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Part 9

They all went n sat on d stairs of d corridor where they were made to do d cleaning. They see Vats cumn.

Kiya(annoyingly): Ye Censor Board to humare direction me hi aa raha hai. Jarur kuch na kuch pakayga. Hatao yaar ise.

KD: Censor Board, cool name ha.

Samar: Kiya sahiba, hum kuch karte hai.

He said them sumthn n they all smiled @ his idea.

Vats came to them.

Piddhi(to Samar wid a shy look): Tuje nahi lagta ki hum eek hona padhega. Isse humara aur b jyaada faayda hoga.

Samar(smiling @ Piddhi): Haan Piddhi sahib, ye to humne socha hi nahi humara ek hone se kitna faayda hoga.

Vats: Ye tum dono kya baatein kar rahe ho ek hone. Tumhe sharam nahi aati aisi baatein karte huve?

KD: Kis baat ki sharam, Sir?

Vats: Vahi ek hone ki. Ye sab apne ghar pe karo, school me nahi.

Ranveer: Sir, aap galat matlab nikal rahe hai.

Vats: Kaisa galat matlab?

Samar: Janab, humara kehne ka matlab ths hum ek hona padega grp study k liye jisse hum ek doosron ka padhai me problem solve kar sake.

Piddhi: Humare exams b to aa rahe hai na.

Samar: Janab, yaha par 4-4 kanya maujood hai fir b aapko aisi sharamnaak baatein kar k zara si b lajja nahi aayi.

Piddhi: Aap jaante hai iska hum students par kya asar karega.

Vats was pissed off but turned his attention to Bobby.

Vats(taunting): Vaise Babita, tumhare girls football teamka kya hua?

Bobby: Humari team is baar Royal ko jarur represent karegi. Mark my words.

Vats: Tumhara match Sunville k girls k saath hai. Tum unhe kaise haraoge? Sunville ki team to bahot better hai tumhare Royal team se. In fact, Sunville k saare students bahot better hai tum logo se.

Kiya was getn very angry n Panchi noticed it.

Kiya(angrily): Aapki problem kya hai humse aur humari girls football team se? Hume encourage aur support karne k jagah aap hume neecha q dikha rahe ho? Agar aapko Sunville k students jyaada better lagte hai to vahi chale jaiye na. Idhar q hum sabka...

Before Kiya sud say anything more, Panchi caught her to stop her 4m speaking anymore. All were shocked to see Kiya speaking in dat way wid Vats.

Panchi: Sir, aap pls hume akela chhod dijiye. Hume padhai karna hai.

Vats went 4m der. Panchi let go off of Kiya's hand.

Juhi: OMG! Tune Vats se aise baat kiya.

Kiya: Vo humesha hume neecha q dikhata hai? He says ki Sunville k saare students acche hai. Kuch din pehle huve incident k baad b vo aisa bol raha hai.

Panchi: Kiya, y were talking like dat wid Vats? Kuch ladko k vajah se tuje Sunville k sab students ya us school se nafrat ho gayi kya?

Kiya: Aisa kuch nahi hai. (tears cumn to her eyes) Par baat kya hai dat u know more than anyone else.

Kiya went 4m der crying wid Panchi going after her calling her name.

Juhi: Kiya ko kya hua? Sunville ka naam sunkar ya uske baare me baat karte hai to vo itna panic ho jaati hai. Aur vo ro kar yaha se chali gayi.

Bobby: Vo Panchi ko aisa kya bol rahi thi ki vo baat kya hai baaki sab se jyaada jaanti hai?

KD: I think vo hum sabse kuch chhupa rahi hai Sunville se related. Main jaakar dekhta hu.

Kiya n Panchi were sitting on a bench @ Kiya's locker section. Kiya was crying wid Panchi comforting her.

Panchi: Kiya, pls stop crying.

Kiya: Panchi, tuje kitne din k baad itni khushi ho rahi hai. I never knew ki mere b itne acche dost kabhi banenge. U were right, muje bahot pehle hi unse dosti kar leni chahiye thi par muje laga ki muje koi nahi samjhega ki main b ek normal ladki ki tarah hu.

Panchi: Tu aise q bol rahi hai? Tuje b samajhne k liye 1 aur chance dena chahiye tha. U know Kiya? Tere baare me to aaj sabko pata chal hi gaya ki tu asal me kitni acchi frnd hai. Par ek baat kisi ko nahi pata ki tune aisa kaam kiya hai jo ek saccha dost hi kar sakta hai. Ab to tere sab frnds ban gaye hai na to tuje bata dena chahiye ki tune b KD ki madad ki hai use bachaane k liye vo Kunal k saath date pe jaane ka natak kar k aur use smartly apni galti confess karva kar. Tune itna bada risk uthaya vo b apni mom se jhut bol kar.

