Kisha OS: Let Me Go...part 2 pg 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: safi_kisha

OMG OMG OMG!!!
Someone get me out of the kisha dreamworld please😳
it was A-MAGING...i luved it yaaar...
i wish you would write more on KiSha...
coz with emotions your the best...
i have to say...yaar...
i could see it happen in front on me...everything
right from...
Kiya fainting...her pain (believe it or nt touched my heart!)
I could see the love both held like it was happening in front of me...
fab job...
and i would luv to read more of ur works only on KiSha that is...!
love
safrena

Originally posted by: sweetz1204

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unres

It was Fantastic!

U do write emotions perfectly

I could feel the pain wwhile reading it!

Loved it so so much!

Do write more on KIsha!

Originally posted by: arhadlove

zoya🤗
firstly thnk u soo much for continuing this<3
gosh wat an amazing writing yaar
KiSha are jst marvellous
the point whn KD tthinks of leaving his chicklet , he agins falls for her jst by a look😳
gosh the way he cared for her <3
and KD's dad's dialogue (yup mr desai she is ur future daughter-in-law)😆😉
and kiya feeding him using the trick (was this scene similar from SC serial?) but anyway it was damn cute
their hugs are jst pure love❤️
they are soo perfect for eachother
and then the confession and KD nt able to believe it😳😆
then their kiss *dead*
truly magical!!!!!!!
and finally the naughty-flirty kisha were back-on😉
my most favourite dialogues :
KD was so lost in her eyes that he didn't even know what he said "Mat jao..." in a cute manner.
"Don't you dare doubt my love for you kiya. Mere pyaar ko kisi sabut ki zarurat nahi hain!!!" he exclaimed.
"I don't like to stay away from you..." he blushed. "Stoneface kahika...indirectly 'I Love You' bolta...but whatever it is , he is mine and i am his...forever..."
"Yes dad...she is the one!!!"
omg zoya , amazing work dear!!!
plz plz plz write more on kisha , will be waiting to read it !!!!
-razz

Originally posted by: arshifan2012

thank you so damn much for liking it😳😳...haye kash aisa kuch show main bhi ho jaye...kuch toh bhala ho hamara...😆😳😉

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

OMG i can't stop blushing!! THAT WAS AHHH <3

please write more!! i really loved ur writing style.

i could feel all the emotions perfectly!! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

woww..awsum os..
loved kd's dialogues,he was right..thn d sudden kiss,aww
but yaar kd ne kuch jyada hi jaldi maaf kar diya kiya ko,i want her to baloing some more papad😉
second part..aww my keshu is sooo caring..
best part rather cutest part

But Kiya could read his expressions very well. And she knew that he would never eat from her plate directly. So she thought of a plan. As she put first morsel in her mouth , she frowned. Seeing her frown KD asked "What?? is it bad??" "Tum khudi taste karke dekhlo..." she said and fed him. KD was surprised. "Its ok to me...you didn't like it??" he asked. mm..." she moaned. Like this , kiya fed half of the plate to him , but he found out what she was doing. "Kiya , this food was for you...why did you feed me...??" he asked. "Because i can never eat if your starving KD..." she whispered.
she tricked him..lol..tat scene reminded me of my current fav couple
anyway thn their second kiss and confession..awww
best line:
"Yes dad...she is the one!!!"