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Veer Ananya parts were ust awesomeeeeeeeee ..Pls. post the next part soon

hey i loved va scenes loved it do cont asap...

Hey Sweetgirl...😃...[ Ummm SowIe i Dunno Ur Name ] Read Ur full FF Yesterday...😛
MussHt Say that U hav a great Power Of Imagination...Superb Thinking !!!👍🏼

Loved the Concept of Starting the story from dV's Marriage...👏
Love after Marriage n Marriages widout Seeing each other is something true in History which u Kept in ur Mind and wrote this...Whoa! I'm Impressed!

Liked all VA and DS scenes...Specially that Knot One..😳

Please Update it Asap ! 😃


RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

great update liked da veer and ananya parts

hey i finally got time to read ur fic and i must say it is quite sweet. both the couples have been described well and its gr8 work.

Hey sweetzie..jus read the whole FF now..at one go..

Must say it's a simple yet rilli beautiful FF..

The way u write the dialogues..its jus sooooooo cute I mean I'm fida on em..

One complain..u incorporate only two to three scenes each time n the updates r sooo short..soniye ki kitta..bache ki jaan logi kya..I'm like goddddd….kya kar rahi hai yeh sweet pea…plzzzzzzzzz it's a sincere request..plzzzzzzzzz give longer updates from nxt time..em getting mad reading sooooo small updates which r written sooo beautifully…

All the prts left me like…ummm wantin for more..n u'r updates being short…plzzzzzzzzz give long updates yaar,…em dying to read em…

I loved the last VA scene n the time he actually is so angry that he wants to kick mohini out..n the last scene was outstanding..literally rilli soooo sweet..wonder whos this person who saw em both like this…

N I loved this line.. [he saw her n think in his mind how can anyone put a knot to ure lips but even if sum1 does onli i will open it no one else]

I'm like veer is getting soooo possessive n the way its written it looks as if veer knows only he can ever possess this beauty..she is all his……loved it…

Will give a lonnnnngggggg compliment later..gotta rush…

Happy Diwali shona…..

Love ya sweetie….t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

it was really lovely........and ofcourse romantic.......i'm curious to know what is mohini's plan.....and i hv a feeling, that the interrupter is either Dharam or Siya......😃

wow yaar

aw dear..lovely ff dear.....*clapssss 👏👏👏

Thanks for update after so long time. Its is as lovely n as sweetest as ur profile name. N am curious about Agni-Mohini-JV plan. Hope u will update soon