KiSha OS|| Moment...\*dedications*\ - Page 2

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

Comment after i stop hyperventilating over the prospect of a wet KD. However intellectual i might be, i'm still a hormonal teenager. ;)

*edited*

Firstly, I love the song Boondon ke Moti. I have downloaded it (ummm... piracy rules!)... well, the two minutes of the song that I've ever heard. It is the "Mumbai Monsoon song". Of all of the things in the world you should see and experience before you die, Mumbai Monsoon is one. I've heard so many things about Mumbai Monsoon that I do want to experience it, specially after watching WUS! I don't know if it's a Mumbai Monsoon song or not but I do love the simplicity of it. Specially that, "Dil ki baat main hawa ke, zariye pouchaoun re...ya khud hawa pe chal ke aaoun re.." aah! My feels! 😳

I even forgive you for copying or using the Bollywood term, being inspired by, the end of WUS. And the grammar too. I can safely say that I was inspired and did not not bluntly copy the scene, because I've seen this movie so many times I know how things progressed in it. Defo not the way I've written this 😆 Baqi bacha grammar? Wo bhar mein jae! I really don't like grammar 😛

Moments. Just like the word 'Always', conveys a lot more than any other seven letter words holds the power to. Because well, that's what's life is made of, always. ;) Aaah! "Always"! It's such a beautiful word! And I belong to two fandoms which actually make this word beautiful! Harry Potter and Castle

You have a beauty, magic and innocence of a child. The pure child that is in everybody. There are a lot of moments in your stories that that magic stares you in the face with twinkling doe eyes of awe and you can't help it but smile. 😳😳😳😳😳 Thank you, I guess 😳😳

"A moment where she shared her most childish and most beloved wish with him, that of gathering the twinkling stars in her palm."

^^ The magic of friendship. The fact that you share with someone the most childish things you've ever thought of. It's a precious moment. A little audacious moment of blind trust.

"It was weird for him to observe all those little things she did. At first, he reprimanded himself for taking such a keen and deep interest in her. But then, he found an excuse."

^^ Ah, how it reminds on my little highschool crushes. Then the bigger moments. When you did something you 'shouldn't'. Yet you had no reason why not. Oh! The moments with crushes are just so...urgh! To me they are frustrating because, like you said, doing something you 'shouldn't' is really the worst feeling for me! Aaah!

"Or maybe she was somewhere else in the world which had the exact same weather as in his city."

^^ The much I chuckled at this part... I can't begin to tell. You're being so poetic here that my heart swells with pride. Really? I was a little worried about this part. Because the "in his city" part seemed so much like PC's "In My City" single, which I still haven't heard but still...😆

The two lines of KD-hotness are enough to send any KD fan into a spasm. I was being a little to ironic in my previous comment. I'm not really much of a hyperventilation-ist. I've seen Fahad wet in some random show before. The guy is hot. But not enough to make me drool, I have my head up in clouds, nothing short of a Greek God satisfies me. Yet the buildup of the story, as Raina said, was so beautiful that I'm sure some color would've crept up to my cheeks. It was the serenity of the moment that you felt the excitement of KD as he ran. The panting rose into you a little as he saw her and stopped. And the peace of the whole piece. (pun intended) Sach bataou, I wouldn't have explained KD's appearance in rain at all. It wasn't matching the flow of the OS, according to me. But then I thought of Prachi and Piyu who actually hyperventilated when reading of a wet KD that I thought, "What the heck!? Do lines se kya hota hai?" and just wrote it down 😆 But I really feel happy that you, despite not being a hyperventilating sort of a person, felt the intimacy (???) of the moment. Makes me really happy 😳

"She was looking at him, with a little more than raindrops in her eyes. They were tears which he gently wiped away and she rested her head on his chest. And the tears which he had wiped from her face, found a place in his eyes."

^^ The zenith of beauty of your story. Kudos little lady. I can only go 😳😳😳 at this

And in all... you've captured so much of the KiSha in my imagination that I have nothing to argue with you on. THREE TIMES IN A ROW!!!! Trust me, it really makes me want to dance that we don't have to argue! Maisy feels proud!

Apart from grammar, pardon me for being momentarily out of adoration, which you should go through once and rectify. This piece is so far your best, honestly. Grammar sucks! I wish someone else would proof read it! Nah! Mujhe nahin karna, buss nahin karna! It's my childish zidd! Baqi not my best piece as a writer, that I'm sure of. Maybe you like it so much because it's KiSha 😆

Love you and hate you. ;)
For this, I only have love! 🤗

Originally posted by: kritika_arvi

Nice os. Myself wus fan ,love d song,d movie n ur os continue.

Originally posted by: Mais

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

i honestly thought that this will be the one with slips and glitches because it was supposed to be short and yet I kept writing it on and on...really does surprise me that you liked it so much! 😆

Originally posted by: *Prachi*

The first thing am doing when I get home, is counting the number of times you wrote "moment"! I mean really? I was kind of whispering the words as I red it, and now my tongue aches due to the times it rolled off "moment"! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Oh God! Please do! I mean, I was also wondering just how many times I wrote 'moment' as well! Would love to know the amount of it! 😛 No kidding yaar!

Absolutely loved it. It wasnt even a moment before a smile started slipping off as I started to read this. It was so captivating and intriguing. Every small detail that he is able to see in her throws me off. How could someone be so much in love to notice someone with such depth? Its a question I always asked, and here you come with the most amazingly described love. From the eyes of a lover! Honestly, I could've written more moments. From the eyes of a lover, as you said. But that would've increased the length to a disturbing extent so I just said, "chuck it!" 😆 But I'm glad that whatever little I wrote, did its part and it was liked! 😳

This is beautiful! And anything I say wont do any justice to it! Every word I speak in its praise would be an insult because dude! This is FANTASTIC! Ab itna bhi acha nahin hai 😆😳

Oh and now coming to the drenched KD part - "He reached his destination and ran towards the place where he thought she might be. Within a minute, he was completely drenched in the rain. His white shirt got stuck to his body, revealing his well toned physique. His wet hair fell into his eyes which he pushed up restlessly. The rain was blinding him and he kept wiping the water off from his eyes. During that moment, he saw her."

KILL ME! THIS IS SO BLOODY HAWT!! OMG! Look at the effing most sexy-est thing on earth! I can literally imagine him! And to make it all better, I imagine him in that offwhite shirt of his with a tie! It was vacation for god sake! But no! I just cant control my vulgurness! WHY?? WHY IS HE SO HOT MAISY? WHY? Tie kahan se agayi?! 😲 🤣🤣 Oh Prachi! You are a total piece! 🤗 And trust me, those wet details were specially for you and Piyu! Marr rahe the na tum dono over a wet KD in the PanSh OS? Ab khush hojao! 😃

And thank you so much for the dedication! You are a sweetheart Twin! Mwahh <3 Evil, sweetheart ban gayi? 😆 LOVE YOU TOO!!! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: _Aanchal_

good job👏👏