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Posted: 12 years ago
omg loved this update juhi👏
juhi(in tbp) itni smartness dikhai waah👏
i hope that both the chudails gets severe punishments😡
aww KD's flashback was soo cute
hope kiya gets well soon😭
thnx for the pm juhi🤗
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Originally posted by: arhadlove

omg loved this update juhi👏
juhi(in tbp) itni smartness dikhai waah👏
i hope that both the chudails gets severe punishments😡
aww KD's flashback was soo cute
hope kiya gets well soon😭
thnx for the pm juhi🤗


omg loved this update juhi👏 Thank u😊
juhi(in tbp) itni smartness dikhai waah👏 Juhi has a sharp memory n mind like journalists. Also she is shown here as Kiya's 1st frnd who was d only 1 to see her in pain wen Kiya was not frnds wid other buddies😊
i hope that both the chudails gets severe punishments😡 They vl surely get😡
aww KD's flashback was soo cute Want such scenes in d show too😳😊
hope kiya gets well soon😭 She vl take time to get well😊
thnx for the pm juhi🤗 U welcome🤗😊
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9. Flashback about drunk Kiya during the camp, Panchi rejected for donating blood to Kiya as she is a minor

Panchi's mom said to herself in wonder, "Panchi ab tak ghar q nahi aayi? Aaj vo Kiya aur KD ko b saath laanewaali thi na?"

She was waiting for them in d hall sitting on a sofa. JJ had told her dat KD vl also b cumn to her to find abt Kiya. She called Panchi. Panchi's cell rings.

"Mom ka phone hai," said Panchi.

Panchi answered d call, "Hello Mom."

"Hello beta, tum kaha ho abhi?" asked Panchi's mom.

Panchi began to cry.

"Panchi, tum ro q rahi ho? Kya hua?" asked Panchi's mom worriedly.

"Mom, Kiya ka accident ho gaya hai. She is very serious," replied Panchi wid choking voice.

Panchi's mom was shocked.

"Beta, ye sab kaise hua?" asked Panchi's mom worriedly.

Panchi told her evrythng.

"Panchi, main abhi hospital aati hu. U take care," said Panchi's mom n hung up.

Panchi's mom kept a photo album in her purse n left for d hospital.

D buddies were in tears thinking abt Kiya. They were thinking abt d moment during d camp wen they came know abt Kiya's secret abt helping KD.

-----Flashback-----

D buddies gets der can of cold-drink after dancing around d bonfire during d camp. Unseen by anyone, PraMar goes inside der tent. Piddhi mixes shahi sharbat in his can. Wen Samar is abt to do so, they r called out by JJ. JJ did not sees them wat they r doing as he only sees der back. Samar quickly hides d shahi sharbat bottle. PraMar comes out along wid der cans. Some feet away 4m d bonfire, d bonfire, JJ n Naima Maa r der wid other buddies. PraMar comes n join. JJ said dat der is not any hurry to hv der rewarded(1 macchli pakadne par 1 can) cold-drinks so soon n made evry1 to keep der cans aside 2gthr in d middle of them. PraMar also did so relunctantly. Some of d cans were opened but none tuk a sip. JJ, Naina Maa n d buddies had a good talk for sumtym.

"Jokers, hv u enjoyed?" asked JJ wid a smile.

"Yes," said all d buddies 2gthr.

"Kal tum sabke liye surprise hai," said JJ.

"Kaisa surprise?" asked Piddhi.

"Agar surprise bata du to vo surprise nahi rahega," replied JJ wid a smile.

"Okay everyone, its time to sleep now," said Naina Maa.

"Mam, kya hum sab buddies kuch der bonfire k yaha enjoy kare?" asked Bobby.

Other buddies too requested. Naina Mam n JJ agreed.

"Fine par tum sab apna dhyaan rakhna," said Naina Mam.

"Good night Jokers," said JJ.

"Good night Buddies," said Naina Mam.

