Twinj os - The love (By - ZainaKhalil)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys,how are you'll doing😎
Before you'll come to any conclusions,this is NOT WRITTEN by me!
This is written by Zaina (ZainaKhalil) but due to some issues with her account,she wasn't able to post it!
She asked me to post it on behalf of her so here I'm,posting it for her!
Let her know if you guys liked it x
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hi guys its zaina here its my first ever os or anything i have ever written so sorry for any mistakes

Twinkle Taneja : a bubbly funloving girl she is th only daughter of her parents RT and Leela Taneja . She belongs to a rich family .Her father is a business man and i known all over India.she secretly loves kunj

Kunj Sarna (Sidhant Gupta{my hero }) : he is a boy with a charming personality .lives with his mother usha sarna (she is sister of RT ) . they live at their house after Manohar Sarna's death . they are a middle class family . Kunj works at Rt's office

[ leela doesnt like kunj and his mother much coz she thnks their standard is low ]

STORY :-
a girl is shown walking in garden.On the other side a boy wakes up to his alarm. he opens the curtains of his room. the girl is passing her hands over the flowers.The boy freshens up he takes out his clothes from the cupboard and wears them .the girl is playing with flowers.he sees himself in mirror and is none other than KUNJ SARNA .he goes in the kitchen and sees his breakfast ready on d table. he eats it.he goes out of the house.the girl is walking in garden.the boy starts his bike.hearing the noise of the bike the girl stops in her path .the girl is shown she is our TWINKLE TANEJA. she smiles and sees kunj going on bike

usha is shown entering with a tray In her hand having tea in it . she serves it to leela ,rt and twinkle .and goes from there. In evening kunj comes back and sees twinkle and usha talkingand goes to change


somedays later twinkle is shown sitting between an uncle and aunty. They came here for twinkles rishta for their son KARAN MALHOTRA.

Karan mom anita malhotra
Karan dad surjeet malhotra

Anita arey bhai hame to twinkle bari hi pasand ai

Surjeet han bhai bohat hi suljhi hui bchi hai

Kunj nd usha are standing the door .

Twinkle (t) papa mai karan se shadi nahi karsakti.

Rt ( shocked ) why is there any reason ? (twinkle stays quiet) [ a bit louder] koi hai tumhari zindagi main to whom u wanna get married (twinkle is quiet) [RT gets angry he shouts] tell me ?

t- (scared) yes yes yes I do love some1

leela (l) who is he ? tell us twinkle who is whe ?

t him (points towards kunj)

everyone is shell shocked mostly kunj

l twinkle tum is do tak ke larke se shadi karna chahti jis ke pas dhg ki aik job bhi nhi hai and his mother she workslike servant in our house

kunj is hurt listening that and goes from there with usha

t yes I wanna marry him

RT no u wont marry kunj

T- main kunj k ilawa kisi aur se shadi nahi karungi

Twinkle goes fom there crying.after some time twinkle was nowhere to be seen.kunj goes out in search of her. He finds her sitting in a park crying

