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@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Ashley007
osm 😃😃 loved it ❤️❤️thnkuuu!!!! do pm me wen u update sure 😊😊

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@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: asmaju
cute..Thanks for pm.

thnx nd ur wlcum too!!

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@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

part 2
kiya gets out of d class in d corridor replyieng all d 'hi's' nd 'hellos' she luved her popularity standing at her locker picking some books wen she finds KD nearby wid frnds her heart skips a beat suddenly but she regrets it nd proceeds wid her work wen someone suddenly covers her eyes..."who is it? juhi?? stop it juhi!!!" kiya says "accha mujhe juhi samjha ha?" som voice says

k: KD!!??
nd he leaves her/

k: tum?? i mean tum!!!

kd: yup..

k: kuch kaam tha?

kd: bina kam ke koi hi bolne nai aa sakta?

k: nai..nai..vo me toh bas...

kd: tum to bas??

k: u know surprised suddenly yahn dekh kar

kd: vo aaj tumne class me hi bola aur me tnsed tha so thk se rply
nai kiya so i felt i shud com over

k: tum itne sensitive kabse ban gye??

kd: aaj se samjho...

k: ok..mr newly turned sensitive...
nd bod laugh...

kiya leaves for her class she enjoyed every bit of d convo wen piddie enters

p: abhi mene tujhe aur kd bhai ko bat krte dekha...

k: haan toh...

p: tujhe KD bhai kese lgtein hain??

k: thik ha...

p: hmm...hmm (trying 2 tease)

k: tujhe aur koi kam nhi ha kya? chal bhag!
nd piddie disappears...

whereas ranveer in d class during a borring period he ws kinda going 2 sleep wen panchi disturbs him
p: nonu utho!!!
r: sone de motti
p: mam dantegin nonu..
r: 2 min aur
p: vo dekho meera!!
r: kahn kahn? wakes up wid a start...
p: kabhi nhi sudhar sakte!!!!!
r: thnku thnku!!!!

d skul bell rang...evry studnt getting dere bags nd going out of class leaving kiya she to stay back 2day fr board work finally aftr finishing her work she calls d car bt d driver says dat cars broke!

k: gr8 im stuck!!! ab kya karun!!?? skul khali ha!!
she searched her bag...
k: wht! paise bhi nahi hain!!!!!!!!

precap: kiya crying...😭😭

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so, wht will she do now?? anywayz thnku fr cmmnts guyz! replied all nd luved dem too...thnku!!!!!!! will try to update fast nxt time!! hop u guyz liked it...?? dont frgt 2 leave cmmnts nd lyk!!

for pms buddy me!!!😊

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Hetal

@hetu29

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

res
Unres..
Yay !! 1st one to comment..
Awesum update...
K.D and kiya's part was so cute..
K.D Mr. Newly turned sensitive... 😛
Piddie teasing kiya..
Ranveer sleeping and n panchi waking him up by telling dekh meera.. Hehe...
Poor kiya she's stuck... No money with her...
Abb kya karegi bechaari.. Amm i knw... K.D jo hai usski help karne ke liye... 😆

Edited by hetalt29 - 12 years ago

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

it was an superb update... i liked it... loved the way how KD surprised kiya... cant wait for ur next update... and thanx for the pm...

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Aj phir se Mom Dad se chupke 😆...

Awesome part 👏...

Loved it ❤️.

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Piddi teasing was cute..

thanks for pm..

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Rishu... this was really amazin...
i loved kiSha convo...
i cant believe KD can behave si with Kiya...
piddie teasing Kiya... yaha bahut kuch different hai... just like u *wink*
panchi n ranvir... their frndship is really cute n adorable...
Kiya stuck in skul n her car break down... aur yeh precap... lagta hai evn u hv learnt to put ur updates at a cliffy...

but precap se lagta ha KD will cum at her rescue 😳

well i cant give a longer comment... cell se on hu... me too mom dad se chup kar..lolz. .

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-bornalee-

@-bornalee-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

superb update dear!!!! kiya n kd 's convo-so cuteee!!!! cnt evn imagine kd can do dis thing also...hehehe...bt seriously loved it,n rahi part was cute too..n our piddi janab...hehehe..he always makes me smile...
dis one is very cute,sweet sa update...update nxt part soon..n thnx for d pm..
n haan i fogot to comment abt d precap...i knw (its quite obvious ) kd is dere in d skul too,to help his chiklet😛
abhi toh update nxt part really soon..😛.

Edited by -bornalee- - 12 years ago

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Amazing part...
Really love kisha convo...
Nd then piddi teasing kiya.. Was superb.. Hehe
Rahi were awesome..
Everytime they bring smile on my face..
Beautifully written dear
update soon
thnx for pm

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