"Good night, Sir n good night, Mam," said d buddies 2gthr.

D buddies played antakshri for sometime. They then tuk der can. Piddhi tuk time to take his can as he was unclue abt which can is his. Only Piddhi, Kiya n Panchi's can were opened.

"Piddhi, itna time q laga raha hai?" asked Bobby, "Kisine jhootha nahi kiya hai."

"Kuch nahi bas aise hi," said Piddhi n tuk a can lukn @ Samar.

Others also tuk a can for themselves. Piddhi quickly tuk some sips but nothing hpnd to him much to his n Samar's shock. Evry1 tuk some sips of der cold-drinks.

"Bhai, meri can badal gayi. Pata nahi jisme shahi sharbat mix kiya gaya hai vo can kiske paas hoga?" said Piddhi to d camera in tension.

"Janab, shahi sharbat mix kiya hua can kiske paas ho sakta hai?" asked Samar to d camera in tension.

PraMar lukd @ each other n then @ d other buddies to find who is wid Piddhi's can. They lukd @ each buddies one by one. They noticed Kiya acting a little different n got doubt.

"Kiya, aaj ka din kitna awesome tha na?" asked Juhi.

"Juhi, tuje pata hai uncle hume Jungle me q laaye hai?" asked Kiya in a different voice.

D buddies were shocked to hear Kiya addressing JJ as uncle n her voice a little different.

"Kyu?" asked Juhi.

"Qki hum Junglee hai, hahaha," replied Kiya wid a laugh making others laugh.

PraMar to d camera 2gthr,

Piddhi(in shock): Nawab, shahi sharbatwala can...

Samar(completing Piddhi's sentence in shock): ...Kiya mohterma ko mila hai.

Kiya drank more than half d can wen Piddhi tried to snatch it.

"Piddhi, ye mera can hai," said Kiya in a drunken voice making others shock.

"Tu is can se nahi pee sakti hai," said Piddhi trying to snatch in vain.

"Tu mere hisse ka can b lena chahta hai," said Kiya in drunken voice n tuk some more sips, "Tuje ye nahi milega."

Piddhi lukd @ Samar for help. He started helping Piddhi to snatch d can 4m Kiya.

"In dono ko kya hua? Kiya k can k peeche q pade hai?" asked Ranveer.

"Aur Kiya ka awaaz kuch badla badla lag raha hai," said Bobby.

"Tum dono ki problem kya hai? Mere can q cheen rahe ho mujse?" asked Kiya drunkenly.

"Kiya mohterma, isme shahi sharbat hai. Ise mat peejiye," said Samar.

Other buddies were shocked hearing dis.

"Stupid, ye shahi sharbat nahi cold-drink hai," said Kiya drunkenly.

PraMar finally snatched d can 4m Kiya n turned it upside down to throw d remaining drink but it was empty as Kiya drank all.

"Kiya, r u alright?" asked KD worriedly.

"KD, muje kya hua hai? Main to bilkul theek hu," replied Kiya.

"Kiya, tumhe aaraam karna chahiye," said Panchi.

"Itna jaldi aaraam q? Hum to enjoy karne aaye hai. I can't believe ki main tum sabki frnd hu. Pata hai main tum sabse starting me kitna jhagda karti thi. Main kitni bewakuf thi jo main tum sabse rivalry k vajah se Banga ka side leti thi aur uske liye jaasoosi karti thi. Muje baad me realize hua ki Banga selfish hai aur vo sirf apne baare me sochta hai. Use khud Princi jo banna hai. Tum sab ne mast pungi bajaayi uski Assembly Hall me. Tai Tai Phiss kar daali Banga aur Vats ki.

D buddies were shocked n also amused to hear wat Kiya was saying.

"Kya kiya tum dono ne?" asked Bobby to PraMar.

"Mera aur Kiya ka can badal gaya," replied Piddhi.

"OMG! Kiya to poori talli ho chuki hai," said Juhi.

