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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note: Dis is also a sequel to 'AmBy OS: Date And Confession' n here is its link here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79382024 .


Piddhi logs in his Facebook account. Among his buddies, he only sees Samar online, he gets angry wid Samar for not teln him abt der NYP kiss which he got to know 4m Bobby on der date dis evening. He clicks on Samar's chat box suddenly n starts typing sumthn.

Pratham: Abey oye Nawab ke bacche, chal baahar nikal. Main tujhe aaj nahi chhodunga. Saara ka saara karate tere uppar nikaal dunga.

Samar gets puzzled @ Piddhi all of a sudden teln him all dis.

Samar: Piddhi Janab, kya ho gaya aapko? Aap humse naraaz q hai? Aur apne lappy se to baahar nahi nikal sakte na.

Pratham: Tune mujhse ye baat q chhupaayi ki party me hum dono ne ek-doosre ko kiss kiya tha?

Samar got shocked thinking abt d kiss.

Samar: Dekhiye Janab, hum aapko bata dete to aap ye sadma bardaasht nahi kar paate the. Jab hume pata ki umne aapko kiss kiya hai to hume bahot muh dhona pada.

Pratham: Par main to muh nahi dho paya na? Agar aaj Bobby muje humaare date pe ye baat nahi bataati to hume pata hi nahi chalta tha.

Samar: Bobby ne aapko ye baat aapke aur unke date pe bataayi? Kya baat hai, Janab? Chaliye video-chat pe aaiye.

PraMar opens d FB video-chat. Piddhi gets shy on hearing wat Samar asked.

"Arey, aap to Sharma rahe hai, bbataaiye na baat kya hai?" asked Samar.

"Aaj …aaj …aaj…," Piddhi is unable to say as he is getn shy.

"Aap 'aaj…aaj…aaaj…' karte karte kal bataayenge kya?" ased Samar.

"Aaj hum dono couple ban gaye. Humne ek-doosre ko ek saath 'I Love You' bola," said Piddhi happily.

"Ye to bahot khushi ki baat hai. Hume poori baat bataaiye," said Samar happily n excitedly.

Piddhi tells him evrythng. Samar gets very happy for Piddhi.

"Piddhi, teri to nikal padi yaar," said Samar in his original accent.

"Kya Samar? Tere Royal language se tu kabhi kabhi original language pe aa jaata hai. Achha ye bata ki tera aur Juhi ka kya haal hai?" asked Piddhi.

"Kya bataaye Piddhi Janab. Hum Juhi Sahiba ko bahot miss kar rahe hai. Hum dono ek-doosre se kaafi door hai. Hum yaha Switzerland me aur vo vaha Nagpur me. Par hum roj ek-doosre se bahot baatein karte hai. Ab to hum dono ne ladkiyan dekhne ka fizul kaam b band kar diya hai. Hume apni-apni girlfriends se loyal rehna chahiye," said Samar.

"Aap thik keh rahe hai Nawab Sahab. Bird-watching to bekaar ki cheez thi. Usse jyaada important apni-apni girlfriends aur humaare buddies hai," said Piddhi.

"Hum aap sabko bahot miss karte hai. Vaha ka kya haal hai?" asks Samar.

"Jaise ki maine pehle tuje kaha tha ki KD bhai aur Kiya firse buddies ban gaye hai aur KD bhai aur Ranveer ka b patch-up ho gaya hai. Humaare naye dost Avi, Omi, Rukmini aur Avantika bahot ache hai. Tu, Juhi aur Bobby b yaha hote to aur achha rehta tha," said Piddhi.

"Us Ruby ne to hum buddies me daraar laa diya tha. Agar vo Kiya Sahiba ka MMS na failaati vo KD Janab k cell se to baat itna jyaada nahi bigadti thi. Usne Kiya Sahiba se badla lene k liye itni giri huvi hrkat ki aur hum sab kuch kar b nahi paaye," said Samar disappointedly.

"Ek chance hai us Ruby ko sabak sikhaane ka," said Piddhi.

"Kaisa chance?" asked Samar.

"15 din baad humaare school reunion ki party hai to udhar Ruby b aayegi. To hum uski mother-sister 2gthr kar denge. Gaad daalenge, faad daalenge, ukhaad daalenge," said Piddhi.

"Aap thik keh rahe hai. Hum uski haalat kharab kar denge. Khud ladki hokar usne doosri ladki k saath aisa ghatiya harkat kiya hai. Hum use sabak sikhaane ka ye mauka haat se nahi jaane denge," said Samar.

"Ranveer aur Panchi humaare college k best singers hai aur KD bhai aur Kiya humaare college k best dancers hai. Yaad hai na in chaaron ne APC qualification k time pe jabardast performance se Banga ki khade khade pungi baja di thi," said Piddhi.

"Ye to bahot achhi baat hai ki ye chaaron college me b chhaa gaye. Royal Academy ab kitna lucky hoga Banga k bina. Kaash hum b utna lucky hote the. Hum aap sabse milne k liye bahot beshabri se intezaar kar rahe hai khaas karke humaari Juhi Sahiba ki. Hum party me bahot enjoy karenge," said Samar.

"Parso Bobby firse Pune k liye chali jaayegi aur next week aayegi par aaj main bahot khush hu ki muje meri Bobby mil gayi," said Piddhi wid mixed emotions.

"Bhagwan aap dono ki jodi banaaye rakhe," said Samar.

