KD-Kiya OS - Streetlight - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Sure. OS are supposed to be one time things. Like they are written just to explain an aspect of the story or to elaborate on it. Sometimes they are made so that the fans can write what they want to see on the show. So they don't need a proper beginning. They can start anywhere and anyhow and can end just as abruptly. They don't have to explain themselves or their characters in intricate detail. It is like a small excerpt from a novel. Take this very OS for instance. You started with -

She stomped out of the backdoor. Maybe this was it. She couldn't bear looking at her mother's constant unsatisfied look of her.

Here you didn't explain your character or tell us what this was about. You just took up a random scene and started with your own fabrication. That's what I'm talking about. It's starts in the middle of nowhere and more often than not ends in the middle of nowhere. Hope I made sense?

Originally posted by: _Aanchal_

beautiful piece of writing, loved it 👏

Originally posted by: SwaRonforever

pree dis is sooo KiSha..
I loved it...beautiful OS