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kisha os- silent tears
guys hi, this is my first os. so pls like and coment.

he was siting on his bench in deep thoughts. how can she do that. she broke my heart. how i fall in love with her. why i fall in love with her. i know i had broken her trust. i lost her trust on me but i did not imagine that. i mean it was missunderstanding. was it only my fault? no, it was not completely my fault. she could told me. she could told me that she was helping me. i was boy of my own role. i always taken my own decision. but today i m broken. it felt strange. i m broken by a girl. why i did that. if i dont broke her trust then may be today we can be best frnd. i know that i was at fault what its not mean that she kissed him. how can she kissed him. (sad chukle) why cant she? who is me for her? a person who broke her trust. a person who was the reason of her tears. yaa i deserve that. but somehow it hurts. i know it would becuse i love her.

a drop of tear about to come from his eyes but he closed his eyes. he knew that he is broken but he did not want to show this to anyone else. what will they think about him, that a person who always give attitude to others, now is broken.a person who lived on his roles, now crying becuse of a girl. then he standup from bench and about to go but someone called him.
"kd bhai, where r u going" (yes it was kd). he did not said anything. pidi kept his hand on his shoulder. kd turn his face. kd want to said something but his voice lost. a tear which was he holding in his eyes slipped from his eyes. everyone was shocked to saw him like that. the kd, keshav desai, who did not cared about anything, is crying. nobody knows that kd loves kiya except pidi. pidi again said " kd bhai, aap ro kyon rahe ho?" " she did not love me" kd replied. saying that kd hugged to pidi.and then left from class. Boby come near pidi and asked "pidi , yeh kd kya keh raha tha? kiski baat kar raha tha wo?" pidi remain silent. boby asked him many times but he did not said anything. boby left the class in frustration.

in the night.


she was coming from her house to relax herself. she was feeling guilty for yesterday's party. how can she do that. she want to make jelous kd. she danced with ranveer. but that kiss ruined everything. she was confused that why she want to make kd jelouse. she hate him. he broke her trust but then why she was hurted when she saw the blood on kd's hand. she was confused with her feelings toward kd. is she hate him or it is something else.

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kiya danced with ranveer to made kd jelouse. she said to ranveer to lift her. ranveer lifted her on his arms. her plan was going good. after dance she saw kd was feeling jelous. then she call to ranveer who was standing with her but his face was in opposite side. as ranveer turn his face to her side, their lips touch. and everyone froze at their place. it was a kiss. then she heard something. she turn her face and saw kd with a broken glass in his hand. blood was coming from his palms. then she notice a tear in kd's eyes. she start feeling guilty. she was thinking kd will create a drama but for her surprised he turn his face to another side and run from there. she wanted to call him but she lost her voice.
flashback end

she was thinking that why kd cried. is he loved her? is she loved him? she was hell confused.

