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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hello every one. This is my first try in Sahan ff. Do check it out and let me how it is ( or rather how bad my writing is 🤣)

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It was so beautiful! The vulnerability was written so wonderfully.. thanks for this.. wish we can get something like this in the show 🥺

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Very nice Story you have written based on the current track. Each and everybody of the family's pain anger agony is well written.


Angad 🥰🥰 Beautifully explained his pain and Anger. Sahiba is with him,


We all wanted them to handle this track like this.


Thank you for giving us a nice story.

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Loved your take on Angad and Sahiba impact due to the truth of simran coming out. You gave the importance to Angad feelings.

Great job!

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What a lovely story on current track. In a normal world people will generally react this way how u have portrayed


You have skillfully noted down how the childhood neglect by parents have made Angad what he is today. Some of his behaviour can be understood by this reasoning


Loved how sahiba found Angad and he didn't push her away but actually realised she is the only one for him and with him.

Do continue and could you Tag me please in future if u write further. Wouldn't want to miss the stories

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ekdam se waqth Badal diya jasbad Badal diye😵

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashviniv

What a lovely story on current track. In a normal world people will generally react this way how u have portrayed


You have skillfully noted down how the childhood neglect by parents have made Angad what he is today. Some of his behaviour can be understood by this reasoning


Loved how sahiba found Angad and he didn't push her away but actually realised she is the only one for him and with him.

Do continue and could you Tag me please in future if u write further. Wouldn't want to miss the stories


Thank you so much for your lovely response❤️. I'll try to write more often.

I'll surely tag you next time.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Beautifully written, hope this happens in the show too.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sayali22

Ekdam se waqth Badal diya jasbad Badal diye😵


Wdy mean?? Sorry I'm just unable to understand what you're saying

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