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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran42


bcos it's ending/...😭


yhh its endin...agar shuru hui hain toh khatam hona hi tha
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Posted: 14 years ago
😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 Im sooo angry at u aapko pata hai ??? Shayad aapko pata hai...Bt still me bata rah hun aapko...
Itna late update kiya...wo bhi after sooo much of daant...And daant khaane ke baad also such a small update...
Lekin fir aapke is TaAnulicious update ne...Mera gussa thanda kar diya nahi to aapki ab tak khabar le leti me...
It was such a sweet update...And ab why did u have to stop at this point yaar ????
Agli baar jald malab bahut jaldi update karna...
After this me kise kahungi jaldi update karo nahi to...😭😭
Chalo koi nahi...update sooon sooon sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update !!!😃
waiting for the next😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update! Y last chap? Taanu finally together!

xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

😡 Im sooo angry at u aapko pata hai ??? Shayad aapko pata hai...Bt still me bata rah hun aapko...

Itna late update kiya...wo bhi after sooo much of daant...And daant khaane ke baad also such a small update...
Lekin fir aapke is TaAnulicious update ne...Mera gussa thanda kar diya nahi to aapki ab tak khabar le leti me...
It was such a sweet update...And ab why did u have to stop at this point yaar ????
Agli baar jald malab bahut jaldi update karna...
After this me kise kahungi jaldi update karo nahi to...😭😭
Chalo koi nahi...update sooon sooon sooon


thnx fr comntin...😊 thnk god teri gussa thanda hogayi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priyadhar

nice update !!!😃

waiting for the next😉



thnx fr comntin...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi alll...

I'm very much happy to complete 1 year of my FF... it was stated on 11 of October 2010.Thanks for all reader.I don't want to specify each and everyone's name...I had benefited a lot with this particular FF.By the way of friends and also to give me a chance to improve ma language.Al right im stopping ma melodrama.

Herez Last update of this FF.



Anurag:Kuch cheezon ko hum kithni bhi chupane ki koshish, dabane ki koshsish voh aapne aap bahar aajathi hain.
Jaise ki humare pyaar...Hum kithni baar koshsish ki ek dusare alag hone ki.Lekin jab hum juda hothe the hum ek dusre se unthna jodthe the

Taani:Un dinon ki baath alag thi aur aaj toh tum apni zindagi jee rahe ho Onu uss mein apni patni ke alawa koi hona hi nahi chahiye

Anurag:Sach kaha tu ne.Lekin mein toh aisa nahi socha.Mein toh hamesa galath tha


Taani:Gakath Onu... voh toh tu kabhi ho hi nahi saktha.Mein aaj bhi tere liye hue faisle ko kadharkarthi hoon.Tu ne sahi fiasla liya tha .
Aaj humari zindagi ko dekho koi kaami nahi hain

Anurag:Kya tu yeh mere chehre ko dekh kar keh sakthi ho ki humari zindagi mein koi kami nahi hain

Taani looked at him.

Taani:Onu mein jaanthi hoon...
Anurag:Tu kuch nahi jaanthi Taani

Taani was startled.

Anurag:Tu nahi jaanthi apne pyaar se, apni patni se alag kya hotha hain.
Tu nahi jaanthi majboori mein shaadi ka fesla lena kya hotha hain.
Tu nahi jaanthi jab shaadi ke waqt humare pyaar humare aankhon ke samne hotha hain toh kya mehsoos hotha hain.
Tu nahi jaanthi jab hume patha chaltha hain jis ladki ke saath humari shaadi hone wali hain voh do maheeno mein brain tumour ki vajah se mar jayegi tab dil mein kya hotha
Tu nahi jaanthi 7 saal apne bache se alag hona ek baap ko kithna dard detha hain.
Tu kuch nahi jaanthi kuch nahi jaanthi tu.

Taani was shocked hearing Anurag's words.

Taani:Mathlab tumhari shaadi Nupur ke saath nahi hui thi aur tum jaanthe the humare bache ke baare mein.

Anurag:Haan mein jaantha tha.Aur yeh baath Nupur ki jab vahan se laut gayi Nupur behosh hogayi aur hospitlize kiya gaya.
Tab hum sab ko patha chala ki usse brain tumour hain.
Nupur sab kuch jaanne ke baad shaadi karne se inkaar kiya.


