Teri Bandagi AR ff upd pg 38 part 14

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Index
part 1 = page 1
part 2 = page 1
part 3 = page 1
part 4 = page 1
part 5 = page 2
part 6 = page 4
part 7 = page 9
part 8 = page 12
part 9 = page 16
part 10 = page 23
part 11 = page 28
part 12 = page 31
part 13 = pg 35
part 14 = page 38
its raining heavly and armaan and riddhima are returning home from sanjeevani
R : aaj sanjeevani mein kitna kaam ta na, aur upar se yeh baarish abhi shuru hona tha ise
A : riddhima mujhe to yeh mausum bohot romantic lag raha hai .. *winks at her*
r: armaan ... * gives him a mock anger side look* tum bhi na kahi par shuru ho jaate ho ... aab jaldi karo
ghar pe sab pareshan ho rahe honge di ne already do bar phone kiya hai
A: abbey yaar .. basket tum bhi na koi romance nahi aata tumhe
R: armaan .. mujhe aadi raat me , inti baarish mein tumahre saath romance karne ka koi shauq nahi hai
saamje * anger look again *
armaan laughs .. he and riddhima had told everyone about their relationship a few weeks ago, at first everyone was not only shocked but a little confused, no one had ever thought that armaan and riddhima would fall for each other ... they couldnt stand each other even for a minute without starting their fights jungli billi vs mr super cool .. he smiled as he remembered how they met the very first time at the BB court .. he and riddhima couldnt stand each other at first, they had many fights many misuderstandings but still somehow their relationship survived through it all, Dr shashank hadnt been very happy at first either but after a lot of hard work he managed to patao his hone vale sasurji. he and riddhima had gotten engaged only a few weeks ago and slowly everyone accepted this fact that armaan and riddhima loved each other.
armaan glanced at riddhima she was sitting next to him searching for something in her bag, simple yet stunning in a royal blue churidar,with her hair let go , and as usual she was looking damn beautiful ...
as riddhima looked up she found armaans eyes staring into hers with all the love in the world, she instantly broke the eye contact and looked to the side she didnt know why but ever since her and armaan had gotten engaged she was not uncomfortable but a little bit shyer around armaan, maybe because they would be getting married soon she guessed it was the feeling that every girl had before their marriage, she was making sure that she wasnt getting into to close proximity with armaan ... because she couldnt trust herself and wasnt sure whether she would be able to control herself
R: kya ... ese kya dekh rahe ho mujhe * blushing a little*
A: *he sensed that she was blushing* hmm kuch nahi... tumhe yeh colour bahut suit karta hai the royal blue churidar complimented riddhima's features her fair skin, her pink lips, her beautiful eyes, and exspecially her rosy cheeks
R: * blushing more* armaan ...
just when armaan is about to say something he is distracted by the sudden halt of the car, ...the car had broken down
R: armaan aab kya karenge raat bhi bohot ho chuki hai aur uper se baarish bhi bohot ho rahi hai,.... oh god mere phone ki toh koi network hi nahi aah rahi aab mein di ko kaise conatct karu
A: dont worry riddhima main kuch karta hun.
precap - A -R romantic scene
note :
thats it guys the intro to my F/F ... have no idea where its gonna go ... but i'm hoping to continiue only when guys aprove of it ...
so main kya karu ... carry on ya trash will add a romantic scene if u guys approve
-aishah
Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 2
Recap : armaan aab kya karenge raat bhi bohot ho chuki hai aur uper se baarish bhi bohot ho rahi hai,.... oh god mere phone ki toh koi network hi nahi aah rahi aab mein di ko kaise conatct karu
A: dont worry riddhima main kuch karta hun.
