FF~just hold onto me-II series~part 7-page17 - Page 6

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome part! loved the bit on saree!great work hun!shiv in tears i am glad...LOL i am so evil

Originally posted by: madz786

hey fab prt

Originally posted by: Catwoman

wow what an update.... man the pain could be felt

 

love Kat

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

wowwww shiv is in guiltt goshh luvedd it n he asked aboutt SAREE silly mannn godddd well i like diz partttt feelingg reallyy veryy bad 4r gauri n aditi  bothhh HECK shivvvv 😡

 

saba

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

gr8 part...

pllz cont soon...

Originally posted by: atop

meri jaan tum taarif ke kaabil ho isliye kartyi hoon........haila oye kaisa ajeeb muskurati ho tum..hmmm oye hoye i can imagine u blushing hard haha ....oh yeshhh every writer can do but every writer does not have the same impact........oh hmm just my favourite pastime....hmm kisis ke liye nahi meri jaan wonder wat u must have imagined..it's just that kabhi kabhi achha lagta hai muje aisi poems likhna hehe.........but seriusly tum a[pne galon ko contriol mein rakho nhai toh u're family will thunk ki tumhare lappy mein aisa kya hai ki u smile so hard haha...chalo take care janna...

luv atop

Originally posted by: atop

hehehe shiv will be shiv lmao of all the things in the world he's got the question of sarree only hehe............hmm man can't live without her and can't live with her..he's one fickle soul ...accept kyun nahi karta that he loves her frn the bottom of the heart....uski har ada par toh woh fida hai .....i think it's just that being gauri his best freind he's not able to accept the afct.....chalo will wait for their stroies to meet again....as far as the flow is concerned am enjoying reading iut.....hmm poor baby gauri..abhi bhbi pink pehnti hai but u noe pink is indeed sweet hehe.....
luv u jaans for another beautiful update...

luv atop

Originally posted by: madz786

AWESOM PRT CONT SOON

Originally posted by: nihita

hehehe fAmily wont think nething....they are used to see my diff.exp.in front of comp.....hmmm i thought u must be writing poems fr ur bieu....hehehe...yAar kitni tareef karti ho...thAk nahi kyA....yAAr ab gaalon ko sAch mein control ki zArurat hai.......u too tAke cAre hun..

love

nihitA

hehe then it's fine.......ahem so they have become usd to it ..i wonder tum aur kaise express karti ho and wat else u have other than fic writing wen it comes to lappy hehe.......oye kudiye thand rakh me not that okies haha seriously don't believe in those wen it comes to myself hehe chal elave it.....nah re me healthy isliye doing so much taariff ,...baby u deserve it kya karoon control nhai hita..........haaan hawwwwwww take care of u'er cheeks haila log kya sochenge hmmm kya main tumhe love letter likhti hoon jo tum aise uncontrollably blush karti ho haha......okies u update soon hmm....

luv atop