TBP FF: Happy Days *IMP NOTE PG 21* - Page 14

Sry lizi for late reading n replying..Had exams..

But now i gonna comment for all 3 parts😉..

Coming to 1st chap..Wow what a FF yar..awesome n super concept👏..

2 narrators explaning the story was nice.. piddi intro scene was funny😆..

I loved both team parings n Ranny,keshu nicknames😳..

2nd chap-Both teams supporting KD n RV was nice..Both team tashans was super..Finally JJ as principal was bang on👍🏼..

3rd chap-JJ giving punishment to boys to wear girls uniform was hilarious funny😆..

I was ROFLing imaging that scene🤣..

kiya commenting rv hot in girl uniform was super..

Pansh 1st meeting was cute😳..

Yara 1st meeting was funny too with food fighting😆..

Lizi seriously u r creating anxiety in me wat will happen next time😛..Waiting for ur next update😃..

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Thank u so much Lizzie for updating so fast🤣 You are welcome 🤣🤣 oved it Birdie and Keshu are too cute man🤣I can imagie it literay! Me too 😳

superb!

awww,Panchi is a brave girl here i so love her😳😳😳 Just like me!! 😃🤣

Keshu is also so cute man! He is isnt he?? 😳

YaRa's meeting wa the funiest loved it! Dhinchak meeting!! 🤣🤣🤣

hahaha🤣

aree yaar idhar kyu stop kiya????haila KIYA????🤣 Hey im cool like that!! 😈

update soon yaar Will do 😳

par tere exams haina toh??tu update kaise kar rahi hai????🤣🤣Exams start on 28th jan!! 🤢 Tilll then i get free time!! i write this then!! 😳

cont soon😉

Originally posted by: JaseTBP

Ur wish take it as a compliment or as an.insult!!! I'll take it as a compliment 😳
And thanKu 4 loving my comment 😳 No thank you!! 😳
As I also love it! 🤣

Originally posted by: kishathebest

Lizu that was WOW 👏👏 Thank you 😳

Boys in girls uniform 🤣🤣 Looked sexyy right?? 🤣🤣🤣

Ranny looked so sexy in skirts 😆😆😆 Yup he did 🤣🤣

PanSh 1st meeting 😳😳 Me blushing 😳

YaRa 1st meeting 😆😆😆 Me laughing 🤣🤣🤣

Can't wait for the next part 😳😳

Originally posted by: rashmi24sya

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this update just cracked me up from starting to the last lines...!!!! Thank you 😳

awesome update lee, superbly fantaulous 😆 I'm blushing at your comment

the flash back scenerio was flawless... I thought that it was a bit rushed!! but glad that you liked it 😳

update next soon :))

Originally posted by: prava55663

Loved it a lot Lizzi...I am really sorry for being late...just completed reading both parts...They are awesome!! Pravallika 🤗 Welcome to the forum!! 🤗

Loved the concept of Narration... Thank you so much 😳

Piddhi's entry was bang on..I am ROLFing..🤣🤣 I loved it too 🤣🤣

Loved the way you began...All are best friends present... I am in love with this concept!! 😃

story revolving around past and present... Yup!! its more interesting that way 😃

Now My Greedy mind want more updates...😛 our greedy mind will get more updates!! 🤣v🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Keshav was topper.. He'll always be!! 😃

Panchi's first day was awesome..lol she back answered KD...too good.. Just like me 😳

Ranveer in girl's uniform...lol..🤣🤣 I loved it too 🤣🤣🤣

Kiya and Ranveer ki dosti on day 1...cool Thank you 😳

Loved it!!👏

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