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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpush

hey i wud love 2 read it
so wat r u waiting 4??
get going!!
wil wait till oct

thank you!! am glad u like the idea! 😳 will wrk on it soon!

Originally posted by: ranrags

oye jaan(I hope I didn't upset u)..khud hi topic start karti ho aur khud hi reply space reserve karti ho??😲..teek hai koi baat nahi..I think u r gonna use it for other stuffs related to the FF..ab main mudde par..YAY..another FF👏..that too from Rinki👏..but why r u ending Mine yaar?it is coming along so well!!😕
hey didz...nah u didn't upset me 😆 ah those "replies" are for the index and pm list di, like u know! 😆 awww u make me blush di! 😆 ah mine is ending for this generation, im thinking about continuing the story but in their childrens form..like a gen-x version of mine 😆 but still am not sure abt so am giving myself a break from it to think carefully! 😃
This FF seems to be as interesting as ur other FF..but we have to wait for another 13days😔..thodi thodi karke update kardo..it'll be nice..as it is the real show is going nowhere..we'll have good time with FFs atleast..and about 5posts??can we reply again n again to make it more replies so that u'll update the FF soon?I know very dumb🤓 of me..n I ask the same old question to everyone..but if that works then y not..even if it is dumb🤓..ain't matter to me..lo mera ek reply toh agaya..chalo shuru ho jao..all the best!!👍🏼
aahh i know long time! but am sure ill get the first part done and then ill post the intro aka Part 1 soon and continue from there, the 13 days are just to give myself a cushion so ill have extra time in case i dont get it done by this wknd...ya kno? 😃
thanks for liking di!!
rinkz

Originally posted by: shareen

The concept is awesome and the title is very interesting.

thanks...am glad u find it interesting!! 😳

Originally posted by: angel82

Rinkz,

Your idea for the new FF is very interesting and me sure you'll do a terrific job with it....BUT BUT BUT I really want you to finish that SS you started and forgot about but still left me wondering 'what next' 'what next'....
So plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz first finish that off and then start the new one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............The one where Heer slaps Prem , arghhh forgot its name,..Hope you got it....
Angie

hello angie, am glad u like it...ah dnt wrry the SS i need to type out the part and ill try to do that by this wknd...yea i know which one ur tlkin abt...but idk if im ever gonna wrk on it again...the idea is all lost to me now..😆 maybe someday ill make a whole FF on that idea 😉😆...the name was "unexpected meeting" ill try to do it didz...but if i cant then plz try to understand...if i dnt get to it again ever...ill send you the little outline of it so u know what happens and u can finally rest peacefully 😆😆
rinkz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fijiana

yaar rinks kitna likhti ho .me not complaining it is suppose to make you feel good.but then whatever you write it is always entertaining and fun.first mine,then wmt and now this mbm.and yeah dont forget about the ss one you wrote.so october it is then.but hopefully you will entertain us with woh mile the and mine.
take care

lmao...yea i write too much! 😲😆😆 awww thank you!! am glad u find em fun to read!! ahh that SS is gonna drive me crazy 😆 ill try to do it, but frankly have lost interest in it that happens a lot to me! 😆
u tc also!
rinkz

Originally posted by: chullbulli

yaar likho bhi jaldi...mujhe bhi ideas aane lage hai....jaldi likho, waise bhi kdmhmd bore ho raha hai

demanding huh? 😆 ill try to wrk on it fast! ah am glad ur getting ideas too!
rinkz

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

hey seems interesting,,, do write fast.... looking forward 😊

hello hun, thanks am glad u liked it!!
ill wrk on it asap!!
rinkz
@ poonam- thanks pooji! am glad u like it! will wrk on it asap!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: shabo24

Turtle beat the fox! Turtle beat the fox!
ahem ahem yesh you did...where's the fox anyway? 😆
*edited*