KD who was seeing n listening all dis 4m behind was shocked to hear dis. He can't believe dat Kiya can do dis to save him. He thought abt d Kunal's confession which acc. To him earlier too seems to be taken 4m a closer distance n now he knew dat it none other than Kiya who tuk out d confession 4m him.

Kiya: Nahi Panchi, main kisi ko nahi bata sakti hu aur tu b kisi ko nahi bataygi. U know very well na ki agar meri mom ko pata chala to muje boarding school bhej degi. Tu chahti hai kya ki main yaha se chali jau? Kaash meri mom b teri mom jaise hoti. Isliye to main jyaada time tere ghar pe rehti hu. Ranveer k aane par muje ya to chhupna padta hai ya use pehle nikal jaana padta hai. Meri mom k liye sirf unka status aur reputation hi sab kuch hai. Kuch b ho humare reputation ka kya hoga? Aanya ka career khatre me padega? She don't love me yaar. She don't understand my feelings. Vo meri mom lagti hi nahi hai. Muje aisa lagta hai ki main galat ghar me paida ho gayi hu. Usne muje police station jaane se mana kar diya tha for d sake of her reputation nahi to KD thoda pehle b jail se baahar nikal sakta tha.

KD cud not bear to see Kiya cry like dis. His heart was breaking to see her cry n hear all dis. Kisha music was playing in d background while he was remembering some of his moments wid Kiya till now n how she changed 4m yesterday wen he returned n her asking him how he is d class n also him extending his hand for frndshp n her happily accepting it near her car.

Panchi: Par tuje atleast hum sab se bata dena chahiye. V r ur frnds na? Tuje hum par trust hai na?

Panchi wiped Kiya's tears n hugged her.

Kiya(slightly smiling): Haan hain. U r right main aaj hi sab frnds ko bata dungi. Aur ek important baat sirf hum dono hi jaante hai mera dream singing nahi dancing hai. Mom chahti hai ki main Aanya ki tarah singer banu. Unke liye vahi sab kuch hai main nahi. Assembly wale Banga Ki Pungi me muje b bahot maza. Bobby ne mujh par b ande-tamatar fenke. Idon't really mind dat much aur uska hisaab to main baad b le sakti hu masti me. Important ye ki Banga aur Vats ki pungi aur muje gaana b nahi gaana pada.

KD was more shocked n feeling dat cuz of her mom, Kiya is killing her own dream. He was thinking abt his own father n how his n Kiya's life is similar in many ways.

Panchi: KD lucky hai ki use teri jaisi frnd mili.

Kiya: Birdie, ye dialogue to muje J Sir ne b maara tha cinema k baahar jab main unhe apna cell ka memory card de rahi thi.

KD: Aur ab main b yahi dialogue maarunga ki main lucky hu jo muje teri jaisi frnd mili.

Both d girls were shocked n lukd back to see KD smiling n overhearing all dis. KD came in front of them.

Panchi: KD, tu yah ape humari baatein sun raha tha?

KD: Kiya ro kar gayi isliye main yaha aa gaya aur main aata nahi to muje pata b nahi chalta ki Kiya ne hum sabse itni badi baat chhupaayi hai.

Panchi: Muje tum dono ko baat karne k liye akela chhod dena chahiye. Main jaakar baaki sabko bata deti hu.

She went 4m der leaving Kisha alone. KD sat beside Kiya.

KD: Kiya, I can't believe ki tune b meri help ki. Thanks Kiya, muje bachaane k liye.

Kiya: Thanks ki kya jarurat hai, KD? Frnd k liye itna to kar hi sakti hu na?

Meanwhile, Panchi goes to other 6 buddies.

Bobby: Kya hua Kiya ko? Vo ro q rahi thi?

Juhi: Kiya kaisi hai abhi?

Panchi: Kiya is fine. Muje tum logo ko Kiya k baare me me ek bahot accha secret bataana hai par ye baat hum 8 jan k alaava kisi aur ko nahi pata chalna chahiye nahi to hum Kiya ko kho denge.

Piddhi: Aisi konsi baat hai? KD aur Kiya kahan hai?

Panchi: KD aur Kiya apne locker section k paas baithe hai. Kiya KD ko vahi secret bata rahi hai. Kiya ne b KD ki help ki hai.

All were shocked to hear dis.

Ranveer: Kiya ne KD ki help ki hai aur tuje chhodkar hum me kisi ko b nahi iske baare me kuch nahi bataya.

Samar: Ye to bahot acchi baat hai par Kiya mohterma ye baat raaz rakhne ko q kaha hai.

Panchi: Qki agar uski mom ko iske baare me pata chala to vo Kiya ko boarding school me bhej degi. Usne to use J Sir aur KD seb door rehne ko kaha hai.

