SS: Kiya To Her Co-Detainees Rescue-Pt.10 on Pg.12

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@-Kryan-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Wooow!!! Amazing SS!! Love it..!! Love Kiya sticking up for the gang and Kiya pinching KD 😳 Please editing this part quickly wanna read more !!!

Thanx for Scraping and letting me know that u have updated next part😊.. Really ur a beautiful writter😳

Edited by -Jennifer- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wat does actually 'res' means...me seen in many posts

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
wat does actually 'res' means...me seen in many posts

'Res' means Reserved

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 2 completed-read it again eventhough it luks attractive due to small font...dunno how much part is left due to d limited space of posting but third part to come soon 😊

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wat ending do u want?
1. just panchi-kiya wer kiya is pouring her heart out teln she is happy after a long time after seeing other's happy.
2. overhearing panchi-kiya convo getn to know d truth of kiya helping him n then a final kisha hugging scene wer kd is comforting a bitterly crying kiya after she tells him d whole story...no panchi in kisha scene but a separate scene(kd vl not tell d truth to any1 even piddi n vl know his similarity of life like kiya).
3. d super 8 group hug after d 2nd option happening.

lemme know 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey! I want the 3rd part aftr 2nd one: the 3rd option!!...
Okay okay now cuming to update...nice update..Kiya sticking up vth d gang n othrs taking to each othr too..diff ss :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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i like d idea of showing d real kiya n her chalaying meethi choori on banga 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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plz read again as i hv edited n altered d 1st part n vl soon do d same wid d 2nd part😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Continue soon and pm me once u update!