next day in royal

everyone were in class except kiya and kd. pidi was waiting for kd. he called him many times but kd did not pick his call. then his mobile ring and a name flashed on his moblie- kd. he pick the call. kd said something to him and cut the call. pidi become worried and start calling him but his no. was switched off. he through the phone to the wall and start crying. everyone become worried. panchi come and asked him what happen. he said " kd left the college". everyone standup from their bench. kd left the college. boby come to pidi and asked the reason. pidi said he cant tell them becuse its related to kiya. now this become everyone suspesious. everyone start asking him. he said that he can tell them but they hv to hide this secret from kiya becuse kd bhai not want that kiya know about this. everyone promissed him that it will be secret betwen them. pidi told them "kd loves kiya but kiya hate him." everyone become shocked and froze at their place. were they heard right? kd loves kiy but they were the enemy. now they were understood why in happy new year party , kd break the glass to saw the rahi kiss. samar- pidi janab, agar wo kiya se pyar karta hai toh wo school kyon shod kar chala gya? pidi replied- kyonki kd bhai kiya ko hurt nahi karna chahte the. wo nahi chahte the ki kiya ko kisi ke sath dekh kar wo koi ulti sidhi harkat kar de." ranveer smile on pidi and said-" hurt? u mean, kd kiya ko hurt nahi karna chahta tha. then why he spoiled her water? wo noutanki hai sala" pidi shout- ' jante kya ho tum kd bhai ke bare me han. kd bhai agar chahte toh uss din bach sakte the." ranveer again said-" maine usko range hathon pakda tha kiya ka water spoil karte huye." pidi said " jahi tumhari sabse badi galat fahmi hai. tumne galat time pe kd bhai ko pakad lia. wo uss time water spoil nahi kar rahe the balki spoil ki hui bottal ko change kar rahe the." everyone become shocked again and boby said ' chuhe saaf - saaf bta ki tu kehna kya chahta hai? pidi said" toh suno. uss din jab ranveer ne first time kd bhai ko kiya ke water ki bottle ke sath dekha tha toh kd bhai water ko spoile kar rahe the. but uncle ne unhe dekh lia. so jab kd bahar gya toh uncle ne kd bhai ko bta dia ki kiya ne kunal ke sath milkar usko fasaya nahi tha balki kiya ne uski help ki thi usko jail se shudane me. jab kd bhai ko uski galti ka ehsas hua toh wo dubara aaye uss spoil ki hui water ki bottle ko badlne ke liy but this time ranveer ne usko rok lia. agar kd bhai dobara nahi aate toh kisi ko pta nahi chalta.par wo nahi chahte the ki kiya ka show kharab ho unki k missunderstnding ki bajah se." all were now silent . ranveer again sspoke" par wo har kaam ke paise kyon leta tha?" this make pidi silent. how he give ans becuse he himself dont know about this. but then the heard a voice which was fimilar for them -" main batata hoon". they all turn their face and found jatily was there. boby wishper to panchi- " je uncle kya janta hai kd ke bare me." jaitely spoke - " ranveer tum sab muje ek baat batao ki kya koi ek sath 2 kaam kar sakta hai. i mean can u do study without money? lets think ranveer u hv not money for your study and u hv a brother. u wanted to study in royal school and also wanted to complete every wish of ur brother. what will u do?" ranveer ask-" why r u asking this from me? i mean sir how i can do that without money?" jaitly smiled on his answer and said-"kd is doing. u all know kd's dad is a honest police-man. but his post is low so his salery is very less. with his salery they only can live a normal life. but kd was not want that. so he start hard working in study becuse he want to study in royal. with help of scolarship, he is doing his study in royal school even without his dad's help. he has a little brother and kd did not want that his brother also gone through from the bad situations like him. so he start taking money from everyone for his work. he is not wrong becuse he is taking his money for his work. he is now self dependent. wo tum logo se paise lekar apne liye kush nahi lata balki apne shote bhai ki har wish puri karta hai." hearing this everone was feeling guilty becuse they always called him losser becuse he takes money from them when they took help from him.
then jaitely asked them why they r talking about him and where is he. pidi told them everything including that he loves kiya. jaitly was shocked to hear that kd is left the school. pidi also told to jaitly dont tell this to kiya becuse he has make promise with kd that he will not tell anything to kiya. but kiya heard everything from outside the class. tears were in her eyes what she knew that its tooo late. she lost him forever. she knew that these r the silent tears which nobody can see.



guys now i m tired. this is sad story i knew that. but yaar i wanted to write a sad story. pls coment and like. if guys u wanna happy ending then told me, i will give its next part. nahi toh yeh aise hi rahegi. and pls guys coment jrrur karna.





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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os dearšŸ‘
i hate sad endings , so plzz update next part really wanna read a happy ending
loved the way u potryed KD's feelings😳
do continue and pm me plz😳

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Gr8 concept dear.
Loved it a lot.I too don't want a sad ending so continue it😳
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OMG! ITs so cute! :D <3 I was literally crying! :D So CUTE! :D
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awesome osšŸ‘ n I too want a happy ending šŸ˜›so plz update the next part n pm me if possible
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very sad!update next part please. aakanksha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Hey nice OS 😳 Really liked it😳
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first of all thanks to all my frnds and u guys who like and coment on my os. thanks again.
part-2

kiya come in class. she start pretending that she dont know anything. everyone told her about kd but she ignored them.she start avoiding everyone. everyone become tensed with her that behaviour. when anyone talked about kd with her, she pretended that she dont care. pidi did not said her anything becuse he had given the promise to kd that he will not said anything to kiya and will not blaming kiya for this. one day boby and panchi come in lockar room. they slightly open the door and saw kiya in tears which make them shocked. kiya was touching the lockar of kd and saying- i miss u stoneface, pls come back. boby made the video and they shown this to all buddies. now all the buddies understood why she is behaving like that. they make a plan. when kiya entered in the class, pidi shout- samar kd bhai will not coming back . a tear come from kiya's eyes which did not go un-noticed by buddies. all the buddies start talking about kd but kiya left the class. she went back in lockar room and start crying. she said to herself- kd, pls come back. i cant live without u. i m sorry for what i did. then she heard something and turn her face. she was shocked to saw all the buddies there. boby come near her and wept her tears. she could not take anymore and hugged to boby. now kiya gujral was crying and everyone was shocked to saw her condition. she was constly saying- boby pls muje kd chahiye. ranveer ,u r my buddy pls i need kd. and saying that she fell on her knees. then she relised something and get up with a jolt. she run to pidi and start pleading- pidi, pls tell me something. kd tera best frnd tha. usne tumhe kush toh kaha hoga.pls pidi. pidi did not take anymore. he said- m sorry kd bhai. saying that he take out a paper from his bag and give to kiya.and said- maine yeh kd bhai ke bag se nikala tha jab wo class me ro rahe the. unhe nahi pta ki jeh mere pass hai. may be wo tumhe dena chahte ho par dekar nahi gaye. kiya open that and start reading

