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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav



😆 Everyone is so excited for the next chapter. What do u guys expect from me ? I hope I wont mess up Thankkk Uuu 😳 And you better post your VM ! Am waiting urja :(

Lots of pyaar :)


Yaar thodi si gap le rahi hu next vm banane ke liye. Cuz samjhawan vm didnt get too many views. I uploaded too quickly...dnt worry i have everything ready for the next vm. Its a short one but hope u will like it..its a spcl one though ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Khush kar ditta tussi! What n amazing update so romantic n naughty...and thanks for always updating so quickly! Cant wait!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the chapter. Finally they are back to there cute talks, by the way cute se yaad aaya how do you manage to make the update cute yet romantic yet adorable yet beautiful??? His teasing was the cutest and show mei bhi sumo ko tease karte hue kapil bohot cute lagta hai. And yeah my fav romantic place is going on a simple lonely beach in the middle of night along with some one special (kappu) and walking on water hand in hand is amazing yet romantic.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 27

Sumona POV

Wearing my red long maxi skirt and a white top with my red laced white colored net dupatta set on my left shoulder I wore my sandals and walked downstairs.

"Arey wah ! Kahan jaa rahi hai meri beti sach dhaj ke ?" dad asked and I hugged him.

"Papa pehle batao toh mein kaisi lag rahi hoon ?" I asked holding my skirt and smiling.

"Bohot pyaari hamesha ki tarah"

"Woh kappu aaraha hai mujhe lene. . "

"Accha toh jiju ke liye itna saji ho aap kya baat hai di. . Love is in the air huh !" Rohan My younger brother winked at me and I glared at him.

"Kal se tu yehi kar raha hai na !"

"Haan meri di ko pyaar hua hai yaar woh bhi mere all time favorite insan se. . Imagine Kapil bhai finally mere jiju banjayengey ! He will be a part of our family. How cool is that. ."

Yeah but what would I call him after marriage. I have never seen mum calling dad by his name so. . I will just use 'Aji suntey ho ? Nai. . Guddi ke papa or. . Wait What ?! Whats wrong with you Sumona ? I might have looked stupid whilst controlling my laughter as dad gave me a confused look. I tell you love can make you insane ;)

"Woh toh hai saaley sahab " I quickly turned around as soon as his voice hit my ear only to hold my breath. Gosh ! Black pehen ne ki kya zaroorat thi ? Ab kaise apni nazrein tumse hata kar kahin aur dekhungi ?

"Mein toh chahta hi yehi hoon ke tum puri attention sirf aur sirf mujhe do baby " I blinked as he whispered in my ear and walked passed.Was I thinking that loud ? So embarrassing sumona !

"Kaise hai aap sasurji. . "

"Mein toh bohot khush hoon aur aap damadji ?" Typical Sasur-Damad ki jodi :)

"Fit and fine. . Aur yeh maa ne gulab jamun bhijwayein hai aap sab keliye aur especially saaley sahab aap keliye aapke favorite hai na. " He handed the plastic bag to Rohan who was immensely happy hugging Kapil.

"Chalo beta ab dono niklo jaldi jaana aur wapas der se aaogey to bhi chalega" Papa stated patting Kapil's shoulder grinning. Hamesha normal fathers ko yeh kehte suna hai- Jaldi wapas aajana zyada der mat karna : |

"Wah ! Dunya ke best waley father in law ho aap toh Thank U" He hugged papa who laughed.

"Bas bas ab aur maska mat laga chalo jao abhi"

Finally after biding good byes we sat in the car and drove off.

"Waise hum ja kahan rahey hai ?"

"Tumharey saath kisi naaley ke paas bhi baith jaoun na toh switzerland wali feeling aayegi. . Yeh har baar khoobsurat dikhne ka theka le rakha hai kya tumne ?" Thank God. I honestly spent 1 hour+ just to earn a compliment form him. I told you love makes u insane !

"Hum seriously kisi naaley ke paas toh nahi baithne waley na ?" He laughed. Silly question I know but anything to see him laugh.