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Part 3
Juhi: Real Kiya? Matlab?
Panchi: U vl know soon.
Banga: Tum ek popstar ki behen ho, tumhe aise kaam karna suit nahi karta hai.
Kiya: Aur aapko, is tarah se kisike liye partiality karna suit nahi karta hai.
Everyone was shocked n wondering abt d changes in Kiya.
KD: Kiya, ek popstar ki behen apne ghar pe hogi aur vo abhi RA ki student hai.
Bobby: Kiya popstar ki behen se pehle humari tarah ek normal ladki hai.
Ranveer: Kiya ki b ek alag pehchaan hai. Aur idhar vo sirf Kiya Gujral hai, kisi popstari behen nahi.
Piddi: Kiya b humari tarah ek student aur detainee hai. Koi special nahi.
Samar: Kiya mohterma ki ya kisi ki b is tarah tarafdaari karna niyam k khilaaf hai.
Kiya lukd @ all 5 wid a moist look. She gave them a slight smile as if she was pleased wid him for saying dat much to der shock. She continued wid her work n blinked her eyes to let d moistness go. She was silent for a few seconds wen Banga interrupted her.
Banga: Y r u silent? Tumhe bura laga na inki baaton ka. I vl not leave them.
Kiya: No Sir, muje bura nahi laga par bahot khushi par bahot khushi hui.
All were again shocked on hearing dis. They can't imagine her saying dis.
Banga: Aaj tum apne dushmano ka q saath de rahi ho?
Kiya: Sir, wat r u saying? Meri kisi se dushmani nahi hai. In fact, hamesha main hi sabki insult karte rehti thi aur muje sirf uska jawaab milte rehta tha. Aapne muje meri galti kabhi nahi dikhayi. PAata nahi main na chahkar b kisi ko b hurt kar deti thi. Jo in logo ne abhi , I waiting to hear dat 4m a long time.
Banga: Tumhari tabeeyat to thik hai na, Kiya?
Kiya: Yaa Sir, I am alright. Muje kya ho sakta hai?
Banga: Tum aaj kya khaakar aayi ho?
Kiya(in a little amusing voice): Nahi Sir, main khaakar nahi peekar aayi hu.
All 5 laughed loudly. Even Panchi n Juhi were laughing behind d wall widout letn der voice b heard till der.
Banga: Kiya, tumhe sharam nahi aati hai jo college me peekar aayi ho.
Kiya: Usme kya sharam hai?
Banga: U hv come drunk dats y u r not in ur senses 2day.
Kiya: (shockingly)Drunk! Sir, aap mujhe galat samajh rahe hai. Duniya me kya sirf ek hi cheez ko peena bolte hai? Mera matlab main sirf milkshake peekar aayi. (amusingly)Khaana nahi khaya qki muje bahot late ho raha tha isliye main bhaag bhaagkar aayi.
No one can stop der laughter n were laughing silently. Kiya winked @ Panchi n Juhi who were giving her thumbs ups wid der both hands wid Banga unaware but d other cud see dat.
Banga(shockingly): Bhaag bhaagkar aayi, tum to car se aati ho na.
Kiya(controlling a laugh): Haan Sir, car se hi aati hu par ghar se car tak bhaag bhaagkar gayi n after reaching school gate, car se yaha tak bhaag bhaagkar aayi.
KD, Piddi, Bobby, Samar n Ranveer again started laughing loudly hearing Kiya's funny reply n Banga's puzzled face. Kiya signalled d duo hiding to come n help her. They came casually as if they don't had any idea of wats going on?
Juhi: Hey Kiya, hum dono tum sab ko kab se dhund rahe ho aur tum idhar safaai q kar rahe ho?
Panchi: Lets go to d class, guys. College me kya ye sab karne aate ho tum log?
Ranveer: Moti, hum detention waalo ko punishment mila hai isliye kar rahe hai.
Kiya(nicely n amusingly): Tuje kya laga, Birdie? Ki hum social service karne me lage hai?
All were surprised to see Kiya calling Panchi 'Birdie' instead of 'Fatso'. She was not rude at all. Wen Banga was lukn away, Kiya gave double hi-five to d duo n all 3 were smiling. D other 5 cud not understand wat they were really upto but they lukd @ each other n decided to support them.
All of a sudden, Juhi changed d topic.
Juhi(to Kiya): Hey babes, u know wat? Maine b singing competition me part liya hai.
Kiya: Oh wow, dats great. All d best. Par tune konsa gaana choose kiya hai?
Banga: Huh...part lekar kya faayda. Jeetne wali to Kiya hi hai na. Singing competition ho ya na ho kya farak padega.
Kiya: Sir, dis is not fair. Competition me part lene ka sabka right hai. Jaruri nhi hai ki main hi jeetu. Is school bahot jan mujhse accha gaate hai even Juhi. Sabko chance milna chahiye. Main is school me akeli to nahi hu na.
D other were becoming impressed wid her reply as she didn't show proudness n defending her frnd.
Juhi: Muje ek cool aur interesting gaana chahiye tha isliye maine vo gaana select kiya.
Kiya: Konsa vo?
Juhi: Vahi.
Kiya: Konsa vahi? Common yaar, hum dono me se koi b jeete muje koi farak nahi padega. I vl be happy for u if u win.
Samar: Juhiji, bata b dijiye na. Humse b kya parda?
Juhi(blushing): Samarji, vo gaana hai 'Chaahe Koi Mujhe Junglee Kahe'.
Banga again became terrified on hearing d word 'Junglee' while all were pleased to see dat.
