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Piyu

@100littledevils

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

I commented just to let u to knw...iam still reading this os hahaha!!!

please upload a new KiSha OS hahaha

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: 100littledevils
I commented just to let u to knw...iam still reading this os hahaha!!!
please upload a new KiSha OS hahaha

Piyu I have the second part of the TBP OS written, another PanSh OS complete and a KiSha one half done...

I have a handful of surprises!! 😉

Edited by CoffeeAddict - 13 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

I had been roaming around the TBP forum, trying to find some random stuff to read...

Might as well tell you this OS made my day... Beautifully Written... Loved it completely!

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Damn you, Pree! If you're going to start writing such awesome, meaningful OS so early in the show you're just going to raise our hopes! You've already managed to raise mine!

You know why I like OS? Because they have an abrupt beginning. I can't describe the thrill I get from reading an OS with an abrupt beginning. And that is exactly why I love your works so much. You start abruptly and even when you do end you always manage to leave a lingering, unsolved question behind. You make us ponder on it. And I love that.

You did start this OS abruptly yet it was an unbelievably smooth read. What started as a mystery remained a mystery. KD and Kiya acted like strangers before and even now they are not exactly friendly. They are just friendlier. KD as a character holds a lot of intrigue from me. He is multi-layered and nobody knows why he acts the way he does. Kiya isn't nearly as complex. Her problems are apparent enough. Yet the way she handles them is complicatedly disturbing. Both of them are outcasts. And that is their connection.

I absolutely loved this OS for the ring of simplicity as well as authenticity embedded in it. Their relation doesn't improve with their chance encounter. It's still the same. But they each had a glimpse into the other's life. A small glimpse. But a glimpse nonetheless. And while they are far from becoming friends or even lovers for that matter, it is still one step towards establishing a cordial relationship. And for them it's a huge step.

You already know you're an exceptionally brilliant writer. And instead of fighting cases you should be writing books. Or you can do both. I loved this piece of writing like I loved all your previous works. In fact I'm still waiting for the day when I find a piece written by you which I don't love.

Love,

Nidz.

Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 13 years ago

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Piyu

@100littledevils

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

Piyu I have the second part of the TBP OS written, another PanSh OS complete and a KiSha one half done...

I have a handful of surprises!! 😉

OMG then upload yaar.. don't tadpofy me 😆

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

OMG then upload yaar.. don't tadpofy me😆

Sleepover at friend's... Gonna be back home only tomorrow evening directly from college.

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Piyu

@100littledevils

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

Sleepover at friend's... Gonna be back home only tomorrow evening directly from college.

Oh wow..enjoy yaar. i will wait for tom then <3

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Edited

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62822650

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
Damn you, Pree! If you're going to start writing such awesome, meaningful OS so early in the show you're just going to raise our hopes! You've already managed to raise mine!

You know why I like OS? Because they have an abrupt beginning. I can't describe the thrill I get from reading an OS with an abrupt beginning. And that is exactly why I love your works so much. You start abruptly and even when you do end you always manage to leave a lingering, unsolved question behind. You make us ponder on it. And I love that.

You did start this OS abruptly yet it was an unbelievably smooth read. What started as a mystery remained a mystery. KD and Kiya acted like strangers before and even now they are not exactly friendly. They are just friendlier. KD as a character holds a lot of intrigue from me. He is multi-layered and nobody knows why he acts the way he does. Kiya isn't nearly as complex. Her problems are apparent enough. Yet the way she handles them is complicatedly disturbing. Both of them are outcasts. And that is their connection.

I absolutely loved this OS for the ring of simplicity as well as authenticity embedded in it. Their relation doesn't improve with their chance encounter. It's still the same. But they each had a glimpse into the other's life. A small glimpse. But a glimpse nonetheless. And while they are far from becoming friends or even lovers for that matter, it is still one step towards establishing a cordial relationship. And for them it's a huge step.

You already know you're an exceptionally brilliant writer. And instead of fighting cases you should be writing books. Or you can do both. I loved this piece of writing like I loved all your previous works. In fact I'm still waiting for the day when I find a piece written by you which I don't love.

Love,
Nidz.

En... Finally!

So well, I can't really reply much to this, apart from saying I'm floored all the way!!

Thanks. And you better as a reader than I'm as a writer... You read, you react, you analyse and you review... that's why I wait for these few paragraphs and these few words to be left on my desk, signed Nidz., with everything I do. Because it gives me hope that I haven't lost my touch yet...

Someday I'll be both. But I won't be letting go of law ever, it's my passion.

I hope that day doesn't come anytime sooner (for it is bound to come) when you don't love my work anymore.

Thanks.

Btw would you elaborate on the "red" highlighted part a bit, I'm still a little curious as to how...

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
Btw would you elaborate on the "red" highlighted part a bit, I'm still a little curious as to how...

Sure. OS are supposed to be one time things. Like they are written just to explain an aspect of the story or to elaborate on it. Sometimes they are made so that the fans can write what they want to see on the show. So they don't need a proper beginning. They can start anywhere and anyhow and can end just as abruptly. They don't have to explain themselves or their characters in intricate detail. It is like a small excerpt from a novel. Take this very OS for instance. You started with -

She stomped out of the backdoor. Maybe this was it. She couldn't bear looking at her mother's constant unsatisfied look of her.

Here you didn't explain your character or tell us what this was about. You just took up a random scene and started with your own fabrication. That's what I'm talking about. It's starts in the middle of nowhere and more often than not ends in the middle of nowhere. Hope I made sense?

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