Haila?😲Ek aur?!!?!?!!?!?!?😆Kya Rinkz, you are DROWNING yourself, look at me and Kiran.....good dirls with only one FF (though I have an idea*scratches head*) and YOU....what is this your 5th?????😆
uh yea...lolz i already told u why in the pm so 😆 ahh maybe it is! 😳 ooh whats ur new idea?!! 😃
*rubs hands together*Interesting....veryy interesting!! "My Boss and Me!" OMG I AM HOOKED!!!!!That title! It's so APT (again, here is the word) for soo many potential romantic office scenes!
aww thanks shabzie!! 😳😳
October....eh? So tell me missy, Mine is going on a new track, Woh Mile The is just starting out, Aankhien has not even STARTED and now this?🤔How are you going to handle this????😆This outta be funt to watch, we can pelt you with annoying PM's! "UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!😉
aah no actually mine will be done by then 😆 and woh mile the will prolly have the next two-three chaps done and ankhein..doesnt seem to be going anywhere 🤣 ahh i wnt check the pms 🤣 sent by you and foxie...and stop giving ppl ideas!! 😡😡 dont tell em to pm me ya hear?!! 😡😆😆
AHHHHH those charchter sketches are amzing! YESH! No family....I'm so sick in my FF, incoporating everyone's thoughts and all, the next one I write will be strictily Premeer! Hayye, Heer teaches dance! Sign me and Vikki up for salsa!! Ahh wait, it's lil kidz......hmmm, well I'm looking foreward to scenes where Prem watches her dance in the RAIN!!!☺️
ahh i know...i hate having to include that stupid familia in my fics 😡 yesh only kids allowed missy! 😆 oy!! shh dont tell ppl what im planning...how'd you find that out anyways? 😲😲🤔
Continue sooooon!!
will tryyyyy!!! 🤣
Ohh the math, I THINK you did it right
🤣🤣 -shakes head- lolz
Shabz [turtle!]

phoenix!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'M RIGHT HERE! No one told me... *khafa*

And yesh I am shaking my head right now, really really furiously! I think my earring are going to fall off... 😕

Anywayyyyyyyy... AUNTY! I'm still waiting for the other ones, and your starting this.. Uff, how do you keep up with yourself. You seriously have ideas bursting out of your head, I hear a new story from you everyday. 🤣

Well this one sounds amazing, i love this kind of concept. Wonder how your going to put it on Prem and Heer. 😳 I'm loving the NO FAMILY thing... AND OMG! No other couples... 😲 I'm going to love this, just Prem and Heer. ☺️

Now I'm waiting (furiously) for you to continueee!! Woman you need a break, and during the break you need to take out all your stories and write a new part for each... Just kidding.. tehehe..

And shabz, Sharap! I let you win, i was being nice... heheehe..

kimz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

I'M RIGHT HERE! No one told me... *khafa*
srry kimz!! but i didnt tell anyone, just posted it out of nowhere 🤣
And yesh I am shaking my head right now, really really furiously! I think my earring are going to fall off... 😕
ahh keep a bowl under it so u can catch it 🤣🤣
Anywayyyyyyyy... AUNTY! I'm still waiting for the other ones, and your starting this.. Uff, how do you keep up with yourself. You seriously have ideas bursting out of your head, I hear a new story from you everyday. 🤣
mmm....hehe yea...idk why man...they just wnt leave me alone!!! ugh! lolz hey im doing fine on my other ones, except for ankhein which i dnt think is gnna happen...or that ss i started 🤔🤣
Well this one sounds amazing, i love this kind of concept. Wonder how your going to put it on Prem and Heer. 😳 I'm loving the NO FAMILY thing... AND OMG! No other couples... 😲 I'm going to love this, just Prem and Heer. ☺️
ahh prem as the furious and smexy boss, heer as the stubborn and hard-wrking gal yesh no familia or other couples, well there are some not so main ones, just minor characters to make the story wrk 😆
Now I'm waiting (furiously) for you to continueee!! Woman you need a break, and during the break you need to take out all your stories and write a new part for each... Just kidding.. tehehe..
aah think im getting the break for halloween 🤔 ah idk we'll see when and yea then ill write some stuff for each 🤣
And shabz, Sharap! I let you win, i was being nice... heheehe..
hmm why dnt i believe that? 😆😆
kimz

rinkz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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My Boss and Me

