Davia's FF: Krishna part 52 + note Pg 70 - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
hmm wonderfull parts
like it too muchhhhhhhhhhhhh
cont soon
pls
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 part
continue soon
liked the promo
let's see wat's gonna happen
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Posted: 17 years ago
i read it offline first... now back to comment...

i have a small question - will the kids ever stop being naughty...????? i dont think so... still...

so masi is seeing jai in all the kids... but she is not seeing bani... how strange!!!! doesnt she know her?
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey......
great ff yaar and cute also.......loved the kids sooooo much😛 especially our lil krishna......love her and miss her 2😔.....hope jai and bani will soon become jb😛......
plzzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey davs..

awesome.. so sorry i couldn't comment before.. just been really busy..
but i loved it.. hehe so glad that adi took kids home..
finally.. jai will be able to keep his kids with him.. or sometime.. argh.. davs.. you betta.. get jb together soon.. or u r going to have it.. hehe..

anyways.. aww i hope rano feels better..

and kids.. have full masti.. with that roshini and jigs.. hehe

continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey that wass good, but wheb JB to face to face, please update soon thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
whoaaa.. davs.. great part yaaar.. continue sooon.. bani stop being stubborn.. wait does jai noe bani lied???
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Posted: 17 years ago
grate part davs....
but the promos and preview part...never comes...i mean preview is different then the story...
but it was grate...cutie kids continue..
sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago

Note: thanks for the replies and please keep replying.. Silence readers are expected to break their silence.. If u want the ff to be continued

kyunki hum bachhe hain:

…Part 23….

the kids runs down the stairs shouting nanu nanu.. deko jai ne kya kiay hain and get shocked to see bhoot aunty there and says boot aunty aap nahi gayi.. she was like oh noo is this dream or truth .. the kids says bhoot aunty agayi agayi(come come) and jump climbing over the sofa jai was like oh noo but why shd I be scads when my cuties are here and smile and coolly says hi roshni massi notices a change in him ..and thinks jab se bachhe aye hain (from when the kids have come)something has changed inside him… he look much better than before .

roshni was like jai are u ok.. he says muje kay hua I am fine.. dekta nahi(cant u see) I am fit and fine and smile and says kids come let us go riding.. roshni do u want to accompany us and wrinks at kid and they wink back.. roshni was like oh noo in ke saat akeli.(alone with them?). no way.. says nahii I have work.. massi says beta javoo na jai aur bachhe itne pyar se bularahe hain(go na beta jai and kids are calling u with lvoe ).. chalo na.. anu comes down mein bhi avoongi kids says haan anu didi didii and jumps more and anu says not fair sofa itni din yahiin thi and I dint jump and u people are jumping even I willing jump and climbs and jumps saying wowow.. roshni was like anu.. u too she says haan aunty bahut mazaa araha hain u too join us haina and they too jump and jai laughs.. and says bus kids now come down varna adi will come and say even I want to jump and laughs massi was like jai bhi na ..

the kids says nanu nanu jump and jump down .. roshni w as like oh noo ye log yahan bhi.. massi se roshni beta too tum jarahi hoon na.. to go wit them.. she says nahi massi not today kisi aur din… pls.. massi jai says are roshni this is not fair u don't like to come with me.. but u wanted me to take u out.. now when I want to take out u r refusing.. massi seeing it says deka roshni he is ready to take u and why u r not going go beta… u will enjoy and the kids are really sweet and u wills surely will have nice time.. haina kids they says haan massii and smiles as jai calls her massi they too.. massi says itne pyaare hain.. and kisses them three.. and whiles kissing karan she sees him for few sec and study his face and sees it was the same eyes and nose .. and the cheecks chubby like her munna

roshni had no choice except to go with them.. she agrees and the kids get inside and the driver was driving he car .. karan sits with anu in front wearing the seat belt and plays with her karun and Krishna in-between jai and roshni.. all smiling krishna was like roshni aunty roshni aunty she was like kay hain.. do u like chocolate.. she says nahii and turns she says par I do like chocolate but this is not good pls throw it out and she says u do urself and she throws as roshni was making the glass down to throws the choo out she gets a call she stop and same time Krishna throws and the chocolate this the glass and falls back over roshni and spoils her sareee which as new.. and while wiping it as Krishna says sorry aunty

she wipes more her chocolate hand s over roshni's sareee … she was like meri a new hi sareee and cries .. jai giggles saying it is ur fault u shd have open the window properly so don't blame the kid take the water and clean it ands give and Krishna says are cap is not open and karun open it and the water falls over roshni as due to car shake and roshni as like meri din hii karaab haii my day is very baad … and says stop the car stop he car.. and the driver stops and in such a way that she jolts as she dint wear a seat belt and the chips from the back comes and falls over her and all over her head and she was like aahahahahah and get down and other calls her bhoot and runs away inth e road and she says ohh noo jai was on other hand controlling his smile ..

then she gets back into the car and says gahr .. the car pulls up in the house and roshni get down and come fast and goes to her room the kids jai and anu see each other and massi was not there and they smile and suddenly the get on and comes the song pappu can't dance salla from janaane tu jaane… the kids does the same action and they dance jai get into laughter.. and and sit down and shakes his hands with the kids and anu dace with karan …. karun was doings he dance too with tony… jigaysa who as sleeping comes down and get shocked as now half of the house was roshni button her shirt and comes down angrily and sees them dancing and says stopp it..

jigyasa was what happen and roshni tells it with extra fitting.. jigaysa .. was kya.. and turns and says jai bhiaya he says I was there and nothing happen as roshni sit sab was co incidence ta.. and roshni stop creating issue on it and says come on kids let us continue our dance in the car and they go back and all laugh.. roshni a and jigyasa fumes…

roshni says I said u about the kids rem .. they are the same kids.. she was like oh… and says see I will teach them lesson nai jig we will teach them together.. aur jai.. will hate the kids.. and sees each other.. and fumes .jai kids and anu was in the car singing and coolly going ride with he song like pappu can't dance sallla.. and dancing.. and was in cool mode.. driver was surprised to see jai liked hat.. enjoying with the kids like that… woo bhi pehli baar.. jai takes them ride… go for and they soo many dress and gets huge toys even anu shops teddy bears saying mummy never get it and get chocolate and ice-cream in the hands and eat and jai was ins super cool mood.. and was drinking chocolate shake and was laughing on anu silly jokes even.. as kids ask questions on it and smiles ..

jai was in the room putting the kids to sleep as it was late evening and kids was tired. he gets a call saying he was having a urgent meeting in office tom he says par he says it was just an 2 hr meetings he was like ok…

preview: roshni sit in the chair and feels something and all laugh

promo: ganpathy bappa moriya… jai aur bani ka milan hogaya ..

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey nice part ... kids are gr8 ... so masi is looking at similarities between her munna and karan ... not bad ... promo looks good and I hope it comes in next part ...

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