Kunj(k)- twinkle what ws that haan I know u were joking go and tel ur family they are worried
t- I wasn't joking I love u kuj since long time I don't wana go anywhere just leave me alone
k- chalo twinkle . he drags her from there and takes her home
they come home .karan gets up and laughs
karan(KR)- oh hi dekhein uncle dono date mar kar aa gaye kahan gaye the park ya caf
k-shut up karan me tw ko lene gaya tha
anita- kitne besharam hain kullam khlla paar karte hain RT ji inho ne aap ko badnaam hi kardiya main to apne baite ki shaadi is se nahi karwaungi kabhi bhi nahi mujhe to lagta haiitna kuch hone k baad aap ko indono ki shaadi kar den chahiye wrn fazool me aap ka naam badnaam hoga
RT- aap theek hi kehti hain main pandit se baaat karke kal hi inki shadi karwa deta hun
Kunj and tw were shocked .next day they both get married and twinkle is brought in kunjs room kunj is not there.it gets late tw is alone I room.usha goes to kunj and makes him understandhe reluctantly goes to the room.usha s stressed she goes to her room and thinks about twinj.
Next morning tw gos to usha's room to wake her up she doent wake up.
t-kunj...kunjjj
k- wht happened
t-see n kunj mumy ji is nt getting up (crying)
k-maa..maa uthiye
usha was dea.her lst rituals were performed.
Kunj didn't behaved well with twnkle he hated her .he ignore her all the time.kunj decided to leave tht house .he got a house on rent.they shifted there .it ws very dirty.as it was morning twinkle clened the house and prepared lunch .they silently ate it .
At night twinkle prepared bed .kunj lay on the bed and tw went on the sofa in the lounge .after sometime tw came to kunj
t- kunj kia mai bed pae so sakti hun bahir chuhe (mouse) hain aur mujhe dar lagta hai
k- ok so jao
days passed like this and kunj used to ignore twinkle . one day kunj was going out somewhere so he asked twinkl if she needed anything
t-haan kuch samaan chahye tha
k-aik kaam karo tum mere saath hi aa jao tum samaan le lena mai apna kaam karloonga
t- ok
twinkle sits with him on the bike and they go to market.they buy the stuff .while going back a man sees tw and goes towards her
m-twinkle beta kaisi ho ?
t-are bahadur uncle aap kaise hain ?
b-main theek waise beta bara dukh hua tumahre papa ki death ka sun kar sorry mai nahi aa saka.
t-(shocked)-papa kia hua papa ko ?
kunj is shocked
m- unki heart attack se death ho gayi
Twinkle cries and goes from there. Kunj goes after her they go to home .twinkle is washing dishes and is thinking about her father and is continuously crying . kunj feels bad for her .
Next morning kunj is getting ready for office . twinkle didn't wake up. He wakes her up but she doesn't he tries to wake he up several times but she doesn't get up . He took her to the hospital by calling ambulance . twinkle was admitted in the hospital.
The doctor told that she was taking a lot of stress and not to give her anymore stress otherwise she will go into depression and that she should be kept happy .
Kunj went to the room and sat beside twinkle on a stool. twinkle is unconscious. He looks at her as a lone tear escapes his eye .
k- sorry. Maine tumhe bohat takleef pohonchai hai itna bara paal hun k mai tumhare pyaar ko samjh hi nhi paya. Mujhe laga ke tumhare pyaar ne mujhe tumhare papa ke saamne gira diya. Main haar gaya tumhari muhabbat k aage.jo baat mai saari zindagi khud se nahi keh paya wo aj tumse zaroor kahoonga BOHAT PYAAR KARTA HOON TUMSE BOHAT PYAAR . Tears escaped his eyes . us se kahin zyaada pyaar tum se karta hoon zitna tum mujh se karti hun.A TEAR ESCAPED TWINKLES EYE.Kunj saw that and was shocked. Twinkle opens her eyes and looks at kunj with teary eyes. They share an eyelock.they look happily towards eachother...
and then many hurdles came in their live but they solved everything together and lived a hapy life.
3 YEARS LATER
Twinj are sown living happily with their cute little daughater Naina...

Phewww
Uff its such a difficult thing to write something hats of to all the writers for giving us such amazing os and ff
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Ok zaina it was awesome.
Loved it a lot.
But karan nd rt hate u.
Two deaths not fair.
Twinj😳
Zaina now that u have written ur first story it will be easier for u to write more stories.

Ps. Nd k thank u for posting zainas story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A wonderful piece.
Keep writing
Happy friendship day
Love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tikit

Ok zaina it was awesome.

Loved it a lot.
But karan nd rt hate u.
Two deaths not fair.
Twinj😳
Zaina now that u have written ur first story it will be easier for u to write more stories.

Ps. Nd k thank u for posting zainas story.

Thank u
But what to do demand of os😉
I will try my best to post more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSau

A wonderful piece.

Keep writing
Happy friendship day
Love
Sayli


Thank u
Same to u
*hugs*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A cute short story...
Hoping for more stories like these
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Zaina You are absolutely correct Writing is not a simple task,I also found before.
By the way Story is really good.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story was quite different
& i liked it...
Very nicely written...
Do write more Zainakhalil..😳

And my kiara...🤗

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