twinj ff || hurricane || part 3 and 4 on page 5 - Page 2

interesting start..
waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Res

Unress

Yeee. ..Me first...

The story is a great one...

=Twinkies drama & kunj's predictions...🤣

Then,

=TwinkleRocked & kunj Shocked...😆

=The last kitchen scene...& Kunj saying he's not one of them..-😔

=Kunj is opening up a bit to twinkle I guess...

Update soonish...I wanna know what's wrong with kunj & family...

yayyy, you first 😃 😃
thank you 😊
yes he is, but you gotta wait and watch for more
of course will
love you
me

Originally posted by: piu22

Great start.. Nicely penned..

Waiting for the next part

thank you , will update soon

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

OH MY GOD!

I love YOU!

This story just started on such an awesome note!

It was soo intriguing and mysterious, I am already assuming and wanting more

Twinkle, Twinkl, Twinkle...sigh. She is a charismatic character isn't she. You have penned her down so brilliantly that she has indeed become a synonym for Hurricane!

Loving her relations with the Sarna's

And its oh so good to see everyone positive and happy.

Really intrigued by Kunj...but I know I gotta wait and watch! 😆

Baby Doll you are doing one brilliant job!

Its amazing already and this was just the first chapter!

Looking forward to your magic.

I am sure its going to be great!

🤗

I love you too !!
hehe, you will get more, tension na lo.
hurricane twinkle, yesss
thank you so much !!
love
me

Originally posted by: Jambread3

My queeen!
I was so surprised to see my name up there and my face instantly broke into a smile.
Thank you so much for the dedication❤️
And most importantly,thank you for making me feel so special 🤗

Okay now about the story,babe
ITS AMAZINGGG
like literally so awesome.
Loved it to the core
Loved the equation between Twinkle and Kunj's family
It was so well written that I could imagine everything happening in front of my eyes.
Kunj came back home after 8 years? Now that's something super interesting!
Can't wait to read more


Please continue soon,love you bub 😳

Kiara !!
hehe, im so very glad you smiled, I like a smiley Kiara a lil more than the normal Kiara
oh, your most welcome
thank you !!! hehe, im glad, I like writing imaginable stuff
will do
love you too
me

Originally posted by: sbsmartness4

I cannot wait plz continue!!!!

will do, jaldi hi

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Only one word sakshi excellent and Your back!

Sooo sooo sorry for the late comment and i know I have to unress my comments on your other stories too sorry.

Kya karu ok taraf I'm studying aur dusri taraf life keeps on playing a game with me upsetting me and tiring me completely.

Well can't say much as words are falling short but I am loving this Twinkle.

Kunj kitna mysterious hai bhai iski mystery jaldi se suljha do.

Well update soon.

And you have a few stories incomplete soo am waiting for you to complete them.

Love

Sayli

Ps jaldi will reply to your pm on my os know it's long due sorry. Woh meri that daadi past away naa so was upset at that time. Iss bechari Jaan ko baksh diya jaaye. Lol! Have become a nautanki now.

Chalo good night.

hehe, two words, thank you !!
its absouluetly okay !!
will do , and incomeplet ones bhi jldi se I will complete
yayy !!
im a bigger nautanki, we'll be two good nautanki's
love
me

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Res😃

well, look who's back...its me with an update.
the second chap is on, so do give it a read
this chapter is a dedication to aditi, aka adi_FMT_ct
I hope you like this !!
happy reading !!
love,
me

