Manyasa FF(part6 updated)

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Kuch naya try kar rahi hu manyasa ki frndship pr FF
darasal hum sb unki journey jantey hai k woh kaise yaha tk pahuche mtlb thapki me kaise saath aaye aur unki frndship k baare me phir bhi woh sb kuch main FF me likhna chahti hu kuch reality se kuch main apne thought se likhungi phir bhi ye FF hi hai ok thank u everyone 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part1





Manish apne dosto k saath hai kahi bahar aur enjoy kar raha hai usey call aata hai from thapki PH

Mani:hello

PH:hello manish

Mani:Ha kahiye

PH:Ek baat janani thi woh ladki joh tumhare saath ek ad me hai uska naam bata sakte ho aur ho sake toh ph no bhi

Mani:aap idea k ad ki baat kar rahe hai

PH:haa

Mani:(in mind)ye jigyasa ke baare me q pooch rahe hai kya baat hai kahi ye usey bhi toh cast nhi kr rahe show me ,nhi aisa nhi hoga koi aur show k liye yaa kisi aur kaam k liye pooch rahe hoge

Mani:haa uska naam jigyasa singh hai aur uska no main aapko msg karta hu

Aur mani call cut karta hai aur PH ko jigu ka no msg karta hai aur phir se frnds k saath busy ho jata hai

Jigu in delhi apne collage me hai

PH:hello

Jigu:hello koun

PH:kya main jigyasa se baat kar sakta hu

Jigu:ji kahiye main hi jigyasa hu

Aur PH aur jigu k beech kuch baat hoti hai n jigu call cut karti hai

after 10 days manish ko call aata hai

Mani:hello

PH:haa manish 1 hafte baad show k liye workshop rakh rahe hai toh tum aajana jaipur me hi hai aur tumhare opposite female lead bhi select ho gai hai aur kamal ki baat ye hai k tum usey acche se jante ho

Mani:koun please ye mat kehna ki woh

PH:sahi samjhe jigyasa singh joh tumhare saath last show me thi accha thik hai abhi call cut karta hu workshop me milte hai

Mani call cut karta hai aur khud se baat kr raha hai ye ladki kb mera peecha choregi har jagah aa jati hai 1 saal se toh baat bhi nhi hai humari q k padai k liye delhi chali gai aur mujhse jhagad kr gai toh phone pr baat bhi nhi ki pr pata nhi kismat q humdono ko baar baar ek dusare k samne le aati hai pata nhi ab kya hoga

Precape:3 years back

Ok toh ye bahut chota update hai pr shayad ye padhkr aapko andaza ho jayega k main kya likhne wali hu ye mere thought hai unki frndship ki journey ko lekar toh kya kehte ho continue karu yaa nhi aap sb jaisa kaho please zarur batana thank u story padne k liye

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I would love to read more about them but it might difficult to write 2 FF at the same time.
Edited by Toulup - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good one luking forward...keep it up dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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well started . keep it up and plz continue .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start. Plz update it soon
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Part2



PH mani ko call karte hai

Mani:hello

Ph:haa tumhe mumbai aana hoga audition k liye

Mani:pr kl hi toh aapne kaha k jaipur me hi workshop hai thapki k liye phir mumbai q

Ph:darasal director aur producer tum dono lead ko saath dekhna chahte hai aur ek auddition toh hai tum dono select ho pr phir bhi aa jao humne tumdono ka last show ki cliping dekhi aur chemistry acchi hai pr samne dekhna chahte hai waise maine jigyasa ko bhi keh dia hai aur woh aa rahi hai

Mani:ok

Mani call cut karta hai

In Mumbai
Jigyasa pehle hi pahuch chuki hai aur manni pahuchta hai

Ph team:manish aa jao tumhara hi intezar tha jigyasa aa chuki hai hai directore aur cvs bhi hai toh tum dono ka pehle single audition hoga baad me saath me ok

Manni:thik

Manish yaha waha dekhta hai aur jigu dikhai deti hai ek chair pr bethi hai woh manni ko dekh khadi ho jati hai aur manyasa eyelock aur poorane din yaad karte jb dono ne pehli baar ek dusare ko dekha

FB(3years back)

(Note:yaha se story 3yr peeche ki hai jb ctgbp k auddition k time dono mile the aur tpk tk k auddition tk aane ki sari story)

Jigu's house

Aarohi: jigu

Jigu:haa aarohi bolo

A:chalo mere saath

J:kahaa

A:yaha jaipur me ek serial k liye audition hai bs wahi mujhe jana hai toh tu bhi saath chal

