The Deceit- OS

OMG ...I wrote something almost the same lol...was too lazy to address the whole thing so gave it a closure...But u, u wrote it all down and its just as I imagined I dare say...I loved Bihan's reaction, the whole of his dialogues...especially the orphan part, Thapki looked heartless here even more 😡 (I am finding fault with her in ff too )...and Bihan was indeed justified...thats the cvs aim I guess. I hope shradha is indeed the one who shows him the truth

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

OMG ...I wrote something almost the same lol...was too lazy to address the whole thing so gave it a closure...But u, u wrote it all down and its just as I imagined I dare say...I loved Bihan's reaction, the whole of his dialogues...especially the orphan part, Thapki looked heartless here even more 😡 (I am finding fault with her in ff too )...and Bihan was indeed justified...thats the cvs aim I guess. I hope shradha is indeed the one who shows him the truth

Bht achha dplee.. mujhe rona aa gya bihaan ki ye haalat dekh ke.. tum ne bht achhe se usski feeling likhi.. thank u fr a lovely os.

OMG!! It's just awesome!! I just wanted to wrte something on it but I was afraid to write Bihaan's feelings coz surely I would end up crying and also I can't let Thapki continue to do that!!

Originally posted by: Kowsi

OMG!! It's just awesome!! I just wanted to wrte something on it but I was afraid to write Bihaan's feelings coz surely I would end up crying and also I can't let Thapki continue to do that!!

But this is really amazing andheartbreaking! His feeling, you decribed them so beautifully! And his hurt so greatefully portrayed!!

I loved it

OMG Diii !!❤️

Seriously too good! I almost had tears😭

Omg, I really wish this happen, I really wish thst bihaan realized that people in his life don't deserve him. They just used him for there own sake. U and lachu, have plan to swell our eyes.. this is incredibly awsome . So much intense.
Thankx for writing.

I am mesmerized by your writing.. there are no words but i can only say