"Bhagwan teri aur Juhi ki b Jodi banaaye rakhe," said Piddhi.

"Aapne abhi State Level Karate Tournament me bronze medal jeeti hai. Ab aap silver ya gold medal jeetne ki taiyaari keejiye," said Samar.

"Jarur taiyaari karunga. Bas aap sabka best wishes mere saath rahe," said Piddhi, "College me b Jaitley Sir aakar bahot achha kiya nahi to hum buddies ko kabhi akkal nahi aati thi."

"Hume Jaitley Sir ki b bahot yaad aati hai. Unhone hum sabko bahot prerna dekar hume sahi raasta dikhaaya tha," said Samar.

"Prerna?" asked Piddhi in horror.

Samar facepalms himself in shock n explains, "Arey Piddhi Janab. Hum ladki ki baat nahi kar rahe hai. Prerna matlab inspiration."

"Ohhh," said Piddhi as he understood properly.

"Achha abhi hume bahot neend aa rahi hai. Hum thodi der Juhi Sahiba se chat karke sone chale jaayenge," said Samar.

"Main b Bobby se chat karke sone chala jaaonga," said Piddi.

"Okay bye, Piddhi. Goondnight," said Samar.

"Bye Samar. Goodnight," said Piddhi.

PraMar then started hvng video-chat wid der respective loves.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiya...juhi!!
this is a very amazing PraMar OS...!
Ohhh gwadd u nailed both the guys reactions perfectly as well!!
wad can i say?!! amazing job!!
Do keep writtin more...mayb one on HiMa...
cant help it i miss them!!
anyways fab job done..!
love
safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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JUHI I JUST LOVED YOUR OS THE WAY YOU ROTE THIS CHAP WAS SO GOOD THAT WILL THE USUAL DIAOGUE THAT THEY WILL USE IF THAT SCENE COME IN THHHE SHOW. THE WAY PIDDHI TOLD THAT HE NEW ABOUT PARMAR KISS BY BOBBY IN THIS DAT AND KIYA ND KIYA DANCERS I WISH THIS REALLY HAPPENS IN THE SHOW. AND RAHI TOO SINGERS. THE WAS THEY TOLD EACHOTHER THAT THEY SHOULD BE LOYAL TO THEIR LOVE WAS CUTE.AUR JAB REUNION HOGA THO RUBY KI PUNGI BAJEGI JUNGLEE STYLE MA.I LIKED IT😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry, I am not able to send pms n give proper comments wid colours n smileys 4m my Nokia C3 cell as my lappy has some problems 4m yesterday night.

Sud I do another different sequel to dis OS like I wrote dis as a different sequel to AmBy OS? 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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juhi🤗
awesome os👏
gosh missing samar so much yaar😭
kisha dancers *yup they totally are*
finally the kiss thing revealed🤣
loved it juhi!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: safi_kisha

Hiya...juhi!!
this is a very amazing PraMar OS...!
Ohhh gwadd u nailed both the guys reactions perfectly as well!!
wad can i say?!! amazing job!!
Do keep writtin more...mayb one on HiMa...
cant help it i miss them!!
anyways fab job done..!
love
safrena


Thank u 😊
I decided to write after watching last week's PraMar phone convo n also none ever wrote on PraMar 😃
Dis proves how much I used to love them n now miss them 😭
Now, I vl only write after my exams gets over 😉
I earlier tried thrice on HiMa 😛
But sud I continue it as a different sequel on d meeting of all d 12 buddies or Ruby ki pungi? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tenzingchoden

<font color="#0000ff">JUHI I JUST LOVED YOUR OS THE WAY YOU ROTE THIS CHAP WAS SO GOOD THAT WILL THE USUAL DIAOGUE THAT THEY WILL USE IF THAT SCENE COME IN THHHE SHOW. THE WAY PIDDHI TOLD THAT HE NEW ABOUT PARMAR KISS BY BOBBY IN THIS DAT AND KIYA ND KIYA DANCERS I WISH THIS REALLY HAPPENS IN THE SHOW. AND RAHI TOO SINGERS. THE WAS THEY TOLD EACHOTHER THAT THEY SHOULD BE LOYAL TO THEIR LOVE WAS CUTE.AUR JAB REUNION HOGA THO RUBY KI PUNGI BAJEGI JUNGLEE STYLE MA.I LIKED IT😃</font>


Thank u 😊
Kaash show me kuch aisa hi ho 😉
Bobby saw PraMar kissing but kept quiet 😆
KiSha wer shown as dancers n RaHi as singers during APC 😃
Yaa, after all d whole bird-watching thing was rubbish
I am thinking whether I sud write another sequel on Ruby ki pungi 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arhadlove

juhi🤗
awesome os👏
gosh missing samar so much yaar😭
kisha dancers *yup they totally are*
finally the kiss thing revealed🤣
loved it juhi!!!!!!


Thank u 😊
Yaa, hope they soon show KiSha as dancers 😉
Bobby revealed to Piddhi abt his kiss wid Samar during der date n Piddhi getn mad on Samar for hiding it 4m him 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great Juhi. Awesome. It felt as if I was watching TBP. I miss the original buddies a lot<3 Thanks for the pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HSFA

Great Juhi. Awesome. It felt as if I was watching TBP. I miss the original buddies a lot<3 Thanks for the pm:)


Glad u liked it😊
I was badly missing PraMar so I wrote it😭

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