MiChi OS| Caramel Chocolate Toffee. - Page 5

Originally posted by: Mais

Haww! You didn't know that I wrote?! I wrote looong before jumping into avi business 😆 And trust me honey, i can't do many stuff! But sentiments understood! Thank you sooo much! 😳

Originally posted by: coolpixie

Curse you Mais!!! For being such a great writer!!! I'd take that as a compliment 😆

I was so happily sailing on my vichi ship, but no, you had to come along and ruin it..

Because now I am divided on both the ships, and you know how uncomfortable it is to sail like that?

Well, let me tell you, it is very uncomfortable!!! :/
I feel ya Pix! I myself am super confused as to who to ship MORE! 😕 But guess that's life 😎 Enjoyzzz le! 😉

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hahaha..😉

okay! back to reality and let me tell you, this was just so Amazing, lady!!!! Thankies! 😳

After the previous vichi one you did, this one is definitely taking the next spot on my list!!!:)) Haila!!

Or actually, both might be just about tied! confused soul 😛

You just add that little something to your writing, that I can't help but feel the warmth and emotions the characters themselves are feelings. I'm glad people think that way...real life is all about these small emotions anyway 😳

and Thanks to you, now I'm lattoo over both michi and vichi!!! That makes me happy!

This os was just so adorable! <3

And I'm totally loving the bond between both nonu and the special toffee owner <3 I want to see it MORE and MORE!!

Although, It also kind of reminded me of the times ranveer gave chocolates to panchi to appease her..hahah..and she always accepted it! Once a RaHi fan, always a RaHi fan. This part of your comment made me cry Pix 😭 I miss my RaHi! 😭😭
I was thinking in my head, Panchi, you know you want it! And, I was so glad when in the end she did accept it..That part was super adorable! <3 The guy was defending a TOFFEE! A simple TOFFEE! Who wouldn't accept his gift? 😳

All in all, loved it!

P.s. I actually don't curse you! haha;)

Instead lots of hugs..🤗
Love ya back! 😳

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

I don't like toffeee...but how I wish main Panchi ki jagah hoti...why do you do this yaar..😆

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

Remember you once told me that you can't stand cheesy stuff? What the pyjama was this then huh?😆 This is called "Classy Cheesy". Okay, it's not CHEESY! This is cutesy! Cheesy is something else! 😲

Dude, tu ekdam meri tarah softie ho gayi hai! You know I'm on a hiatus from IF and don't come here often due to my exams next month, but when I did come and read this, I couldn't help myself and I simply HAD to comment. What the bloody pyjama is the matter with you!? 😲 I ALWAYS WAS A SOFTIE!! 😡 Tu na, pagal hogayi hai cuz of exams! Yeah, I like to write angsty stuff more doesn't mean I'm not a softie...i'm a very sensitive person 😭 and don't challenge me gurl, I might end up writing something super angsty on them 😎

I did say that I was the neutral party but you know what? I'm turning into an Omi (MiChi) fan😆 And you my dear, have contributed to that like crazy. I was majorly gaga over the whole toffee thing from day 1, but after reading this, I couldn't help but squeal like an absolute fan girl. I made you squeal! 😳 I like both the guys and both ships equally so I'm in a pretty safe zone! Instead, I'd make people go crazy by making them lean towards one side then the other 😎 pure evil genius! 😈

I simply loved the way Omi defied what his head told him to do and went straight over to where she was to ask what was wrong with her. Woh toh pehle se hi dil ka bohot major softie hai yaar. I love him😳 AND he called her 'Nonu'; Yes, I'm aware that he used to add a 'bodyguard' at the end of it, but him simply calling her 'Nonu' and not her actual name was so adorable! I swear, Omi has lost it! He really doesn't know ANYTHING about girls! 😆 Speaking of which, I loved the beginning sentence, the 'fantasizing over girls' anatomy and dealing with them were two completely different things!' 🤣 See, Omi can't resist her! She just pulls him towards her! It's more of a "meant to be thing" you see 😉 He doesn't always add bodyguard in the end, he called her "Nonu" in the cafeteria scene which earned him that one LOOK which totally scared him 🤣 And I owe Omi's fantasies about anatomy to Avi who had hinted that Omi watches English Movies...bina dialogues wali 😉

I love how he is totally rustic in a manner of dealing with people and she doesn't see all that at all! That's Panchi for you, Omi, get used to it! 😃 No way man! She just needs to keep surprising him That's the beauty of it, ne?

Woah. Panchi saying NO to a toffee? That was something major! 😆 But you know, I really liked the way you didn't really delve into what was bothering her in the first place but actually worked around how HE dealt with what was bothering her. 😃 Panchi is more of a chocolate girl na...toffees are something special 😳 Honestly, I had no idea what was bothering Panchi but I really didn't want to explore that anyway! Kya wohi same sob stories? So yeah, he just went there and tried cheering her up without being privy. See! RESPECT! 😃

And THIS. THIS is what had me rolling on the floor. I mean, it was a little OOC but in a way I could actually imagine Omi saying all that to Panchi, and no one else:

'"Ye na! Mamooli toffee nahin hai. Badi special hai! Caraamel flavor hai aur iske andar chocolate hai. Sirf naam ka chocolate nahin, ke banda khaye aur chocolate ek second mein hi khatam hojae! Asli chocolate hai...jo ke chalta jae, chalta jae...chaltaaa jae!" He said passionately and as he said it, he felt the very taste of chocolate mixed with caramel which he had just described to her. How could she say no to something like this?!'

THE GUY WAS DEFENDING A TOFFEE!! It's not a small thing Chocs! That's the beauty of this guy! Yeah, a bit OOC but it sold, ne? 😛

Omi is one hell of an adorable character. He gave her his favourite toffee! HOW many guys do that?! I want an OMI!!!! 😆 True that!

It was so halka-phulka and it warmed my heart right to its very core. I really for one minute wished we had MiChi and not RaHi. 😆 THAT is how much I loved it. Hayyeee, main marr jawannn! 😳 OH EM JEE! This made you forget RaHi?! 😲 Honestly, if CVs aren't serious about RaHi...at least give us something as good as them with Panchi 🥱 it's not like we are asking the universe

Brilliant ending, BRILLIANT ending! It just goes to show that he makes her forget all her sorrows with just a simple gesture. And to be honest, Panchi needs that in her life! 😳 +1!

And yeah, that day he didn't actually kill the guy who forgot to refill his pocket with extra toffees. Instead, he went to him and hugged him, leaving him bewildered. Because if it hadn't been for him, he wouldn't have gotten the chance of sharing his special Caramel Chocolate Toffee with his Special Little Lady.

...or Nonu as he loved to call her.

Kudos Maisy! Loved this piece to bits! You've started to make me restless. I want to write an OS on these two! 😳

-Chocs.

Aaah! Chocs! 🤗

Originally posted by: KunwarKiDeewani

haha, Sachi i was unaware how dumb of me-.-
Chalo, atleast on IF whatever you do turns out be SEXAAY! 😳
And you are always welcom Hun. ;*

Originally posted by: Mais

Hayee! Sexaay? 😳

Originally posted by: KunwarKiDeewani

Haha Yes Maisy, Sexxay it is always! 😳

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

I agree with Chocs.I loved Rahi but Ranveer is behind Rukkmini now😆 And besides, the WAY OMI SAYS PANCHI'S NAME AND WAS LOOKING FOR HER!!! gaaah I'm having MiChi feels now *hides*😆