Reunion ~ TaAnu SS ~ Shot 3 on Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello guys. I recently discontinued an FF as I sensed that it was not going anywhere and that it would take heaps of time to finish. So, I decided to write a short story. Short short story much more and I will finish it in 5-10 updates (expected). Hope you enjoy.. Reunion 😛

Shot One

A young boy, in his early twenties, dashed across the street, his newspaper held over his head in a futile attempt to shield himself from the non-stop rain. His run was quick and inaudible, less than a minute long, still he was drenched by the time he sat in his posh car. He wrung back his small locks showering off the droplets of rain, barely caring about the passenger who sat beside him.

'Anu! Tum bhi na. Dekho mujhe bhi sara geela kar diya..' she complained prodding him in the rib while reaching out for the tissue paper.

He grazed his rib where she had earlier poked him, gently soothing the irritating pain. Why, oh why had he asked Nupur to join him in the search of Taani? This decision he was for sure, regretting and his futile attempts to find her had given up hope.

'Taani ka kuch pata chala?' asked Nupur while rolling down the window and chucking the squished, wet paper out, barely concerned. Her eyes twinkled with glee as Anurag shook his head not wavering his eyes with hers.

But the painful sigh did not go unnoticed by her as he leaned back and closed his eyes, tired. Dismayingly he muttered 'Koi kuch nahi janta, unko toh yaad bhi nahi ke Taani kon hai,' transfixed in his position as two lonesome tears rolled down his cheek. His shoulders hunched even more at the sound of the onslaught rain.

Nupur placed a pacifying hand on his shoulder. True, she hated Taani and she was happy that Anu couldn't find her but she couldn't see Anu this way. Her conciousness didn't allow her to let her ex partner get hurt. 'Ab?' she questioned uncertainly watching him raise his head.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiya violets
Good to see you again with a new concept though i still want you to continue tht but well I am happy with this
nyc concept
Taani mising and nupur with her ex partner, suthng intersting happned tht is wht i could infer😉
hope to see next one soon
Ashlesha
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great Start Maya. 👍🏼 👏 Loved it hun.
Wonder what has happen to taani ............... 😕 Right now i have so many questions runing in my mind. But i'm sure i'll get the answers for same when the story is unfolded. 😉
waiting eagerly to know what happens next ......................... Pls do continue ASAP hun. Looking forward to the next part.
Luv Gayani.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved this ss also
but plzzzz dont stop it inthe middle yaar
do complete it for sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.Pls update soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful Start Maya. Loved every Bit of this Update . Eagerly looking forward to read about Onu-Taani Love Story.
Please Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*Squishes everyone who commented and liked the post with a hug* 🤗 Thank you so much guys! Your comments were shoo sweet and I just want to thank you in a way by giving another shot of Reunion. Please comments on this one too x ⭐️ There's a star.. 😊

Shot 2

'Laboni Banerjee' read the sign on the wooden door, plated in gold. Anurag swallowed a lump which rose in his throat and pressed the bell. He could hear her loud and piercing voice yelling at the door while moving towards it and then flinging it open. There was a moment of silence until he finally managed to whisper 'Ma'.

'Kya chahta hai tu, Anu?' she asked, her eyes not wavering with his but searching something on the shiny tiles as if the answers were hidden there. Only she knew how she was controlling herself from not looping her arms around his Mottu.

'Ma mujhe maaf kardo. Maine aap ke aur Taani ke saath bohut bura kiya,' Anurag whispered, his voice unwilling to pour out yet he was trying his hardest to stop the tears which escaped his eyes. Laboni's stone gaze scanned Nupur who gave her a warming smile.

'Agar tujhe such much maafi chahi hoti na, toh tu isse apne saath na lata. Par tu iske pyaar mein pagal tha aur hai,' she bit angrily piercing her gaze into his while watching Nupur's aghast face from the corner of her eye. 'Chala jah yahan se! Aur apni shakal mat dikhai!' bellowed Laboni thwacking the door at his face only to be stopped by his stiff arm.

'Nahi, Ma. Aap mujhe maaf kare na kare par main janta hoon ke Taani mujhe maaf karegi. Main usse yahan se liye bina nahi jaounga..' he replied as Laboni's push on the door loosened and she stepped back.

'Taani yahan nahi hai! Tune meri beti koh 2 saal pehle hi maar diya ke woh kahan chali gayi kissi koh nahi pata! 2 saalon se hum usse dhund rahe hai aur meri beti ka kuch pata nahi!' cried Laboni painfully falling to the ground as Anurag held her by the arms. 'Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti, Anu..' she added, her sound muffled in his blazer.

His heart was clenched at the thought of Taani. What had happened to her? Where was she? Was it his fault? Was she even alive? questioned his heart and mind together while the shocking reality was drowning him inside it. Was his Taani dead?

Edited by Violets - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Nice

Please continue & add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update
please continue soon
add me in your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great Update Maya. 👍🏼
Wonder what has happen to Taani ..............................😕 Looking forward to the next part and Pls continue soon hun.
Luv Gayani.
Edited by Anu*Gayani*Anu - 14 years ago

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