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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well I love tragedies...so here is a trageic story of kd

Os kd back to royal

The story start from rv saying to kd that only one man can save him is jaitley
Kd(goes to jaitley):sir please help me out I dont want to stay away from royal
JJ: kd I cant help you kd kyonki mein khud hi fasa hu yaha tohh phir mein tumhari kkya help karu
Kd: sir please sir.aap aisa kaise keh sakte aap toh hamhe banga se help karne ke .liye ruke the na so how can you backout
Jj:kd par
kd cut him and says rehne digiye sir is duniya mein kisi ke upar trust nahi karna chahiye

KD WITH HIS FREINDS...
Freinds:kya hua yaar itna audas kyu hai
Kd:kuch nahi yaar bas thoda sa paresan hoon
Freinds:kya paresaanu mujhe baata mein solve karne ki kohsish karooga
Kd:bas koi aisa job bata do hisse mein bahut jaldi bahut paise kama saku
Fr:kam toh par aus ke liye tujhe dairing hona padhega
Kd:matlab aisa konsa job hai
Fr:tujhpar sab bet lagayege par tu agar haar gaya toh vo saare beeting ke paise mera pas aaa jayege aur phir boss tujhe mooh magi kimat bhi degha par kya tu itni mar seh payega...
Kd thinks a littleand says sayad papa sahi kah rahe hai but then thinks about the beautifyl moments with kiya and says to the camera par kiya ause kaise,bhul jaoo
But atlast he says tothe camera that I will do it
TO BE CONTINUED...
WELL guyz I am on my mobi so cant write more as it is a horrible experience of mine to write but I will surely continue it tommor. aur vaise bhi kal sab bore hoge foroum pe toh meri os hi padh lena...
Please mujhe maarna mat agar achi na lage toh 😆
Edited by shubhraupadhyay - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy... continue it yar... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tragic story?? Omg even i love tragedies!! So im eagerly waiting for the next part!!

Awesome start dear and continue soon!! Waiting for it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start 👍🏼
Update soon n pm me plzz 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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an awesome start dear , plzzz continue asap 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This sounds really interesting😉
would be glad if you continue it soon
long comments as soon as the story moves further.
now i gotta go bye
can you pm me when you update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting OS😊
Nicely written👏😊
Loved it to d core😊
D 2nd para is confusing😕
Y his frnds vl tell him to fight?😲
Waiting for d next part😊
Update n pm me😊



Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Angel juhi: ab sab kd jaise seedhe sadhe nahi auske frnds galat kam mein involved hein toh mein kya karoon aur vaise bhi precap mein auske freinds hi baata rahe the fight ke liye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start.
Do continue.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guyz thanks for the awesome comments once again thanks and sorry aapse kaha tha ki kal update kardoogi par late hogaya soory again and heres the part 2

PART : 2

KD was ready for the fight when his freinds come to him and says that kd tu fight ke liye tayar toh ho gaya par tujhe harna hai iska matlab ye hai ki tujhe bohot chot lag sakti ek baar phir soch le
Kd thinks for a little and says mein in paiso ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon
Kd then goes to the ring and closed his and recall all the moments with kiya
Then his opponent comes in the ring and the fight starts d knew that he has not to attack at him the fight starts and kds opponent start trying to hit kd but savd him manytimes but lastly he gave a tight punch on kds face kds mouth started bleeding and was trying to come out of that punchs pain as soon as he gve him a hard punch which kd cant resists aand blood came out from his mouth and he fell down
When the refre came near him and start counting but he doestnt gain consiousness and at last his opponent wins

Kds freinds bring him into therest room when one of his freind sprikled water on his face and then he gains
consiousness then his bandaged his wounds and asks that is he all right he says yes he is alright but thats not true the is still paining him very much
Kds goes to the royal fees deposit and deposits his fees their he was lucky that his admission form has not cancelled still
He than goes to his home and starts ironing his uniform his father comes in and asks why he his ironing royals uniform
KD : says to the camera agar dad ko ye pata chal gaya ki maine paiso ke liye fight ki thi aur vo bhi royal mein padhhne ke liye toh pata nahi mera kya hoga
Kd : actually papa vo mein tc lene gaya toh meine banga sir se maafi magi aur vo itne nek dil ki auhn ho ne mujhe maaf kardiya aur scholarship bhi vapis kardi
Kds dad : kya zaroorat thi mafi mangane ki itni muskil se aus bade school se peecha chuta tha
Kds : mein is baat par bhahas nahi karna chahta please mein royal vapas jaaoga toh jaaogha
Kds dad : jo karna hein kar par ye chote kaise lagi tujhe
Kd : he lies that his bike was slip on the road when he got onjured

Note : her banga has not stopped anyone to talk with eachotjer
KD BACK TO ROYAL...

Everyone was entering in the class when piddi entered with samar he said nawab sahab kal aap mujhe akela chodh kar chalegaye the kd bhai se mile bhina haan janab bura toh hame bhi laga par apne toh baat kar li kaha yaar nawab mein bhi kaha baat kar paya meri mammy bhi mujhe lene aagayi
Kiya was listening to their conversations silently she was showing that she wad irritated with their talls but actually she want to know about kd
When she was thinkimg about that suddennly kd enters to the classroom everyone is shocked but happy to see kd
Kd bhai aap yaha piddi says hugging kd
Kd says surprise everyone meets with kd except kiya
Ranveer says to hum in a enemy version look so dude jaitley sir ne teri help kar di haan
Kd says nobody helped me myself
Kiya was looking to anything else and wondering now kd will again try to say sorry to het and her mood will be spoilt again
But kd was going to sit on her place
When ranveer says that aaj lagta kisi koh apni sorry puran nahi sunnani hai doing his face towards samar
Kd says aloud sorry my foot
kiya : says mind it you keshav desai
Kd : arey tujhe aisa kyu lagta hai kiya gujral ki sari baatein tujhse suru hoti hai aur tujhpar khatam
Ranveer : take it easy dude
Kd : tu kon hota hai mere aur kiya ke beech mein aane wala chicklet ka chicken ya phir lipstick ka lipgloss
They were goingto fight when tje teacher comes and they all sit on their respactive places

Bad kd is back to bring his cute kiya back chicklet
And once kiya will be back then loveely kd will aso come back...

The end~~~~[B I thnk end is not good well hpe you guyz like it
rBR]
Edited by shubhraupadhyay - 12 years ago

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