Kiya(teasingly): Samar ne poocha to barabar bata diya ha. Kya baat hai?
Juhi(still blushing): Kuch nahi babes, bas yuhi.
Kiya: Well Juhi, great choice ha. Ye gaana gaakar tuje jeetne ka bahot chances hai mujse b jyaada. Listen, mera pata nahi mera thi se ready ho payga ya nahi but I want atleast u to try to win. So, u can practice right now itself.
She said smiling n signalling @ Juhi.
Juhi started singing by highlighting d word 'Junglee' by saying dat word a little louder than d rest. She also started dancing. Banga was getn more n more frightened. Hewas getn more n more tensed remembering abt abt JJ's prank on him
Banga: Juhi, y-y-y-ye kya n-n-n-naachne-gaane ka jaga hai? Band karo ise.
Samar: Sir, sangeet aur nrutya to swayam eeshwar ka diya hua uphaar hai. Hum is uphaar ki tauheen kaise kar sakte hai?
All except Banga laughed aloud. Even Kiya laughed aloud dis time. KD, Piddhi, Bobby, Ranveer, Panchi, Samar n Juhi lukd @ laughing Kiya none had seen her laugh so aloud. She lukd very sweet to them n they forgot @ dat time abt how Kiya was? KD was mesmerized by her laughter.
Kiya: Gaana jitna chaahe gaa sakti hai par dance karegi to ye b Banga Sir ki tarah slip hokar gir jaygi.
Banga was startled much to other's amusement. Panchi signalled @ d other 5 to support them.
Piddi: Aur Sir, aapke do daant toot gaye the.
Ranveer: Aur Vats ne aapke hisse ka b bhutta b kha liya tha. U remember.
Piddi: Sir, mene aapko mere uncle ka kitna accha offer b diya tha?
Banga: Shut up.
Panchi: Tum sab ko aur kitna time lagega?
Kiya: Dunno dear, pata nahi hume aise humiliate q hona pad raha hai? Aur vo b apne future principal k haathon.
Panchi: Agar princi ko pata chal gaya to?
Kiya: To jyaada, kuch nahi sirf kisi aur ko princi bana denge. Someone gentle n caring like Jaitley Sir. U know wat? Jaitley Sir KD ko bachaane k liye bahot mehnat kiye? He was really worried abt KD.
Banga: Muje b bahot chinta thi KD ki.
Kiya: Isliye police ko bulaya aapne.
KD was getn very pleased by Kiya. He was thinking abt his moments wid her n smiling.
Banga: V-v-v-vo to bas fight rokne k liye.
Panchi: Fight rokne k liye aur b log the.
Kiya: Sabko abhi tak yaad hai ki KD widout any reason jail me sadta raha. And more strange, fighting k time pe kitne log khade the aur kisi ne us kameene Kunal ko KD k bag me drugs daalte hue nahi dekha. Abhi uski haalat bahot kharaab hai fir b usse kaam karva rahe hai. Agar kisi ko ye baat pat chal gayi to.
Bobby: To jyaada kuch nahi, Banga Sir ka princi banne se patta cut.
Ranveer: Aur agar pata chala ki students ko aisa humiliate kiya jaa raha hai?
Panchi: To Sir ka to princi banne ka chance Mumbai me snowfall hone ka chance jaisa ho jayga.
Kiya: Sir, aapne dekha, sabko aapki kitni chinta hai. She said dat sarcastically much to others laugh.
She signalled Juhi to sing a little louder saying 'Junglee' in louder tone than other words. Banga was again getn flsahback of JJ playing a prank on him. He was getn terrified n panicking.
Kiya: Sir...
Banga was startled while others laughed.
Kiya: Sir...aapne naya daant transplant karvaaya kya? Agar aapne transplant nahi karvaaya rahega to...
KD: ...to Vats aapke hisse ka bhutta fir se kha jaayega.
KiSha stared n smiled @ each other unknown to anyone as he completed d sentence for her.
Banga(angrily): Just shut up, all of u...go to ur class.
Kiya: Par hume to punishment mili hai.
Banga: Just gooo...tum log yaha padhne aate ho ya safaai karne?
Ranveer: Par Sir, aapne hi hume...
Banga cut him before he completed d sentence.
Banga: Please go, all of u.
"As u wish, Sir", all d 6 detainees saying in unison.
Juhi continued singing.
Banga: Tum abhi tak gaa rahi ho aur tumhe yahi gaana mila kya?
Juhi: Is gaane me kya problem hai, Sir. Aap nahi chahte ki main b accha perform karu.
Piddi: Jarur koi to baat hai jiske vajah se Sir ki tabeeyat theek nahi lag rahi hai.
Banga was fed up n went away in frustration before calling everyone 'Junglees' while others laughed heartily.
Kiya, Panchi n Juhi(smiling broadly): Thanks for d compliment.
D trio hi-fived n hugged each other.
Kiya(to Panchi n Juhi): We did it. Saale dhakkan ne dimaag out kar diya tha.
All were shocked to hear Kiya saying dis to Banga.
Juhi: But babes, it was ur plan. U r really very sweet.
Panchi(smiling): See Juhi, she is d real Kiya. Vo bahot pehle se meri acchi frnd hai.
All were puzzled n were starting @ Kiya n Panchi n they stared back @ them. All hd no idea how good Kiya really was n y she was mean to them before.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 13 years ago

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