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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Yayyy!!! It was my one last check on the forum before falling asleep and there i saw the 6th Update!!! Bhangray daalne ka dil chaha by God!!! 😃😃
1st of all thank you soo much Dushturain for the excellent update. Imli chudail did what we all thought she would do..
But i m glad to see Raja babu being sooo protective of his thapki bibi... 👏
Good thing about ffs is that we can hope and see really amazing things...that unfortunately are missing from the actual show! 😉 Now my imagination is going a little wild here... 1st of all shes wearing Raja's tunic that is ought to be lose...and ofcourse it probably keeps dropping from one shoulder or the other... 2ndly after this mahaa ilzaam of adultery, Thapki is sad and angry and Raja is shocked... so i m sure he will do something to pacify her...plus her tunic and her sadness might make him do something he hasnt done yet!!! 😉😉 who knows!!! 😆😆
Rest is all in your beautiful hands my dear Dushturain... i am sure whatever you write will be wonderful... 😊😊

Hi Ash, 🤗

I was so busy whole day sorry for not answering before...I just got time to open my laptop. Now I can give you a lamba sa reply.

Imli LOL so much hype about her and yea she is a bitch 😆😆...As I said she is in her early thirties(thapki may have underestimated her age...she can be older 35+), she is actually years older than Bihaan...she is quite matured cougar type...Imli was married before, her husband was a daku and he died in action...now she has her hooks set on Bihaan. lets see what she does next.

I think being protective of Thapki comes involuntarily to Raja. He may not remember her, but his soul recognize her as his partner. So whenever something happens to her, Raja works on reflex, saving her..he has a short ccircuit in his brain...I think he is already half in love with her.😳😳 because he finds everything about her adorable.😛

and *cough * *cough* *cough* about Raja's tunic no comments *cough * *cough* *cough* ...

I think its still early for u know what to happen...but will happen thats for sure...😉

lets see how Raja handles the situation...Thank you for such faith in me that something wonderful gonna happen...next chapter can be a complete disappointment. I don't know.

Thank you dearie 🤗🤗

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Kar_Nan
Oh my my. My heart is beating so fast. It was sooo hot. Yes it was in a very different way. reading it felt so good. Didn't want it to end. Plz plz plz update soon. Want to read how Thapki will behave after hearing wat Imli said

it was hot??? ha ha ha😆😆

in what way? hi hi hi 😆😆

I think you found Bihaan/Raja hot...his disdainful replies to Imli's suggestive remarks and his protective streak towards Thapki, his woman... It was something...like an alpha..😳😳

Thanks for liking it.

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: ArshiAkyal4ever
Nice update
Love the way Bihaan was trying to protect Thapki even if he does not know that he loves her.
Perhaps now he will try to find about his past life. 😉

thats exactly what is happening! he is confused about his feelings but no matter what he regards her as his woman..

lets see what happens next.

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Jiyabutt
Awesome keep it up plz update next part I am feeling greedy what happens next I wish thapki trusted bihaan means raja it will great to see means read what happen next ... your writing skills are so good I can imagine what the scene will be . super excited.⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: Jiyabutt
Wow just amaing keep it up . your writing skill are perfect .I wish you became very good writer in future . and when I read your fan fiction all scene come in my mind you are just a fabulous writer .please update next part as soon as possible. Your fan fiction is 1million time better then original tpk . please become the writer of tpk . then we can get interesting stories . ⭐️⭐️⭐️ take this please '' for your writing

Jiya, wow you are a newbie and your both posts are on this SS for me. 😳 Thank you so much for liking my bakhwas story...i am not really that good...maybe you are liking it because the current track of TPK is not that good...Your words meant a lot to me...thank you so much...

I will try to write an update tonight but I am not promising...I still have lots to pack..(i am moving home tomorrow). I don't know when can I update next, because I am not sure when we will get internet connection in my new home so i will try to update tonight.

Thank you for the stars...you are a star yourself. you are so sweet.🤗

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: fun4ever89
Wonderful update Dushtu...😃

Bihaan or should I say Raja still cares for her that's good to see and Imli is just as I thought she would be cunning and clever she knew what to do and has hit the right spot by developing doubt in Thapki's mind.

Waiting to see how Thapki will react...waiting for the next update!!!

Thanks Rabia...hopefully you won't have to wait for long...I will try to write an update tonight...

🤗

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: PRian
What an update!! 👏👏
Now this is how a story should move forward. This is what we call sync and flow. You are such a fabulous writer. I was hooked to it till the end. And like how one of the fellow members said, it was so hot but in a different way. I wish you were one of the CVs of the show. At best, I can say that CVs can learn so much from you.

Also, on a larger note, I have to say that I love how you get into the skin of every character. Nowhere, it seems that any person is going out of his character. you drew such a clear demarcation between Bihaan and Raja, yet keeping their soul the same. Even for Thapki, you've developed her character to a likeable yet a stubborn one.

I so so love this OS (and to be honest, other OS by you). Please update soon. :)

P.S. How and when did I become a groupbie? How does it even work? I have no idea, do you? Till last week, I was a newbie. 😲

HI PRian,

First of all, thank you so much for such a lovely comment. Sometimes I wish I am a cv too, I don't know how I will fare but for sure I won't at least butcher my characters...and will try giving loads loads loads of ThaHaan romance.

I am so glad you liked other stories by me and the way I wrote about my characters...what can I say but idle brain is devil's workshop...I have too much free time...so these weird stories sprouts out of me...😛

You became a groupbie when you crossed 50 posts, once you cross 100 posts you will become a Senior member and will remain a senior member till you cross 1000 mark. Then you will become a dazzler . and so on... Thats a promotion...so post more and more and keep increasing in rank 😃

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Thanks Rosie, Needu and Dakkzy too... love you my babies 🤗🤗🤗

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Annisa

@XingStar

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

wow Rain...such a lovely update...you have magic in ur hands deariee(can u give me a little of this magic 😆 )..looking forward for the next update...
and sorry for late comment ..wanted to do it in morning but couldnt becaus i cannot make more than 20 posts 😭

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Thank you Rain for a wonderful response... and i am really touched by your gesture of replying everyone so sweetly. I know i know i know you probably get embarrassed by praises, but i really think you are a very beautiful soul, just like your writings.. 😊

Now coming to the Imli-RajaTh issue... I know Imli is just a bitch but inadvertantly she will bring RajaTh close ... Its ok if the next chapter of your story is a little dark or tragic or whatever that makes you think that its going to be a disappointment for us; i still have full faith that its going to be rocking... 😊😊⭐️ Do write it soon... Anxiously waiting for .. ⭐️😊