kiya, i msorry, for what i did to u. pls forgive me,
i hurt u, u deserve better than me.
just forget me,
being with me nothing good can come through.
But one thing I promise is,
I will never forget you.
The memories we shared,
that went by too fast.
They're all a part,
of my wonderful loving past.
But we both knew we couldn't continue,
under these conditions.
There was so much love there,
but too much distance.
Please forgive me,
for the choices I've made.
I just want you to be happy,
but please don't let the memories fade.
I have cried myself to sleep,
time and time again.
And I'm just waiting for the day,
that maybe we can be one again.
It's just right now,
is no time for pain and love to mix
Maybe we can happen again,
sometime later in life.
Just move on for now,
don't be a sacrifice.
You are too amazing,
to lose forever.
I'm not going to forget about you,
not now not ever.
No one knows,
how much this is actually hurting me.
Free from this pain I call myself,
is what I wish for you

kiya start fainting and about to fall but boby cought her. they took her to hospital. doctor told that its due to stress. kiya said to boby- why only me boby. god always snatched my happiness from me. what i will do now boby? main kaha jaon? main usko nahi bhool nahi sakti. kitni assani se keh diya usne ki muje bhool jao but how i can.
boby- everything will be fine kiya.

kiya's pov
i open my eyes and saw around me.i relised i was in hospital. then boby come to me. she console me that everthing will be fine. everyone come and console me. then doctor asked them to leave me alone becuse i need some rest. they left the room. after sometime doctor dicharged me. we were going back in home. all buddies were in Ranveer's car except kd. i was thinking what will happen if today kd also with us. will he sit in ranveer's car or the fight again start between them. a smile come on my face but then reality strike me and i feel pain in my heart. it was just an thought. will he come back again. could i see him again. i again lost in thoughts and whishper kd. all the buddies start staring to me. boby said i should not hv take stress. we come back home. days start passing.


after 3 month later
3 months passed after kd left the school. everyone begain their new life. now nobody talked about kd. i know that, they all r doing this for me but inside, they r missing him. i m pretending to be happy front of them but inside i m shatered. we all tried many time to find him but all in vain. he left the city. his father and little brother in mumbai. but he alone left the city. his brother missed him so we all start spending time with him. yesterday we gone to meet him. he is a cute boy like kd. we know, how much we tried but we cant fill the kd's place in his heart. he still miss his brother. when we first time meet with him, he told many secret of kd to us. he told how kd got beaten in boxing match for money becuse he needed money for his school fees. he told that kd did not sleep correctly from the day when he spoiled my drink.kd's brother said that kd want the apoiogy from a girl which missunderstood him. i feel guilty thinking that kd did not sleep due to me. kd's brother did not know i m that girl so he always start tounting that girl in front of me. he did not know that he is saying all this bad things about me in front of me. ranveer and others tried to stop him but i stop them and said them not tell him abvout me. from that day we start enjoying his tounting. he always said " agar wo ladki mere sahmne aajaye na toh main uske dant ( teeth) tod dunga." we start laughing on his kiddish behaviour. sometime i also join him and start saying like "dant(teeth) nahi uss ladki ki toh neck tod deni chahiye." in my home, i always start thinking about kd which hurt me. so i start enjoyed his brother's company. i remember that day when me, ranveer, pidi, panchi, juhi, samar and boby, we all give him gift a new cycle. he was very happy but then he start crying. it remind him of his brother kd. we feels also hurt after saw him like that.
now i know tomarrow we hv to gone delhi for song and dance compdition. we r 7 members in buddy team. kd left us but jaitly sir again start buddy project.