Taani:Mein issliye humare bache ke bare mein nahi bathaya kyun mein nahi chahtha tha ki tumhari life hum logon ki saya pade aur Rithesh jeeju ..

Anurag:Uss admi ka naam math lo tum.
Taani:Agar uss waqt tere shaadi agaya toh sirf uske vajah se hain Anurag... aur abhi abhi voh bachon lekar bahar gaya

Anurag realized it was Rithesh who brought children to office and not Robi.

Anurag:Jab ussi raath voh USA ja raha tha di ke saath voh mujhe batha bhi saktha tha na ki maa banne wali hain.

Taani:Voh yeh bhi soch saktha hain na ki mujhe lene mumbai avoonga aur mein tumse yeh baath kahoongi

Anurag:Hmmm shayad tu sahi hain.
Taani:Aur sab lob kaise hain..?
ANurag:Teek hain sab log.

Someone knocked at door.Anurag stood up.

Taani:Andar avo..

Meera came.

Meera:Di voh 3 baj gaye 3.30 ko hum jaana hain.
Taani:Haan yaad hain mujhe.Uss cupboard mein meri sari hain

Meera opened the door and took Taani's sari from it.

Taani:Mein bulaoonga tumhe Meera
Meera:Haan..
Meera went away.

Taani:Onu mujhe ...
Anurag:Taani hum chalenge na vapas
Taani:Tu bacho lekar jaa Onu mein saath nahi chal sakthi
ANurag:Kyun..?
Taani:Bas mein nahi chal sakthi
Anurag:Mathlab...

As he turned to his right he saw a wheel chair behind the cupboard.He sowly walked towards it and gently moved his finger on it.Taani was seeing all this could bare that.He control his sadness and was standing like he has decided somthing.

Anurag:Tum avogey
Taani:Teek hain mein avoongi

He was happy

Taani:Lekin jab mein poori tarah se teek hojavoongi

He was quite for a moment.

Anurag:Acha... concert ke baad mein bachoon ko lekar javoonga

She nodded her head.



Rithesh came to room where Ananya was getting ready.

Ananya:Vaise tu ne bathaya nahi Rithesh ki hum kahan ja rahe hain
Rithesh:Ek concert keliye..?
Ananya:Par kiske..?
Rithesh:Taani ke

Ananya gave weird look.😡


Ananya:Tumhe kya laga ki mein uski concert par avoongi
Rithesh:Tum avogey Ananya
Ananya:Tumhe kya lagtha jis ladki humari parivaar dhoka diya hain Onu ko choda hain mein uss ladki ki programme mein avoongi
Ananya:PArivaar ko dhoka mein ne diya hain. 14 saalon se dhoka de raha hoon mein tum ko sab ko.Aur voh dono hamesa sahi tha
Ananya😲

It was unbelivable to her.

Ananya:Tum joot bol rahe ho na
Rithesh:Nahi Ananya yehi sach hain.

He told all what he had done to her and her family.She broked down.


Anurag stooped his car at auditorium with Taani children and Meera.Anurag got out of car.After all others got down Anurag helped Taani to got down by taking her in arms and getting her to chair.Ananya who was standing with Rithesh could not believe her eyes.She went hugged her.

Ananya:Taani...
Taani:Didi aap..
Ananya:I'm sorry Taani voh..
Taani:Arre bas kijiye
Rani:Maa ander chalien..?
Ananya:Tumhare bache...?

Taani nodded.Ananya went and hugged them.All weny were inside except Anurag seeing that Rithesh and Robi came out.

Rithesh:Kya hua Anurag..?
Anurag: Nothing
Robi:Nahi aap hum logon se kuch chuppa rahe hain
Anurag:Mujhe kisi bhi keemath par Taani ko vapas le jana hain
Rithesh:Mathlab..?
Anurag:Jeeju voh mere saath aane keliye theyar nahi hain
Robi:Kya ..?!
Rithesh:sab teek hojayega

Anurag saying nothing went inside.


Anurag,Taani and children were sitting in the room.Rithesh knocked the door.