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after searching for 6-7 mins armaan and riddhima found no help, by this time they were both completely drenched in the rain.
riddhima felt a little uncomfortable as she realised that her dress was becoming even more and more transparent .. not sure on what to do she started fiddling about with her duppata trying to cover her self in some way,
R- to herself * riddhima tum esa kyu kar rahi ho armaan ki saamne itni sharm kyu aah rahi hai tumhe*
A- armaan's eyes glanced at riddhima and they stopped there ... he gazed at her in awe ... damn she looked so beautiful that to so effortlessly ... the rain had soaked her completely the royal blue dress was fitting on to her figure so perfectly, becoming transparent so that her milky flesh could be seen through it, her hair was soaking wet, and the tendril locks were coming over her face, armaan, almost helplessly moved his fingers over to her cheeks, .... the sudden contact with armaan sent chills down riddhima's shivering bare back, armaan slowly guided his hand from her cheek to her hair and he slowly tucked a lock of her hair away riddhima couldnt control her blushing, armaan was coming closer to her now she could feel his breath growing heavier he slowly tucked her hair away to the side, revealing her bare neck, ... ..suddenly a lightining struck sending riddhima cowering into armaan's chest,
R: plzz armaan chalo yaha se mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai
A: fikar mat karo riddhima main huna yaha .. tumhare saath his arms went around riddhima in a protective manner.
after a little more walking armaan and riddhima come across a farmhouse.
-thats it for now ... will cont soon ... hope i didnt dissapoint u'all too much
very sorry for the short part
-aishah
Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago
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part 3
A: fikar mat karo riddhima main huna yaha .. tumhare saath his arms went around riddhima in a protective manner.
after a little more walking armaan and riddhima come across a farmhouse.
after knocking several times they realise that the farm house is deserted and realise that know one lives there, after a lot of struggling armaan manages to break open the stiff door, and both riddhima and armaan enter the lifeless place
R: errr ! oh god ! yeh jaga kitna ganda hai, main yaha par nahi reh sakti
A: basket aab hum kissi 5 star hotel mein to hai nahi toh yaha par adjust karlo
R: *riddhima rolls her tounge out at armaan*
A: tum yaha par ruko main kuch kapre dhoond kar lata hu * mutters to himself yeh basket bhi na ... pata nahi kis cheez se bani hui hai ... jaha bhi jaati hai aapne nakhre dikhana shuru karde thi hai*
R: kya kaha tumne her * eyes narrowed*
A: kuch nahi meri maa
R: * makes another face*
he enters a room and finds that it is reasonably clean, and even has a fire stove after searching for a while he manages to find is a white vest for himslef and a red nightgown for riddhima
A: yeh lo riddhima aapne kapre jaldi se change karlo
riddhima looks at the red gown in his hand and hesitates
R: yeh .... umm aur kuch nahi mila kya tumhe
A: aab yaha par kaunsa mall kula hai .. jo dia hai voh chup chap pehen lo
R: nahi me in kapro main teek hu
A: riddhima agar tum kapre nahi pehno gi toh tum bimar par jaugi, agar tum bimar par gayi, toh tumhe pneumonia ho jayega aur agar tumhe pneumonia ho gaya toh Dr shashank ko yeh lage ga ki tum bimar mere vajese hui ho ... phir voh humari sagaai tod denge ... voh toh vaise bhi chance dhund te rehte hai
R: * anger* armaan ... *points her finger at him* tum mere papa ko kuch mat kehna samjhe ... main change kar rahi hu gives * armaan a killer stare and walks past*
armaan laughed to himself .. this was the one topic that riddhima awlays got angry at ... he looked at himself
A: main bhi jaa kar change kar leta hu varna ...pata nahi iss basket ka kya barohsa 😆😉😈
A : as armaan enters the room he sees riddhima with her back towards him drying her hair ... she looked so beautiful in the red gown the straps hung loosely on to her shoudlers, the gown itself was fitted perfectly on to riddhima's body complimenting her figure, she had no makeup on yet she still looked so sensational
riddhima was busy drying her hair while singing some silly tune that armaan had got into her head in the car, she was still half annoyed with him
R : yeh armaan bhi na jab dekho papa ki piche laga rehta hai ab iss me papa ki kya galti voh hi to pehle mr supercool banke firta tha itni sare tatoos leke, aur jab dekho ladkiyon ki saath flirt kartha tha 😡😉
as riddhima muttered away to herself she was unobvious to the fact that armaan was so close to her ... as he touched her she stopped what she was doign instantly, and her breath drew in sharpish, armaan slowly turned her hair to the side and started grazing her neck and shoulder with fervent kisses, by this time riddhima's cheeks had turned crimson, she closed her eyes and held onto the cupboard as she felt armaan's kisses turning even more passionate, somehow the more she tried to get away from him the closer he came to her, armaan held on to riddhima's waist tightly and showered her with kisses all over, from her neck to her shoulder, to her cheeks ....