hurricane. chapter 2
a queen imagination

kunj walked towards the main door and opened it, and somebody else pushed it from the other side too, probably trying to open it and the someone crashed into his chest and stumbled back. kunj held the person's shoulders to steady the person and blinked a few times, adjusting his vision.
"ow! sorry" twinkle spoke, rubbing her head. kunj smiled and frowned.
"kya, smiled kyu kar rahe ho, zyada jorr se lag gayi ?" twinkle squinted her eyes and he shook his head smilingly. wierd. he had never smiled so much in his life.
"kya tum humesha aise hi entry marti ho ? hurricane ki tarah ?" he spoke, leaving her shoulders finally, and twinkle went red and laughed. "you're funny ! all i knew about you was ki you're abroad, silent, khadus and serious all the time. oh and also the fact that you're chinki's brother. but you are funny too" she spoke, smiling. kunj silently shook with laughter. khadus. and serious. so now the family hated him this much.
"par pata nahi, shayad its happeneing only in front of you, i never noticed. but come to think of it, ha, is ghar mein meri entry humesha isi type se hoti hai ," she laughed a lil more and suddenly looked up at him"see what i got !!" she smiled read big and brought up a lil frame, it was cherry and anand trying to become murga's but not being very good ones. they looked funny. kunj looked up and twinkle,"and why are you showing this to me ?"
twinkle looked surprised, "kyuki tum mere dost ho !" well, that was new development."and aisa kab hua ??" and twinkle looked even more suprised. she took a step back, placed a hand in her hair, twisted her mouth, "um, okay, toh, myabe mai tumhe yeh is liye dikha rahi hu, kyuki tum mere bhai ke best friend ho, ya mere best friend ke bhai ho ? wow. well whatever you say big guy !" she shrugged her shoulders and looked at him, he smiled at her antics and shook his head.
"BEBE !!" twinkel shouted suddenly,"stop right there, if you move, i fire a gun. hands up !" bebe laughed and held her hands up, twinkle ran to her and kissed her on the cheek before showing her the photograph.
usha walked out of her room rubbing her eyes, and the brothers desecnded.
everyone surroiunded the hurricane. as thw quote stated, he was drizzle and she the hurricane. he was too slight to pleasure or to be noticed, and she was too fervent, to not overwhelm or to go unnoticed.
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"WOHOOO"
he smacked his forehead. again ?
he was taking a stroll though his colony when he came across the park. and he heard the wohoo and the voice belonged to his hurricane. wait. his hurricane? no. the hurricane.
she was running behind a few kids as she laughed. he hair in a loose braid and her in a loose teeshirt and leggings . kids cheering and her laughing. she looked like the definition of happy. touchwood.
he walked towards the park and sat down on one of the swings. he looked at the hurricane thourgh squinted eyes, the sunlight sort of hurt.
a few minutes later, he opened his eyes well. no hurt now. he grinned as twinkle tossed a lil boy in the sky and caught him as he came down. the kid laughed as she tickled him. then letting the kids play she jogged over to the swing. halfway there, she noticed him and smiled, waving her hand. he waved back, returning the smile.
"tum yahan ?" twinkle spoke, walking to a duffle bag that he had failed to notice.
"ha, woh mai colony ka round le raha tha, toh yahan aa gaya," he shrugged "tu ?"
twinkle held up a finger as she chugged down water from a bottle she had taken out from the bag"ma ne gym bheja tha, " she spoke"and mera mann nahi tha, toh i joined the lil people here, waise bhi, playing with them is better than gyming" she made a face and kunj laughed.
"experiance ?" "experiance."
a lil girl came running, all flushed."twinkle di, aap yahan kya kar rahe ho ? chalo na. maza nahi aa raha apke bina, " a few more kids gathered around. and started telling twinkle to rejoin the game. kunj looked up at twinkle. he would be okay even if she left. he was used to being left behind. he didnt even mind anymore.
twinkle turned to look at him."kunj," she spoke,"do you know how to run ?" kunj looked at her to see if she was joking. who would not know how to run.
"yeh kaisa sawal hai, obviously aata hai yaar" twinkle nodded. turning to face the kids, she spoke. "bacha party, lets do this" the kids cheered"yeh kunj hai," she said motioning towards him, "and hume ise pakadna hai, okay?" kunj looked at twinkle wide eyed.
she held his wrist and pulled him off the swing, jostling him twoards the ground, she shouted"pakdo !!" and kunj ran.
he ran and laughed like never before. he could see kids running behind him. and twinkle too who was laughing and smiling all the way. he ran in a pace that he could get caught. and then a lil guy caught him and he surrendered. sitting on the ground as teh kids surrounded him, smiling and laughing.
he smiled and looked up at twinkle, she stood with her hands on her knees, beaming at him.
he thought nothing could get to him. but too late. the hurricane already did.

to be continued

Ress will try to unress soonish!