next day

we reached in delhi. we complete our compdition.we was about to go back but then juhi shout-kd. i froze at my place. i turn my face to saw him and yes, he was there. but what he was doing on bike? then he start his bike and leave. 9 bikes were behind him and 5 bikes were ahead. o shit, its a bike race. but no, its not only a bike race but its a death race. omg , i feel scared becuse the way from which they hv to run their bikes was on the dangerous place. i turn my face to others, they also was scared. boby and juhi was shouting kd's name. i wished it could be dream but no it was reality. then a bike sliped from his way and fall in the river. i feel scared. then after sometime race was over. kd was on 2nd no. he collect his money. start his bike and left from their.


kd's pov
3 months r passed when i left the mumbai. as like other days i reached for race. yes now i m a bike racer. i open my bullet and saw her pics. then i start my bike and race start. last time i won the race but today i hv to lost it. yes i m losing this myself becuse i need money and raj told me that if i loss race from him then he will give me the double money. i accept his deal and when i was about to crossing the winning line, i decreased race of my bike and raj won th race. i collect my money and left from their. i parked my bike in my little house which i took at rant. i come out from my house and start walking toward the temple. i feel someone is chasing me. i stopped and turn but there was nobody. i shook my head and went near the temple. i saw a woman was siting near the temple. i always come here what never saw her. may be she foegot her way. i was about to go forward then i heard her voice. "aaj second no par". i asked her- what about u talking. "about ur race" she said me. i asked- how u know? she said- i know everything. bdw tumhe dar nahi lagta? i mean agar kush ho gya toh. i start laughing and replied- itna kush toh ho gya, ab kya hoga? i left my family, my school and ki..but then i stop when i relised what i about to said. she asked me- what about ur bro? i replied- i will be back to him but she cut me and said- when? i was speechless becuse i did not think about that. she again said- tum apne bhai ke pass baad me jaoge par tab tak uska khyaal kon rakhega? i was shattered. why i could not think that? bdw why r u taking part in this race? i replied- becuse i need money, for complete his every wish i mean for my brother. "he need u not money" she replied. (silence) she again asked-" what about kiya?" i was shocked to hear that. i shout- who r u? she said- i ask u something. i was about to go what she again said from my behind- she is waiting for u? "she did not love me" i replied. she asked- who said? was she said? "she said she hate me" i replied. she again said- that mean she did not said that she did not love u. i asked becuse i was confused- what u mean? she said- nafrat pyar ka hi ek roop hai. i was thinking i heard this voice before but where, i could not recognised. she again whishper- ur frnd pidi and others missing u. ab toh tumhara enmy bhi tumhe miss karta hai. i ask- who? she replied- non... ranveer. now i understood who is this. i turn her face to my side. omg yaa she was panchi. i was shocked to saw tears in her eyes. she asked me why i left them.
kd's pov end

pidi went near kd and slapped him. everyone is shocked but kd knew that it will happen.
boby come to stop him but he said- boby pls its b/w me and kd. tum log dur raho.
pidi- samjta kya hai tu apne apko. ayega, dost banayega aur ek din unko shodkar chala jayega. best frnd bolta tha no muje. bahut achi yaari nibhai hai.
kd- sorry pidi. maaf karde yaar. tu toh mera bhai hai.
pidi- ek sharat par.
kd- kya?
pidi in kd's ear- tu boby ko purpose karne me meri help karega.and phir kabhi aisa nahi karega.
kd- done.
pidi hugged kd.
all meet with kd.
ranveer come near him and said- kaisa hai?
kd- acha hoon.
sometime silent and then both hugged each other.
then kd turn his face and saw kiya.she was in tears.
kd said to all- chalo, royal chale. all were confused that why kd not talked with kiya but kd winked at them. they noode and went back in ranveer's car. kd start his bike. kiya was staring to him. kd stop bike near kiya and said- chicklet, baithna nahi?
kiya- tumhare sath?
kd- kyon koi problem hai?
kiya wept her tears and said- no, i mean u forgive me?
kd- not yet but i will, if u will be gone with me on my bike.
kiya smiled and hugged kd. kd also hugeed him. both were crying badly. buddies saw that and left from that.
kiya- tum attitude me ache lagte ho stoneface. rote huye nahi.
kd- tum bhi chicklet and both start laughing.
kd saw i tear in kiya's eyes and wept the tear.
kiya- nobody notice this tear when they told that u left mumbai. so that time it was silent tear. but today u notice it
kd- that silent tear was due to pain but this is tear of happiness.
kiya- yaa, which is not silent now becuse someone already saw this.
kd- who is someone?
kiya- keshav desai i mean kd.
they both smile and they knew that it is a begning of new love story.



guys pls coment and like


Edited by visu12 - 12 years ago
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Lovely update...Kisha were awesome in this...Great work! Thanks for the pm
Edited by cutiepie0412 - 12 years ago

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