai baar tumhari peetai karne ki koshish ki thi...par har baar tum bhaag jate the...!!!"
 
Raj:- "tab toh main bachha tha...!!!'
 
kuch der baad Raj ne phir pucha...:- "tum log vahan se gaye kyoun...??? dad ne kitna dhundh tum sab ko...???"
 
Naina:- "pata nahi...kuch hua tha sayad...aur papa ne bina kisi ko kuch kahe achanak... yeh faishla kar liya...!!! sari property achnak bech diye...aur hum sab ko le kar vahan se chale gaye...!!! kisi chiz ka darr tha sayad...!!! pata nahi kya...??? phir bhaiya bade hue...unhone papa ki us naye jagah par kiye hue business ko sambhala...aage badhaya...Amar ne bhaiya ki baht help ki thi...!!"
 
Raj ne mehshush kiya ki Naina k ankhon me do boond anshun sayad us k seene me gire the...!!! us ne jana ki purani baton ko use yaad dila kar voh Naina ko sirf taklif de raha hai...
 
Raj ne Naina ka chehra apne dono hathon se cup kiye hue... apne face ki taraf kiya aur kaha:- "ek baat sach sach batayogi...???"
 
Naina:- "haan...pucho na...???"
 
Raj:- "itne salon baad jab hum mile...toh hum dono k chehre badal chuke the...aadat badal chuke the...!!! maine jis din tumhe pahli baar mila...aisa laga ki main tumhe janta hun...tum baht hi spl ho mere liye...!!! par tum ne kya mehshush kiya tha...???"
 
Naina mushkurayi aur kaha:- "pahli baar jab hum mile the na...tab main tum par giri thi...!!! in fact main girnewali nahi thi...voh toh tumhari as usall bakwaas comments ki wajah se main turn karne lagi toh tum par giri...!!! haan...us waqt mujhe aisa bhi laga tha ki tum spl ho...aur main tumhe janti hun...!!! par us k baad jo tum ne mere sath flirt karne ki koshish ki na...mera dil karr raha tha ki...
 
Raj:- "kiiiiiiii....
 
Naina:- "jane do...tum sunn nahi payoge...!!! mujhe sach me baht gussa aa rah tha tumhare muh se yeh sunn kar ki...'maine aap ko pahle kahin dekha hai...' (Naina hassi)...lekin jane k baad wapas aana...aur voh lines us paper me likhna mujhe jyada achha laga tha...!!!"
 
Raj:- "matlab...mera kuch chance toh bana hi tha us waqt... hai na...???"
 
Naina mushkurayi thodi si aur kaha:- "subah honewali hai Raj...chalo...ander...chal kar so jayo...!!!"
 
Raj:- "nahi yehin rahne do na...achha lag raha hai yahan par...!!!"
 
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...sone lagi...vohin Raj k seene par sar rakh kar...
 
Raj ne halke se Naina ko apne seene se laga rakha tha...!!!
 
cut to Alekh...
 
voh...Neelu k sath tha...!!! Neelu use ghar ka har part dikha rahi thi...
 
Alekh kafi chup tha...jitni jarurat thi bass utna hi puchta tha...!!!
 
Alekh:- "aap k room se justice kapoor ka room toh kafi dur hai...???"
 
Neelu:- "haan...hai toh...
 
Alekh:- "kitna min lagta hai vahan tak pahunchne me...???"
 
Neelu:- "maine kabhi ghadi dekhte hue un k room me nahi pahunchi...!!!'
 
us ne irritate ho kar kaha...!!! kab se Alekh use ajnabiyon ki tarah baat karr raha hai...
 
Alekh thoda aage chala gaya tha...piche turn kar k dekha toh Neelu kahin dikhai nahi di use...!!! voh thoda aur piche aaya toh dekha ki ek room k bahar voh khadi thi...sar jhukaye...
 
Alekh ne use gaur se dekha...voh zameen ko dekh rahi thi...us k ankhon se do boond anshun zameen par gire...
 
Alekh us k kareeb aaya...us k samne khada hua...
 
Neelu ne nazrain utha kar use dekha...!!! Alekh ne kuch nahi kaha...bass use dekhta raha...
 
Neelu ne kuch pal tak Alekh ko dekha...phir thoda aage aayi...use hug kiya...us k neck par apna chehra chupa kar rone lagi...dhire se kaha:- "sorry...
 
Alekh ne use thama...thoda aur kareeb apne paas khinchte hue kaha:- "mujh se dur jane ka faishla tumhara tha...!!! aur aaj tum khud mere kareeb aayi ho...!!! akhir baar puch raha hun...agar phir se dur jana chahti ho toh abhi chali jayo...kyoun dubara main tumhe yeh mauka nahi dunga...!!!"
 
Neelu k hath us k back par tight hue us ne dhire se phir se kaha:- "sorry....mujhe maaf kar do...
 
Alekh ne use khud se alag kiya...us k chehre ko gaur se dekha... tarash gaya tha voh is chehre ko dekhne k liye...!!! Neelu k forehead ko kiss kiya...use apne gale se lagaya...
 
suraj ki halki si roshni Naina aur Raj k chehre ko chua...toh dono ne ankhen kholi...aur chaunke...
 
samne Palak khadi thi...us k ankhon me anshun the...aur ek hath me us ka teddy...
 
Raj ne use apne goad me lena chaha toh voh nahi aayi...
 
Palak:- "main kitna dari hun...aaj...!!! jab main uthi toh aap dono me se koi nahi tha...!!! mujhe laga aap dono mujhe chod kar kahin chale gaye ho...!!!"
 
us ne apni ankhon me anshun late hue kaha...
 
