ManYa Drabbles : The Shaadi Diaries.

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Hello . Namaste .

In My Sheher of Drabbles . These Drabbles will be a series of ManYa and their Kismat Konnection . It'll start with the ceremonies held before marriage and ultimately end with RaRa's marriage . The order of rituals is a complete mess , so do pardon me .

How Kismat plays with ManYa , to bring them closer . Progressively .
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Drabble - 1 (Haldi) The Ignition
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It was a futile quest , she thought to herself . Maybe destiny was inclined towards favoring Uma . Maybe it was for his best , maybe .

The walk back home was the hardest , knowing that there would be no looking back . It was painful , but she had to let go , he didn't love her , perhaps .

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Meanwhile , a lone heart ached . He was falling, falling, falling. Every passing second, every passing minute, every passing hour, every passing day, every passing week, every passing month- he was falling for her. Faster. Deeper. Harder. But all he could do was morph it into anger , for he was sure , she was playing with him , his emotions .

"Mantu , Hum Jaa Rahein Hain" Uma yelled .

"Hmm.."

For him , Uma was family , his sole well wisher , in a world he couldn't call his own . And if she said Amaaya was playing with him , she probably was right .

He looked at the watch she had just returned , was there not an iota of love in those eyes his heart questioned . His brain shunned the any such doubt .

There was no Amaaya for him hereon . All she knew was how to use people for her benefit , how to toy with them . He was done with her , he promised himself .

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Until , one fine day , Kismat decided to play with the strings of their hearts ..
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'Amaaya , Rachi ki haldi aa gayi hai naa?' Sneha asked tensed .

'Nahi Ma'

'Amu , unke ghar jao aur jaldi lekar aao'

Amaaya wasn't too happy with the proceedings of this marriage . Although she did know that Rama was indeed the ideal suitor for her sister . It was happening way too soon .

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Rama's House
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Amaaya wondered how Rachita would ever fit into the Gupta household . Their house was a horrendous mess , everything was so chaotic . Among the hundreds of people hustling , she spotted Rama .

She finally managed to cross the hundreds of people who had unceremoniously decided to volunteer .

"Rama , Rachi Di Ki Haldi Kahaan Hai?"

"Amaaya abhi tak nahi pahunchi kya?" A startled Rama asked .

"Nahi"

"Woh Third Room Hai Naa , Corner mein , uske andar jaate hi , right side mein ek almaari dikhegi , uske baaju mein ek table hai , uske upar ek shelf rakhi hai wahan hai"

Amaaya , smiled . Destiny does plan everything meticulously , she thought . Rama and Rachi were perfect for each other . Only if ...

She sighed .

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As she entered the room , she felt his presence . She was determined not to succumb to her desire . She had to move on , MOVE ON .

The shelf was at a height , so she grabbed a chair .

As she stood , she realized it was hard for her to maintain her balance ,she reached for the tray with the haldi anyway , and that's when she lost her balance .

She closed her eyes , expecting her body to feel the hard floor any moment instead she felt a strong hand grip her , she knew who it was . Why was destiny so cruel ? Why couldn't she ever live in peace ?

She opened her eyes only to see Mantu holding her . His eyes spoke volumes , but his words didn't and that's what hurt her the most .

Their eyes speaking their own language . Their hearts in perfect symphony yet their thoughts so contradictory .

He steadied her . "Tum apna circus band karo , main kar loonga"

He got the kalash with the haldi for her . Just then some carpenters entered , accidentally pushing Amaaya towards Mantu . She fell right into his arms , the sudden jerk caused a little of the haldi to splurt on their faces , the contact of their faces only broadening the mark of the haldi.
She moved back instantly . Without uttering a word , took the haldi and left .

"Ho Kya Raha Hai Humaare Saath" Mantu said aloud .

Rama entered just then "Amaaya Haldi le Gayi Kya?"

"Haan" Mantu said , getting a grip on himself.

"Tumhaare chehre pe haldi? Kaise?" Rama asked suddenly interested .

"Pata Nahi"

"Oh.. Tumhein pata nahi hai kya? Jiske chehre pe bhi haldi lagta hai .. Uske Zindagi Mein Jaldi Koi Bohot Pyaar Karne wali Aayegi . Mubarak Ho , Mantu"

"Bakwaas Hai Sab . Koi Pyaar Vyaar Nahi Hoga Kisiko Humse"

"Maine Kaha Hai , Zaroor Hoga" Rama said confidently .

Mantu left . Yet Somewhere hope lingered in his heart .

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Kismat - 1 ManYa -0
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The spark was only ignited . Now it was to burn.

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Drabble 2 - Mehendi (Coming Soon)


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-Fedex- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the drabble, please write more. You have captured the two so beautifully. They are my fav couple in the show and Mantu my fav. Not happy with Mantu's & Amaya's characterization in the show for the past several weeks!
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that was very nice .. loved it...
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That was nice...please write more :)
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Wow superb dr..
Lovely update. .
I would love to read more. .
You are a very good writer. .
Do continue. .
Waiting for your next update. .
Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fedex-

Loved the drabble, please write more. You have captured the two so beautifully. They are my fav couple in the show and Mantu my fav. Not happy with Mantu's & Amaya's characterization in the show for the past several weeks!


Thank You!
Me neither ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wrizaa

that was very nice .. loved it...


Thank You !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveleen12

That was nice...please write more :)


Thank You !
And sure will :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I watch tsm for manya hate the way dey r shwn des days
But your os made me happy
U write so beautiful
Do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AartShefa

Wow superb dr..

Lovely update. .
I would love to read more. .
You are a very good writer. .
Do continue. .
Waiting for your next update. .
Please update soon.

Thank You SO Much !
This is my first attempt after a very long time.

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