Panchi tells them d whole while simultaneously d scene shows of Kiya teln KD d same. D other 5 buddies promises Panchi dat her secret vl remain a secret.

Scene shifts to Kisha.

KD: Tune to muje bachaane k liye us chuchundar k saath date karne ka naatak kiya jo humesha ye dialogue maarta tha ki 'Mujh me ek ajeeb sa charm hai'.

Kiya: Ghanta ajeeb sa charm hai usme. Us creepo ne vo maar maar k paka daala tha muje.

KD: Ab vo apna charm Arun ko dikha raha hoga. Dono jail me coochie coo kar rahe honge.

They both laughed 2gthr wen he said dat.

KD: Kal maine tujse aaj chemistry ka notes maanga tha.

Kiya: Haan, muje pata hai. Main tuje aaj school aate hi denewaali thi par vo Banga ne Vats ko bhej diya tuje bulaane k liye.

Kiya stands n goes to her locker. She removes her chemistry notes 4m her locker gives it to KD n he thanks her. Kiya again starts crying remembering Kunal's cheap remarks to her. Kiya: How can anyone be so cheap? Use ladkiyon ki zara si b ijjat nahi karne aati hai.

KD stands up n goes to her.

KD: Kiya, pls overcome d past nahi to bahot takleef hogi.

He wipes her tears n hugs her. She hugs him back wid Kisha music playing in d background.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
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amazing update
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hey awesome as always😊👏
loved the way KD came to know the truth
i love KISHA.
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part 10 vl be d last part😊
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

part 10 vl be d last part😊

why are you ending it?
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Part 10

They broke d hug.

Kiya: Maine parso Kunal se confession liya tha, muje poori raat thik se neend nahi aayi. I was worried ki kuch gadbad na ho qki Arun baad me J Sir ko pehchaan liya to un logo ko mujh par b doubt ho hi gaya hoga. Mom ko na pata chal jaaye. Isliye main Sunville ka naam sunkar bahot darr jaati hu aur humara football b unke girls k saath hai.

KD: O come on Kiya, ab darna b band karo. Aur apne football practice pe concentrate karo. Aur tumhara sapna jo ki dancing hai uspe b acche se dhyan do.

Samar n Juhi came der.

Juhi: Hum tumhara kab se wait kar rahe the aur tum log ab tak yaha ho.

Samar: Chaliye sab bhojnaalay(canteen) chalte hai. Baaki sab vahi hai. Hume bahot bhook lagi hai.

KD(smiling): Bhook to Kiya ko b bahot lagi hogi. Sirf peekar jo aayi hai.

KD, Samar n Juhi laughed while Kiya just rolled her eyes n then laughed aloud louder than d trio.

Kiya(laughing): Vo double meaning sirf Banga jko irritate karne k liye tha. U don't say dat. Aur tuje lagta hai ki sach me kuch khaakar nahi aayi hu? Hahaha.

D trio lukd @ her in shock n then laughed aloud knowing dat she was acting in front of Banga of not having food wen he was irritating her.

Evry1 r sitting @ a table in d canteen.

Kiya: Samar, kya idea tha aapka Vats ko confuse karne ka! Lekin next time kuch dhang ka idea sochna. Par vo us baat se haar gaya to topic apna focus girls football team aur Sunville pe change kar diya. Mera to mann to kar raha tha ki Banga ki tarah main uska b daant tod du.

Others luks @ her in shock.

Ramveer: Kahin tune hi nahi Banga ka daant toda tha hume bachaane k liye?

Kiya: Ranveer, tuje aisa q lagta hai ki maine hi Banga ka daant toda tha.

Ranveer: Qki Banga ka daant tere vaha aane par hi toota tha.

Kiya: Main q Banga ka daant todungi? Muje buri tarah latakna nahi hai. Vo to fisalne se gira aur uske daant toot gaye. Muje to pata b nahi tha KD k bulaane se pehle ki Banga tum logo se ye sab karva raha hai. Ye sab itna achaanak se hua ki main samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki main karu to kya karu tum sabko bachaane k liye. (smiling)Main pray kar rahi thi mann me ki sab thik ho jaaye bina mere kuch kiye aur tabhi kuch Banga fisalkar gir gaya aur uske do daant toot gaye.

Juhi(giggling): Iska matlab Kiya bhagwan ne teri baat sun li.

Panchi(smiling): Bhagwan acche logo ki baat q nahi sunenge? Kya saza diya Banga ko Bhagwan ne tum logo ko humiliate karne k liye.

KD(laughing): Aur tu bol rahi hai ki tune kuch nahi kiya tha Banga ko.

All laughed heartily.