"Nahi yaar. . Chalo tumhe pata chal jayega " He said looking at the road ahead.

And I rest my head back on the seat. My eyes refusing to move away from his face. He is a normal person like anybody & every single human has few flaws but him. I tried to find few in him too but I just don't see a single flaw in him. How is it possible ? Is love really blind ?

" Hogaya taadna (staring) toh ek baat puchoun ?" I quickly looked away. Embarrassment !

"Haan. . Pucho"

"Tumhe aur waqt chahiye kya ? shaadi ke baremein soncha hai ? I mean take ur time but I really want to spend every single minute with you. . "

A/N

Ah! Kappu finally talks about the marriage topic ! So will they get married or yet another kebab mein haddi ?! Find it out in the next chapter:)

Lots of Pyaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Abhi abhi entry ki IF mei and found your update. Mera toh din ban gaya yaar with this update. Anyway coming back to the awesome update i liked how kapil entered in his sasural with the fav things of his saale saab after all he is one and only to these type of things. And i really doubt that kappu will sit near a naala and top of all with her, i mean yuck waali smell aati hai na wahaa isliye!! And lastly shaadi wala topic!! Hope ki she gets ready without any nskhraas!! And dear now i think you should update soon. Waiting for the next part!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update... m hoping is baar bina kisi haddi k kabab bn jae... 😉 waiting for sumo ka jawaab
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Posted: 9 years ago
O teri kya baat charo taraf khusi ka mohaul ... Not bad han
I am loving it 😉
Awsome update maza hi agya
Ab agle ka intezaar nhi ho rha
Please do update it soon
Love you :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapters 28 & 29 !

No more waits I am posting both the chappies together ! Its LONGGG !

Sit back & Enjoy

Chapter 28

"Tumhe aur waqt chahiye kya ? shaadi ke baremein soncha hai ? I mean take ur time but I really want to spend every single minute with you. . . " Sweet kahin ka. But I agree with him. It's time we talk about this.

I hugged his arm and resting my head on his shoulder I said

"I am ready to marry the best man on the Earth anytime anywhere Kappu " He was happy and the sign was his kiss on my forehead. These forehead kisses always trigger something in me but the kiss we had in the morning. Damn ! That just gave me such a strong feeling. I can feel my cheeks burning just the thought invokes so much. With a smile I snuggled closer and we had a little more of discussions.

Kapil POV

We finally reached the destination and I opened her side of the door. Nope don't expect expensive hotel mein dinner date. I wanted it simple. I hope she likes it. . .

"So damn beautiful it is ! " She said grinning widely. Really ? Just a table In the middle of the beach, Few petals on the sand, Lights and curtains and the sky a mixture of orange,yellow, blue and white. She finds this so beautiful ?

" Sach mein ? "

"Arey ? Ab tumhe naaley ke paas Switzerland wali feeling aasakti hai toh mujhe itne khoobsurat beach wali date pe awesome wali feeling nahi aasakti " And I frowned. Yeh abhi bhi waisi hi hai ? I mean loving the little things around and trying to express her appreciation and joy when I do small things for her.

"Oho! Chalo na ab " She held my hand and we walked towards the table. There were 4 different dishes kept covered. One by one she uncovered them. Her favorite Pani puri, Pav Bhaji , Pulao and Rasgulle. Nothing compared to those expressions she gave me with the happiest smile ever as if I just gifted her some treasure. Hota toh woh bhi iske naam kardeta. .

" How sweet ! Seriously, kitne din hogaye yeh sab nahi khaya meine. ." She took the panipuri first and brought it near to my mouth. I was about to eat it when she ate it.

I frowned " Badtameez kahin ki " and she laughed.

After a long time we had a conversation which included no topic in particular yet too many things. A talk which I missed during all these years. We relived all those memories. Her smile, her laughter, her voice, her crazy faces when I irritated her. God, I still cant believe you have created this lady with so much of perfection.

Chapter 29.

29 ! Ending the story 'A Walk Back In The Past' with an odd number again.