riddhima abruplty moved away from him anf broke the contact his love seemed uncontrollable today and she wasnt sure whether she could trust herself
R: armaan plzz .... .....
she took a step backwards towards the wall, armaan did the same as well, in this way both armaan and riddhima moved towards the wall riddhima hadnt realised this untill she didnt hit her head on it
R: armaan plzzz ......
armaan cornered riddhima and pinned her completely againts the wall, their bodies were totally pressed together now ... his lips were only inches away from hers, he held he wrist tightly, his grip getting tighter on her every second, somehow he was awakining unknow feelings in her
R: armaan ... ouch !!!
A: riddhima aaj aapne aap ko mat roko .... his other hand was on her waist, he kissed riddhima passionately below the ears, nibbling her lower neck
R: riddhima let out a sudden gasp suprising both herself and armaan
armaan smiled, and bent down aiming for her lips ... even riddhima's lips were slightly parted now, she could feel their bodies still completely pressed againt each other ... armaan bent down even closer ..................................
when suddenly a loud knocking broke them apart, riddhima was completely flabbergasted and started blushing again, even armaan was a little embarassed
A: main jaa kar dekh tha hu kaun hai * looking direclty at riddhima*
riddhima looked down, not making any eye contact with him ...
R: hmmm *her hand on her night gown* armaan tried to look for a approving look in her eyes, he didnt intend to make her feel uncomfortable but the knocking got louder ...
A: armaan opens the door
Stranger 1: sorry to disturb you sir par voh car jo band hogaya tha .. kya voh aap ki hai
A: armaan nodded
Stranger 2 : voh humne dono ne fix karlia ... actually hum mechanics hai
ghar jaa rahi the toh raaste main yeh car milgayi ... dont worry its completely fixed now
A: umm thanks a lot * dissapointed that he and riddhima would have to leave no*
Stranger 1: dont worry about it sir yeh to humari duty thi
suddenly riddhima arrives at the door from behind armaan, armaan turned around and saw that ridd hima was back in her blue churidar
R: car teek hogaya kya
Stranger 1: yes madam aab aap ki car belkul teek hai riddhima says thanks and the strangers leave
R: chalo armaan ab hum bhi chalte hai .. dekho na baarish bhi ruk gayi
just as she turns around to leave armaan grips her arm and turns her around so that she is facing him, riddhima looks up to see that armaan's eyes are moist
R: armaan tum
A: now taking her hands into his and kissing them softly ... riddhima agar maine tumhe kisi bhi tarah se uncomfortable mehsus karaya then i'm sorry
R: riddhima started cursing herself inside, she knew this was to happen, she trusted armaan more that herself but lately because of her nervous behaviour he was starting to feel like she didnt trust him, she promised herself not behave like this anymore and become the normal riddhima,
R: nahi armaan esi koi baat nahi hai ... tum jaante ho na ki main tumhe aapne aap se bhi zyada trust karti hu ... main toh bas ... voh ... she was lost for words ... and looked down indicating that she was shy
A: fikar mat karo riddhima main essa kuch nahi karunga joh tum na chaho
without saying anything she hugged armaan tighly and buried her head into his chest .. armaan didnt say anything and responded back to the hug with full passion. they stayed like this for a few minutes ... armaan and riddhima's relationship was different because it didnt depend on words or actions , they managed to understand what each other's eyes spoke ... this was the beauty of their relationship and what made it so pure.
tried to write a long part .. hope u'll werent too dissapointed
will include some angie- atul and rahul -muski scenes next time i update
plzzz feel free to leave any suggestions/ ideas
-luv aishah
Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this is really gd. continue soon!!!!!!
