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sreenaveena

@sreenaveena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

update soon

eagerly waiting to read

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greeshma014

@greeshma014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Totally loving the story line.. waiting for next part..😊

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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Intro is amazing plz update it soon... Sounds interesting... Waiting-2

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Darakshan Sartaj

@DakZz

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Amazing start waiting for the next part...

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

thank you all for liking my ff and commenting

so here is part-2

Thapki bihaan hiding behind a tree ...thapki is shocked why is bihaan holding her ... what does he want now after ruining her life so badly ...she is hating him to the core ...unknown of the fact that the goons are behind them she says bachaao bachaao and bihaan shuts her mouth with his hand tightly and says chup...ek dam chup ...ab tum agar kuchh boli na to humse bura koi nahin hoga... She lifts his hand away and tries to run ...bihaan braclet stucks in thapki chunri and then bihaan holds thapki again ...and says kis musibat ko apne saath le aaya ... Then both of them try to free their braclet and chunri ...and come close ...and then move backward away from each other in anger ... Bihaan says :hum dono ek dusre se bilkul alag hain ...jahaan hum dono ek saath ho aur p for problem humaara peechha na kare ...aisa ho hi nahin sakta... Thapki and bihaan goes in opposite ways

Thapki and bihaan goes in different ways then opposite ways ...while moving towards opposite sides both remind of their pheras vachan for each other... and stops moving and turn their face towards each other and starts thinking. ..bihaan thinks humne apni life me sabse badi galti thapki se shaadi kar ke ki hai ...par... ab jo bhi ho ab ye humaari zimmedari hai aur hum apni zimmedari se aise pichhe nahin hat sakte bauji aur dhruv ke khatir...

Thapki thinks hum dono kabhi ek dusre ke liye bane hi nahin the...jhoot ki buniyaad pe tiki ye shaadi ka pata nahin a kya anjaam hoga...bihaan ne humse humara sab kuchh chhin liya...i hate him ...nafrat karte hain hum usse

this part ends ... will continue if you are liking it...pls...do comment ...😊

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nicky13

@nicky13

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Awesome Chhavi... Loved it ... Bihaan and Thapki ki nok-jhok aage jaake maza aane waala hai... Chhotu sa update kion diya... But amazing tha... Plz next time thoda bada waala update dena if possible... Woh kya hai Na ke yeh dil maange more... Loved it sachi ... Thanks ...

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ChandniAdvay

@ChandniAdvay

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Very nice story!! Wait for next

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: nicky13
Awesome Chhavi... Loved it ... Bihaan and Thapki ki nok-jhok aage jaake maza aane waala hai... Chhotu sa update kion diya... But amazing tha... Plz next time thoda bada waala update dena if possible... Woh kya hai Na ke yeh dil maange more... Loved it sachi ... Th
anks ...

thank you nicky for such a lovely reply i am glad you liked ff...yup will try to update longer part bext time ...waise second ff starting to love will be funny cute nokjhok full of ...will try to update their love story in village tommorow...hope you will love that also...read the intrp of my second ff starting to love hope you will enjoy it...