By: Rinki
Chapter. 1A
She didn't want marriage. For her, it was just something that binded her to some unknown guy that was supposedly her "soul mate". Did they even exist? How can someone just assume that he/she is their soulmate without even having any solid proof? As far as she knew, they existed'in the pages of a fairytale. In real life, it couldn't be proven that they existed. Marriage was nothing more than a boundary for her, binding her to that one guy she was supposed to spend her entire life with. No couple was perfectly happy with their marriage, her parents were proof of that. Heer never believed in soulmates but she was ironically a firm believer in true love, which meant understanding each other and never judging the other'something akin to soulmates but not entirely. Right?
Her parents weren't divorced but they weren't a "couple" exactly either. Teji and Balraj got married because of their parents wish, no love was shared between them, at least not anymore. They were in love when they were young and newlyweds. Their trust and love grew each day, looking as if it would never end, or so it seemed. His urges to make money and more money left her alone at home with her two daughters, Heer and Rinki. While Heer was a quiet gal that didn't bother her parents, Rinki was the complete opposite, always energized and ready to cause havoc, in a way causing her father to drift farther and farther from the family.
"Talking about Rinki, where is she?" Heer whispered in the cold living room. Her long black hair was pulled in a loose ponytail, her big brown eyes accented by her mascara and eyeliner. She was looking simply divine in her green anarkali suit. So lost she was in her thoughts about the past that she didn't even notice when the clock struck 10 AM, it was a Saturday and as a tradition Rinki would visit the orphanage some 15 minutes away from their home. The door opened and a voice called out, "Im home honey!". Heer smiled as her little sister came in view, her long hair falling down her back in light waves, her dark brown eyes smiling at her sister excitedly.
"So your finally back, how did it go?" Heer asked getting up to heat the food for her sister. Rinki smiled and stood at the end of the sofa with her hands behind her back, moving her body from left to right, looking at Heer mischieviously. Glancing at Rinki suspiciously, Heer placed the food down on the table and stood with her hands on her hips, her eyebrow raised. Rinki walked forward and started whistling while taking out a letter from behind her back. Watching her sister's expression, trying really hard not to laugh at Heer's wide eyes and the way she twiddled with her thumbs. "Hmm...guess what this is di! Looks like someone got a letter...pretty important no?" Rinki said teasingly, stepping back when Heer moved forward, her hand reaching for the envelope.
Heer chased her sister around the living room and finally both fell on the sofa, laughing breathlessly. Heer looked at the letter in her hands, her nervous gulp audible in the silent room. She closed her eyes and breathed slowly, opening her eyes she pushed the letter in Rinki's hands and nodded her head to the letter. Shaking her head, Rinki opened the letter and read the content carefully. Within a minute she was done, staring up at her sister with wide eyes, a shake of her head made Heer sigh tiredly. "Di now you'll have to get up at 6 to get ready for your work and stay at the office till three! How in the world are you going to survive without me and my mastiness?" Rinki started to say as if delivering morbid news, shaking her head as if flooded with grief, the smirk on her lips though sang a different tune.
"Rinki you scared the **** out of me!! OMG!!! Rinks...im now officially working for the most happening magazine in the world, the most happening fashion house in the world, im working for the Real World-Real Designs aka RWRD" Heer spoke excitedly. Her sister smiled, for once Heer was happy and the thoughtful and stubborn Heer was gone and in her place, for a moment Rinki witnissed her old Di, the bubbly and sweet Heer that was now gone, just like the wind came and left, the day came and left to make room for the night. Rinki buried herself into the past, where the Maan's were still a happy go lucky family, and now she was left wishing that she had never made the mistake...the mistake that caused her family to crumble. But who was to blame really? Her mother that was always sad and depressed? Her father that was always busy with his work? Her sister that always hid herself behind the books? Or was it herself that she must blame? Just who? or rather what?
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Okay guys that was a small portion of the first part, next part will be Part. 1B and our main males will be introduced! 😃
This was actually more of an introduction of Heer and Rinki, and yea its me 😆 but dont worry main couple is always premeer, me and my "partner" in this ff are the masti added to the romance and masala that is premeer 😉😆
Okay blame Kimmu!! she was the one that said it should be me, i was planning on using another couple but she suggested it and i thought, "what the heck?" and so i came up in here 😳😃
ah now lets talk about comments! 😃 5+ before the next part is up! and you all should be rewarding me for posting this before my actual date of starting this!! 😆 ah i should be doing my english hw instead of this! 😆😆 anyway see you all with your comments later! muah!
Rinki
ps- important! any of you want to be on the PM list please tell me in your comment so i can know who to pm or if i have to remove the pm list and post something else there 😲🤔😆
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mera 5 replies kaam kargaya na??thank u so much for updating..n what to say...it was really nice..well it was like a intro so I guess it was short..and u added urself,that's good..so Prem is the boss of that fashion house??but I'm still wondering what blame u r talking about?is it already there in the FF or is it going to come up in the coming updates??sorry if the question is weird..looking forward to the next update..ab shuru ho jao..because replies r going to flow..

I want to be in the PM list..if u r doing it 😃..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesomreeeeeee too good waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome 👍🏼👏part. continue ASAP. if ur planning a PM list id like to be included
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was a great 1st part (well part of the first part)!!!
Lol, you in your FF, thats cool!
aweosme part!
cont. soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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