New FF: Parivaar aur Pyaar - Page 6

very nice too good prercap is also so sweet cant wait do update soon

OMG di ur rocking now....its awsome...i can't wait to c the next part when i'll get to read prem's response...its gonna be great..plzzzzzzz cont sooon.and thanks for the pm.

Part 10

Next day, Prem comes in the office just then

Heer: Gd morning sir

Prem: surprised to hear heer voice, first he though he was dreaming..but then he sees her..he says to her..heer how are you? You should have not come to work

Heer: no sir, I am feeling a little better..plus I have so much work to do…I couldn't miss more days

Prem: ok but don't stress too much

Heer is like ok sir…

In mean while heer sneezes a lot..Prem feels bad seeing her like this

Its meeting time so prem says you just stay here ill manage on my own ..

Heer: are you sure sir?

Prem: yes, if anyone calls just get messg ok

Heer is like ok

After few mins Priya comes and she sees that heer is there but prem is not there

Priya: where is prem?

Heer: sir is in meeting

Priya: she says howcome ure here? Aren't u suppose to be with him taking notes?

Heer: yes but sir offered to go on his own as I wasn't feeling well

Priya: you know he was right at first..you girls just want to work for name sake, you don't do anything just sit here..do you think prem is paying you to just sit? ( she is very angry and in secure as she was noticing that while heer was gone prem was just talking about her and paying less attention to her especially when prem mentioned to her that he will take heer out on dinner as thank you gift)

Heer: no I am doing work

Priya: ya ya youre just sitting here, you are such low class girl..i cant believe I once thought that you are a nice girl…stealing other's men…

Heer: is like what are you talking about..?

Priya: don't be so innocent…you are the one who wants to do to dinner with him..you little B****…I don't know what your sister taught you…

Just then heer says you don't have any right to say anything about my sister…don't u dare…

Priya: calm down..i am the boss you are just an employee..so stay that way…understand and keep out of Prem..

Just then prem comes back in cabin but he didn't heard anything and he says priya you are here..i was in a meeting

Heer can't control her tears so she goes to bathroom

Prem is like what happen to her

Priya: I don't know ( she doesn't say anything to him)

Priya leaves

After few mins heer comes back but she is still sad and teary but continues her work

Prem notices that heer is not talking much as usually she talks a lot

So he looks up he sees that she is crying..

Prem comes to her and ask heer wat happd?

Heer is like nothing..i just got something in the eye

Prem doesn't really believe but lets her go he feels bad…

Heer comes to him and says sir I haven't eaten anything can I go get some lunch, I will just take 15 mins..

Prem is like oh im sorry..ill come along with you

Heer is thinking if he goes with me then priya will again insult me..

Heer is like no sir..you should not come..ill get lunch for you too

Prem is like ok…

When heer leaves prem feels it is someone who said something to heer and he wants to find out who did that…

Precap: prem notices priya behavior towards heer but he never takes it seriously until one day he listens to what priya said to heer and neither of them knew that prem was listening to their conversation..

wow great update....really love ur FF........i like the way the story goes...ur doing a great job........plz do continue soon........

ur amazing pls continue soon.....

2 things too say!

ONE: those were both amazing parts and i loved them both, and the precap for the next part sounds really exciting and can't wait to read. . .

& 2

thank you sooo much for posting your next parts so quick, everytime i come on i see your next part up and rsh over to read!!!!!

Please continue soon!
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Sunayna

wowvery nice yaar cant wait to read more do contsoon

Its an Awesome FF i love all your parts and they are so addictive i really cant wait for the next part

pls cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

-Axita

You are seriously a great writer! Every part that you have written so far contain real talent! I hope you continue soon, will be waiting eagerly!

Part 11

It has been two months, and prem noticed that heer is not her usual self. She doesn't talk much, doesn't laugh like before, don't tell jokes basically she is now very quiet. He felt like there is something she is not telling him. He even invited her to dinner but she kindly refused.

Prem also noticed that Priya became very possessive about him, she calls him everyday and she tries to meet him everyday..Prem didn't took that serious until one day.

It was Thursday around 11 am.. prem was busy in a meeting and preet was going to come to prem office so prem told heer that you stay in my cabin so that you show preet around the office while I am in a meeting and preet already knows about this. So heer was like ok sir I will do that…

Preet comes and he sees heer…

Heer: gd morning sir, how can I help you? ( heer hasn't met preet before)

Preet: I am preet, prem's brother

Heer: oh yes yes, sir is in meeting but I can show you around.

Preet: sounds good..

Heer is showing preet around just then priya comes there and she sees heer with preet and no prem there..

Priya: what are you doing here? How many times I have to tell you that prem hired you to work not to walk around

Heer: mam, I am showing preet sir around..

Priya: oh hi preet, You don't know these girls, they just don't do their work..i don't know where these low class comes from..havent her sister taught her anything

Heer is like this is enough..i am showing him around because that is what prem sir told me..and beside you are not the boss he is…and don't you dare say anything about my sister..atleast she has taught me how to respect other people unlike you ..you just blame me and insult me and you know wat you think that I am interested in your bf..if I was I would not be scared of you..and for your kind information I am single and I plan to be single for a while..

(heer just lost her control and she is like this enough..she has crossed the line)

All this talking, prem also heard..but neither of them knew that prem also heard this..but priya saw prem first…

Priya: Look prem, this is how your PA talks to me

Preet was all looking at what just happed and he was so angry at priya..Preet is like priya you are the wrong one..heer was just doing what Prem Bhaiya told her to do and you just came out of no where and start insulting her..this is not rite PB…( looking at PB)

Heer is crying and she wants to leave from there

Priya: don't go anywhere..who told you to leave..actually why don't you leave this job if you cant do the work

Heer: you know what you are right..i should leave..and let me tell you something I am not going to leave because I am scared of you..i don't like to work in place where my boss's gf doesn't give me respect and thinks that I am going to steal him..

Prem: ok stop all this…heer meet me in my cabin…and priya I need to talk to you too…

Prem is thinking that it was priya that told heer and made her cry and still now she insulted heer because of no reason..he needs to do something about priya…

Preet comes to prem and tells him that PB you need to watch out..heer was not at fault and Priya came out of no where and started insulting..i am proud of heer that she answered back..so don't fire heer…think about it…

Precap: Heer will comes to prem and say that if you are not happy with my work then I will leave, I don't like to work here and get blamed by your gf for something which I did not and I am not planning to do..so either you calm you gf and tell her to butt out of my work or I will leave the job…