Rithesh:Anurag ek minute.
Anurag:Ji..

He went out.

After sometime...

Rithesh and Ananya came to room.

Rithesh:Taani chalo...
Ananya:Chalo bacho..
Taani:Kya hua Jeeju...?
Rithesh:Arre voh auditoruim mein short circuit hua hain so they think ki its going to spread
Taani:Par Onu kahan hain
Ananya:Arre voh gaya hain washroom mein hain..ab tu chal


All were out out of auditoruim.Taani was much tensed about Anurag.She waited for several minutes but didn't see Anurag coming out side.

She started to remember her happened Ashirbaath day.The catching of fire.

Without wasting a moment she pulled her wheel chair and went inside through the slope beside the stairs.

Rithesh:Taani rukh...


Taani couldn't get on with her wheel chair to the top level.

Taani:Mein kya karoon

"AHHH...!!!!":She heard a make voice.

Taani:Onu...!

She felt so helpless.Tears rolled down her cheek.Taking all her strength she put her right foot on the first step.Her leg couldn't sense anything.No strength was there for her leg to take another step.So she fell down.She heard banging on the door.She held on the metal holding of the stairs and took the second step again she fell down as if an one year old child learning to walk properly.After severly getting ups and falling downs she climbed stairs.Now nothing was there that she can hold and walk.

All those memories that she spend with Anurag which made her take further steps without falling to the floor.She reached near the door of where according to her Anurag was struck.
As she was to open the door someone held her hand.She turned and looked at that person.

Anurag:Taani...
Taani:Onu tu teek hain na
Anurag:Haan...lekin ab tu bhi teek hogayi

She looked at leg on which she was standing.She passionately hugged him.

Anurag👍🏼
Rithesh who was behind Taani😉


KOLKATHA...Days later

At ananya's room.Rithesh packed his bag.

Rithesh:Mein jaa raha hoon hamesa keliye.Mujhe patha ki tu mujhpe ab viswas kar hi nahi sakthi

Ananya held his hand.

Ananya:Math javo Rithesh.I trust you aaj bhi

Rithesh felt as if a vold wind blew around him.He hugged her.


At night...TaAnu's room.Anurag and Taani stealing romantic glance at eachother having Tanu and Rani on eachother's lap respectively.Someone knocked at door.Anurag opened the doorIt was Ananya.

Ananya:Bacho aaj humare saath sojavo na
Rani:Aap hume kahani sunavogey
Ananya:Sure...

Children went with her.

After sometime...

Taan stood near window Anurag came near to her.Held her hand.She rested in his arms.

Taani:Onu humne bauahth kuch khoya hain

He left the hug.
Anurag:Shhh..!! anewle har kal Mein hum Voh Har Ek Pal jiyenge.

Years later...

Neelu and Shekhar was happy to be Grandparents.Smruthi and Robi expceting their first child.Ananya and Rithesh became Mamma and Papa of Tanuj and Ragini because Anurag and Taani was Baba and Maa for them.

As every tale says.All of them lived together happily ever after.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Drisya! Gna miss ur FF sooo much!!!!

Loved the scene. Taani rescued Anu! Cutee!

xxx 🤗
Edited by -Nahi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely Chapter Diya.. Each and Every Scene was Perfect.. 😳 Onu was really sweet.. and glad all is well.. All living happily.. Great 😃 Lovely FF Diya..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome end to the chapter...!
Really loved this part - :Tu nahi jaanthi apne pyaar se, apni patni se alag kya hotha hain.
Tu nahi jaanthi majboori mein shaadi ka fesla lena kya hotha hain.
Tu nahi jaanthi jab shaadi ke waqt humare pyaar humare aankhon ke samne hotha hain toh kya mehsoos hotha hain.
Tu nahi jaanthi jab hume patha chaltha hain jis ladki ke saath humari shaadi hone wali hain voh do maheeno mein brain tumour ki vajah se mar jayegi tab dil mein kya hotha
Tu nahi jaanthi 7 saal apne bache se alag hona ek baap ko kithna dard detha hain.
Tu kuch nahi jaanthi kuch nahi jaanthi tu.

This was the best part...
will miss this ff...a lot...
thanks for the wonderful ff diya...

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