Piddhi: Lagta hai Banga ka chemistry mam se kuch chakkar hai. Vats Banga ko vahi bol raha tha chidhakar office me.

Kiya(annoyingly): Us chemistry mam ka naam mat le. Samajhti kya hai khud ko?

Bobby(smiling): Kyu? Kal tuje Juhi k saath baahar nikaal diya tha isliye chemistry mam se bhadki hui hai na?

Kiya: Sab Juhi ki krupa hai.

Juhi: Chill na babes, ek boring lec se to chutkaara mila baahar khade rehkar.

Kiya: Dats fine, Juhi. (annoyingly) Par use nikaalna hi tha to seedha seedha nikaal nahi sakti thi. Itna sadiyal dialogue dialogue maar k hume itna paka q rahi thi 'great, tumhe pata hai ki chemistry k lec me chemistry hi sikhaaya jaa raha hi'. Use kya laga ki main us chemistry ki baat kar rahi thi jo Piddi bata raha hai uska aur Banga ka. Khadus kahin ki.

Evry1 laughed on hearing dat.

Bobby goes 4m der to attend to a call n goes out of d canteen to talk.

Piddhi: Pata nahi Bobby kitna time lagaygi baat karne me?

Samar: Janab, Bobby sahiba aa jaaygi. Thoda sabr kijiye.

Piddhi: Kiya, Bobby ko kaise impress karu, koi idea bata na?

Kiya: Main kaise batau? Mera khud aaj tak koi boyfriend nahi bana hai. Lekin agar tu aise hi double meaning dialogues vo b ladki k saamne bolte rahega to tuje ek sirf insaan milega?

Piddhi: Bobby ko chhodkar muje kaun milega?

Kiya(teasingly): Vats aur kaun?

Except Piddhi evry1 laughed as they figured out y she tuk Vats name.

Ranveer: Aur tuje vo hospital scene aur vo cartoon to yaad hai na?

Kiya(laughing): Jab Panchi mujse ye baat bataayi thi, I was like 'Maine ye moment miss q kar diya?'.

Juhi(smiling): Vaise Piddhi, agar Bobby ko iss baare me pata chala to vo tuje dekh kar sirf yahi gaana gaygi.

Piddhi: Bobby mere liye kaunsa gaana gaygi?

Juhi: Second Hand Jawani.

Juhi starts singing dat song while others except Piddhi joins her. Piddhi is getn embarrassed n teln them to stop. Bobby comes back to them after finishing her call.

Bobby: Prehle iss chuhe ko to 1st hand to mile?

Others stopped singing n laughed.

Piddhi: Main soch raha tha ki.

Panchi: Tuje sochne b aata hai!!

Piddhi: Bolne to de muje.

KD: Haan bol kya bolna hai.

Piddhi: Main soch raha tha ki KD bhai k vapas aane ki khushi me party du par paise nahi hai.

KD: Bada hi gareeb celebrity hai tu.

Piddhi: Bhai, koi to idea do na. Ijjat ka sawaal hai.

KD: To ek kaam kar party school me rakh le.

Kiya: Par school me kaise party rakhenge?

KD: Piddhi to abhi celebrity ban gaya to vo jaakar Prrinci Sir se permission lega ki hume Teacher's Day party rakhna hai. I am sure ki vo iske liye nahi mana karenge aur hume humari masti karne se kaun rok sakta hai.

Bobby: Kitna cool idea hai.

Panchi: Par 2 problem hai?

Piddhi: Kaunse 2 problem?

Panchi: Banga aur Vats.

Ranveer: Moti, khaana khaane k time pe insaano ka naam liya kar nahi to khaana humare gale se neeche nahi utrega.

Panchi: Vo dono to yahi koshish karenge ki party ki permission na mile aur mila to use sabotage karne k liye kuch na kuch jarur sochenge.

Piddhi: Kya ukhadenge vo dono? Hum unki mother-sister together kar denge. Gaad daalenge, faad daalenge, ukhaad daalenge.

Ranveer: Un dono ki pungi baja daalenge.

KD: Agar un dono ne humare party ko kuch karne k baare me socha b to aisi pungi bajayenge ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhenge.

Samar: Party k liye khaane peene aur baaki cheezon ka intejaam hum karenge.

Ranveer: Main music ka arrangement karunga.

Juhi: Main decorations karungi.

Panchi: Hum sab b Juhi ka saath denge.

Piddhi: Bas Princi Sire party k liye permission de de to maza aa jaayga.

They all get up 4m d table n went to stand some distance away. They all do a grp hi-five wid d entire TBP theme song playing in d background. They then do a grp hug in d sequence of Samar-Juhi-Kiya-KD-Ranveer-Panchi-Bobby-Piddhi d TBP theme song continues till d end wid them hugging n der happy, excited n smiling faces.

-----The End-----

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
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