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really grt start! plz do cntd sn! can u plz pm me whenever u cntd? plz?! i dnt wana miss even a one prt dats y! thx in advance 4 d pm and cngtd sn1
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hi guyz thanks for replying on my ff so far
here is the 4th part
the next day at sanjeevani
all interns are together and on their way to reporting at the nurse station
angie: guys jaldi karo Dr keerti vaha par pauch gayi hogi hum already dus minute late ho chuke * gives rahul a evil look*
rahul: aab is me meri kya galti hai yaar ghari agar kharab hogayi toh main kya karu
muskaan: oye kanjus iss main ab nayi baat kya hai ... teri khatara toh har ek do din kharab ho ja tha hai
atul: ha rahul anjali aur muskaan teek kehrahi hai aaj teri vaje se meri anjali mar ja thi
anjali: kya ... (confused) atul what rubbish main toh teek hu
atul: nahi nahin anjali tum nahi meri bachi ( nods his head towards a cracked plant pot in his hands 😆)
anjali : oh !!
Atul: aab guys jaldi karo hitler wait kar rahi hogi
muskaan: ha jaldi chalo vaise bhi aab Dr keerti ko pata na hoga ki mere kanjus pati ki khatara phir se kharab hogayi 😆
anjali: guys agar is car se itni problems hothi hai toh tum dono ek nayi car kyun nahi karid lete ... aab toh tumhare paas lottery ki paise bhi hai
: oye anjali tu isse nahi janti, yeh na iski family trade mark hai ... sab kanjoos hai ek se ek badkar laughs * her weird laugh* tujhe pata hai jab hum shaadi ke baad wapas chandigarh gaye the na tab hi mujhe is ki khandan ki baare mein pata chala ta
rahul: oye tu khandaan pe mat ja
muskaan: oye tu kya karlega
both rahul and muskaan start fighting muskaan is holding rahuls collar and rahul is trying to fight back 😆
atul: arre tum dono fir se shuru hogayi
angie: guyz just stop it muskaan choro rahul ko she pulls muskaan and atul pulls rahul
atul: aab jaldi karo hitler intezaar kar rahi hogi ..... arre yeh armaan aur riddhima kaha hai abhi tak nahi aye
angie: ha yaar kal raat to riddhima ghar dher se ayi thi mil bhi nahi payi usse
muskaan : arre voh dekho dono love birds
just then armaan and riddhima enter sanjeevani, riddhima looking very cute in her usual pink kurta and churidar and armaan looking hot as always in his usual double shirts and jeans.
A-R - hi guys
Armaan: hi champ *hugs atul* hi rahul, hi muskaan, hi angie
anjali: tum dono intni late kyu ho, armaan tum toh riddhima ko pick up karne ghar gaye the na
Armaan : angie main toh time par pauch gaya lekin yeh tumhari behen tayyar hone main itni der laga thi hai tho main kya karu *looks at riddhima with a cheeky grin*
Riddhima: armaan ... * anger look*
rahul: armaan yeh ladkiyaan toh hoti aisi hai mujhse puch har subah iss muskaan ko kaise jel tha hu
muskaan: kya kaha tune
rahul: kuch nahi chal
armaan looks at riddhima who is walking beside him
A: riddhima .. * whispers *
r: nods at him kya hai
A: duty ki baad mujhe fireescape main milna 😉
R: shakes her head saying no
A: makes a pouting face please...
R: shakes her head at his childish behaviour
armaan tries to hold her hand and starts flirting with her
muskaan : oi tum dono kya kar rahe ho
both A-R quickly seperate
together : kuch nahi !!!
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sorry guys thats it for now ... will try to update later hope u'll liked it i intended to have some more A-R scenes but right now i have no time so i will add that the next time i update.

Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fabulous ! Can yhuu update today cuz im going to India n doubt i will cme online!

So plz update kwik
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awsum prt! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update aishah continue soon
-Iram
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superb parts aishah
update sooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya

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