Kiya continued, "Banga k naseeb me hi pungi bajna likha hai. Assembly me uski kya jhakkaas pungi baji. Banga tum sabse farsh ki safaai karva raha tha aur bhagwan ne uski pungi baja di. Banga fisal gaya aur uske 2 daant toot gaye, Teacher's Day me uski pungi bajaane me bahot maza aaya. Hashaskar mere gaal me dard hone laga tha. APC qualification round me humne uski team ko haraakar firse Banga ka khade khade pungi baja diya. Uski shakal to dekhne laayak thi.(Other buddies were laughing silently) Lekin kisiko Banga ki galti nahi dikhai deti hai. Humesha hume bina matlab punish kiya jaata hai. Koi humaare point of view se nahi dekhna chahta hai. Agar Banga ka bas chale to Royal Academy ko Royal Jail bana dega. Vo har chhoti chhoti par police ko bulaane ki baat karta hai. Uska bas chale to hum sab jail me honge. Banga k vajah se hi KD jail gaya. Usine mauka dekhkar police bulaaya tha.(Other buddies especially KD r shocked on hearing dis eventhough they knew d fact.) Banga aur Vats KD k aanepar bilkul khush nahi lag rahe the. Aisa lagta tha ki vo chahte hi nahi the ki KD jail se baahar aaye. Us din muje TBP class k baad, Banga ne muje TBP class me jasoosi karne ko kaha tha par maine mana kar diya cuz I love u all. Mujse kaha ki main TBP class deserve nahi karti aur main unki favourite student. Hahaha, favourite student, cool. Jab maine mana kar diya to usne hume neecha dikhaane k liye khud ki team khadi kar di. Isse vo Jaitley Sir ko b haraana chahta hai. Main abhi J Sir ko jaakar bata dungi ki galti humaari nahi Banga ki rehti hai. Main bata dungi ki usne muje spy karne k liye kaha tha."

D buddies were very pleased to know how Kiya has really changed n how much she hates Banga too. Kiya turned to go 2wards d tent where JJ was sleeping. D buddies got shocked seeing dat.

"Kiya to sachmuch J Sir ko Banga k baare me bataane jaa rahi hai," said Panchi lukn tensed.

"Kiya mohterma ko rokna padega. Agar J Sir ne inhe iss haalat me dekh liya to hum sab ki pungi baj jaayegi," said Samar.

KD, Piddhi n Samar ran to Kiya wen she reached halfway n started pulling her stopping her 4m going to JJ's tent.

"Kiya, chal yaha se," said Piddhi.

"Main J Sir ko bataane jaa rahi hu ki Banga kitna bada kameena hai," said Kiya drunkenly.

"Kiya Sahiba, vo to hum sab jaante hai par aap chaliye yaha se varna hum sabko punishment milegi," said Samar.

"Hume q punishment milegi? Humne kya kiya?" asked Kiya in confusion.

"Kiya, abhi J Sir so rahe hai. Agar kisine unhe disturb kiya to vo bahot gussa ho jaayenge aur hum sabko punish karenge," said KD.

"Arey, ye to maine socha hi nahi ki J Sir so rahe honge par hum Banga k baare me J Sir ko jarur bataayenge," said Kiya.

"Haan haan, hum J Sir ko Banga k baare kal jarur bataayenge ki Banga hum sab par kitna zulm karte hai," said Samar.

"Pakka, hum kal bataayenge na?" asked Kiya.

"Haan haan, pakka," replied Piddhi.

"Kiya, ab chalo sabke paas baithte hai," said Kiya.

They went to d other buddies sitting around d bonfire. D buddies were sitting around d bonfire in circle in d sequence of Panchi-Juhi-Kiya-KD-Piddhi-Samar-Ranveer-Bobby.

"Kiya, kya tum kisike saath date par gayi ho?" asked Juhi wid a smile deciding to take advantage.

"Juhi, kya kar rahi hai? Ye time ye sab poochne ka hai kya?" asked Bobby.