J:nhi main kya karungi waha

A:aarey koi toh saath hona chahiye mummy akele nhi jane degi pata hai n please chal n

J:thik hai main change karti hu

A:arey acchi lag rahi hai tujhe kaha audition dena hai bs thoda hair bana aur chal

J:thik hai chalo

Auddition in jaipur for ctgbp(chore tera gao bada pyara)

Kuch boys sidhi pr bethe huey hai waha manni bhi hai woh bhi audition k liye aaya hai aur audition lene wali team me bhi shamil hai tabhi gate se jigu apne frnd k saath aati hai aur manni usey dekhta hai kuch der dekhta hai bs aur woh room me jati hai manni phir se dosto k saath busy ho jata hai

Aarohi audition dekar aati hai tabhi audition team me se ek member aata hai aur jigu se audition dene k liye kehta hai woh manna karti hai k woh yaha audition dene nhi aai phir bhi aarohi bhi usey try karne k liye kehti hai

Jigu room me aur ashish shrma actor ko dekh dang reh jati hai

Jigu:arey aapko maine tv pr dekha hai

Aur sb haas dete hai aur usey audition k liye kehte hai usey kuch dilouge diye jate hai jise jigu acche se kar leti hai manni bhi wahi hai q k woh us team hissa hai toh woh jigu ko dekhta hai
Aur apne team member se kehta hai k dekhna yahi ladki select hongi aaliya k caracter k liye n jigu chali jati hai woh ghar pahuchti hai

Ghar pahuchkr usey lagta hai k acche se kr sakti thi pr nhi ho paya uske woh decide karti hai k woh phir se try karegi aur acche se ready hokr uske papa k saath phir se wahi jati hai

Ctgbp PH:aap yaha phir se

J:sir kya main phir se audition de sakti hu please ek baar woh pehle accha nhi tha

Ctgbp Ph:thik yaha intezaar karo main ander poochkr aata hu

Jigu wait kr rahi hai aur wahi bahar manni bike pr apne frnd se baat kr raha kuch aur boys bhi hai joh audition k liye aaye hai woh manni ko dekhti hai aur sochti hai k ye ladka in sbme sbse handsom hai bhgwan ji agar main select ho gai toh isey hi mere opposite select karna please aur tabhi jigu ander bulaya jata hai aur woh phir se audition deti aur ghar wapas jati hai usey kaha jata hai call karke bataya jayega


Night

Jigu in mind pata nhi kya hoga main select toh houngi n bhagwanji please ab joh try kiya hi hai toh select bhi karwa dena aur haa mere opposite bhi wahi hona chahiye mujhe naam nhi pata pr aapko toh sb pata hai ok thank u nd good night


Precape:manyasa first meeting

Ok iss FF k update thode chote honge q k jaisa time milega waisa update karungi kuch real kuch drama maine dala hai toh issey FF hi samjhna unki real life se connect mt karna aur commnt karo mujhe batao joh accha lage woh bhi aur joh accha na lage woh bhi thank u
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I like short updates. It takes less time to read.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part3




Jigu ko call aata hai PH se k woh select ho gai hai ctgbp show k liye aur usey meeting k liye bulate taki show se related kuch baate ki jaye aur aage sari formalities poori ki jaye woh call cut karti hai aur zor se chilati hai yaha waha bhagti hai bahut khush hai aur ghar me sbko batati hai k woh select ho gai hai uski family khush hoti hai aur woh apni frnd ko batati hai aarohi joh select nhi hoti

Jigu:aarohi main show k liye
Aur jigu chup ho jati hai uska udas chehra dekhkr
Sorry yaar main khushi me dekh hi nhi payee k tune bhi audition dia tha

Aarohi:tu mere liye q dukhi ho rahi hai arrey ye khushi ki baat hai k tu select ho gayee chal ab mujhe iski party chahiye

J:pr yaar mujhe bura lag raha hai tere liye

A:tu bhi n tu select ho gayee woh bhi mere liye khushi ki baat hai aur dekhna main u hi try karti rahungi kabhi n kabhi mujhe bhi mouka milega ab udas mt ho tujhe meri kasam

Aur jigu khush ho jati hai

A:jigu tujhe nhi lagta k tu mere saath aana nhi chahti thi pr main tujhe le gai ,tu audition dena nhi chahti thi phir bhi tujhe dene k liye kaha gaya aur tera selection bhi ho gaya shayad ye pehle se hi tai tha isey hi kismat kehte ya destiny joh hum sochtey aur chahtey bhi nhi woh ho jata hai

