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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all who liked my face off b/w thapki and dhruv. Now I am back with vasuhaan. 'Where is shradha?' this question is out of syllabus for this os . May be we can consider her truth is out. Again not proof read so kindly ignore the mistakes.

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"I am sorry bihaan" she said hugging him

For the first time he felt the warmth of her hug and depth of her words.
He let out the pain he hold for so long flow as tears.
He made her Sit on the bed, kneeled down and kept his face on her lap. She started caressing his hair and continued
" Sach beta, I never knew your value,value of your love. How much you did for me and I never actually cared for you" vasu said crying. She is truly repenting for all her deeds against bihaan. The way he supported her when everyone else left, the way he still tried to take the blame on his head melted her heart. She very well know how she discriminated dhruv n bihaan. Now she feels ashamed for it.

" You always obeyed me, respected me and did whatever I said but..."

Bihaan interrupted her before completing
" But now I cannot do what you said ma"
He lifted his head and looked straight into her eyes.

She stood up and asked "but why bihaan? It will make everything right. And we can be happy again"

" Ma if it is only about me then I would have obeyed you but it is about thapki too. And I can't take a risk again by taking a wrong decision. Last time you were only important to me so I didn't care about thapki but now you and thapki both are my life. I can't hurt anyone."

"But what's wrong beta. This is what should have happened 6 months back(acc to tpk calendar), thapki and dhruv marriage. Now dhruv will forgive me if I rectify my mistakes."

Thapki who came to call Maa for lunch stood outside the door startled. The floor beneath her seemed to break. What Maa said is beyond her expectations but what bihaan will say made her panic. She trusts him and his love but she is still unsure that whom will bihaan choose , his mother for whose love he carved since childhood or her, who is very new to his life. Her heart is thumping so fast and all she could do is pray for the best. Her thoughts were distribed by bihaan's loud voice.

" Everything has changed in this 6 months Maa. Everything. My relation with thapki, dhruv's relation with thapki.. everything. Maa you know that I love her but my love is not more important than you so I would leave her.
But ma you know she also loves me, you were the one who forced her to realise and confess her love. And now you want her to move back. maa she is a girl not a toy which you can place wherever you want. I already broke her heart once and I can't do it again. Maa I deserve a punishment, I too wish everything to be alright but making thapki and dhruv again together is definitely not the Solution. Coz relations stand on emotions not calculations."

" I agree but thapki is educated, she deserves some one better and someone who loves her truly."

Bihaan folded his hands " Maa you can say me anything you want but plz don't doubt my love. I love her purely. May be am a gunda, illiterate and all but I love her with all my heart and soul. And I will give her all the happiness.And even she, her heart knows only to love and forgive, don't break it again just for your son's happiness ."

" Bihaan you are also my son. Till now I agree I never considered but now you and dhruv both are equal to me."

Bihaan gave a sad smile" if we are equal then why my love,marraige and life doesn't hold any value before dhruv's forgiveness.?"

Vasu was shocked for this, yes she is still being selfish even after all this she is still trying to favour dhruv. How she never considered that bihaan also suffered enough because of this marriage. It was gods gift that he fell in love otherwise he used to suffer all his life.
" I never even expect you to consider me equally with dhruv Maa. Just accept me as your son. Give some love some care and that is enough for this orphan. " He said tears forming in his eyes.

That word made the biggest difference. Even after staying for so many years in the house, her son still considers him as a orphan and this is the biggest failure for any mother. Yes she failed as a mother. She made both her son suffer and is still thinking about only one. Everything ran in vasu's mind she need to say sorry for bihaan for many things but where should she start. Unable to forgive her self she just sat there on bed with a blank expression.

Bihaan looked at her with hurtful eyes and started leaving. He stopped at the door step and turned back." Maa agar thapki mrs. Thapki bihaan Pandey bankar Kush hain tho use bihaan Pandey ki hi rahne dijiye.. plz.." his voice completely broke at the end of the sentence. He rushed out of the room leaving vasu to hate herself more.

He leaned against the wall outside the room,( didn't observe thapki) he needs a shoulder to cry, someone to hug and let his pain out. This is the first time his Maa asked for something and he refused but he felt whatever he did is right.

On the other hand, thapki who listened to her husband's words was so overwhelmed that she can't even form proper words.so she just flew into his arms and hugged him tight. Bihaan was shocked at first and then hugged her back and cried like a small kid letting out all his pain.

After his cool down she started mixing her words with tears" thank you bihaan for understanding me, thank you for supporting me, thank you for not leaving me and thank you for coming into my life. And plz bihaan I will be Mrs. thapki bihaan Pandey only all my life, you will never leave me no..."

"Ha.." is all what he could manage to say. He tightned his embrace giving her the assurance that he means it.

On the other side a lone tear escaped from a mother's eye. This time with happiness that her mistake made her son get the best wife, and a girl get the best man in the world.

PS : I made vasu change to +ve at the end coz whenever I see jaya gi crying, I feel like forgiving her. She is gr8 actress indeed.

Not as good as expected but hope you like it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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excellent ... I think this the only time when bihaan stood up against his mother he was very polite... but firm with his decision...loved it...just loved it...loved both thapki and bihaan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it.the bihaan whom we want to see on the show.perfect words,perfect actions n perfect ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME!!!!
Loved it, this is what i want bihaan choosing thapki😳
Loved the line relations r based on emotions and not calculations👍🏼
Perfect ending ❤️
Looking forward to read more of u 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just superb...loved it!!!
Loved bihaan so much..
I really dnt wnt this situation to come in the serial..i can't see him crying...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow excellent one..whuch we can expectnas a slow snail phased development in epi also but vasu asking thaps is not ppssible...and the way bihaan refused and thaps hugged was the greatnpart...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful...if that one made me happy & proud of Thapki...this one made me cry for Bihaan & Thapki...with him...
That Vasu will come up with something like that for DS's forgiveness is not unlikely...but Bihaan refusing to outright obey her orders without giving it a second thought is something I LOVED...& I would want that in the show as well...
Great work Taru...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it! Loved how Bihaan remained civil and simply told her his decision, without any shouting, crying, and drama. Simple but too good! Awesome!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb yaar...and an awesome Bihaan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it ...it's really very very nice

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