"Well, vaise to main kabhi officialy date par nahi gayi hu par fir bhi 2 baar gayi hu jo date par nahi date jaise the," said Kiya in a drunken voice confusing others.

"Matlab?" asked Juhi.

"Matlab mera 1st date Kunal k saath tha par maine uske saath date par jaane ka naatak kiya tha. Jaante ho q?" asked Kiya.

D buddies were shocked to hear dat Kiya went on a fake date wid Kunal.

"Kyu?" asked Bobby.

"Qki J Sir ne muje kaha tha ki Kunal k saath dosti karo, uske saath date par jao aur use kisi tarah confess karao ki KD k bag me usne hi drugs dalvaaya tha jisse KD fas jaaye.(Others were shocked. KD n Piddhi became more shocked as they had no idea of Kiya helping KD secretly.) Maine Kunal ko fasaakar use confess karvaaya aur apne cell me record kar liya," replied Kiya.

"Uncle ne tujse b kaha tha KD ki madad karne ko. Mujse jyaada bada kaam to tune kiya hai. Asli hero main nahi tu nikli," said Piddhi.

"Ab samajh me aaya ki Kiya ne hi Kunal se confess karvaaya hai. Vo Kunal ka confessionwala video kaafi close distance se liya gaya tha jo na itni aasaani se Piddhi le sakta tha na hi uncle. Par Kiya tumne ye baat kisiko bataayi q nahi? Iss baat ko sabse chhupaane ki kya jarurat thi?" asked KD.

"Maine hi J Sir se kaha tha ki ye baat kisiko na bataaye. Agar mom ko pata chalta to vo muje boarding school me bhej deti thi. Use sirf apni status aur reputation se matlab hai. She hates me. She only loves Aanya. Aanya also hates me. No one loves me @ home.(Others r getn confused n shocked. KD recalled Kiya teln him during game dat her mom does not loves her n seeing d way Aanya behaving wid her.) Agar main boarding school me chali gayi to I vl miss all all of u. Mere itne mushkil se itne itne acche dost bane hai. I don't wanna lose u all. Kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki maine KD ki help ki," replied Kiya drunkenly.

"Kisiko nahi pata chalega," said KD.

"Haan, Kiya mohterma. Aap chinta na kariye ye baat humaare alaava kisiko nahi pata chalega," said Samar.

"Pakka, tum sab kisise nahi bataoge na?" asked Kiya drunkenly.

"Haan pakka, hum kisise nahi bataayenge," said RV eventhough he hated KD n Kiya @ dat time but sumthn made him feel pity for Kiya.

"Kiya, aur tumhaara dusra date matlab date jaisa kiske saath tha?" asked Bobby.

"KD k saath. (KD n others r shocked.) Master-Slave task me maine aur KD ne bahot enjoy kiya. Vo task kam date jyaada lag raha tha. Vo mere life k beautiful moments me se ek tha. (KD smiles while listening to her wid others) Hum bahot khush the aur bahot masti kar rahe the par us kameeni Aanya ne sab spoil kar diya beech me taang adakar fir...," replied Kiya n before completing her sentence, she passed out on Juhi n Panchi's lap.

"Fir kya hua?" asked Piddhi.

"Kiya get up. Kiya, Kiya," said Panchi shaking Kiya's head.

"Behosh ho gayi shahi sharbat k vajah se," said KD touching Kiya's face.

"Isse tent me le jaakar sula dete hai," said Panchi.

"Nahi, abhi nahi. Hum sab thodi der yahi rehte hai. Yaad hai TDP me Bobby kaise beech beech me uthkar kuch b bol rahi thi. Agar isne beech me uthkar kuch bol diya iss haalat me aur Naina Mam ne galti se sun liya to hum sab ki vaat lag jaayegi," said Juhi.

"Juhi sahi keh rahi hai," said Bobby.

KD kept lukn @ Kiya who was sleeping on Juhi n Panchi's lap.

