FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 10

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thanks for the tag dear. Loved this super duper update. ❤️ 🤗😘

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Beautifully written dear ❤️♥️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ooof my heart .

Don’t ask me why but I find scenes like this mirror one hot, even without a hint of physical intimacy. I don’t know if you have watched Ishqbaaz , in it there is a scene between Omkara-Gauri - where he was attempting to eat a hard candy just like she does , throwing it at a hard surface and catching it when it bounces back (I know it’s a choking hazard waiting to happen 😆) and fails. Then she comes in and takes the candy from him and throws it at the mirror and it bounces back for him to catch between his teeth. Believe me the scene had me blushing even though there was a solid two feet distance between those two. Your mirror scene did the same to me. Good exploration of Angad’s emotions and the fact that he addresses her as Parjai to his younger siblings.

Loved the update ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Absolutely loved the update❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I am really looking forward to how the story goes—
The media interview, Sahiba handling Jasleen, and spending her first night in Angad’s room!! My imagination is running wild with potential update options!!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#95

What a beautiful update.loved how angad actually used a punching bag to take out his frustration rather than sahiba 😃


How he is worried about her, how he reacts to the news is so nicely done. And it is how a normal sane person would react.


I am surprised jussi still has the guts to talk anything about sahiba to angad after the exposure.talk about shamelessness


The mirror seen..oohhh i loved it. One request for have some seems of sahiba and angad at his poolside plz plz. I have a weakness for hero ke bedroom ka private pool 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago
#96

I so wanted to write in Punjabi, alas, my Punjabi is as good as Angad's brain in matters of love and seeing a spade for a spade (in the actual show)! smiley37

I genuinely loved this update so much! I mean, there is drama but there is also so much normalcy in terms of character build-up. The character sketch is so great that you can actually visualise the actors speaking! smiley32

As usual, brilliantly thought out and put into words. The pace of your story is also good... it is not slow, not rushed, it's in perfect balance... Wait karne ka mann karta hai you know for the next chapter and there is so much anticipation also! smiley42


It was a treat to read Angad's viewpoint on Saahibaa and his feelings towards her. Also, it did not go unnoticed that not giving Sahiba food in the show, had really affected you and the way you wrote your perspective on it, said it all so simply, so take a bow! ❤️


Can't wait to read the next chapter and also, Angad and Saahiba joining forces along with Veer and Keerat to give Seerat, Gary, Jasleen and all involved in bringing Brar's down the taste of their own medicine!


This FF is really keeping me hooked. More power to you, woman!smiley31

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Posted: 2 years ago
#97

Did you just mention Ishqbaaz and Rikara in one paragraph! My heart is already doubling with intense emotions! And I agree on the mirror scene bit... it did bring a lot of memories from Ishqbaaz and IPKKND

Originally posted by: NidhaA

Ooof my heart .

Don’t ask me why but I find scenes like this mirror one hot, even without a hint of physical intimacy. I don’t know if you have watched Ishqbaaz , in it there is a scene between Omkara-Gauri - where he was attempting to eat a hard candy just like she does , throwing it at a hard surface and catching it when it bounces back (I know it’s a choking hazard waiting to happen 😆) and fails. Then she comes in and takes the candy from him and throws it at the mirror and it bounces back for him to catch between his teeth. Believe me the scene had me blushing even though there was a solid two feet distance between those two. Your mirror scene did the same to me. Good exploration of Angad’s emotions and the fact that he addresses her as Parjai to his younger siblings.

Loved the update ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Did you just mention Ishqbaaz and Rikara in one paragraph! My heart is already doubling with intense emotions! And I agree on the mirror scene bit... it did bring a lot of memories from Ishqbaaz and IPKKND

🤗 I think I was among the minority that preferred RiKara over ShivIka (no offense - they were a great pair, just not my cup of tea). I still feel that Omkara if explored properly could’ve been such an intense lover. He was mature alright but when he asks why do you think I cannot feel jealousy to Gauri, there is so much hidden there. If such a track happened, it’s my personal opinion, that Om would’ve been a much more intense lover than Shivaay. I haven’t watched IPKKND but am aware of it’s popularity. IPKKND was during my med school days and me being me, I sometimes get put off of shows or movies if there is too much hype around it. IPKKND was the show that had half the hostel flocking to our only TV room😆.Ishqbaaz happened when I was in working so generally more time , plus hotstar made it easier to just skip episodes altogether if it was filled (by then I had lost all patience with ITV in general).
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Posted: 2 years ago
#99

After whatever is going on in show, please I would really like to read the next part of ur FF. Your Angad and sahiba are much better than the show's and theya re handling theor emotions like normal people

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Posted: 2 years ago

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Once again a well written part.

Angad is a boxing champion? That’s interesting and the gym at Brar mansion (I am sure keerat will be so happy in future 😉) I liked the way both Angad and Sahiba took out there hurt. No one at the mansion insulted Sahiba thanks for that. It’s great that they are following up that curly hair media girl (sorry don’t know her name, in OG she was Shruthi) involvement no body in the show bothered how news leaked when media was not allowed inside. I so so so loved Sahiba keerat video call. I miss this duo in show 🥲 I am so loving the equation between Angad and Sahiba is shaping up. Eagerly waiting for veer keerat interaction in next part.

Thanks! Well, no he isn't a boxing champ. Just a practicing one here. I am missing any positivity vibes in the show honestly. 🥲🥲🥲🥲

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