Kapil POV (continued)


After filling our stomachs with the delicious food we sat on a stone near to the sea and our legs played with the water. It feels complete when she is in my arms. I was hugging her from behind with a soft blanket wrapped around us and we tried to find out what things or living beings stars made in the dark sky.

"See there. . Is it an elephant. . No I guess rabbit " she asked pointing somewhere in the sky and my eyes stayed glued on her.

"Hmm. ." She frowned and looked at me.

"Kya Hmm ? " And I kissed her nose.

" Yaar tum red mein sach mein bohot hi zyada acchi lagti ho. .wapas ghar jao na toh apni nazar zaroor utarwalena. . . Meri lagi hogi " I said honestly and she smiled resting her head on my shoulder whilst I bend a little to place small kisses on her neck every now and then only to feel those changes in her body.

But what made me smile against her skin was the fact that I found the weak spot on her neck. I kissed there again and she shivered again.

"Please. .stop. . " She mumbled but it was too late. I was lost in her. Her soft skin felt so amazing that I wouldn't mind kissing her all night and day. I caressed the area with my lips and her grip on my hand tightened.

Sumona's POV

He will seriously kill me with this. My hands stopped playing with his when he made me hold a bunch of red roses. I looked at him and smiled. He leaned closer and laid a gentle kiss on my forehead. We sat properly as he stated his list of promises.

"Promise me" He pointed at one rose.

"What ?"

"Promise me that this time you won't leave me and disappear"

"I promise. I won't "

"Promise me you will not break up with me without a strong reason"
He pointed at the next rose. He continued doing so till he reached the last white rose in the midst of all red ones.

" I promise I wont "

"I promise to spend rest of my life with you Now promise me the same"

"I promise "

"I promise to take care of you and always try and make u happy "

"I promise the same "

"And. . "

"And ?"

"Tumhe toh pata hi hai but still kehdeta hoon. . . I love you & I will love you till this white rose dies" I was confused at first but when I touched the white rose I realized it was made of plastic that means it wont die until & unless someone breaks it. Aw !

I immediately wrapped my arms around his neck and hugged him tight which made us fall back on the cold sand. Such a sweetheart he is !

" I love you bohot saara Kappu " He rolled us on the sand and we completely spoiled our clothes laughing crazily. Seems like happiness is back.

Now the puzzle is solved and I see a beautifully bright future waiting for us and me waiting to change my surname ASAP ! Mrs Sumona Sharma. Ah, How perfect it sounds !

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Kapil Sumona the names always taken together as if it's actually a single soul of two different people. . . In short, Our KaSum forever :)

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A/N

Umm . . Do I need to say it ?

You guys know that I love you all right ?!

Yeah ur smile says you know :) And If u don't - I Lub U All because you all are amazing :*

Keep smiling and shining like Our Kappu and Sumo. Stay Happy bros ;)

Thank you to each and everyone for encouraging & being sweet to me always . I really appreciate it :)

Will surely be back with something new till then Astala Vista =)

Lots of _ _ _ _ _ ( Aapko toh pata hi hai ; ) Karlena fill in the blanks ! )

*Hugs & Kisses*

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

A/N

Umm . . Do I need to say it ?

You guys know that I love you all right ?!

Yeah ur smile says you know :) And If u don't - I Lub U All because you all are amazing :*

Keep smiling and shining like Our Kappu and Sumo. Stay Happy bros ;)

Thank you to each and everyone for encouraging & being sweet to me always . I really appreciate it :)

Will surely be back with something new till then Astala Vista =)

Lots of _ _ _ _ _ ( Aapko toh pata hi hai ; ) Karlena fill in the blanks ! )

*Hugs & Kisses*

O my god what a beautiful ending kasum made for each other and mrs sumona sharma actually sounds good😳
Reading your chapters always makes me grin ek bhi line aisi nhi hoti jb mere chehre pe smile na hoti ho
I'll missyou 😭
Tum kb wapas aaogi apni agli story k sath bta do na ?😭

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