Naina ne use zabardasti apne kareeb late hue kaha:- "main kaise apni gudia ko chod kar kahin ja sakti hun...???"
 
Raj ne zabardasti palak ko apne goad me late hue kaha:- "sorry...beta...!!! voh kya hai na...kal raat tumhari mamma ko neend nahi aa rahi thi...!!! aur jab tumhe neend nahi aati toh tum kya karti ho...???"
 
Palak:- "main...mamma ko kahti hun...aur voh mujhe goadi me utha kar...ghumate ghumate story sunati hai...aur main so jati hun...!!!"
 
Raj:- "ab mummy tumhari hi hai na...!!! aadat bhi tumhare jaisi hai...unhe bhi kal raat neend nahi aa rahi thi...isiliye...
 
Palak ne hairani se kaha:- "aur aap ne unhe apni goadi me utha kar ghumate ghumate story sunayi...???"
 
Naina...muh khol kar sunn rahi thi...!!! Raj ko hassi aayi voh bola:- "nahi beta...tumhai mamma ko main goadi me utha kar story sunayunga...toh meri goadi ka stayanaash ho jayega...!!!"
 
Naina:- "wat do u mean...??? tumhara kahne ka matlab hai ki main moti hun... 
 
Raj:- "maine kab kaha ki tum moti ho...??? yeh toh tum kah rahi ho...???"
 
Naina:- "tum toh yehi kahnewale the na...???"
 
Raj:- "tumhe kaise pata...???"
 
Naina ne Palak ko zabardast apne goad me khinch kar liya aur kaha:- " aaj tumhara nashta main nahi banayungi...??? bana lena apna nashta apne kisi slim-trim GF se...!!!"
 
Palak ko le kar Naina chali gayi...subah 6:30 baje ki school bus aayegi...
 
Raj phir se vohin let gaya...aur aashman ki taraf dekh kar khud se kaha:- "thank you God...
 
Naina ne Palak ko taiyar kiya...Alekh vohin baitha hua tha...!!!
 
Alekh:- "main Pallo ko chod aata hun...school bus tak...!!!"
 
Naina:- "arre nahi...main chod aayungi na...tum kyoun taklif karte ho...???"
 
Alekh hassa aur kaha:- "Naina tum kuch jyada hi formal ho rahi ho...aur plz tum yeh mat bhulna ki Pallo meri bhi kuch lagti hai...hai na darling...
 
Alekh ne Pallo ki taraf hath badhaya...Pallo ne mushkurate hue HAAN me sar hilaya...aur us k goad me aa gayi...
 
Alekh use goad me utha kar chala gaya...
 
Naina room me wapas aayi toh dekha Raj apne study table par baitha ek painting dekh raha tha...
 
Naina ne dhyaan nahi diya us taraf...voh apne school jane k liye apna bag pack karne lagi...phir Raj se pucha:- "tumhara nashta laga dun...???"
 
Raj ne koi jawab nahi diya...
 
Naina ne turn kar k dekha...Raj us painting ko kabhi ulta kabhi sidha pakad ne koshish kiye ja raha hai...
 
Naina hassi...us k kareeb aa kar khadi hui aur pucha:- "kya karr rahe ho...???"
 
Raj:- "is painting ko sidha karne ki koshish karr raha hun yaar...par mazal hai jo yeh sidha ho...??? mere dimag k upar se hamesha nikal jata hai yeh 'modern art'...
 
Naina:- "main kuch help karun...???"
 
Raj ne us ki taraf dekh kar hairani se kaha:- "tum yeh sab samajh leti ho...???"
 
Naina:- "thoda thoda...
 
Raj ne Naina ko khinch kar apne goad me bithaya aur kaha:- "toh miss...plz apne is student par bhi thodi kripa drishti dal do...toh main bhi apne imtehaan me pass ho jayunga...!!!"
 
Naina hassi...Raj ne use achhe se hug karte hue apne goad me bithaya...Naina ne us painting ko thoda gaur se dekha...Raj k chehra Naina k ryt shoulder par tha...
 
Naina:- "hmmmm...yeh painting humain 'panch tatva' k bare me batati hai...!!! aur yeh dekho...yahan par bhi sirf 5 colours hain...jinhe ek sath milane ki koshish ki gayi hai...!!!"
 
Raj:- "bass...itna hi...
 
Naina:- "haan...aur kuch nahi hai is me...bass itna hi hai... kyoun...???"
 
Raj:- "nahi kuch nahi...!!! achha tum jayo...nashta laga lo...main abhi pahunchta hun...!!!"
 
Naina chali gayi...Raj ne phir se us painting ko dekha...!!! Naina achanak wapis aayi aur Raj ko dekh kar kaha:- "Raj...maine yeh painting pahle kahin dekhi hai...!!! yaad nahi aa raha tha...par sayad ise Aasha maa ne banaya tha...!!! ek min...
 
itna kah kar Naina us painting k paas aayi aur niche dekha...toh us paintin k side me likha tha...Aasha...
 
yeh dekho..."Naina ne kaha...
 
main sahi thi...yeh Aasha maa ne hi banaya hai...!!! tumhe kahan se mila...???" Naina ne pucha...
 
Raj:- "baad me bata ta hun...tum plz nashta lagayo na ...badi bhuk lagi hai...!!!"
 
thik hai..." kahte hue Naina chali gayi...
 
Raj:- "Aasha maa...ki paniting justice kapoor k ghar par...???"
 
Raj ne us us painting k back side ko dekha...us mote se paper ko kata...aur us ne dekha ander ek chota sa paper hai...jis me kuch naksha bana hua hai...
 
kuch din baad...
 
Raj jab sham ko ghar wapas aaya toh kafi khush tha... 
 
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Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 13 years ago