"Agar Kiya galti se shahi sharbatwala can se cold-drink na peeti to hume pata hi nahi chalta ki Kiya ne meri madad ki thi," said KD.

"Kiya is really a true friend," said Juhi.

"Hum kal Kiya se kya kahenge?" asked Piddhi, "Kiya ko shahi sharbat k baare me pata chala to vo mere aur Samar ki mother-sister together kar degi."

"Hum Kiya ko sab bata denge aur kahenge ki vo humpar trust kar sakti hai ki uska secret hum kisiko nahi bataayenge. Fir dheere dheere vo humpar trust karke apni aur baatein bataane lagegi. Kiya ko hum sabke love aur support ki jarurat hai," replied Panchi wid a smile.

Others agreed to her. KD smiled @ Kiya who was lukn very cute while sleeping.

-----Flashback ends-----

D buddies were crying thinking abt dat moment.

"Main Kiya ko nahi kho sakta hu. Kiya ne mera future bachaaya tha. Use kuch nahi hona chahiye," said KD while crying. Other buddies comforted him while crying.

Mrs. Gujral n Aanya too heard him but they had no idea wat he was talkn abt. They ignored it n prayed dat Kiya does not survive @ any cost.

Doctor comes out of d ICU. JJ rushes to him.

"Doctor, Kiya kaisi hai?" asked JJ.

"Jaise ki maine kaha tha ki patient ko kaafi blood loss hua hai isliye use urgently blood ki jarurat hai. Agar jaldi blood donate nahi kiya gaya to I am sorry, hum patient ko nahi bacha paayenge," said d doctor.

JJ n d buddies were very shocked while Mrs. G n Aanya were very pleased on hearing dat.

"Aap dono patient k family se hai na?" asked d doctor lukn @ Mrs. G n Aanya.

"Haan par hum dono ka blood group Kiya se nahi match karta hai," said Mrs. G.

"Kiya ka blood group B-ve hai," said d doctor.

"Blood bank yaha se bahot door hai aur humaare paas time kam hai," said Ranveer worriedly.

"Doctor, mera b blood group B-ve hai. Main Kiya ko blood donate karna chahti hu use bachaane k liye," said Panchi.

"Sorry par tum minor ho isliye tum blood donate nahi kar sakti ho," said d doctor.

JJ, Panchi n other buddies were shocked. Mrs. G n Aanya smiled @ each other unseen by anyone. They quickly changed their expression.

"Try to understand, doctor. Plz, muje blood donate karne dijiye. Look @ Kiya, she is just 16 like us. Uske marne ka umar nahi hai abhi," requested Panchi while crying.

"Dekhiye, hum aapki feelings samajh sakte hai par hume rules to follow karna hi padega," said d doctor n went inside d ICU.

Panchi became very upset n cried wid other buddies.

Question: Kiya's life is at stake. Who do you think will donate blood to Kiya and save her life?

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome awesome awesome👏

Loved both the chapters to the core

Loved the way you wrote it.

Amazing😳

Well I think I know the answer 😎

Update the next chapter soon. Can't wait any longer

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Awesome chappy
Druken kiya aww sote hua bahut cute lagti hai
And I think I also know the answer
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keshiya

Awesome awesome awesome👏 Thank u😊

Loved both the chapters to the core Both of these chapters had flashbacks in more than half of these chapters but still u loved it😊

Loved the way you wrote it.

Amazing😳

Well I think I know the answer 😎 Its good dat u guessed it😎

Update the next chapter soon. Can't wait any longer Will update wen I get good ideas😊




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Originally posted by: shubhraupadhyay

Awesome chappy
Druken kiya aww sote hua bahut cute lagti hai
And I think I also know the answer


Awesome chappy Thank u😊
Druken kiya aww sote hua bahut cute lagti hai Thanks to adla-badli of Kiya's can wid Piddhi's😆😊
😊And I think I also know the answer Its good dat u guessed it😊
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Nice n awesome update juhi👏

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