J:ye kaisi baate kar rahi mera in baato pr koi bharosa nhi hai kismat destiny n all ,thik hai chal tuje ice cream ki party deti hu

A:ice cream ki, kanjoos

J:kya kanjoos abhi searial start toh hone de phir doongi n acchi badi wali party jaisa tu kahe

Dono smile karte hai aur chale jaate hai

Next morning

Jigu taiyaar hoker meeting k liye jaati hai aur wahi wait kr rahi hai uske pass ek ladka aata hai aur pas wali chair pr bethta hai

Boy:hello

Jigu:hi

Boy:toh tum bhi is serial k liye select ho gayee

J:haa female lead k liye

Boy:ohh agar lead me ho toh bahut accha hai

J:q

Boy:q k mujhe bhi select kiya gaya hai male lead k liye

Jigu shock ho jaati hai usney socha tha k manni ka selection hona chahiye pr yaha toh ye ladka select ho gaya ye bhi thik hai pr pata nhi q jigu ko laga tha k woh manni k saath screen share karne me problm nhi hogi pr ab kya ab toh kuch nhi kr sakte woh sad ho jati hai tabhi waha manni aata hai aur woh production team k saath baat kr raha hai aur kuch kaam bhi kr raha hai jigu ko lagta hai k shayad usney audition nhi diya woh PH team member hai

Director aate hai aur jigu se milte hai

Dir:toh aap log ready ho script mil gayee

J&boy:yes sir

Dir:toh chalo fir ek shot lete hai zara aap logo ki onscreen chemistry kaisi lagti dekhte hai jaha tk mujhe lagta hai acchi hi lagegi logo ko pehchan leta hu koun kiske saath kaisa dikhega tabhi toh director hu aa jao ,jigyasa tum aao yaha khade raho

Jigu jaati hai aur apni aankhe close karti hai pray k liye

J:bhagwanji pehli baar hai please sb acche se ho jaye

Director manish ko awaaz deta hai k jigu k saath aaker khade ho jaye

J:manish accha toh iss ladke ka naam manish hai (jigu ki ankhe close hai woh use dusare boy ko manish samjh rahi hai)

Manish aaker jigu k samne khade ho jata hai aur dekhta hai k usne eyes close ki hai

Manish in mind:ye ladki kya naam tha haa jigyasa ye pray kr rahi hai yaa darr rahi hai chehre k expression toh dekho sb kuch abhi maang legi shayad

J:bhagwanji jise chaha tha usey toh aapne mera co-star nhi banaya pr ab iss manish ko bana hi diya toh bs hum dono ki jodi bana dena mtlb hum screen pr saath me acche lage

Manish:ho gaya tumhara(jigu se)

Jigu apni eyes kholti hai aur shock aur tabhi director aaker phir manish ka naam lete hai mani reply deta hai aur jigu ko yakeen ho jata hai k yahi mani hai joh uske saath lead hai aur big smile

Mani:kya hua

Jigu:kuch nhi,tum hi mere opposite ho lead actor

Mani:haa

J:pr woh ladka toh keh raha tha woh lead hai

Mani:haa woh bhi hai pr second lead q kya baat hai

J:mtlb tum mere hero ho

Mani:kyaa

J:mera mtlb onscreen hum dono hero heroien play kr rahe hai

Mani:haa

Jigu khush ho jati hai phir se eyes close kr thank u bhagwanji mani usey dekhta hai aur hasta hai
director:chalo shot ready hai dilouge bolo

Aur scene acche se hota hai dono accha perform karte hai

Dir:tum dono ne accha kiya aur onscreen chemistry bhi acchi hai saath me acche lag rahe ho

J&m:thank u sir

Director chala jata hai dono ko break diya jata hai jigu akeli bethi hai manni uske pass jata hai

Mani:hume saath kam karna hai aur humne thik se ekdusare se baat bhi nhi ki intro bhi nhi diya

Jigu apna haath aage karti hai handshek k liye
J:hello mera naam jigyasa singh

Mani usasey haath milata hai

M:hi main manish goplani


To be continued...



Ok toh ye poora fiction hai meri story bs story ka base unki real life se hai toh story kaise lagi jarur batana commnt joh mann kare thank u
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Good going dear... Really nice 👏

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