OS l MYSELF... l - Page 3

Originally posted by: reykriya21

awesome work razzz🤗thnk u so much shan🤗

really great thoughts👏👏 so glad u liked it😳

it was very peaceful when i was reading the whole OS really i felt peace reading ur comment😊

the way u portrayed Kiya's thoughts were just speechless👍🏼 aww thnk u so much😳

OMG in that situation too, she s thinking abt her KD right??😳 hehe yup afterall he is a major part of her life😳

very beautiful😉 thnk u soo much😳

just loved it😃😃 so glad u did😃

update ur next KiSha work soon waiting for it😉😆 hehe will try to update soon😆

thanks for pm dear mst wlcm dearo😳

love uu😊😊😊 love ya too🤗

Originally posted by: crazydesiboy

awsome

Originally posted by: joshyalbinaAlBz

oh god itz really heart touching.. aww thnk u so much😳
really emotional... closely felt kiya's feeling.. so glad u did😊
awesum work yaar👏...hats off!!! thnk u soo soo much albz😳

Originally posted by: arshifan2012

razz! Love u for this! U deserve a huge comment so im RES-ing it now! Will unres at night!

UN-RESWA!!!😉😉

OMG! This was a master piece... omg can't tell u how happy i m to hear this!!! <3

you portraited kiya's emotions so beautifully... aww really ...? thnk u so much 😳

neither did her character loose her elegance nor did you drag it...👏👏 seriously , omg i am so glad this was the thing i was most worried about , i really didn't wanted it to OOC , and i m so happy it didn't *hugs*

awsome piece of writing... thnk u so much zoyu <3

poor kiya...thinking that people doesn't love her...😭😭 i always felt bad for her😭

KD...she misses him sooo much...😭😭 i knw wish they get back together soon :)

kisha...😳😳 yup😳😳

and you say that i am a good one...geez your far better than me...and that just makes me soo happy...😃👏 aww its jst so sweet of u to say that , but dearo i m no better than u , u jst make me fall into love with ur work , gosh i can't ever exprees the emotions as u do 👏 but really this meant a lot to me🤗

you gotta me pm me your other works or else i am gonna stalk you...😉😆 hehe i will defo pm u my works , and stalking lolz i am ready for it😆😆

im serious...😆😆😆 so am i😆😆😆

continue to write more...and i would love to read more too...😳😳 will defo write more and with such comments , i would love to write more <33😳

thanks again!!!!!! i should thnx u for this lovely comment zoyu🤗

Originally posted by: Aditi_4ver

Rasi!! 🤗 Addu🤗
Sry fr late comment!! 😭 kahan gayaab thi itne dino se !!

Great minds think alike!! haha they really do😉😆
Even I feel Kiya feels lyk dis frm d inside! 😊 glad u felt that <3
U showed how she feels... yup 😳
It ws lyk Kiya Gujral ws telling dis n d "cold beach" part in the start ws like icing to a cake/ cherry on top of a chocolate ice cream! 😛 omg yummy😆 glad u liked it <3
Kiya does deserve luv frm her family... i knw she does😭😭
Mrs G isn't a good mom... for sure😡
Wen Anya ws famous, she pampered her so muj n she ignored Kiya... 😡
Nw dat Kiya is famous, she's ignoring Anya... 😡
N dats not fair!! 🤬
Both of dem r her daughters n dey both shud hav an equal share of luv frm her... i knw she is jst a gold digger , let it be 😡

Super cool OS!! 😎 thnk u so much addu , so glad u liked it🤗

Originally posted by: safi_kisha

Hey...yipee finally my afru is here🤗
I luved it razzzie... really so glad u did😳
I think u hv captured the exact totz of kiya... omg thank u so much😃
my hvnt u grown as a writer?? really u feel so😲
I luved the way u took the kiya gujral to the beach... i always wanted her to go to the beach and have her thinking mode on!! <3
wer she doesnt care abt her dress or nythin... she is so different on inside!
this is wad i want to be shown in the show as well... ohh me too!!
so nycly penned down...her emotions..her feelings... aww thnk u so much afru <3
my im speechless... oh gosh afru , i can't tell u how happy i am to get compliments from u🤗
My lappy is havin sum major prob so i hv tried to comment frm my cell... aww for me <3
sry for the late comment... atleast u commented😆 no probs yaar , btw i update my kisha ff also😆🤗
love
Ur
afru

Originally posted by: Adry

Razziee!!!!🤗Enna🤗

So i'm here at your insistence 😆 i love troubling my dearos😉😆

I just read Mugs ka OS and then yours...dono hi itne angsty hain!!! seriosly angsty !!😲

Though this is still a bit lighter... hehe relief !!

You just mentioned most of the reasons why i love Kiya!!! The rich lonely girl trying to make an identity for herself... gosh i feel the same about her feelings😊

she is so dependent on KD!!! Its like he is the one who defines everything that happens in her life... somewhat somewhere he does <3😳

There were so many awesome lines in this one...thought i'd mention a few... really so glad u mentioned this *hugs*

"be alone in a place where no one can reach to this heart , where no one will gain and then broke my trust !!"

"i felt alive being with him , the feel of anger , the feel of getting hurt , that feel made me remember that i wasn't just a puppet for showcase" hayeee!!! My shipper heart was on an overdrive at this point😆 aww these r my favorites also <3 so glad u liked it !!😳

"i don't wanted to be a chameleon who will get lost in a surrounding , but more like a lioness or you can say a dinosaur who wouldn't get unnoticed by anyone !! " The comparisons here are too good yaar...!!! hehe i really dnt knw where dis came from , but i loved this line the most from my os <3 and so glad u did too !!!

And the ending...

"yes i was scared to be 'myself '..." DEEP!!!👏 Enna i am soo glad i reminded u , dearo thank u soo much for commenting 🤗 i didn't felt it complete witout ur comment <3 , now comment on my ff also , i have to update next chappy😆