NIGHT CHANGES - A THAHAAN OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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As soon as I saw your OS I res the first comment!! 😃

Coming to the story: I LOVED IT!!! It's awesome!! When he refused to listen to her words, you didn't gave words to her to say, you gave her much more
I always believe that actions mean much more than words between two persons and you proved it!! When to shut her up he avoided her and avoided any confrontation you made her kiss him to shuthim up! And when he thought thather silence meant that she was fooling him again she gave him the Mangalsutra to assure him of her feeling

He said I love you but she accepted him as her husband, which she said that she would never do!! The emotions were just beautifully portrayed Chandu baby!!
I had a hard time to read it at the beginning but when she started to talk to his photo I was just aww

You left her say the words to herself and for her to acknowledge her feelings and leave Bihaan speechless with her gestures!!

Simply awesome baby!! I loved it!! i am waiting for more!!😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmmm. Starting was too too good, ending is common in now a days os, but still I love it. Whole idea of thapki overhears sharuv conv, was my fav part.
But in ur os gesture are louder than words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chanda, chanda, chanda! Ye tune kya kia? Maar hi daala!!

Seriously that was just amazing! I loved that she overheard ShRuv conversation and for the first time,she didn't care about ShRuv's relationship status but her focus was solely on Bihaan, his feelings, his surprise party, his hurt,his anger, sadness and heartbreak! 😭

She went to search for him and his anger replied. She wanted to tell him so many things but he just won't shut his damn mouth so she kissed him😳 No hesitation, no shame, only love!

He was ecstatic and finally confessed. Wanted her to do the same.

Her love didn't need words nor did her acceptance, just a simple gesture of giving him the mangalsutra to tie around her neck, to tie her forever to himself, a trap in which she's ready to be trapped for the rest of her life and many more lives to come!

He wanted her to say something but her action proved that she loves him as much as he does. The same action which she did months ago now held a new and better meaning,which they'll never forget! It led to their silent understanding, a night to remember, a promise to remember, a love to remember!

And this was an OS I will always remember! 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manaan

Hmmm. Starting was too too good, ending is common in now a days os, but still I love it. Whole idea of thapki overhears sharuv conv, was my fav part.
But in ur os gesture are louder than words.

Thank you Ridddaa 🤗 yeah i was focused on the "let the gestures do the talking" thing! 😆
and the ending is same because then it would've gotten too long so i had to cut short and leave it a bit hanging and i am glad you loved it. 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife

Chanda, chanda, chanda! Ye tune kya kia? Maar hi daala!!

Seriously that was just amazing! I loved that she overheard ShRuv conversation and for the first time,she didn't care about ShRuv's relationship status but her focus was solely on Bihaan, his feelings, his surprise party, his hurt,his anger, sadness and heartbreak! 😭

She went to search for him and his anger replied. She wanted to tell him so many things but he just won't shut his damn mouth so she kissed him😳 No hesitation, no shame, only love!

He was ecstatic and finally confessed. Wanted her to do the same.

Her love didn't need words nor did her acceptance, just a simple gesture of giving him the mangalsutra to tie around her neck, to tie her forever to himself, a trap in which she's ready to be trapped for the rest of her life and many more lives to come!

He wanted her to say something but her action proved that she loves him as much as he does. The same action which she did months ago now held a new and better meaning,which they'll never forget! It led to their silent understanding, a night to remember, a promise to remember, a love to remember!

And this was an OS I will always remember! 👏

Sanya Sanya Sanya !!!! 😆
@bold----- my intelligent girl you guessed the hidden message in it.😆 i am so happy you liked it !😳 Thank you so much for your appreciation yar ! 🤗❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandaaaxo

Sanya Sanya Sanya !!!! 😆
@bold----- my intelligent girl you guessed the hidden message in it.😆 i am so happy you liked it !😳 Thank you so much for your appreciation yar ! 🤗❤️❤️


🤗Thanks for the compliment😆 and you are always welcome! Ab itni amazing story hogi toh appreciation toh banta hai na?😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kowsi

Unres

As soon as I saw your OS I res the first comment!! 😃

Coming to the story: I LOVED IT!!! It's awesome!! When he refused to listen to her words, you didn't gave words to her to say, you gave her much more
I always believe that actions mean much more than words between two persons and you proved it!! When to shut her up he avoided her and avoided any confrontation you made her kiss him to shuthim up! And when he thought thather silence meant that she was fooling him again she gave him the Mangalsutra to assure him of her feeling

He said I love you but she accepted him as her husband, which she said that she would never do!! The emotions were just beautifully portrayed Chandu baby!!
I had a hard time to read it at the beginning but when she started to talk to his photo I was just aww

You left her say the words to herself and for her to acknowledge her feelings and leave Bihaan speechless with her gestures!!

Simply awesome baby!! I loved it!! i am waiting for more!!😃😉


KOWSI 😆😆
you scared me !! 😆
I am so so so happy you liked it and yes you get it 🤗
thats what i wanted to do let the gestures do the talking. Every time Bihaan showed his love and care for her but it was her turn to completely knock him of his feet. 😉
Thank you so much for your appreciation my coconut 🤗❤️and the credit goes to you since you are one of my inspirations to write in this forum ! 😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife

And

🤗Thanks for the compliment😆 and you are always welcome! Ab itni amazing story hogi toh appreciation toh banta hai na?😉


awww 🤗 thank you once again ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandaaaxo


KOWSI 😆😆
you scared me !! 😆
I am so so so happy you liked it and yes you get it 🤗
thats what i wanted to do let the gestures do the talking. Every time Bihaan showed his love and care for her but it was her turn to completely knock him of his feet. 😉
Thank you so much for your appreciation my coconut 🤗❤️and the credit goes to you since you are one of my inspirations to write in this forum ! 😳😳


Yes I wanted to scare you becasue you told me that you were not sure to post it blah blah blah... To give us this!!!

What credits?!! You have done the job!! I am glad I could help but what's in a writing is your inner emotions and your perception of things!! So all credits to you baby!!

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