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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blue_Orchid

sorry Partner read it the day u updated itself. . dont know how I forgot to Comment!!! its okay partner!!😊
coming to the Update
so Kiya Lands up in Desai Hotel. . n is Mesmerized. . as well as Illtreated by the Staff. .
poor Girl .. .
u know what I liked the Most. . .
KD's
So u want a Husband. . eh? Dont worry U 'll get one. b. .
oooh I see My Mastermind Getting Into action Here n I m Loving It😃 hehe lets see if what the mastermind has tot and what i havve cum up with is same or no!!😉 for dat ul hv to wait for the next update😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Saf
Finally I m here sorry for delay
Coming to update
That was soo fab mann
I mean the way u showed desais office I was actually imagining
Wondering about desais mansion it would be hell good lol
Young master desai ??? 🤣
Receptionist ka mouh dekhene layak hoga when mr desai took kiya inside lol
Oooh mr desai is really worried for kd
Okkay finally kiya said yes yippie
But that q I dont hav to sleep with him na 🤣
Kiya bhi na
Kd okk I will get u a husband hmmm whts their in his mind
But jo bhi hoon its going to be super exciting

Update the next part soon shamjhi na
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NaughtyRa

Saf shubh
Finally I m here sorry for delay yea and i finally decided to reply😆
Coming to update
That was soo fab mann thanks a lot re!!
I mean the way u showed desais office I was actually imagining
Wondering about desais mansion it would be hell good lol
Young master desai ??? 🤣 hehe 😆 bichare ko bohat respect dete hai!!!
Receptionist ka mouh dekhene layak hoga when mr desai took kiya inside lol
Oooh mr desai is really worried for kd
Okkay finally kiya said yes yippie agar nahi bola hota toh story move hi nahi hoti na 🤣
But that q I dont hav to sleep with him na 🤣
Kiya bhi na
Kd okk I will get u a husband hmmm whts their in his mind
But jo bhi hoon its going to be super exciting hehe letz see whats in the masterminds mind... which u will find out in the nexxt update only!! 🤣

Update the next part soon shamjhi na hehe kyon karun jaldi update??? mein toh late hi karun haan!!😆😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER FOUR

Kiya was shocked at what KD just said and went the words kept roaming in her head, she was confused as to what he meant by those words 'he will give me a good husband'? was he going to play along to the whole marriage thing? Kiya kept thinking. I mean I was just playing with him a little, make him miserable for the way he treated me.
I mean seriously what kind of a guy would bluntly tell a girl that he would want to be seen with her? Obviously none other than the arrogant Stoneface Mr. Keshav Desai.
Hopefully he wont be their tomorrow when I go to their house to me Avantika.
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Avanti was looking as if she was ready to eat me up. On one hand she had a curling iron and on the other was a face pack. "What are you going with these in your hands? " Kiya asked as she sat comfortably on the couch.
Avanti inched near as she replied with a smirk"we are going to have a little make over"
Kiya screamed "NOOO!!! you wont do any such thing!"
"stop struggling to death or ill for sure burn you to death" Avanti screams. How does she manage to change personalities so very easily. the one thing wrong about her was she had a evil personality hid under the innocent and sweet covering.
Kiya finally gave in knowing she could never win against Avanti in a argument plus a little makeover wont hurt she thought. While Avanti was busy with Kiya's hair she had a face pack on...this is relaxing just like in the salon Kiya thought.
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Finished Avanti squealed, excited that she spent 3 hours working on me. Sheesh a little makeover?? took so long? She did my hair, my makeup, even re-did my eye brows and dressed me up completely like a doll. Did I mention she made me try so many dresses. If she has taken so much time I better look like a Goddess. She placed a blind fold on my eyes and took me to her mirror so I could finally have a look.
"Ready...1...2...3! Avanti squeaked again.
"Jeez will you st---" Kiya was dumbstruck when her eyes landed on the mirror in front of her with her mouth open in shock.
"See I told you...you look like a Goddess" Avanti giggled.
My dark brown hair was in loose curls and had made my make up as smile as possible with only a light blush and lip gloss. My skin was radiating a natural glow.She had me wear a black mini dress and a cute black stelito's.
"You are one hell of a makeup artist" Kiya finally said as she tired to hold her tears.
"Don get to emotional or you will ruin your makeup" Avanti said with a smile holding her arms out for kiya to hug her.
"Now lets head down stairs my Mom wants to see how you look" Avanti smiled taking kiyas hand she was dragging her out the room.
"Wait...K-D isn't here?? is he?" Kiya asked.
"No din I already tell you her is at football practice." she replied and forcefully dragged Kiya down.
As they finally reached down and Avanti dragged Kiya to the back yard suddenly there was a huge commotion going on.

As I stepped on the platform in the back yard I felt several familiar eyes looking at me. I froze where I stood looking back at the 700 hundred people all from my college who never failed to tease me right from my day one. Even Ruby was here. She had her arms wrapped around KD's arms. He gave me a mischievous grin.

Wait a sec...KD? I thought he was a soccer practice? but looking around even his team was here wide eyed as they kept their stairs on me. KD pushes off Rubys arms and walks over to me. The thing that surprised me and Ruby was how he gently placed his arms around me and looked at me with a lovesick expression which I could tell was completely fake.
Many guys shouted "who is she?"
"Everyone this is Kiya Gujral. don't u know her from college? KD acted confused.
Some grasped and some started laughing..was he trying to humiliate me?
" Did you get a surgery or something?" Ruby laughed with the others and that's when I saw complete RED!
"The only girl in the whole room who would have gotten a surgery done is you." I protested with made some Ohhh and I heard KD give out a low chuckle.
"What the hell you B***h and KD y do you have your arms around that...? Ruby shouted.
"Calm down" KD sounded annoyed. " I brought you all here to tell you that...Kiya and I are engaged."
"you gotto be kidding.. I mean you are the kind of flirt? " A guy named Aakash yelled out.
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So guys here ends chap 4...I know its not that great and its short but adjust is dedicated to shubh...love you yaar...and thanku soo much for coming and clearing uo the mess...!!
leave in you feed backs..and hit the like button!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres
Ohhh saf it was awesome yaar yummy
Specially in the last when kd goes to kiya
Huh rubys hand arounnd kd 😡
Sorry I want kd to be one women man that is kiya 😉 😆
Fnally everyone knows kiya and kd r emgaged hayyye
The whole world knows that 😳
It was fab I tph loved it ❤️
Edited by NaughtyRa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
hehe ab meri baari hai😉😆

unresd
omg omg omg i soo missed ur chap and ur style of writing🤗
this was jst wow👏
afru !!! i soo am liking this story😳
Kiya getting a full-on makeover and surprisingly mr.keshav desai is gettting all lovely-dovely
but i do sense some feelings from him too😳
gosh the way she smacked ruby😆
and KD too is annoyed with ruby😆
Afru awesome chapter yaar👏
do continue soon !!!!😃
Edited by -Razzy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Razzy-

res
hehe ab meri baari hai😉😆


haawww unres karona..fr hi jaldi jaldi il update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update! i just loved kiya's make-over scene, and avantika turns out to be a great sister! and kd's engagement announcement was so cute!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!
Partner I love this part. .. !!
Kiya wondering what's in KD's mind
Avanti giving her a makeover
KD publically introducing Kiya as his Fiance!!
loved it❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: safi_kisha


haawww unres karona..fr hi jaldi jaldi il update!!


this is so nt fair , u guys u won't me have a chance to torture u😉😆
chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi i am unresing😆

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